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** In "A Tale Across Ages" Jade is annoyed to find she isn't one, and her generals won't let her be one.
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* TimeTravel: Eduard has confirmed that Jade is indeed in the past.
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* PreviouslyOn: Every chapter opens with a summary of the one before it.
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** Rokutaro knows that he'd lose a straight up, drawn out war with the Shadowkhan, so is seeking to gather up his power, strike them with the unexpected, and force them to take risks that he can then take advantage of.
** Ikazuki seems to be the only General who recognizes the threat presented by the forces gathering at Tobe.
** Ikazuki seems to be the only General who recognizes the threat presented by the forces gathering at Tobe.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: There are some not-so-subtle hints that while the tribes and their generals are [[UndyingLoyalty loyal to the Queen]], there are old feuds and rivalries between the tribes.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: There are some not-so-subtle hints that while the tribes and their generals are [[UndyingLoyalty loyal to the Queen]], there are old feuds and rivalries between the tribes. In fact, it seems that the ''only'' tribes that even ''like'' each other are the Sumo and the Reza, whose members are seen interacting peaceably with each other while the other tribes tend to stick to themselves.
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* BecomingTheMask: Unknown to herself, Jade started doing a better job of being the Queen than the ''actual'' Queen. The Yojimbo is quite pleased to note what he mistakes for CharacterDevelopment in her after hearing her reasoning for her behavior at the first meeting she attends.
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* BecomingTheMask: Unknown to herself, Jade has started doing a better job of being the Queen than the ''actual'' Queen. The Yojimbo is quite pleased to note what he mistakes for CharacterDevelopment in her after hearing her reasoning for her behavior at the first meeting she attends.
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* InVinoVertias: Jade refuses to drink sake, despite being of legal age (by Shadowkhan standards), because she's afraid she'll invoke this trope and end up revealing herself.
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* InVinoVertias: InVinoVeritas: Jade refuses to drink sake, despite being of legal age (by Shadowkhan standards), because she's afraid she'll invoke this trope and end up revealing herself.
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* BecomingTheMask: Unknown to herself, Jade started doing a better job of being the Queen than the ''actual'' Queen. The Yojimbo is quite pleased to note what he mistakes for CharacterDevelopment in her after hearing her reasoning for her behavior at the first meeting she attends.
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* SpringtimeForHitler: Unknown to herself, Jade started doing a better job of being the Queen than the ''actual'' Queen. The Yojimbo is quite pleased to note what he mistakes for CharacterDevelopment in her after hearing her reasoning for her behavior at the first meeting she attends.
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* ImprobableAimingSkills: Rosuto's skill with his bow and arrow.
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* MyGreatestFailure: Hiruzen feels this way about letting the previous Queen go on what turned out to be a suicide mission.
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* AllThereInTheManual: See BilingualBonus.
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* AllThereInTheManual: See BilingualBonus.AsYouKnow: The ritual for creating new Shadowkhan starts with Sanshobo ceremoniously [[InfoDump reciting the origins of the race]]. Ikazuki comments to himself that every Shadowkhan already knows this, as its one of the first things they learn.
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* OffhandBackhand: Kyouaku does this with a sword to [[OffWithHisHead kill]] the Ika tribe (Squid Khan) captain of a ship he just captured.
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* CastingAShadow: The Shadowkhan. jade is learning as well.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Like a number of ‘’Fanfic/ProjectDarkJade’’ works, it is darker than the original cartoon.
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* DueToTheDead: Kyouaku tosses anyone who dies in his naval battles overboard, whether they were his enemies or his crew.
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* MissingMom: It is mentioned that the 98th Queen (the one who’s life Jade is trapped in) lost her mother at a young age. And it should be noted that she died ''well'' before what is implied to be normal for a Queen, possibly implying foul play (for his part, Hiruzen suspects Shendu's involvement, but can't prove it, though fans of the show should note that ‘’Tarakudo’’ was part of her guard on the trip, which implies he ‘’may’’ have had a hand in it).
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* MissingMom: It is mentioned that the 98th Queen (the one who’s life Jade is trapped in) lost her mother at a young age. And it should be noted that she died ''well'' before what is implied to be normal for a Queen, possibly implying foul play (for his part, Hiruzen suspects Shendu's involvement, but can't prove it, though fans of the show should note that ‘’Tarakudo’’ ''Tarakudo'' was part of her guard on the trip, which implies he ‘’may’’ ''may'' have [[BodyguardBetrayal had a hand in it).it]]).
