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* AuthorsSavingThrow: The SLN decided to invade a little polity of the Republic of Haven, instead of Haven or Manticore first. As for why, it's because Elvana has a [[spoiler: wormhole junction, with at least two terminuses, one leading deeper into the Republic, and one leading into the League]]. It wasn't just to anger Shannon herself.
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* ThemePairing: The main reason for Shannon Foraker/Sonja Hemphill. However, this is a slow burn fic, so nobody's kissed yet (as of 21).
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* BlueBlood: Many Manticorians, and even [[spoiler: Shannon Foraker herself]]
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* BlueBlood: Many Manticorians, and even [[spoiler: Shannon Foraker herself]]herself]].
* BluffTheEavesdropper: What ends up happening to the RMN eavesdropping bugs.
* BluffTheEavesdropper: What ends up happening to the RMN eavesdropping bugs.
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* MacrossMissileMassacre: 1st Elvana, and in canon, 1st Manticore (the aftermath is seen in a flashback in OMT)
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* BeneathTheMask: Shannon, and her cousin, [[OriginalCharacter Eimear]], were both stolen by the People's Navy, and had to hide their royal pasts, with a cover story. It was pretty serious, as they would have been dead if the Committee of Public Safety found out (that's before everything else that Shannon did).
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* BeneathTheMask: Shannon, and her cousin, [[OriginalCharacter Eimear]], were both stolen by the People's Navy, and had to hide their royal pasts, with a cover story. It was pretty serious, as they would have been dead if the [[PeoplesRepublicOfTyranny Committee of Public Safety Safety]] found out (that's before everything else that Shannon did).
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* ThemePairing: The main reason for Shannon Foraker/Sonja Hemphill. However, this is a slow burn fic, so nobody's kissed yet (as of 21).
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* ThemePairing: The main reason for Shannon Foraker/Sonja Hemphill. However, this is a slow burn fic, so nobody's kissed yet (as of 21).21).
* YouDoNOTWantToKnow: How Shannon's aunt [[spoiler:Queen]] Cadhla, managed to keep [[OriginalCharacter Captain Orla Foraker]] from being stolen.
* YouDoNOTWantToKnow: How Shannon's aunt [[spoiler:Queen]] Cadhla, managed to keep [[OriginalCharacter Captain Orla Foraker]] from being stolen.
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* NotCheatingUnlessYouGetCaught: Shannon utterly hacks out the security measures on the "secured" datapads, before she gets sent to the POW camp. So far, several chapters (and the Grand Alliance) later, the RMN still have no idea that she did it.
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* ConsummateLiar: Shannon didn't mention her past for a number of years under the People's Navy, and somehow survived, despite [[PoliticalOfficer People's Commissioner]] Eloise Pritchart discovering this from her partner.
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* BeneathTheMask: Shannon, and her cousin, [[OriginalCharacter Eimear]], were both stolen by the People's Navy, and had to hide their royal pasts, with a cover story. It was pretty serious, as they would have been dead if the Committee of Public Safety found out (that's before everything else that Shannon did).
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* HarsherInHindsight: Does the SLN invasion of Elvana remind you of anything? [[note]]The 2022 Russian invadsion of Ukraine[[/note]]
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* FourStarBadass: Shannon Foraker, as she [[CurbStompBattle beats the SLN]] and forces them to surrender.
* HarsherInHindsight: Does the SLN invasion of Elvana remind you of anything? [[note]]The 2022 Russianinvadsion invasion of Ukraine[[/note]]
* HarsherInHindsight: Does the SLN invasion of Elvana remind you of anything? [[note]]The 2022 Russian
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* ProtectionFromEditors: This fanfiction didn't get a beta reader until Chapter 21, and the author is currently too busy to rewrite the prior chapters.
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* ProtectionFromEditors: This fanfiction didn't get a beta reader until Chapter 21, and the author is currently too busy to rewrite the prior chapters.chapters.
* ThemePairing: The main reason for Shannon Foraker/Sonja Hemphill. However, this is a slow burn fic, so nobody's kissed yet (as of 21).
* ThemePairing: The main reason for Shannon Foraker/Sonja Hemphill. However, this is a slow burn fic, so nobody's kissed yet (as of 21).
