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* ShipTease: Despite their rough start, Touma and Queen Medb actually start to get along well and it's clear that her initial attraction to him and [[I Love You Because I Can't Control You his refusal of her advances]] is morphing into something considerably more genuine, with Touma gradually becoming somewhat more receptive to her flirtations. It gets deeper when she comforts him after [[spoiler: Mephistopholes tortures him with a SadisticChoice based on his ThouShallNotKill tendencies.]] Their relationship culiminates with the two of them forming a Geas Bond that will allow Medb to stay in Touma's world after Chaldea departs, with the whole process being very (intentionally, on Medb's part) intimate and sensual. They even have an AlmostKiss moment!
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* ShipTease: Despite their rough start, Touma and Queen Medb actually start to get along well and it's clear that her initial attraction to him and [[I Love You Because I Can't Control You [[ILoveYouBecauseICantControlYou his refusal of her advances]] is morphing into something considerably more genuine, with Touma gradually becoming somewhat more receptive to her flirtations. It gets deeper when she comforts him after [[spoiler: Mephistopholes tortures him with a SadisticChoice based on his ThouShallNotKill tendencies.]] Their relationship culiminates with the two of them forming a Geas Bond that will allow Medb to stay in Touma's world after Chaldea departs, with the whole process being very (intentionally, on Medb's part) intimate and sensual. They even have an AlmostKiss moment!
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* ShipTease: Despite their rough start, Touma and Queen Medb actually start to get along well and it's clear that her initial attraction to him and [[I Love You Because I Can't Control You his refusal of her advances]] is morphing into something considerably more genuine, with Touma gradually becoming somewhat more receptive to her flirtations. It gets deeper when she comforts him after [[spoiler: Mephistopholes tortures him with a SadisticChoice based on his ThouShallNotKill tendencies.]] Their relationship culiminates with the two of them forming a Geas Bond that will allow Medb to stay in Touma's world after Chaldea departs, with the whole process being very (intentionally, on Medb's part) intimate and sensual. They even have an AlmostKiss moment!
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* ThouShaltNotKill: Touma is this obviously. Despite knowing Heroic Spirits aren't human and the danger some of them pose, he refuses to kill them and wishes for another way. He even refuses to kill Mephistopheles even after he killed several people. While Romani, Ritsuka, and Mash respect his choice and won't force him, Romani admits they might still do it if it comes down to it.
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* ThouShaltNotKill: Touma is this obviously. Despite knowing Heroic Spirits aren't human and the danger some of them pose, he refuses to kill them and wishes for another way. He even refuses to kill Mephistopheles even after he killed several people. While Romani, Ritsuka, and Mash respect his choice and won't force him, Romani admits they might still do it if it comes down to it. [[spoiler: This is weaponized by Mephistopheles later on with a SadisticChoice where Touma is forced to chose between either murdering him or committing suicide in order to save both Index and Othinius. Thankfully, [[BigDamnHeroes Hector arrives and guts Mephistopheles]] before Touma runs out of time to chose, but the whole ordeal still leaves Touma very shaken.]]
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** Touma says Queen Medb's overly flirtatious attitude reminds him of Lessar.
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** Touma says Queen Medb's overly flirtatious attitude reminds him of Lessar. Funnily enough, the two actually end up getting along.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13667496/1/Realm-of-Entwined-Science-and-Sorcery-Academy-City Realm of Entwined Science and Sorcery - Academy City]]'' is a crossover between ''VideoGame/FateGrandOrder'' and ''LightNovel/ACertainMagicalIndex'' written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2311020/ArmoredCoreNineBall ArmoredCoreNineBall]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13667496/1/Realm-of-Entwined-Science-and-Sorcery-Academy-City Realm of Entwined Science and Sorcery - Academy City]]'' is a crossover between ''VideoGame/FateGrandOrder'' and ''LightNovel/ACertainMagicalIndex'' ''Literature/ACertainMagicalIndex'' written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2311020/ArmoredCoreNineBall ArmoredCoreNineBall]].
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** When Index sees magecraft in action, she says it is different from the kind of magic she is used to. Index, Othinus, and Touma are mystified when Servants are explained to them.
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** When Index sees magecraft in action, she says it is different from the kind of magic she is used to. However, with time and some pointers from Da Vinci, she becomes able to analyze and counter it. Index, Othinus, and Touma are mystified when Servants are explained to them.
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* PyrrhicVictory: [[spoiler: While Aleister Crowley notes he could probably beat Solomon/Goetia, he acknowledges that [[BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu any victory would leave him either crippled or dead in the process]] and unable to acomplish his true goals.]]
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* DuelingHackers: Uiharu fights over the control of an unmanned Academy City PowerArmor against another hacker. It escalates when the opposing hacker threatens to post panty shots of her online.
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* DuelingHackers: Uiharu fights over the control of an unmanned Academy City PowerArmor against another hacker. It escalates when the opposing hacker threatens to post panty shots {{panty shot}}s of her online.
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* DuelingHackers: Uiharu fights over the control of an unmanned Academy City PowerArmor against another hacker. It escalates when the opposing hacker threatens to post {{panty shot}}s of her online.
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* DuelingHackers: Uiharu fights over the control of an unmanned Academy City PowerArmor against another hacker. It escalates when the opposing hacker threatens to post {{panty shot}}s panty shots of her online.
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* TheBadGuyWins: Mehpistoles actually manages to 'break' Touma, an incredibly rare feat, by putting Touma in a position that either gets him, Index, or Othinius killed, or compromise his own ideals and morals. While the Caster dies in the end and loses, he laughs madly as ultimately he still got one over Touma to ''decide'' to kill him and vanishes away in victory while leaving Touma a mess.
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* TheBadGuyWins: Mehpistoles actually manages to 'break' Touma, an incredibly rare feat, by putting Touma in a position that either gets him, Index, or Othinius Othinus killed, or compromise his own ideals and morals. While the Caster dies in the end and loses, he laughs madly as ultimately he still got one over Touma to ''decide'' to kill him and vanishes away in victory while leaving Touma a mess.
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** [[spoiler: Aleister Crowley opts to leave dealing with Solomon to Chaldea, since any victory over Solomon would likely kill or cripple him in the process leaving Crowley unable to achieve his goals.]]
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