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** Since Nocturne and Kassel came up with the project together, the origin story of [[MonsterProgenitor Kagehime]] and the Shadowkhan in general is largely the same as in ''Fanfic/QueenOfAllOni'' (though WordOfGod states that Nocturne came up with it to use in Queen Of Shadows first).
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** Since Nocturne and Kassel came up with the project together, the origin story of [[MonsterProgenitor Kagehime]] and the Shadowkhan in general is largely the same as in ''Fanfic/QueenOfAllOni'' ''FanFic/QueenOfAllOni'' (though WordOfGod states that Nocturne came up with it to use in Queen Of Shadows first).
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** Chapter six goes into greater detail on Shendu’s empire and how he rose to power.
* BizarreAlienBiology: Apparently [[NobodyPoops Shadowkhan don’t need to use the bathroom]].
* CastingAShadow: The Shadowkhan. jade is learning as well.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Like a number of ‘’Fanfic/ProjectDarkJade’’ works, it is darker than the original cartoon.
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* DivineParentage: The Shadowkhan Queens are said to be descended from a Japanese goddess in the Histories, and the male Shadowkhan certainly tend to regard the Queens as divine.
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* DivineParentage: The Shadowkhan Queens are said to be descended from a Japanese goddess in the Histories, Histories (confirmed to be Izanami in chapter 6), and the male Shadowkhan certainly tend to regard the Queens as divine.
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* GenreSavvy: Jade notes that Shendu seems to be making sure that no one knows about the Talismans, as she found no mention of them in the Shadowkhan libraries.
* [[GodEmperor Goddess Empress]]: How the Queens are viewed by the Shadowkhan(''especially'' (''[[UpToEleven especially]]'' the Kamikiri tribe).
* [[GodEmperor Goddess Empress]]: How the Queens are viewed by the Shadowkhan
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* MissingMom: It is mentioned that the 98th Queen (the one who’s life Jade is trapped in) lost her mother at a young age. And it should be noted that she died ''well'' before what is implied to be normal for a Queen, possibly implying foul play (for his part, Hiruzen suspects Shendu's involvement, but can't prove it, though fans of the show should note that ‘’Tarakudo’’ was part of her guard on the trip, which implies he ‘’may’’ have had a hand in it).
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* NobodyPoops: Jade realizes at one point that she hasn't needed to go since finding herself in the Queen's body.
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* NobodyPoops: Jade realizes at one point that she hasn't needed to go since finding herself in the Queen's body. It’s [[JustifiedTrope justified]] because she’s currently in the body of a non-human entity with powerful magical potential.
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* RippleEffectProofMemory: Jade remembers the original reality, but it is currently unknown if Shendu does.
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* RewritingReality: Refer to RealityWarpingIsNotAToy.
* RippleEffectProofMemory: Jade remembers the original reality, but it is currently unknown if Shendu does. Jade worries that if he does, then things are ''very'' bad.
* RippleEffectProofMemory: Jade remembers the original reality, but it is currently unknown if Shendu does. Jade worries that if he does, then things are ''very'' bad.
** Since Nocturne and Kassel came up with the project together, the origin story of [[MonsterProgenitor Kagehime]] and the Shadowkhan in general is largely the same as in ''Fanfic/QueenOfAllOni'' (though WordOfGod states that Nocturne came up with it to use in Queen Of Shadows first).
** The Kamikiri tribe and Sanshobo, their General, take this to an almost ''[[UpToEleven ridiculous]]'' extreme.
* WeAreStrugglingTogether: There are some not-so-subtle hints that while the tribes and their generals are [[UndyingLoyalty loyal to the Queen]], there are old feuds and rivalries between the tribes.
* WeAreStrugglingTogether: There are some not-so-subtle hints that while the tribes and their generals are [[UndyingLoyalty loyal to the Queen]], there are old feuds and rivalries between the tribes.
*** Chapter Six apparently confirms that they were indeed sealed away.
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* YouAreNumberSix: When speaking of the Queen amongst themselves -- and when formally addressing Jade directly -- the Generals refer to her and her predecessors by number.
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* YouAreNumberSix: When speaking of the Queen amongst themselves -- and when formally addressing Jade directly -- the Generals refer to her and her predecessors by number.number, Jade being in the body of the 98th Queen, with the 96th Queen being the one that started the war.
