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The story can be found in Website/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11126195/1/No-Competition here]]
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The story can be found in Website/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11126195/1/No-Competition here]]here]]. It is a DeadFic, as the story has not been updated since November of 2017.
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** The Dursleys lock Harry Potter out of their house and shed overnight, dress him in Dudley's worn-out clothes and shoes (neither of which are weather-appropriate), lock him in the cupboard under the stairs, and when they get blackmailed into enrolling him in school, they send him to walk alone three miles to school.
** Jasper's father treated him as TheUnfavourite due to being the son of a mistress that got pregnant. Once Jasper was bitten Lockwood senior threw him out with only the clothes on his back.
* AndIMustScream: After the Dursleys tested the Dark Community's patience one too many times, according to Harry's silent analysis on the runework on the Dursleys, the Lich deliberately didn't destroy their souls because that would have left them brain-dead. Instead the Lich removed the Dursleys' souls without destroying them, so that their minds would be trapped and gibbering inside their heads.
** Jasper's father treated him as TheUnfavourite due to being the son of a mistress that got pregnant. Once Jasper was bitten Lockwood senior threw him out with only the clothes on his back.
* AndIMustScream: After the Dursleys tested the Dark Community's patience one too many times, according to Harry's silent analysis on the runework on the Dursleys, the Lich deliberately didn't destroy their souls because that would have left them brain-dead. Instead the Lich removed the Dursleys' souls without destroying them, so that their minds would be trapped and gibbering inside their heads.
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** The Dursleys lock Harry Potter out of their house and shed overnight, overnight in winter, dress him in Dudley's worn-out clothes and shoes (neither of which are weather-appropriate), lock him in the cupboard under the stairs, and when they get blackmailed into enrolling him in school, they send him to walk alone three miles to school.
** Jasper's father treated him as TheUnfavourite due to being the son of a mistress that got pregnant. Once Jasper was bitten by a werewolf, Lockwoodsenior Senior threw him out with only the clothes on his back.
* AndIMustScream: After the Dursleystested test the Dark Community's patience one too many times, according times (according to Harry's silent analysis on the runework on the Dursleys, Dursleys), the Lich deliberately didn't doesn't destroy their souls because that would have left them brain-dead. Instead the Lich removed removes the Dursleys' souls without destroying them, so that their minds would be trapped and gibbering inside their heads.heads. The only one spared was Dudley, purely due to him being possibly redeemable.
** Jasper's father treated him as TheUnfavourite due to being the son of a mistress that got pregnant. Once Jasper was bitten by a werewolf, Lockwood
* AndIMustScream: After the Dursleys
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* BadBoss: Voldemort full stop. Nott senior notes to his 'colleagues' that Harry does not demand humiliation and supplication from his dark creatures but treats them with respect and courtesy.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Bigoted pureblood wizards and biased, high ranking ministry personel wanted nothing more than the removal from Wizarding society of 'unwanted' elements such as werewolves, vampires, hags, other assorted dark creatures and muggleborns. Well, they got their wish, but the exodus caused tax revenue to fall down sharply to the point Fudge is afraid that eventually they will be unable to pay the people working at the Ministry of Magic.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Bigoted pureblood wizards and biased, high ranking ministry personel wanted nothing more than the removal from Wizarding society of 'unwanted' elements such as werewolves, vampires, hags, other assorted dark creatures and muggleborns. Well, they got their wish, but the exodus caused tax revenue to fall down sharply to the point Fudge is afraid that eventually they will be unable to pay the people working at the Ministry of Magic.
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* BadBoss: Voldemort full stop. Nott senior Senior notes to his 'colleagues' that Harry does not demand humiliation and supplication from his dark creatures but treats them with respect and courtesy.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Bigoted pureblood wizards and biased,high ranking ministry personel high-ranking Ministry personnel wanted nothing more than the removal from Wizarding society of 'unwanted' elements such as werewolves, vampires, hags, other assorted dark creatures and muggleborns. Well, they got their wish, but the exodus caused tax revenue to fall down sharply to the point Fudge is afraid that eventually they will be unable to pay the people working at the Ministry of Magic.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Bigoted pureblood wizards and biased,
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** The Lich named Mud sunk Atlantis in a fit of pique
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** The Lich named Mud sunk Atlantis in a fit of piquepique.
