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** Arthur Watts was already very petty and evil without any redeeming traits to speak of in canon, but in this fic, he has even fewer valorous qualities. Whereas the canon Watts was consistently and notably DefiantToTheEnd both times that he faced almost-certain death, and he could take a harsh beating without much complaint; Watts in this fic is a bully at his core who folds and tears up under a significant physical assault, [[spoiler:and he dies trying to toady up and then pleading for his life when he's at a vengeful Jaune's mercy]].



* AdaptationalSecrecyDowngrade: InUniverse. Eventually, despite all the changes in the reset timeline including Blake's morality taking [[AdaptationalVillainy a turn for the worse]], she still ends up going to Beacon Academy when she's 17. Unlike in the original timeline, this version of Blake, [[spoiler:who's a bitter misanthrope who never defected from the White Fang and has barely been de-radicalized after its destruction,]] doesn't make any secret of her Faunus heritage from her school peers.



* SharedFamilyQuirks: Neither Jaune nor his adoptive daughter Emerald can figure out when someone has romantic feelings for them even when the people in question are being rather obvious about it. Emerald, at least, has a level of social skills that a ten-year-old would laugh at, while Jaune has no such excuse.

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Neither Jaune nor his adoptive daughter Emerald can figure out when someone has romantic feelings for them even when the people in question are being rather obvious about it. Emerald, at least, has a level of social skills that a ten-year-old would laugh at, while Jaune has no such excuse.excuse.
** It's apparent from Raven's expansion that Qrow isn't the only one of the twins who likes alcohol.
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** Junior's father King is a worse father than Alexander Nikos and pre-character development Jacques Schnee ''combined''. He savagely and mercilessly beats his son at the slightest ghost of a provocation in front of others, and he reminds Junior that he killed the latter's mother as a threat and a taunt. [[spoiler:Junior kills his old man himself the first chance he gets]].

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** Junior's father King is a worse father than Alexander Nikos and pre-character development Jacques Schnee ''combined''. He savagely and mercilessly beats his son at the slightest ghost of a provocation in front of others, and he reminds Junior that he killed the latter's mother as a threat and a taunt. [[spoiler:Junior Junior kills his old man himself the first chance he gets]].gets.



** When Raven is [[spoiler:heavily injured protecting Nora and Ren on Jaune's behalf, Qrow assumes that she must be keeping Nora around because the latter's the Spring Maiden. Raven rolls with it, and the story sticks]].

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** When Raven is [[spoiler:heavily injured protecting Nora and Ren on Jaune's behalf, Qrow assumes that she must be keeping Nora around because the latter's she's the Spring Maiden. Raven rolls with it, and the story sticks]].sticks. Unknown to all of them, Raven used exactly the same strategy in canon, only Vernal was the decoy that time]].
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The Last Of These Is Not Like The Others is now Odd Item Index. Removing for not fitting any other tropes.


* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: The new teams at Beacon are teams Sage, Maroon, and Nierembergia, the last of which is as many syllables as simply saying the members' names (Nora, Rem, Blake, and Weiss).
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: While it isn't even related to the Kingdom's laws[[spoiler:, it's part of [[ControlFreak Ozpin's laws]] that everyone stand down since Salem has been weakened and can no longer launch any major attacks with her Inner Circle practically destroyed and instead wait until the [[ChildSoldier next children of war on both sides]] are rebuilt and prepared. James and Jaune, at least, will '''not''' abide that, especially since Jaune's [[AllForNothing previous "mission" with said soul-parasite]] has ended with a completely '''empty''' [[PyrrhicVictory "victory"]] before. Come hell or high water, they will '''not''' stop until [[HumanoidAbomination Salem]] is defeated, ensuring a '''true''' GoldenAge.]]

