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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/33907951/chapters/84313891 On Earth and Boiling Isles]] is an ''[[WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse Owl House]]'' AlternateUniverseFic written by [=GeminiAlchemist=], the same creator responsible for ''Fanfic/ABlightOnBonesborough''. This fic is built upon the FandomSpecificPlot of repurposing Luz and Amity’s beta designs to serve as the protagonists’ older siblings, with occasional check-ins on the Boiling Isles’ side of things.
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility: When Amelia states her need to help those with the powers she has, Lucia directly quotes the TropeNamer (as she specifies -- ''[[WrongfullyAttributed Uncle Ben]]'', [[WrongfullyAttributed not Spider-Man himself]]).
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility: When Amelia states her need to help those with the powers she has, Lucia directly quotes the TropeNamer (as she specifies -- ''[[WrongfullyAttributed Uncle Ben]]'', [[WrongfullyAttributed [[CommonKnowledge not Spider-Man himself]]).
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* ShoutOut: Lucia briefly mentions ''WesternAnimation/SheRaAndThePrincessesOfPower'', describing the aftermath of binging it as "one very long week of peak bisexual energy from Luz".
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** Lucia briefly mentions ''WesternAnimation/SheRaAndThePrincessesOfPower'', describing the aftermath of binging it as "one very long week of peak bisexual energy from Luz".
** Lucia briefly mentions ''WesternAnimation/SheRaAndThePrincessesOfPower'', describing the aftermath of binging it as "one very long week of peak bisexual energy from Luz".
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility: Lucia directly quotes the TropeNamer (as she specifies -- ''Uncle Ben'', not Spider-Man) when summing up Amelia's desire to use her powers to protect people.
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility: When Amelia states her need to help those with the powers she has, Lucia directly quotes the TropeNamer (as she specifies -- ''Uncle Ben'', ''[[WrongfullyAttributed Uncle Ben]]'', [[WrongfullyAttributed not Spider-Man) when summing up Amelia's desire to use her powers to protect people.Spider-Man himself]]).
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* SimultaneousArcs: While the events of this fic occur in the Human Realm, Luz is experiencing the events of Seasons 1 and 2 on the other side of the portal.
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** This eventually becomes [[spoiler: Amelia's]] go-to attack, with its effectiveness varying from combatant to combatant.
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** While killing the plant demon in Chapter 7 via PunctuatedPounding, Lucia refers to the thing as a "God. Damn. [[Theatre/LittleShopOfHorrors Audrey. Two.]] ''[[PrecisionFStrike Mother. Fucker!]]''
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** While killing the plant demon ''Isleium Praereptor'' in Chapter 7 via PunctuatedPounding, Lucia refers to the thing as a "God. Damn. [[Theatre/LittleShopOfHorrors Audrey. Two.]] ''[[PrecisionFStrike Mother. Fucker!]]''
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** Lucia calls the second demon her and Amela stumble upon as "WesternAnimation/BrotherBear".
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* AlmostKiss: Lucia and Amelia are hit with this ''twice''. A monster interrupts them both times.
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* DecompositeCharacter: Lucia and Amelia[[spoiler: / Emily]] are physically modeled after Luz and Amity's "beta" designs and, as such, adopt many of the {{Fanon}} traits associated with them, but are depicted as Luz and Amity's siblings in this fic, with canon being altered in subtle and major ways as a result of these additions.
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* DecompositeCharacter: Lucia and Amelia[[spoiler: / Emily]] Amelia are physically modeled after Luz and Amity's "beta" designs and, as such, adopt many of the {{Fanon}} traits associated with them, but are depicted as Luz and Amity's siblings in this fic, with canon being altered in subtle and major ways as a result of these additions.
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* ThirdTimesTheCharm: Lucia and Amelia ''finally'' get their kiss in Chapter 7, but they're interrupted by Camila before it goes much further.
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility: Lucia directly quotes the TropeNamer (as she specifies -- ''Uncle Ben'', not Spider-Man) when summing up Amelia's desire to use her powers to protect people.
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility: Lucia directly quotes the TropeNamer (as she specifies -- ''Uncle Ben'', not Spider-Man) when summing up Amelia's desire to use her powers to protect people.
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* BalconyWooingScene: Luz suggests that Lucia [[Film/SayAnything stand outside Amelia's window, holding a boombox over her head]] after the date-gone-wrong.
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** In a subtle example, Amelia's hair is naturally green and she dyes the ''roots'' brown, as opposed to Amity's hair being brown, which she dyes green.
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One type of demon was fearsome, but with highly flammable fur. Once witches started really using fire spells, it quickly dropped as a threat.
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* KillItWithFire: One type of demon was fearsome, but with highly flammable fur. Once witches started really using fire spells, it quickly dropped as a threat.
