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* [[spoiler: AmicableExes: Unlike [[MasculineGirlFeminineBoy Jack and Collete]] and [[SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl Leon and Yolanda]], Drew and Cynthia ultimately end up splitting and becoming this at the end of the story due to Cynthia wanting to leave the park to both go after the escaped von Grimm and do her own thing afterward and the both of them being well aware of how badly long distance relationships tend to work out. Drew doesn't at all mind this though.]]

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* [[spoiler: AmicableExes: Unlike [[MasculineGirlFeminineBoy Jack and Collete]] and [[SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl Leon and Yolanda]], Drew and Cynthia ultimately end break up splitting and becoming become this at the end of the story instead of happily staying together due to Cynthia wanting to leave the park to both go after the escaped von Grimm and do her own thing afterward and the both of them being well aware of how badly long distance relationships tend to work out. Drew doesn't at all mind this though.]]]]
* AnimalStampede: Frank is killed when one of these causes the porta potty he was hiding in to get trampled while he was still inside, crushing him to death.
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*[[spoiler: AmicableExes: Unlike [[MasculineGirlFeminineBoy Jack and Collete]] and [[SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl Leon and Yolanda]], Drew and Cynthia ultimately end up splitting and becoming this at the end of the story due to Cynthia wanting to leave the park to both go after the escaped von Grimm and do her own thing afterward and the both of them being well aware of how badly long distance relationships tend to work out. Drew doesn't at all mind this though.]]


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* TeamShot: How the story ends, with the team positioning themselves for such in preparation for the [[spoiler: upcoming opening of the Prehistoric Earth park to the public]].
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* MaybeEverAfter: Ultimately, whether or not Alice and Will become an OfficialCouple at the end is left ambiguous.
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* BackForTheFinale: After spending a sizable amount of time out of focus throughout a large portion of the story, Adrian, Colette, Nikolai, and Kyle all take on prominent roles once more in time for the final four episodes of the story.

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* BackForTheFinale: After spending a sizable amount of time out of focus throughout a large portion of the story, Adrian, Colette, Nikolai, and Kyle all take on prominent roles once more in time for the final four episodes of the story. And Spiny and Rey are able to be present for a brief cameo in the epilogue.



** Drew and Cynthia hook up over the course of 'Phase 2'.

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** Drew and Cynthia hook up over the course of 'Phase 2'. [[spoiler: But unlike the two couples that form after them, they ultimately part ways amicably instead of staying together due to Cynthia deciding to leave the park to go after Von Grimm and likewise pursue her own interests and Drew and her both well aware of how difficult it is to maintain long distance relationships.]]

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** Thanks to Leon's quick work with his summoning whistle, the three Allosaurs Drogon, Rhaegal, and Viserion are able to intervene in time to bust him, Drew, Nikolai, and Cynthia out of an unpleasant situation with Frank, von Grimm, and several mercenaries.



* EscapedAnimalRampage: Happens multiple times, with one especially notable instance being when all the carnivorous dinosaurs engage in a mass breakout during ''Nightmare Labyrinthine''.

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* EscapedAnimalRampage: Happens multiple times, with one especially notable instance being when all the carnivorous dinosaurs engage in a mass breakout during ''Nightmare Labyrinthine''. Also invoked by both the villains and the heroes during ''Isle Full of Noise''.


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* ShoutOutToShakespeare: At least three of the titles for the final episodes are named after parts of quotations from Shakespeare's The Tempest.

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** The scene with the guard at the beginning of 'Isle Full of Noises Part 2' is based on a similar scene from ''WesternAnimation/TitanAE''.



** Percival von Grimm has so far only appeared at least thrice in the whole story. [[spoiler: Turns out, he's the story's big bad and is responsible for setting up a dinosaur trafficking operation while also hiring a security guard named Duncan to serve as his mole.]]

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** Percival von Grimm has so far only appeared at least thrice in the whole story. [[spoiler: Turns out, he's the story's big bad BigBad and is responsible for setting up a dinosaur trafficking operation while also hiring a security guard named Duncan to serve as his mole.]]
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* BackForTheFinale: After spending a sizable amount of time out of focus throughout a large portion of the story, Adrian, Nikolai, and Kyle all take on prominent roles once more in time for the final three episodes of the story.

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* BackForTheFinale: After spending a sizable amount of time out of focus throughout a large portion of the story, Adrian, Colette, Nikolai, and Kyle all take on prominent roles once more in time for the final three four episodes of the story.