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* BigGood: The Ben Shui Chosen One still exists in this universe, and is somehow keeping Shendu's Asian empire from expanding westward out of China.
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* DisappearedDad: The Queen’s father is a no-show. Though a passing comment by Ikazuki suggests he was Chinese.
** There's also Shendu's empire, which controls roughly half of China (and a chunk of Southeast Asia).
* LesserOfTwoEvils: Jade knows she is expected to start the war with the humans back up again, and can't avoid it without raising suspicion. So, she devises a war plan that should minimize human civilian casualties while giving the heroes she believes are based in Tobe a chance to defeat the Shadowkhan.
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* MookLieutenant: Jonin Toda to Hiruzen.
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* MissingMom: It is mentioned that the 98th Queen (the one who’s life Jade is trapped in) lost her mother at a young age (it age. And it should be noted that she died ''well'' before what is implied to be normal for a Queen, possibly implying foul play).
play (for his part, Hiruzen suspects Shendu's involvement, but can't prove it).
* MookLieutenant: Jonin Toda to Hiruzen. The job used to be Tarakudo's, but he disappeared with the last Queen and is presumed dead.
* MookLieutenant: Jonin Toda to Hiruzen. The job used to be Tarakudo's, but he disappeared with the last Queen and is presumed dead.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9035683/1/Queen-of-Shadows-A-Tale-Across-Ages Queen of Shadows: A Tale Across Ages]] is a ''WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures'' fanfic, and a part of ''FanFic/ProjectDarkJade''. Originally written by one of the project’s co-founders, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1157966/Nocturne-no-Kitsune Nocturne no Kitsune]] (though it was simply called ''Queen of Shadows'' at that point, hence the page name), after he dropped out of sight, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1645311/Eduard-Kassel Eduard Kassel]], the other co-founder, adopted it and added the "A Tale Across Ages" tag to the title.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9035683/1/Queen-of-Shadows-A-Tale-Across-Ages Queen of Shadows: A Tale Across Ages]] is a ''WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures'' fanfic, and a part of ''FanFic/ProjectDarkJade''.FanFic/ProjectDarkJade. Originally written by one of the project’s co-founders, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1157966/Nocturne-no-Kitsune Nocturne no Kitsune]] (though it was simply called ''Queen of Shadows'' at that point, hence the page name), after he dropped out of sight, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1645311/Eduard-Kassel Eduard Kassel]], the other co-founder, adopted it and added the "A Tale Across Ages" tag to the title.
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* StealthPun: The Mantis Khan are the priests of the Shadowkhan. Yes, they're praying mantises.
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* BroughtDownToBadass: Jade may have lost a belt level or two of WaifFu do to the Queen’s body being physically weaker (and not being able to do much to strengthen herself again), but she is still a GenreSavvy GuileHero, and has (so far) managed to remain undetected as an impostor, and is planning how to get out of the situation.
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* BroughtDownToBadass: Jade may have lost a belt level or two of WaifFu do due to the Queen’s body being physically weaker (and not being able to do much to strengthen herself again), but she is still a GenreSavvy GuileHero, and has (so far) managed to remain undetected as an impostor, and is planning how to get out of the situation.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Like a number of Dark Jade fics, the story fleshes out the personality of the Oni generals more.
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* ContinuityNod: Jade references the episode in canon where she became the Queen before she awakens in the new reality, and [[GreatBigBookOfEverything The Histories of Eternal Shadow]] reminds her of the Demon Archive from the
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* ContinuityNod: Jade references the episode in canon where she became the Queen before she awakens in the new reality, and [[GreatBigBookOfEverything The Histories of Eternal Shadow]] reminds her of the Demon Archive from thethe same episode.
** When reminding herself that she doesn't need her fighting skills to get stuff done, Jade remembers the events of the canon pilot, where she used only wits to OutGambit Tohru and keep the Dark Hand from getting the Rooster Talisman.
** When reminding herself that she doesn't need her fighting skills to get stuff done, Jade remembers the events of the canon pilot, where she used only wits to OutGambit Tohru and keep the Dark Hand from getting the Rooster Talisman.
* EvilTowerOfOminousness: The Shadowkhan fortress has at least one, which contains the Queen's living quarters.
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* HeroAntagonist: Rokutaro seems to be forming a secret alliance of elite warriors against the Shadowkhan, which will likely conflict with her plans in the future.
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* HeroAntagonist: Rokutaro seems to be forming a secret alliance of elite warriors against the Shadowkhan, which will likely conflict with her Jade's plans in the future.future.