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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: While it isn't even related to the Kingdom's laws[[spoiler:, it's part of [[ControlFreak Ozpin's laws]] that everyone stand down since Salem has been weakened and can no longer launch any major attacks with her Inner Circle practically destroyed and instead wait until the [[ChildSoldier next children of war on both sides]] are rebuilt and prepared. James and Jaune, at least, will '''not''' abide that, especially since Jaune's [[AllForNothing previous "mission" with said soul-parasite]] has ended with a completely '''empty''' [[PyrrhicVictory "victory"]] before. Come hell or high water, they will '''not''' stop until [[HumanoidAbomination Salem]] is defeated, ensuring a '''true''' GoldenAge.Golden Age.]]
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** Pyrrha's father Alexander Nikos has previously been referenced or outright appeared inCreator/CoeurAlAran[='s=] other fics like ''Fanfic/TheUnseenHunt'', but he was usually portrayed as a very loving, caring and ideal [[GoodParents Good Parent]] who values Pyrrha's happiness first. The Alexander of this fic is instead a corrupt, fame-obsessed, controlling male StageMom who puts raking in glory before his daughters' mental wellbeing, and he's willing to bully, threaten, sue, or hypocritically use any underhanded means to get his own way.

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** Pyrrha's father Alexander Nikos has previously been referenced or outright appeared inCreator/CoeurAlAran[='s=] in Creator/CoeurAlAran[='s=] other fics like ''Fanfic/TheUnseenHunt'', but he was usually portrayed as a very loving, caring and ideal [[GoodParents Good Parent]] who values Pyrrha's happiness first. The Alexander of this fic is instead a corrupt, fame-obsessed, controlling male StageMom who puts raking in glory before his daughters' mental wellbeing, and he's willing to bully, threaten, sue, or hypocritically use any underhanded means to get his own way.



** Emerald, for a number of reasons, comes to suspect with what little she knows about Jaune's past that his original family were assholes who drove him away to a point where he felt he could never return, and thus she decides to be belligerent toward Nicholas Arc [[spoiler:and Young Jaune]] when she notices they're clearly related to her father. The reader knows Emerald's theory about Jaune's relationship with his old family is incorrect, but anyone who's familiar with Nicholas' backstory in the shared mythology of Creator/CoeurAlAran's works (which is elaborated on in ''Fanfic/NoThisTimeFate'' and also slightly hinted at in this fic) will also know that what Emerald suspects happened between Jaune and Nicholas' family is actually the bare bones of what happened between Nicholas and ''his'' original family.

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** Emerald, for a number of reasons, comes to suspect with what little she knows about Jaune's past that his original family were assholes who drove him away to a point where he felt he could never return, and thus she decides to be belligerent toward Nicholas Arc [[spoiler:and Young Jaune]] when she notices they're clearly related to her father. The reader knows Emerald's theory about Jaune's relationship with his old family is incorrect, but anyone who's familiar with Nicholas' backstory in the shared mythology of Creator/CoeurAlAran's works (which is elaborated on in ''Fanfic/NoThisTimeFate'' ''Fanfic/NotThisTimeFate'' and also slightly hinted at in this fic) will also know that what Emerald suspects happened between Jaune and Nicholas' family is actually the bare bones of what happened between Nicholas and ''his'' original family.

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Vernal. In all her canon appearances she speaks in a well-mannered way, doesn't go out of her way to insult anyone and is genuinely loyal to Raven and the Branwen tribe as a whole. Here, she swears at every conceivable opportunity and goes out of her way to antagonize everyone around her. She is still loyal to the tribe and to Raven (even thinking worse of Yang for being so weak while wearing "her" face, or disliking Qrow because he left the tribe), but she does voluntarily leave to go train with Jaune (though she still thinks herself one of them). She's little different even when the timeline catches up to the first few Volumes, a matter of months before her canon debut, implying that her being groomed for years by Raven into a decoy Spring Maiden humbled her in a way that she hasn't been while training at Jaune's gym and attending Beacon.