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* DeviousDolphins: Whilst not technically dolphins, the territorial cymbospondylus encountered in ''Degrees of Greatness'' sort of qualify by virtue of being ichthyosaurs.
* DoubleMeaningTitle: "The First Steps" both refers to the creatures of the story being the first creatures to go onto land and the first steps towards Leon taking a level in badass.



* DeviousDolphins: Whilst not technically dolphins, the territorial cymbospondylus encountered in ''Degrees of Greatness'' sort of qualify by virtue of being ichthyosaurs.



* DoubleMeaningTitle: "The First Steps" both refers to the creatures of the story being the first creatures to go onto land and the first steps towards Leon taking a level in badass.



* EatenAlive: Thanatos the liopleurodon subjects one of the villainous Novum black-ops agents to this fate.

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* EatenAlive: Thanatos the liopleurodon subjects one of the villainous Novum black-ops agents to this fate. Sharptooth also subjects one of the other black-ops agents, plus TheMole, to this fate.

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* {{Deuteragonist}}: So far, Leon. Jack serves as the Tritagonist.

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* {{Deuteragonist}}: So far, Leon. {{Deuteragonist}}: Whilst Drew is the Protagonist of each phase, the role of deuteragonist, tritagonist and tetratagonist changes depending on season. However, Leon is the series' true deuteragonist - his role greatly outweighs that of the other characters (aside from Drew, he has been on the most missions) and his overall character arc is given equal attention to Drew's. The results for each season are:
** Phase 1: Leon serves as the Deuteragonist, with the beginnings of his romance with Yolanda and his tensions with Jack being a prominent part of the phase.
Jack serves as the Tritagonist.Tritagonist of the season, with his tensions with Leon acting as a source of drama for the whole phase, with Kyle and Nikolai serving as the Tetragonists.
** Phase 2: Leon once again serves the role of Deuteragonist and shares this role with Jack. The former has a character arc training the allosaurs and plays a significant role in the finale, whilst the latter takes a significant level in badass, gets a romance arc with Collete and helps take down Sharptooth. Collete and Linda serve as the Tritagonists, with the former being Jack's love interest and the latter having a bonding arc with Cirrus and playing a prominent role in a high number of subplots. Finally Kyle and Nikolai serve as the Tetragonists, with each playing a prominent role in subplots.
** Phase 3: Leon once again takes the reigns as the Deuteragonist and shares this position with Alice. The former gets a RomanceArc with Yolanda, [[spoiler: and plays an important role in the finale]], whilst the latter gets ShipTease with Will, gets a bonding arc with Raksha and [[spoiler:is among the first to find out about Percival's infiltration of the park]]. Will and Yolanda serve as the Tritagonists, with the former's feelings for Alice playing a prominent role in the plot, and the latter serving as Leon's love interest and bonding with Sharptooth. Finally we have Cynthia and Sharptooth as Tetragonists, with the former's [[spoiler:attempts to find out what Percival and the Novum board are planning]] playing a prominent role, while the latter gets a bonding arc with Yolanda.
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* CoolVsAwesome: The hostile t-rex summoned by the smuggling operation vs Martha the Woolly Mammoth.


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** When the hostile t-rex summoned by the smuggling operation as a distraction encounters Martha the woolly mammoth, a mixture of Martha's size and having never seen anything remotely resembling Martha before results in the t-rex feeling uncertainty over what to do, allowing her to be successfully hit with a tranquilizer. And by the time the t-rex finally decides that she should perhaps try to fight and attack Martha, the tranquilizer drugs have already taken full effect, and she falls unconscious.

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* BearsAreBadNews: An entire sleuth's worth of cave bears get rescued for the park. The last one rescued in particular proves especially dangerous over the course of its rescue.

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* BearyFriendly: Baloo serves as this when in a good mood.
* BearsAreBadNews: An entire sleuth's worth of cave bears get rescued for the park. The last one rescued in particular proves especially dangerous over the course of its rescue. Baloo also switches between this and BearyFriendly depending on the circumstances.



** Baloo pounces into action just in time to kill Zander before he can [[BoomHeadshot kill Will]].



* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Ed the Novum black-ops agent ends up eaten by Thanatos after a failed attempt at taking out Nikolai.

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Ed the Novum black-ops agent ends up eaten by Thanatos after a failed attempt at taking out Nikolai.Nikolai.
** Ed's partner Zander ends up getting his head crushed in Baloo's jaws after [[PapaWolf threatening Will]].