* HeroicBSOD: Jade sinks into one when Hiruzen forbids her from studying the martial arts, but snaps herself out of it, reminding herself that she still has her considerable wits.
* HeroicBSOD: Jade sinks into one when Hiruzen forbids her from studying the martial arts, but snaps herself out of it, reminding herself that she still has her considerable wits.
* NobodyPoops: Jade realizes at one point that she hasn't needed to go since finding herself in the Queen's body.
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** What happened to the Queen’s consciousness when Jade was shoved into her body is also unknown.unknown.
* YouAreNumberSix: When speaking of the Queen amongst themselves -- and when formally addressing Jade directly -- the Generals refer to her and her predecessors by number.
* YouAreNumberSix: When speaking of the Queen amongst themselves -- and when formally addressing Jade directly -- the Generals refer to her and her predecessors by number.
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* AllThereInTheManual: See BilingualBonus.
* BilingualBonus: The author often uses Japanese terms in the dialogue, which he [[AllThereInTheManual gives translations for at the bottom of the chapter pages]].
* BroughtDownToBadass: Jade may have lost a belt level or two of WaifFu do to the Queen’s body being physically weaker (and not being able to do much to strengthen herself again), but she is still a GenreSavvy GuileHero, and has (so far) managed to remain undetected as an impostor, and is planning how to get out of the situation.
* ContinuityNod: Jade references the episode in canon where she became the Queen before she awakens in the new reality, and [[GreatBigBookOfEverything The Histories of Eternal Shadow]] reminds her of the Demon Archive from the
* DisappearedDad: The Queen’s father is a no-show.
* DivineParentage: The Shadowkhan Queens are said to be descended from a Japanese goddess in the Histories, and the male Shadowkhan certainly tend to regard the Queens as divine.
* DivineParentage: The Shadowkhan Queens are said to be descended from a Japanese goddess in the Histories, and the male Shadowkhan certainly tend to regard the Queens as divine.
** Also, it is stated that the Queen who Jade is occupying hates senseless death.
** From canon, the Book of Ages, which magically records history, and can [[RewritingReality alter reality if the text is changed]].
* HeroAntagonist: Rokutaro seems to be forming a secret alliance of elite warriors against the Shadowkhan, which will likely conflict with her plans in the future.
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* ImAHumanitarian: Tsume and his tribe seem to enjoy eating human slaves (a bit ''too'' much, in the eyes of the other Shadowkhan). And he's not above eating other Shadowkhan either.
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* ImAHumanitarian: Tsume and his tribe seem to enjoy eating human slaves (a bit ''too'' ''[[EvenEvilHasStandards too]]'' much, in the eyes of the other Shadowkhan). And he's not above eating other Shadowkhan either.
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** The Queen that Jade has replaced is the 98th.98th, with the 96th being the one that started the war.
* MissingMom: It is mentioned that the 98th Queen (the one who’s life Jade is trapped in) lost her mother at a young age (it should be noted that she died ''well'' before what is implied to be normal for a Queen, possibly implying foul play).
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Jade’s battle with Shendu ended up damaging the Book and creating the new reality.
* RippleEffectProofMemory: Jade remembers the original reality, but it is currently unknown if Shendu does.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Several reviewers have commented that one of the tribes (the Mini Khan) are missing, with everyone in-universe acting like they don't exist.
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* ShoutOut:
--> '''Jade''': (seeing the Shadowkhan fortress) "Whoa… '[[Film/TheLordOfTheRings Lord of the Rings]]' much?"
* SuddenlyVoiced: From Jade’s perspective, the Shadowkhan, since the {{Mooks}} never talked in canon.
* UndyingLoyalty: The Generals have this towards the Queen, but Jade worries what they might do if they find out that she ''isn’t'' the Queen.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Several reviewers have commented that one of the tribes (the Mini Khan) are missing, with everyone in-universe acting like they don'texist.exist.
** Also, unlike in canon, so far we have seen no trace of Jackie and the other members of the J-Team. Heck, we don’t know if they even ''exist'' here!
** Likewise, it is currently unknown if Shendu’s siblings are free or not.
** What happened to the Queen’s consciousness when Jade was shoved into her body is also unknown.
--> '''Jade''': (seeing the Shadowkhan fortress) "Whoa… '[[Film/TheLordOfTheRings Lord of the Rings]]' much?"
