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* TheRedBaron: Everyone. John "Big Tex" Merston, Abigal "Deadly Widow" Merston, Jack "Little Red" Merston and Jack "Revolver Evil" William. And later on: [[spoiler: Jack "Big Red Tex" Merston]]
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* TheRedBaron: RedBaron: Everyone. John "Big Tex" Merston, Abigal "Deadly Widow" Merston, Jack "Little Red" Merston and Jack "Revolver Evil" William. And later on: [[spoiler: Jack "Big Red Tex" Merston]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6062560/1/red_dead_john_merston_the_return_and_dislike Red Dead John Merston: The Return And Dislike]]'' is a ''VideoGame/RedDeadRedemption'' fanfiction written by one Max Ralone. It begins with John "Big Tex" [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Merston]] returning home to his ranch after fighting the famous bad guy Jack "Revolver Evil" William. Upon his return he finds Jack is upset, due to not being the best Merston anyone knows. The situation quickly escalates. [[KudzuPlot Or something]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6062560/1/red_dead_john_merston_the_return_and_dislike Red Dead John Merston: The Return And Dislike]]'' is a ''VideoGame/RedDeadRedemption'' fanfiction written by one Max Ralone. It begins with John "Big Tex" [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Merston]] returning home to his ranch after fighting the famous bad guy Jack "Revolver Evil" William. Upon his return he finds Jack is upset, due to not being the best Merston anyone knows. The situation quickly escalates. [[KudzuPlot [[RandomEventsPlot Or something]].
* AdaptationalNationality: The Merstons are all French in Tropers/ManWithoutABody's DramaticReading.
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* RaceLift: The Merstons are all French in Tropers/ManWithoutABody's DramaticReading.
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'''''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6062560/1/red_dead_john_merston_the_return_and_dislike Red Dead John Merston: The Return And Dislike]]''''' is a ''VideoGame/RedDeadRedemption'' fanfiction written by one Max Ralone. It begins with John "Big Tex" [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Merston]] returning home to his ranch after fighting the famous bad guy Jack "Revolver Evil" William. Upon his return he finds Jack is upset, due to not being the best Merston anyone knows. The situation quickly escalates. [[KudzuPlot Or something]].
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* AntagonisticOffspring: Jack, John's son, is the villain.
* CallingTheOldManOut: Jack does this to John, declaring that after his father got taken away by the FBI, Jack realized he didn't need him.
* CallingTheOldManOut: Jack does this to John, declaring that after his father got taken away by the FBI, Jack realized he didn't need him.
* IllKillYou: John and Jack exchange these within a few lines of each other after Jack kills his mother.
-->'''John''' SON WHY DID YOU DO THAT YOU LITTLE IDIOT I WILL KILL YOU!
-->'''Jack''' I AM NOT TO YOUNG TO KILL MY MOTHER AND NOW I WILL KILL YOU!
-->'''John''' SON WHY DID YOU DO THAT YOU LITTLE IDIOT I WILL KILL YOU!
-->'''Jack''' I AM NOT TO YOUNG TO KILL MY MOTHER AND NOW I WILL KILL YOU!
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RougeAnglesOfSatin: The fic has fairly poor spelling, but "I AM NOT TO YOUNG TO KILL MY MOTHER" stands out as the best example of incorrect word choice.
*SelfMadeOrphanSelfMadeOrphan: Jack kills his mother [[spoiler:and his father in rapid succession, even though his father's death didn't seem to stick]].
* UnexplainedRecovery: [[spoiler:John comes BackFromTheDead at the end, intent on settling the score with his son]].
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* UnexplainedRecovery: [[spoiler:John comes BackFromTheDead at the end, intent on settling the score with his son]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6062560/1/red_dead_john_merston_the_return_and_dislike Red Dead John Merston: The Return And Dislike]] is a RedDeadRedemption fanfiction written by one Max Ralone. It begins with John "Big Tex" [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Merston]] returning home to his ranch after fighting the famous bad guy Jack "Revolver Evil" William. Upon his return he finds Jack is upset, due to not being the best Merston anyone knows. The situation quickly escalates. [[KudzuPlot Or something]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6062560/1/red_dead_john_merston_the_return_and_dislike Red Dead John Merston: The Return And Dislike]] is a RedDeadRedemption ''VideoGame/RedDeadRedemption'' fanfiction written by one Max Ralone. It begins with John "Big Tex" [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Merston]] returning home to his ranch after fighting the famous bad guy Jack "Revolver Evil" William. Upon his return he finds Jack is upset, due to not being the best Merston anyone knows. The situation quickly escalates. [[KudzuPlot Or something]].