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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: The phorusrhacos manage, unlike in Prehistoric Park, to actually put up a decent fight against the female smilodons trying to steal their kill. And in the end, only the arrival of Broken-Fang (aka. Half Tooth) is enough to convince them to reluctantly give up their kill.

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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: The phorusrhacos manage, unlike in Prehistoric Park, to actually put up a decent fight against the female smilodons smilodons, whilst trying to steal their kill. And in the end, only the arrival of Broken-Fang (aka. Half Tooth) is enough to convince them to reluctantly give up their attempts to steal the kill.



** The terror birds, as opposed to their portrayal as cowardly scavengers in ''Series/WalkingWithBeasts'', are portrayed as intimidating and powerful predators, almost driving a pride of Smilodon off their kill.



* TentacledTerror: The cameroceras rescued in "Devils of the Deep" prove quite nightmarish in Drew and Jack's efforts at getting them through the portal. And as Jack will gladly tell you from his efforts at trying to prevent them from overfeeding themselves in "The First Steps", they are no less difficult to deal with at the park than they were in the wild.

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* TentacledTerror: The cameroceras rescued in "Devils of the Deep" prove quite nightmarish in Drew and Jack's Leon's efforts at getting them through the portal. And as Jack will gladly tell you from his efforts at trying to prevent them from overfeeding themselves in "The First Steps", they are no less difficult to deal with at the park than they were in the wild.
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* BackForTheFinale: After spending a sizable amount of time out of focus throughout a large portion of the story, Adrian, Nikolai, and Kyle all take on prominent roles once more in time for the final three episodes of the story.


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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Ed the Novum black-ops agent ends up eaten by Thanatos after a failed attempt at taking out Nikolai.


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* EatenAlive: Thanatos the liopleurodon subjects one of the villainous Novum black-ops agents to this fate.

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** In a sense, [[spoiler: Adrian, by virtue of catching Duncan and the black-ops unit in the act of stealing the time portal in time to sound the alarm in spite of their attempts at stopping him from doing so by tasing him]].



* DeviousDolphins: Whilst not technically a dolphin, the territorial cymbospondylus encountered in ''Degrees of Greatness'' sort of qualifies by virtue of being an ichthyosaur.

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* DeviousDolphins: Whilst not technically a dolphin, dolphins, the territorial cymbospondylus encountered in ''Degrees of Greatness'' sort of qualifies qualify by virtue of being an ichthyosaur.ichthyosaurs.



* EyeScream: The first rescued cave bear is completely blind in one eye, and it is clearly through an injury to said eye.

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* EyeScream: The first rescued cave bear (later named Baloo) is completely blind in one eye, and it is clearly through an injury to said eye.



* HandicappedBadass: Baloo.



** A lot of Phase Three revolves around Drew dealing with the PTSD he has sustained from being trapped in the Cretaceous; the very real thought of being permanently stranded in the past or dying in the K-T event severely taxed him mentally. It shows that the average, undisciplined civilian probably won't come out of a life-or-death situation completely unscathed.

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** A lot of Phase Three revolves around Drew dealing with the PTSD he has sustained from being trapped in the Cretaceous; the very real thought of being permanently stranded in the past or dying in dying in the K-T event severely event severely taxed him mentally. It shows that the average, undisciplined civilian probably won't come out of a life-or-death situation completely unscathed.
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: The phorusrhacos manage, unlike in Prehistoric Park, to actually put up a decent fight against the female smilodons trying to steal their kill. And in the end, only the arrival of Broken-Fang (aka. Half Tooth) is enough to convince them to reluctantly give up their kill.

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* DeviousDolphins: Whilst not technically a dolphin, the territorial cymbospondylus encountered in ''Degrees of Greatness'' sort of qualifies by virtue of being an ichthyosaur.



* SparedByTheAdaptation: The adult female ''Postosuchus'', as Drew and Adrian scared off the ''Coelophysis'' and ''Liliensternus'' trying to eat her.

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** Adrian fell heavily out of focus in the story for a long while due to the role initially intended for him getting supplanted by Jack. [[spoiler: But in the end, he's the one who gets to catch Duncan and the Novum black-ops unit in the act of stealing the time portal and sound the alarm.]]
* SparedByTheAdaptation: SpannerInTheWorks: In their eagerness to get ahold of the time portal after getting most of the other park staff distracted by their rampaging female t-rex, they completely forgot about Adrian. [[spoiler: And sure enough, he shows up in time to catch them in the act of stealing it, and also sound the alarm when their subsequent tasing of him ends up taking longer than they'd hoped to knock him unconscious.]]
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The adult female ''Postosuchus'', as Drew and Adrian scared off the ''Coelophysis'' and ''Liliensternus'' trying to eat her.