* SuddenlyVoiced: From Jade’s perspective, the Shadowkhan, since the {{Mooks}} never talked in canon.
* UndyingLoyalty: The Generals have this towards the Queen, but Jade worries what they might do if they find out that she ''isn’t'' the Queen.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Several reviewers have commented that one of the tribes (the Mini Khan) are missing, with everyone in-universe acting like they don't
** Also, unlike in canon, so far we have seen no trace of Jackie and the other members of the J-Team. Heck, we don’t know if they even ''exist'' here!
** Likewise, it is currently unknown if Shendu’s siblings are free or not.
** What happened to the Queen’s consciousness when Jade was shoved into her body is also unknown.
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* ActionGirl: Yasashi.
* LastOfHisKind: Yasashi is the last of a long line of demon slayers.
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* SharingABody: Averted so far; it’s unknown where the mind of the Queen went when Jade got stuck in her body.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Several reviewers have commented that one of the tribes (the Mini Khan) are missing, with everyone in-universe acting like they don't exist.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Several reviewers have commented that one of the tribes (the Mini Khan) are missing, with everyone in-universe acting like they don't exist.
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* CoolMask: Sanshobo wears a basket mask over his head.
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* HeadInTheSandsManagement: How Lord Rokutaro and his followers feel about the Imperial Court of Japan, which is doing its best to ignore the Shadowkhan's conquest of the southern islands.
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* HeadInTheSandsManagement: HeadInTheSandManagement: How Lord Rokutaro and his followers feel about the Imperial Court of Japan, which is doing its best to ignore the Shadowkhan's conquest of the southern islands.islands.
* HumanoidAbomination: Several of the Generals give off this vibe.
* HumanoidAbomination: Several of the Generals give off this vibe.
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* BadassBureaucrat: Technically all the Generals, due to being as much administrators as warriors, but Ozeki seems to be the only one who enjoys it.
* ChurchMilitant: The Kamikiri tribe (the Mantis Khan) seem to be all priests, while also undertaking warrior duties.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Each member of Rokutaro's Inner Circle got a scene of them making their way to Tobe, introducing them and giving us a good idea what they're each about.
** Each of the Generals get to showcase their personalities in their first appearances.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Even the other Oni are disgusted by Tsume and his tribe.
** Each of the Generals get to showcase their personalities in their first appearances.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Even the other Oni are disgusted by Tsume and his tribe.
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* GoneHorriblyRight: Shendu tried to alter reality, but an accidental slash across the Book of Ages caused ‘’different’’ changes than he wanted.
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* TheFundamentalist: Sanshobo, the General of the Kamikiri tribe, is also HighPriest of the Shadowkhan, and utterly devoted to the Queen (to rather hilarious levels, actually).
* [[GodEmperor Goddess Empress]]: How the Queens are viewed by the Shadowkhan (''especially'' the Kamikiri tribe).
* GoneHorriblyRight: Shendu tried to alter reality, but an accidental slash across the Book of Ages caused‘’different’’ ''different'' changes than he wanted.
* [[GodEmperor Goddess Empress]]: How the Queens are viewed by the Shadowkhan (''especially'' the Kamikiri tribe).
* GoneHorriblyRight: Shendu tried to alter reality, but an accidental slash across the Book of Ages caused
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* ImAHumanitarian: Tsume and his tribe seem to enjoy eating human slaves (a bit ''too'' much, in the eyes of the other Shadowkhan).
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* HeadInTheSandsManagement: How Lord Rokutaro and his followers feel about the Imperial Court of Japan, which is doing its best to ignore the Shadowkhan's conquest of the southern islands.
* ImAHumanitarian: Tsume and his tribe seem to enjoy eating human slaves (a bit ''too'' much, in the eyes of the other Shadowkhan). And he's not above eating other Shadowkhan either.
* ImAHumanitarian: Tsume and his tribe seem to enjoy eating human slaves (a bit ''too'' much, in the eyes of the other Shadowkhan). And he's not above eating other Shadowkhan either.
* TheMagnificent: All the past Yojimbos listed in the Histories of Eternal Shadow are given titles of some kind after their deaths.
** Kamisori is called "The Swift", and is implied to be a LightningBruiser.
** Kyouaku is known as "The Pirate King" and "TheButcher (or alternately, The Devil) of the Japanese Seas". And he ''prefers'' the latter.
* MookLieutenant: Jonin Toda to Hiruzen.