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* BenevolentBoss: Harry is the absolute ruler of all the dark creatures living in Little Whinging but he treats them as family, friend, and neighbours. Nott seniour points it out to his fellow Death Eaters that Harry has never requested that his dark creatures prostrate and humiliate themselves to show reverence.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: During his first visit in Diagon Alley Harry comes across a Light propaganda book depicting him as killing a werewolf. He becomes so enraged that he demands the writers get hunted down so they can be tortured by Prudence, his Hag relative, since goblins are not sufficiently cruel.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: During his first visit in Diagon Alley Harry comes across a Light propaganda book depicting him as killing a werewolf. He becomes so enraged that he demands the writers get hunted down so they can be tortured by Prudence, his Hag relative, since goblins are not sufficiently cruel.
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* BenevolentBoss: Harry is the absolute ruler of all the dark creatures living in Little Whinging but he treats them as family, friend, and neighbours. Nott seniour Senior points it out to his fellow Death Eaters that Harry has never requested that his dark creatures prostrate and humiliate themselves to show reverence.
*BewareTheNiceOnes: BewareTheNiceOnes:
** During his first visit in Diagon Alley Harry comes across a Light propaganda book depicting him as killing a werewolf. He becomes so enraged that he demands the writers get hunted down so they can be tortured by Prudence, his Hag relative, since goblins are not sufficiently cruel.
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** During his first visit in Diagon Alley Harry comes across a Light propaganda book depicting him as killing a werewolf. He becomes so enraged that he demands the writers get hunted down so they can be tortured by Prudence, his Hag relative, since goblins are not sufficiently cruel.
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* ButtMonkey: Poor, poor Jasper. He escapes his cage and runs into a child during the full moon, which is literally his worst nightmare. Then Judas shows up and proceeds to flirt outrageously with him, Lucifer does the same. He is also Ally's bitch.
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* ButtMonkey: ButtMonkey:
** Poor, poor Jasper. He escapes his cage and runs into a child during the full moon, which is literally his worst nightmare. Then Judas shows up and proceeds to flirt outrageously with him, Lucifer does the same. He is also Ally's bitch.
** Poor, poor Jasper. He escapes his cage and runs into a child during the full moon, which is literally his worst nightmare. Then Judas shows up and proceeds to flirt outrageously with him, Lucifer does the same. He is also Ally's bitch.
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* CorruptTheCutie: According to Lucifer, Lich once had a very pure soul.
* CutenessProximity: They main reason dark creatures are drawn to Harry is his dark aura but the fact that he is a very, very cute child adds to it.
* CutenessProximity: They main reason dark creatures are drawn to Harry is his dark aura but the fact that he is a very, very cute child adds to it.
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* CorruptTheCutie: According to Lucifer, Lich once had a very pure soul.
soul. Lucifer states that corrupting Lich was some of his finest work.
* CutenessProximity: They main reason dark creatures are drawn to Harry is his darkaura aura... but the fact that he is a very, very cute child adds to it.
* CutenessProximity: They main reason dark creatures are drawn to Harry is his dark
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* EmbarrassingFirstName: The Lich's actual name translates to Mud.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Judas the Damned, First Vampire, Betrayer of Jesus, with hands and fangs dripping with god knows how much blood is disgusted with child abuse.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Judas the Damned, First Vampire, Betrayer of Jesus, with hands and fangs dripping with god knows how much blood is disgusted with child abuse.
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* EmbarrassingFirstName: The Lich's actual name roughly translates to Mud.
*EvenEvilHasStandards: EvenEvilHasStandards:
** Judas the Damned, First Vampire, Betrayer of Jesus, with hands and fangs dripping withgod God only knows how much blood blood, is disgusted with child abuse.
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** Judas the Damned, First Vampire, Betrayer of Jesus, with hands and fangs dripping with
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* FriendToAllLivingThings: Harry has no trouble charming even beasts not classified as dark such as gryffins and dragons in addition to werewolves, vampires, dementors.
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* FriendToAllLivingThings: Harry has no trouble charming even beasts not classified as dark dark, such as gryffins and dragons in addition to werewolves, vampires, dementors.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: The dark creatures have left mainstream British Wizarding Society due to the prejudice and biased laws against them. The Ministry are feeling this Diaspora very keenly in their purse since their revenue has gone down about one third, causing Fudge to want the werewolves, vampires and hags to come back so they can be taxed.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: The dark creatures have left mainstream British Wizarding Society due to the prejudice and biased laws against them.them, such as werewolves being forbidden from even being employed by magical businesses. The Ministry are feeling this Diaspora very keenly in their purse since their revenue has gone down about one third, causing Fudge to want the werewolves, vampires and hags to come back so they can be taxed.