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Vernal. In all her canon appearances she speaks in a well-mannered way, doesn't go out of her way to insult anyone and is genuinely loyal to Raven and the Branwen tribe as a whole. Here, she swears at every conceivable opportunity and goes out of her way to antagonize everyone around her. She is still loyal to the tribe and to Raven (even thinking worse of Yang for being so weak while wearing "her" face, or disliking Qrow because he left the tribe), but she does voluntarily leave to go train with Jaune (though she still thinks herself one of them). She's little different even when the timeline catches up to the first few Volumes, a matter of months before her canon debut, implying that her being groomed for years by Raven into a decoy Spring Maiden humbled her in a way that she hasn't been while training at Jaune's gym and attending Beacon. Beacon.
** Pyrrha's father Alexander Nikos has previously been referenced or outright appeared inCreator/CoeurAlAran[='s=] other fics like ''Fanfic/TheUnseenHunt'', but he was usually portrayed as a very loving, caring and ideal [[GoodParents Good Parent]] who values Pyrrha's happiness first. The Alexander of this fic is instead a corrupt, fame-obsessed, controlling male StageMom who puts raking in glory before his daughters' mental wellbeing, and he's willing to bully, threaten, sue, or hypocritically use any underhanded means to get his own way.



** Emerald, for a number of reasons, comes to suspect with what little she knows about Jaune's past that his original family were assholes who drove him away to a point where he felt he could never return, and thus she decides to be belligerent toward Nicholas Arc [[spoiler:and Young Jaune]] when she notices they're clearly related to her father. The reader knows Emerald's theory about Jaune's relationship with his old family is incorrect, but anyone who's familiar with Nicholas' backstory in the shared mythology of Creator/CoeurAlAran's works (which is elaborated on in ''Fanfic/NoThisTimeFate'' and also slightly hinted at in this fic) will also know that what Emerald suspects happened between Jaune and Nicholas' family is actually the bare bones of what happened between Nicholas and ''his'' original family.



** When Raven is [[spoiler:heavily injured protecting Nora and Ren on Jaune's behalf, Qrow assumes that she must be keeping Nora around because she's the Spring Maiden. Raven rolls with it, and the story sticks. Unknown to all of them, Raven used exactly the same strategy in canon, only Vernal was the decoy that time]].

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** When Raven is [[spoiler:heavily injured protecting Nora and Ren on Jaune's behalf, Qrow assumes that she must be keeping Nora around because she's the latter's the Spring Maiden. Raven rolls with it, and the story sticks. Unknown to all of them, Raven used exactly the same strategy in canon, only Vernal was the decoy that time]].sticks]].



* TheHeart: In addition to being TeamMom, Summer plays this for her team and extended family, much like how her daughter was in the original timeline.

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* TheHeart: In addition to being TeamMom, Summer plays this for her team and extended family, much like how her younger daughter was in the original timeline.
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* TeensAreShort: Zigzagged. While Weiss is still tiny (at seventeen, she's about the same size her sister was at twelve), Winter is taller than Jaune when she's only fifteen.
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* TragicTimeTraveler: [[spoiler:Jaune "Ashari" is a future version of Jaune sent back in time through a deal he made with Salem, who, near death's door, decided to send him back to try and get some sort of victory by having his presence cause ripples in the timeline. While his presence does balance out with both positive and negative ripples, the amount of trauma and pain the guy goes through cannot be denied, and it's only thanks to the positive influence of the people he's helped preventing him from falling into despair]].

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* SenpaiKohai:
** Jaune's relationship with Winter of all people. This is taken even further when [[spoiler:she becomes his official assistant, insisting on aiding Jaune with everything from paperwork to holding out his jacket for him to put on, much to his embarrassment.]]
** [[spoiler:When fighting for her life against a newly-militant White Fang, one of her main concerns was still to show him that the time spent training her was not wasted.]]
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trope is renamed Prefers Going Barefoot. Dewicking old name


* DoesNotLikeShoes: Years without proper footwear has left Emerald with a distaste for anything on her feet.


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* PrefersGoingBarefoot: Years without proper footwear has left Emerald with a distaste for anything on her feet.

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