** Kamisori is called "The Swift", and is implied to be a LightningBruiser.
** Kyouaku is known as "The Pirate King" and "TheButcher (or alternately, The Devil) of the Japanese Seas". And he ''prefers'' the latter.
* MookLieutenant: Jonin Toda to Hiruzen.
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* PraetorianGuard: Whichever General holds the position of Yojimbo, it appears their tribe acts as this to the Queen.
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* OutOfCharacterAlert: Jade is trying to avoid what she feels qualify as these, in order to keep the Oni from realizing that she's not the real Queen. That said, the Generals ''do'' note that "the Queen" is acting unusual, but for the most part write it off as her being anxious over the upcoming ritual.
* ParentalSubstitute: It's hinted at that Hiruzen has been this to the Queen prior to Jade replacing her.
* PraetorianGuard: Whichever General holds the position of Yojimbo, it appears their tribe acts as this to the Queen. Currently, it's the Shinobi.
* ParentalSubstitute: It's hinted at that Hiruzen has been this to the Queen prior to Jade replacing her.
* PraetorianGuard: Whichever General holds the position of Yojimbo, it appears their tribe acts as this to the Queen. Currently, it's the Shinobi.
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* RedBaron: All the past Yojimbos listed in the Histories of Eternal Shadow are given titles of some kind after their deaths.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9035683/1/Queen-of-Shadows-A-Tale-Across-Ages Queen of Shadows: A Tale Across Ages]] is a ‘’WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures’’ fanfic, and a part of ''Fanfic/ProjectDarkJade''. Originally written by one of the project’s co-founders, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1157966/Nocturne-no-Kitsune Nocturne no Kitsune]] (though it was simply called Queen of Shadows at that point, hence the page name), and after Nocturne dropped out of sight, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1645311/Eduard-Kassel Eduard Kassel]], the other co-founder, adopted it and the “A Tale Across Ages” tag to the title.
This fic diverges from canon at the end of the Demon Portal arc, where Shendu’s plan to rewrite reality spiraled out of control, leading to Jade ending up in the body of a Shadowkhan Queen. Now, Jade has to keep her true identity secret from her “loyal forces” and find a way to get her old life back before her identity is discovered, or some other fate befalls her.
This fic diverges from canon at the end of the Demon Portal arc, where Shendu’s plan to rewrite reality spiraled out of control, leading to Jade ending up in the body of a Shadowkhan Queen. Now, Jade has to keep her true identity secret from her “loyal forces” and find a way to get her old life back before her identity is discovered, or some other fate befalls her.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9035683/1/Queen-of-Shadows-A-Tale-Across-Ages Queen of Shadows: A Tale Across Ages]] is a ‘’WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures’’ ''WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures'' fanfic, and a part of ''Fanfic/ProjectDarkJade''.''FanFic/ProjectDarkJade''. Originally written by one of the project’s co-founders, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1157966/Nocturne-no-Kitsune Nocturne no Kitsune]] (though it was simply called Queen ''Queen of Shadows Shadows'' at that point, hence the page name), and after Nocturne he dropped out of sight, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1645311/Eduard-Kassel Eduard Kassel]], the other co-founder, adopted it and added the “A "A Tale Across Ages” Ages" tag to the title.
title.
This fic diverges from canon at the end of the Demon Portal arc, where Shendu’s plan to rewrite realityspiraled spirals out of control, leading to Jade ending up in the body of a Shadowkhan Queen. Queen in Feudal Japan. Now, Jade has to keep her true identity secret from her “loyal forces” "loyal forces" and find a way to get her old life back before her identity is discovered, or some other fate befalls her.
her.
!!Tropes present in this story:
This fic diverges from canon at the end of the Demon Portal arc, where Shendu’s plan to rewrite reality
!!Tropes present in this story:
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* DeadFic: Nocturne dropped out of sight, leaving the fic unfinished before Eduard adopted it.
* DidYouJustScamCthulu: So far, Jade has managed to fool all the Shadowkhan into thinking that she’s the Queen, even the Queen’s personal bodyguard.
* FantasticRacism: There is no lost love between humans and Shadowkhan.
* DidYouJustScamCthulu: So far, Jade has managed to fool all the Shadowkhan into thinking that she’s the Queen, even the Queen’s personal bodyguard.
* FantasticRacism: There is no lost love between humans and Shadowkhan.
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* CoDragons: The Circle of Generals serve as this to the Queen. Though the Yojimbo appears to be [[DragonInChief first among equals]].