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** The mother gastornis's chicks are safely spared and able to live alongside their mother in the park by virtue of the team sending the titanomyrma that [[WouldHurtAChild would have killed and eaten them]] through the portal before they can do so.
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: In some of the earlier 'episodes', an 'introductory theme page-break' was included. This eventually got done away with later in the series.
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* RhinoRampage: A woolly rhino ends up briefly at risk of menacing a neanderthal before then getting goaded into charging at Drew and Leon (at which point it ends up rushing right through the portal).

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* RhinoRampage: A woolly rhino ends up briefly at risk of menacing a neanderthal before then getting goaded into charging at Drew and Leon (at which point it ends up rushing right through the portal). A crash of elasmotherium encountered by Cynthia and Adrian in the same mission likewise prove unamused by them seemingly intruding on their territory.
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* TentacledTerror: The cameroceras rescued in "Devils of the Deep" prove quite nightmarish in Drew and Jack's efforts at getting them through the portal. And as Jack will gladly tell you from his efforts at trying to prevent them from overfeeding themselves in "The First Steps", they are no less difficult to deal with at the park than they were in the wild.

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* AttackOfThe50FootWhatever: Even by T-rex standards, Sharptooth is an absolute giant! And he really causes a lot of trouble whenever he so happens to go rampaging around.



* PantheraAwesome: Dinofelis and Smilodon are amongst the animals rescued and brought to the park.

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* PantheraAwesome: Dinofelis Dinofelis, Smilodon, and Smilodon Cave Lion are amongst the animals rescued and brought to the park.

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** And while we're at it, this is also not the [[WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb first time]] that [[Creator/ThomasBrodieSangster Jack]] has traveled back in time.



** As big as most t-rex are, Sharptooth absolutely dwarfs them.



* BearsAreBadNews: An entire sleuth's worth of cave bears get rescued for the park. The last one rescued in particular proves especially dangerous over the course of its rescue.



* CruelElephant: An adult male deinotherium in musth proves to be a dangerous obstacle for Drew, Leon, and Jack over the course of their adventure in ''Anthropomorphous Apes''.

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* CruelElephant: CruelElephant:
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An adult male deinotherium in musth proves to be a dangerous obstacle for Drew, Leon, and Jack over the course of their adventure in ''Anthropomorphous Apes''.Apes''.
** Similarly, an adult male mammoth also proves a similarly dangerous obstacle for a neanderthal before it gets attracted (read: goaded) into charging through the portal by Drew and Leon.



* EveryoneLovesBlondes: Leon and Jack certainly do; and perhaps so does Drew.

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* EveryoneLovesBlondes: Leon Leon, Jack, and Jack Drew certainly do; and perhaps possibly so does Drew.Alice.



* EyeScream: The first rescued cave bear is completely blind in one eye, and it is clearly through an injury to said eye.



* HeinousHyena: The wolves that attacked Martha in the original Prehistoric Park episode are replaced by an entire pack of hungry cave hyenas (all of which get sent to the park).
* HonorableElephant: Martha the woolly mammoth is present in this continuity.



* RhinoRampage: A woolly rhino ends up briefly at risk of menacing a neanderthal before then getting goaded into charging at Drew and Leon (at which point it ends up rushing right through the portal).



** It is explicitly noted that, despite looking like pigs, the entelodonts are more related to hippopotamuses.

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** It is explicitly noted that, despite looking like pigs, the entelodonts are more related to hippopotamuses.hippos.
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* MammothsMeanIceAge: Deliberately invoked for the sake of Jack, Alice, and Drew's side of the mission in "Full Fathom Five".
* TheMarvelousDeer: The megaloceros are given seemingly rather majestic descriptions in "Full Fathom Five".
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* BadassBookworm: Drew is a zoologist by trade, but proves his badass credentials when dealing with some very dangerous prehistoric animals.

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* BadassBookworm: Drew is a zoologist by trade, but proves his badass credentials when dealing with some very dangerous prehistoric animals. Leon can also, despite occasional crippling moments of nervousness, be surprisingly badass himself when pushed far enough.

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** The story refers to {{Megalodon}} as ''Otodus megalodon''. While the official name of ''megalodon'' has been in the air for a while, it was eventually decided to be ''Carcharocles megalodon'' about three years before it appeared in the story. This also isn't ScienceMarchesOn, because in ''Sea Monsters'', it was classified as ''Carcharodon megalodon''.

