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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Upon entering Hilda's dreams, Kelly exits, horrified by what she's seen in there.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: EveryoneHasStandards: Upon entering Hilda's dreams, Kelly exits, horrified by what she's seen in there.
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When Hilda's mother passes away following the events of "The Ghost" David and Frida must continue the gangs adventures while Hilda copes.
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When Hilda's mother passes away following the events of "The Ghost" David and Frida must continue the gangs gang's adventures while Hilda copes.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Upon entering Hilda's dreams, Kelly exits. Horrified by what she's seen in there.
* FiveStagesOfGrief: We never see Hilda go through denial, she does go through the other stages. Hilda is mostly in a combination of the depression and anger stages. [[spoiler:Chapter 3 has Hilda in the bargaining stage where she tries to use dark magic to bring her mom back to life. Nearly at the cost of her own life. Hilda enters the acceptance stage after spending chapters 5-9 in a [[LotusEaterMachine Alp induced dream world]].]]
* FiveStagesOfGrief: We never see Hilda go through denial, she does go through the other stages. Hilda is mostly in a combination of the depression and anger stages. [[spoiler:Chapter 3 has Hilda in the bargaining stage where she tries to use dark magic to bring her mom back to life. Nearly at the cost of her own life. Hilda enters the acceptance stage after spending chapters 5-9 in a [[LotusEaterMachine Alp induced dream world]].]]
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Upon entering Hilda's dreams, Kelly exits. Horrified exits, horrified by what she's seen in there.
* FiveStagesOfGrief: We never see Hilda go through denial, she does go through the other stages. Hilda is mostly in a combination of the depression and anger stages. [[spoiler:Chapter 3 has Hilda in the bargaining stage where she tries to use dark magic to bring her mom back tolife. Nearly life, nearly at the cost of her own life. Hilda enters the acceptance stage after spending chapters 5-9 in a an [[LotusEaterMachine Alp induced dream world]].]]
* FiveStagesOfGrief: We never see Hilda go through denial, she does go through the other stages. Hilda is mostly in a combination of the depression and anger stages. [[spoiler:Chapter 3 has Hilda in the bargaining stage where she tries to use dark magic to bring her mom back to
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** [[spoiler:In Hilda's dream world,]] Hilda accuses the pigtail Marra for giving her a nightmare the night before. The aforementioned Marra then informs her that this is her first time trying to enter Hilda's dreams since their last encounter.
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** [[spoiler:In Hilda's dream world,]] Hilda accuses the pigtail Marra for of giving her a nightmare the night before. The aforementioned Marra then informs her that this is her first time trying to enter Hilda's dreams since their last encounter.
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Remorse of an Adventure is a ''[[WesternAnimation Hilda]]'' AlternateUniverseFic by D.D. Danger (known as [=DaringDanger=] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn).
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Remorse of an Adventure is a ''[[WesternAnimation Hilda]]'' ''WesternAnimation/{{Hilda}}'' AlternateUniverseFic by D.D. Danger (known as [=DaringDanger=] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn).
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* {{Cliffhanger}}: [[spoiler:Chapter 5 ends with Frida and an unconscious Hilda trapped in the Nisse space.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: The fic revolves around Hilda coping with the death of Johanna.
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* HeroicBSOD: The fic revolves around Hilda coping with grieving over the death of Johanna.
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* FiveStagesOfGrief: We never see Hilda go through denial, she does go through the other stages. Hilda is mostly in a combination of the depression and anger stages. [[spoiler:Chapter 3 has Hilda in the bargaining stage where she tries to use dark magic to bring her mom back to life. Nearly at the cost of her own life. Hilda enters the acceptance stage after spending chapters 5-9 in a [[LotusEaterMachine Alp induced dream world]].]]
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* NotMeThisTime: In chapter 2, David and Frida thought that the Marra are giving Hilda nightmares. But they're not.
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* LotusEaterMachine: After an encounter with the Black Hound, [[spoiler:Hilda and Frida end up in their own dream worlds created by an Alp.]]
* NotMeThisTime: In chapter 2, David and Frida thought that the Marra are giving Hilda nightmares. But they'renot.not.
** [[spoiler:In Hilda's dream world,]] Hilda accuses the pigtail Marra for giving her a nightmare the night before. The aforementioned Marra then informs her that this is her first time trying to enter Hilda's dreams since their last encounter.
* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler:The dream version of]] the pigtail Marra finds Hilda no fun anymore. Hilda responds that she was stupid back then.
* NotMeThisTime: In chapter 2, David and Frida thought that the Marra are giving Hilda nightmares. But they're
** [[spoiler:In Hilda's dream world,]] Hilda accuses the pigtail Marra for giving her a nightmare the night before. The aforementioned Marra then informs her that this is her first time trying to enter Hilda's dreams since their last encounter.
* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler:The dream version of]] the pigtail Marra finds Hilda no fun anymore. Hilda responds that she was stupid back then.
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Remorse of an Adventure is a ''[[WesternAnimation Hilda]]'' AlternateUniverseFic by D.D. Danger (known as [=DaringDanger=] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn).
When Hilda's mother passes away following the events of "The Ghost" David and Frida must continue the gangs adventures while Hilda copes.
Click [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16430279/chapters/38470529 here]] to read.
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!!''Remorse of an Adventurer'' provides examples of:
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Upon entering Hilda's dreams, Kelly exits. Horrified by what she's seen in there.
* HeroicBSOD: The fic revolves around Hilda coping with the death of Johanna.
* NotMeThisTime: In chapter 2, David and Frida thought that the Marra are giving Hilda nightmares. But they're not.
When Hilda's mother passes away following the events of "The Ghost" David and Frida must continue the gangs adventures while Hilda copes.
Click [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16430279/chapters/38470529 here]] to read.
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!!''Remorse of an Adventurer'' provides examples of:
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Upon entering Hilda's dreams, Kelly exits. Horrified by what she's seen in there.
* HeroicBSOD: The fic revolves around Hilda coping with the death of Johanna.
* NotMeThisTime: In chapter 2, David and Frida thought that the Marra are giving Hilda nightmares. But they're not.