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* LightIsNotGood: Dumbledore purposefully places a toddler in an abusive environment and has had Lockhart MindRape Mrs. Figg in order to have a spy in Privet Drive.
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* LightIsNotGood: LightIsNotGood:
** Dumbledore purposefully places a toddler in an abusive environment and has had Lockhart MindRape Mrs. Figg in order to have a spy in Privet Drive.
** Dumbledore purposefully places a toddler in an abusive environment and has had Lockhart MindRape Mrs. Figg in order to have a spy in Privet Drive.
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* LogicalWeakness: A magical contract does not bind someone who predates written language even if his true name is written in it.
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* LogicalWeakness: A magical contract does not bind someone who predates written language even if his true name is written in it.it, since his name simply cannot be accurately translated or pronounced enough for the contract to function.
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* OurLichesAreDifferent: First thing, there is only One Lich, The Lich,
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* OurLichesAreDifferent: First thing, there is only One one Lich, The Lich,Lich. He makes a point of killing anyone trying to turn themselves into a lich like himself.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Fudge tells Umbridge off on using the word mudblood. Not because he is sympathetic toward muggleborns but because the open prejudice is causing them to leave and stop paying taxes.
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* PragmaticVillainy: PragmaticVillainy:
** Fudge tells Umbridge off on using the word mudblood. Not because he is sympathetic toward muggleborns but because the open prejudice is causing them to leave and stop paying taxes.
** Fudge tells Umbridge off on using the word mudblood. Not because he is sympathetic toward muggleborns but because the open prejudice is causing them to leave and stop paying taxes.
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* HenpeckedHusband: Jasper is Allison's bitch and knows it all too well. He derides whoever said that the male is the head of the pureblood household.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: The dark creatures have left mainstream British Wizarding Society due to the prejudice and biased laws against them. The Ministry are feeling this Diaspora very keenly in their purse since their revenue has gone down about one third, causing Fudge to want the werewolves, vampires and hags to come back so they can be taxed.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: The dark creatures have left mainstream British Wizarding Society due to the prejudice and biased laws against them. The Ministry are feeling this Diaspora very keenly in their purse since their revenue has gone down about one third, causing Fudge to want the werewolves, vampires and hags to come back so they can be taxed.
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* HenpeckedHusband: Jasper is Allison's bitch and knows it all too well. He derides whoever said that the male is the head of the pureblood household.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: The dark creatures have left mainstream British Wizarding Society due to the prejudice and biased laws against them. The Ministry are feeling this Diaspora very keenly in their purse since their revenue has gone down about one third, causing Fudge to want the werewolves, vampires and hags to come back so they can be taxed.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: The dark creatures have left mainstream British Wizarding Society due to the prejudice and biased laws against them. The Ministry are feeling this Diaspora very keenly in their purse since their revenue has gone down about one third, causing Fudge to want the werewolves, vampires and hags to come back so they can be taxed.
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* DeadFic: Has not been updated since November 13th, 2017. Part of this is due to the fanbase demanding updates and the author busy with her day-to-day life.
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* FurAgainstFang: A notable ''aversion''. The vampires and werewolves in Privet Drive are thoroughly dedicated to taking care of Harry, and because of this common goal any friction between the two factions is basically nonexistent. Made especially notable since the trope would usually be played straight in the Wizarding World otherwise.
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** Cornelius Fudge is also a light wizard an he is a disgustingly corrupt and self serving politician.
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** Cornelius Fudge is also a light wizard an and he is a disgustingly corrupt and self serving politician.
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* BenevolentBoss: Harry is the absolute ruler of all the dark creatures living in Little Whinging but he treats them as family, friend and neighbours. Nott seniour points it out to his fellow Death Eaters that Harry has never requested that his dark creatures prostrate and humiliate themselves to show reverence.
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* BenevolentBoss: Harry is the absolute ruler of all the dark creatures living in Little Whinging but he treats them as family, friend friend, and neighbours. Nott seniour points it out to his fellow Death Eaters that Harry has never requested that his dark creatures prostrate and humiliate themselves to show reverence.
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* RealityEnsues: Wizards discriminate against dark creatures and muggleborns, causing them to leave Wizarding society. This causes severe loss of tax money and retail revenue, causing economic depression.
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* InTheBlood: The women of House Black tend to be some shade of batshit insane. Arcturus is all too aware.
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* ItRunsInTheFamily: The women of House Black tend to be some shade of batshit insane. Arcturus is all too aware.
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* InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons: Harry's ends up with somewhere between ten to thirty dragons.