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** The story refers to {{Megalodon}} as ''Otodus megalodon''. While the official name of ''megalodon'' has been in the air for a while, it was eventually decided to be ''Carcharocles megalodon'' about three years before it appeared in the story. This also isn't ScienceMarchesOn, because in ''Sea Monsters'', it was classified as ''Carcharodon megalodon''. The co-author has admitted he messed up there.


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** It is explicitly noted that, despite looking like pigs, the entelodonts are more related to hippopotamuses.
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** The story refers to {{Megalodon}} as ''Otodus megalodon''. While the official name of ''megalodon'' has been in the air for a while, it was eventually decided to be ''Carcharocles megalodon'' about three years before it appeared in the story. This also isn't ScienceMarchesOn, because in ''Sea Monsters'', it was classified as ''Carcharodon megalodon''.
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* TheMole: [[spoiler: A security guard named Duncan turns out to have been hired by Novum senior board member Percival von Grimm to help sabotage the park for the sake of a sinister secret dinosaur trafficking operation. And over the course of Cynthia's attempts at finding and exposing him, she herself [[RedHerring initially makes ''herself'' appear to be the mole]]]]


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* SmallRoleBigImpact:
** Percival von Grimm has so far only appeared at least thrice in the whole story. [[spoiler: Turns out, he's the story's big bad and is responsible for setting up a dinosaur trafficking operation while also hiring a security guard named Duncan to serve as his mole.]]
** Duncan the security guard only appeared very briefly in ''one'' mission from the Phase 1 'season'. [[spoiler: Turns out, he's von Grimm's [[TheMole mole]].]]
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* HypotheticalCasting: Nathanoraptor has commented that he sees Creator/ScarlettJohansson as Linda Eberhart, Creator/IdrisElba as Kyle Taymor and Creator/DaisyRidley as Alice Denham. He's also quite partial to the idea of Ivana Baquero as Collete and Nicola Peltz as Yolanda. He has also found appeal in the idea of casting Creator/TomHolland as Leon Gilbertson and Tim Roth as Nikolai. He even managed to later agree to casting Charlie Heaton as Drew, Harry Shum Jr. as Adrian, Thomas Brodie-Sangster as Jack, and Wil Traval as Khatin.

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* HypotheticalCasting: Nathanoraptor has commented that he sees Creator/ScarlettJohansson as Linda Eberhart, Creator/IdrisElba as Kyle Taymor and Creator/DaisyRidley as Alice Denham. He's also quite partial to the idea of Ivana Baquero as Collete and Nicola Peltz as Yolanda. He has also found appeal in the idea of casting Creator/TomHolland as Leon Gilbertson and Tim Roth as Nikolai. He even managed to later agree to casting Charlie Heaton as Drew, Harry Shum Jr. as Adrian, Thomas Brodie-Sangster as Jack, Alex Pettyfer as Will, and Wil Traval as Khatin.
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** And for that matter, this is also not the first time that [[Creator/AlexPettyfer Will]] has found himself playing the role of a [[Literature/AlexRider reluctant spy]].

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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:The resident mother ''Dimetrodon'' ends up succumbing to her injuries from fighting the challenger for her nesting site in ''The New Rulers'']]. The [[spoiler: elder of the two smilodon brothers]] also gets killed.

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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:The resident mother ''Dimetrodon'' ends up succumbing to her injuries from fighting the challenger for her nesting site in ''The New Rulers'']]. The [[spoiler: elder of the two smilodon brothers]] also gets killed.



* PantheraAwesome: Dinofelis and smilodon are amongst the animals rescued and brought to the park.

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* PantheraAwesome: Dinofelis and smilodon Smilodon are amongst the animals rescued and brought to the park.



** All of the theropods are given feathers; even the ones.

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** The andrewsarchus are given hooves, and made to look somewhat more like carnivorous pigs then the 'leopard-hyena hybrids' (Nathanoraptor's own approximate words) that they were in Walking With Beasts.

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** The andrewsarchus are given hooves, and made to look somewhat more like carnivorous pigs then the 'leopard-hyena 'tiger-dog hybrids' (Nathanoraptor's own approximate words) that they were in Walking With Beasts.


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** Whilst the dominant brother Smilodon is still killed by the Megatherium, the smaller one doesn't fight Half-Tooth and is brought back to the park.

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