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* KillItWithFire: The Orthrursa demon, which Lucia and Amelia encounter in Chapter 4, has highly flammable fur -- something they both discover when [[spoiler: Amelia accidentally conjures fire to kill the thing.]]
One type of demon was fearsome, but with highly flammable fur. Once witches started really using fire spells, it quickly dropped as a threat.
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** While killing the plant monster in Chapter 7 via PunctuatedPounding, Lucia refers to the thing as a "God. Damn. [[Theatre/LittleShopOfHorrors Audrey. Two.]] ''[[PrecisionFStrike Mother. Fucker!]]''
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** While killing the plant monster demon in Chapter 7 via PunctuatedPounding, Lucia refers to the thing as a "God. Damn. [[Theatre/LittleShopOfHorrors Audrey. Two.]] ''[[PrecisionFStrike Mother. Fucker!]]''
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* AerithAndBob: A mild variant -- Amelia has the relatively uncommon surname of "Bane". When she gets the idea to graffiti "Bane was here" onto an abandoned building, Lucia points out that the police will either trace it back to her or "[[Characters/BatmanBane a Batman villain]]".
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* BigSisterInstinct: The reason Lucia is being sent to summer school in the first place is because of her repeated tendency to pick fights with those who tease her younger sister, as a result of [[AdultsAreUseless the school’s lack of proactive action towards taking care of Liz’s bullies.]]
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* BigSisterInstinct: The reason Lucia is being sent to summer school in the first place is because of her repeated tendency to pick fights with those who tease her younger sister, as a result of [[AdultsAreUseless the school’s lack of proactive action towards taking care of Liz’s punishing Luz’s bullies.]]
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/33907951/chapters/84313891 On Earth and Boiling Isles]] is an ''[[WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse Owl House]]'' AlternateUniverseFic written by [=GeminiAlchemist=], the same creator responsible for ''Fanfic/ABlightOnBonesborough''. This fic is built upon the FandomSpecoficPlot FandomSpecificPlot of repurposing Luz and Amity’s beta designs to serve as the protagonists’ older siblings, with occasional check-ins on the Boiling Isles’ side of things.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/33907951/chapters/84313891 On Earth and Boiling Isles]] is an ''[[WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse Owl House]]'' AlternateUniverseFic written by [=GeminiAlchemist=], the same creator responsible for ''Fanfiction/ABlightOnBonesborough''. This fic is built upon the FandomSpecoficPlot of repurposing Luz and Amity’s beta designs to serve as the protagonists’ older siblings, with occasional check-ins on the Boiling Isles’ side of things.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/33907951/chapters/84313891 On Earth and Boiling Isles]] is an ''[[WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse Owl House]]'' AlternateUniverseFic written by [=GeminiAlchemist=], the same creator responsible for ''Fanfiction/ABlightOnBonesborough''.''Fanfic/ABlightOnBonesborough''. This fic is built upon the FandomSpecoficPlot of repurposing Luz and Amity’s beta designs to serve as the protagonists’ older siblings, with occasional check-ins on the Boiling Isles’ side of things.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/33907951/chapters/84313891 On Earth and Boiling Isles]] is an AU ''[[WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse Owl House]]'' AlternateUniverseFic written by [=GeminiAlchemist=], the same creator responsible for ''Fanfiction/ABlightOnBonesborough''. This fic is built upon the FandomSpecoficPlot of WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse where repurposing Luz has an and Amity’s beta designs to serve as the protagonists’ older siblings, with occasional check-ins on the Boiling Isles’ side of things.
Luz is an overactive girl being sent to Summer camp. Her sisternamed Lucia.
is a punk who picked too many fights on her sister’s behalf and is stuck taking Summer classes to make up for a suspension.
Luz goes to the Boiling Isles, and meets Amity Blight, a witch who is her rival-turned-friend-turned-girlfriend.
Lucia is stuck in class, and meets Amelia, a green haired, pointy earred girl and local class flirt.
Luz destroys the portal that will take her back home at the end of the summer to keep it out of an Emperors hands.
Lucia greets her sister back from Summer camp, and can’t shake the feeling that something is very wrong.
Luz is an overactive girl being sent to Summer camp. Her sister
Luz goes to the Boiling Isles, and meets Amity Blight, a witch who is her rival-turned-friend-turned-girlfriend.
Lucia is stuck in class, and meets Amelia, a green haired, pointy earred girl and local class flirt.
Luz destroys the portal that will take her back home at the end of the summer to keep it out of an Emperors hands.
Lucia greets her sister back from Summer camp, and can’t shake the feeling that something is very wrong.
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* BigSisterInstinct: Lucia has a tendency to pick fights with kids who bully her sister.
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* BigSisterInstinct: The reason Lucia has a is being sent to summer school in the first place is because of her repeated tendency to pick fights with kids those who bully tease her sister.younger sister, as a result of [[AdultsAreUseless the school’s lack of proactive action towards taking care of Liz’s bullies.]]