* DeadFic: Subverted -- Nocturne dropped out of sight, leaving the ficunfinished unfinished, before Eduard eventually adopted it.
*DidYouJustScamCthulu: DidYouJustScamCthulhu: So far, Jade has managed to fool all the Shadowkhan into thinking that she’s the Queen, even the Queen’s personal bodyguard.
* DueToTheDead: Kyouaku tosses anyone who dies in his naval battles overboard, whether they were his enemies or his crew.
* TheEmpire: The Shadowkhan, who have already conquered Shikoku and a large portion of Kyushu, with plans to conquer all of Japan.
* FantasticRacism: There is no love lostlove between humans and Shadowkhan.Shadowkhan.
* FishOutOfTemporalWater: The new reality Jade has been sent into seems to be in ancient Japan.
* DeadFic: Subverted -- Nocturne dropped out of sight, leaving the fic
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* DueToTheDead: Kyouaku tosses anyone who dies in his naval battles overboard, whether they were his enemies or his crew.
* TheEmpire: The Shadowkhan, who have already conquered Shikoku and a large portion of Kyushu, with plans to conquer all of Japan.
* FantasticRacism: There is no love lost
* FishOutOfTemporalWater: The new reality Jade has been sent into seems to be in ancient Japan.
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* GuileHero: Jade.
* RealityWarpingIsNotAToy: Shendu tried to use the RewritingReality powers of the Book of Ages, like in canon, to recreate the world so that he and his siblings ruled, but accidentally damaged the Book and lost control, his fate in the new reality is currently unknown.
* FishOutOfTemporalWater: The new reality Jade has been sent into seems to be in ancient Japan.
* SharingABody: Averted so far, it’s unknown where the mind of the Queen went when Jade got stuck in her body.
* RealityWarpingIsNotAToy: Shendu tried to use the RewritingReality powers of the Book of Ages, like in canon, to recreate the world so that he and his siblings ruled, but accidentally damaged the Book and lost control, his fate in the new reality is currently unknown.
* FishOutOfTemporalWater: The new reality Jade has been sent into seems to be in ancient Japan.
* SharingABody: Averted so far, it’s unknown where the mind of the Queen went when Jade got stuck in her body.
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* GreatBigBookOfEverything: The Histories of Eternal Shadow, a massive tome containing the sum knowledge of everything that's ever happened to the Shadowkhan, including biographies on all their Queens and Yojimbos.
* GuileHero:Jade.
Jade. WordOfGod is that she's going to have to rely on her wits now that she's stuck in the weak Queen's body.
* ImAHumanitarian: Tsume and his tribe seem to enjoy eating human slaves (a bit ''too'' much, in the eyes of the other Shadowkhan).
* LegacyCharacter: Hiruzen, the current Yojimbo, is the second one to bear the name.
** It seems every General of the Sumo tribe is called Ozeki.
** The Queen that Jade has replaced is the 98th.
* MookMaker: It seems that each Queen regularly undergoes a ritual to create new Shadowkhan from the Generals' chi.
* NonActionBigBad: Seems to be the case with the Queens, who are forbidden from fighting, leaving it to the males.
* PraetorianGuard: Whichever General holds the position of Yojimbo, it appears their tribe acts as this to the Queen.
* RealityWarpingIsNotAToy: Shendu tried to use the RewritingReality powers of the Book of Ages, like in canon, to recreate the world so that he and his siblings ruled, but accidentally damaged the Book and lostcontrol, his control. His fate in the new reality is currently unknown.
* FishOutOfTemporalWater: The new reality Jade has been sent into seems to beunknown (though passing references do suggest he's still in ancient Japan.
control of China, with other Asian states as tributaries).
* RedBaron: All the past Yojimbos listed in the Histories of Eternal Shadow are given titles of some kind after their deaths.
* SharingABody: Averted sofar, far; it’s unknown where the mind of the Queen went when Jade got stuck in her body.
* GuileHero:
* ImAHumanitarian: Tsume and his tribe seem to enjoy eating human slaves (a bit ''too'' much, in the eyes of the other Shadowkhan).
* LegacyCharacter: Hiruzen, the current Yojimbo, is the second one to bear the name.
** It seems every General of the Sumo tribe is called Ozeki.
** The Queen that Jade has replaced is the 98th.
* MookMaker: It seems that each Queen regularly undergoes a ritual to create new Shadowkhan from the Generals' chi.