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* HarsherInHindsight: Does the SLN invasion of Elvana remind you of anything? [[note]]The 2022 Russian invadsion of Ukraine[[/note]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: Does the SLN invasion of Elvana remind you of anything? [[note]]The 2022 Russian invadsion of Ukraine[[/note]]Ukraine[[/note]]
* ProtectionFromEditors: This fanfiction didn't get a beta reader until Chapter 21, and the author is currently too busy to rewrite the prior chapters.
* ProtectionFromEditors: This fanfiction didn't get a beta reader until Chapter 21, and the author is currently too busy to rewrite the prior chapters.
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* DancesAndBalls: Shannon's family, back on Elvana, hosts a lot of parties. Shannon even drags some of her colleagues to parties after 1st Elvana.
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* DancesAndBalls: Shannon's family, back on Elvana, hosts a lot of parties. Shannon even drags some of her colleagues to parties after 1st Elvana.Elvana.
* HarsherInHindsight: Does the SLN invasion of Elvana remind you of anything? [[note]]The 2022 Russian invadsion of Ukraine[[/note]]
* HarsherInHindsight: Does the SLN invasion of Elvana remind you of anything? [[note]]The 2022 Russian invadsion of Ukraine[[/note]]
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I'm not 100% sure if this should be there, but I'm leaving it for now, and expanded on it.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: The SLN decided to invade a little polity of the Republic of Haven, instead of Haven or Manticore first. As for why, it's because Elvana has a [[spoiler: wormhole junction, with at least two terminuses, one leading deeper into the Republic, and one leading into the League]].
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: The SLN decided to invade a little polity of the Republic of Haven, instead of Haven or Manticore first. As for why, it's because Elvana has a [[spoiler: wormhole junction, with at least two terminuses, one leading deeper into the Republic, and one leading into the League]]. It wasn't just to anger Shannon herself.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: The SLN decided to invade a little polity of the Republic of Haven, instead of Haven or Manticore first. As for why, it's because Elvana has a [[spoiler: wormhole junction, with at least two terminuses, one leading deeper into the Republic, and one leading into the League]].
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* CurbStompBattle: 1st Elvana, where the GA absolutely curb-stomps the SLN
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* CurbStompBattle: 1st Elvana, where the GA absolutely curb-stomps the SLNSLN (despite the SLN thinking they'd easily win).
* DancesAndBalls: Shannon's family, back on Elvana, hosts a lot of parties. Shannon even drags some of her colleagues to parties after 1st Elvana.
* DancesAndBalls: Shannon's family, back on Elvana, hosts a lot of parties. Shannon even drags some of her colleagues to parties after 1st Elvana.
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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: Due to the lack of a canonical backstory for the character, the author made one for Shannon Foraker. She's [[spoiler:really royal.]]
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37945567 One More Time]], or OMT, as it's known in it's Discord [[https://discord.gg/5ESgKNCnUP server]], is a Literature/HonorHarrington AlternateUniverseFic. It's biggest change comes at the First Battle of Manticore, where former ops officer Shannon Foraker comes along with Admiral Lester Tourville, and gets captured with him.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37945567 One More Time]], or OMT, as it's known in it's Discord [[https://discord.gg/5ESgKNCnUP server]], is a Literature/HonorHarrington AlternateUniverseFic. It's biggest change comes at the First Battle of Manticore, where former ops officer Shannon Foraker comes along with Admiral Lester Tourville, and gets captured with him.
him. However,
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37945567 One More Time]], or OMT, as it's known in it's Discord [[https://discord.gg/5ESgKNCnUP server]], is a Literature/HonorHarrington AlternateUniverseFic. It's biggest change comes at the First Battle of Manticore, where former ops officer Shannon Foraker comes along with Admiral Lester Tourville, and gets captured with him.
Some info is also posted on the author's [[https://shannon-foraker.tumblr.com/ tumblr]].
!!The One More Time series (there are other works posted, mainly on Website/Archive of Our Own contains examples of:
* CurbStompBattle: 1st Elvana, where the GA absolutely curb-stomps the SLN
Some info is also posted on the author's [[https://shannon-foraker.tumblr.com/ tumblr]].
!!The One More Time series (there are other works posted, mainly on Website/Archive of Our Own contains examples of:
* CurbStompBattle: 1st Elvana, where the GA absolutely curb-stomps the SLN