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** While killing the plant monster in Chapter 7 via PunctuatedPounding, Lucia refers to the thing as a "God. Damn. [[Theatre/LittleShopOfHorrors Audrey. Two.]] ''[[PrecisionFStrike Mother. Fucker!]]''
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* DecompositeCharacter: Lucia is basically "Beta" Luz.
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* DecompositeCharacter: Lucia is basically "Beta" Luz.and Amelia[[spoiler: / Emily]] are physically modeled after Luz and Amity's "beta" designs and, as such, adopt many of the {{Fanon}} traits associated with them, but are depicted as Luz and Amity's siblings in this fic, with canon being altered in subtle and major ways as a result of these additions.
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* ShoutOut: Lucia briefly mentions ''WesternAnimation/SheRaAndThePrincessesOfPower'', describing the aftermath of binging it as "one very long week of peak bisexual energy from Luz".
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/33907951/chapters/84313891 On Earth And and Boiling Isles]] is an AU of WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse where Luz has an older sister named Lucia.
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* SiblingYinYang: Luz is overactive and friendly, if socially awkward, girl. Lucia is a punk who's willing to get physical with picking on her little sister.
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* SiblingYinYang: Luz is overactive and friendly, if socially awkward, girl. Lucia is a punk who's willing to get physical with picking on her little sister.sister, but far more socially confident.
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Luz is an overactive girl being sent to Summer camp. Her sister is a punk who picked too many fights on her sister’s behalf and is stuck taking Summer classes to make up for a suspension.
Luz goes to the Boiling Isles, and meets Amity Blight, a witch who is her rival-turned-friend-turned-girlfriend.
Lucia is stuck in class, and meets Amelia, a green haired, pointy earred girl and local class flirt.
Luz destroys the portal that will take her back home at the end of the summer to keep it out of an Emperors hands.
Lucia greets her sister back from Summer camp, and can’t shake the feeling that something is very wrong.
Luz goes to the Boiling Isles, and meets Amity Blight, a witch who is her rival-turned-friend-turned-girlfriend.
Lucia is stuck in class, and meets Amelia, a green haired, pointy earred girl and local class flirt.
Luz destroys the portal that will take her back home at the end of the summer to keep it out of an Emperors hands.
Lucia greets her sister back from Summer camp, and can’t shake the feeling that something is very wrong.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/33907951/chapters/84313891 On Earth And Boiling Isles]] is an AU of WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse where Luz has an older sister named Lucia.
Luz is an overactive girl being sent to Summer camp. Her sister is a punk who picked too many fights on her sister’s behalf and is stuck taking Summer classes to make up for a suspension.
Luz goes to the Boiling Isles, and meets Amity Blight, a witch who is her rival-turned-friend-turned-girlfriend.
Lucia is stuck in class, and meets Amelia, a green haired, pointy earred girl and local class flirt.
Luz destroys the portal that will take her back home at the end of the summer to keep it out of an Emperors hands.
Lucia greets her sister back from Summer camp, and can’t shake the feeling that something is very wrong.
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* BigSisterInstinct: Lucia has a tendency to pick fights with kids who bully her sister.
* ClosetKey: In contrast to Luz, who figured out her orientation at thirteen, Lucia didn't realize that she was a lesbian until she met Amelia.
* DecompositeCharacter: Lucia is basically "Beta" Luz.
* KillItWithFire: One type of demon was fearsome, but with highly flammable fur. Once witches started really using fire spells, it quickly dropped as a threat.
* SiblingYinYang: Luz is overactive and friendly, if socially awkward, girl. Lucia is a punk who's willing to get physical with picking on her little sister.
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Luz is an overactive girl being sent to Summer camp. Her sister is a punk who picked too many fights on her sister’s behalf and is stuck taking Summer classes to make up for a suspension.
Luz goes to the Boiling Isles, and meets Amity Blight, a witch who is her rival-turned-friend-turned-girlfriend.
Lucia is stuck in class, and meets Amelia, a green haired, pointy earred girl and local class flirt.
Luz destroys the portal that will take her back home at the end of the summer to keep it out of an Emperors hands.
Lucia greets her sister back from Summer camp, and can’t shake the feeling that something is very wrong.
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* BigSisterInstinct: Lucia has a tendency to pick fights with kids who bully her sister.
* ClosetKey: In contrast to Luz, who figured out her orientation at thirteen, Lucia didn't realize that she was a lesbian until she met Amelia.
* DecompositeCharacter: Lucia is basically "Beta" Luz.
* KillItWithFire: One type of demon was fearsome, but with highly flammable fur. Once witches started really using fire spells, it quickly dropped as a threat.
* SiblingYinYang: Luz is overactive and friendly, if socially awkward, girl. Lucia is a punk who's willing to get physical with picking on her little sister.
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