* NonActionBigBad: Seems to be the case with the Queens, who are forbidden from fighting, leaving it to the males.
* PraetorianGuard: Whichever General holds the position of Yojimbo, it appears their tribe acts as this to the Queen.
* RealityWarpingIsNotAToy: Shendu tried to use the RewritingReality powers of the Book of Ages, like in canon, to recreate the world so that he and his siblings ruled, but accidentally damaged the Book and lost
* FishOutOfTemporalWater: The new reality Jade has been sent into seems to be
* RedBaron: All the past Yojimbos listed in the Histories of Eternal Shadow are given titles of some kind after their deaths.
* SharingABody: Averted so
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9035683/1/Queen-of-Shadows-A-Tale-Across-Ages Queen of Shadows: A Tale Across Ages]] is a ‘’WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures’’ fanfic, and a part of ''Fanfic/ProjectDarkJade''. Originally written by one of the project’s co-founders, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1157966/Nocturne-no-Kitsune Nocturne no Kitsune]] (though it was simply called Queen of Shadows at that point, hence the page name), and after Nocturne dropped out of sight, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1645311/Eduard-Kassel Eduard Kassel]], the other co-founder, adopted it and the “A Tale Across Ages” tag to the title.
This fic diverges from canon at the end of the Demon Portal arc, where Shendu’s plan to rewrite reality spiraled out of control, leading to Jade ending up in the body of a Shadowkhan Queen. Now, Jade has to keep her true identity secret from her “loyal forces” and find a way to get her old life back before her identity is discovered, or some other fate befalls her.
*BalefulPolymorph
AdaptationExpansion: Like a number of Dark Jade fics, the story fleshes out the personality of the Oni generals more.
*BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor.BalefulPolymorph: The shift caused by Shendu’s botched alteration of reality turned Jade into a Shadowkhan queen (she bemoans the fact that she’s become physically weaker due to this).
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Shendu wanted to reshape reality, but didn’t end up with control over the outcome.
* DeadFic: Nocturne dropped out of sight, leaving the fic unfinished before Eduard adopted it.
* DidYouJustScamCthulu: So far, Jade has managed to fool all the Shadowkhan into thinking that she’s the Queen, even the Queen’s personal bodyguard.
This fic diverges from canon at the end of the Demon Portal arc, where Shendu’s plan to rewrite reality spiraled out of control, leading to Jade ending up in the body of a Shadowkhan Queen. Now, Jade has to keep her true identity secret from her “loyal forces” and find a way to get her old life back before her identity is discovered, or some other fate befalls her.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Shendu wanted to reshape reality, but didn’t end up with control over the outcome.
* DeadFic: Nocturne dropped out of sight, leaving the fic unfinished before Eduard adopted it.
* DidYouJustScamCthulu: So far, Jade has managed to fool all the Shadowkhan into thinking that she’s the Queen, even the Queen’s personal bodyguard.
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* ForWantOfANail
ForWantOfANail: The story follows JCA canon up until the fight between Shendu and Jade over the Book of Ages causes Shendu to damage it, causing Jade to be thrust into a new body in a new time.
*GoneHorriblyRightGoneHorriblyRight: Shendu tried to alter reality, but an accidental slash across the Book of Ages caused ‘’different’’ changes than he wanted.
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* RealityWarpingIsNotAToy
RealityWarpingIsNotAToy: Shendu tried to use the RewritingReality powers of the Book of Ages, like in canon, to recreate the world so that he and his siblings ruled, but accidentally damaged the Book and lost control, his fate in the new reality is currently unknown.
*TemporalFishOutOfWaterFishOutOfTemporalWater: The new reality Jade has been sent into seems to be in ancient Japan.
* SharingABody: Averted so far, it’s unknown where the mind of the Queen went when Jade got stuck in her body.
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* SharingABody: Averted so far, it’s unknown where the mind of the Queen went when Jade got stuck in her body.
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* BalefulPolymorph
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor.
* FantasticRacism: There is no lost love between humans and Shadowkhan.
* ForWantOfANail
* GoneHorriblyRight
* GuileHero: Jade.
* RealityWarpingIsNotAToy
* TemporalFishOutOfWater
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor.
* FantasticRacism: There is no lost love between humans and Shadowkhan.
* ForWantOfANail
* GoneHorriblyRight
* GuileHero: Jade.
* RealityWarpingIsNotAToy
* TemporalFishOutOfWater
