History for Fanfic/NewGamePlusOnePiece

** PlayedForLaughs when Garp proufly announces his grandson's decision to become a Marine to Sengoku. You can ''feel'' the Fleet Admiral's horror at the idea of '''another''' Monkey to deal with rising off the page.

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* ThemeNaming: All ships of the armada beside the Going Merry have their names beginning with "B": Big Top, Bezan Black and Baratie. The original ship got by Jin in Loguetown is named Blitz. Buggy even take notice of this in-story.

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** Miss Valentine's devil fruit allows her to manipulate her ''weight'', not her ''mass'', so she can't gain SuperSpeed by reducing her weight or become a MightyGlacier by increasing it because she's only changing how strong the pull of gravity is on her body.

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* ShownTheirWork: The author makes a note of explaining the differences between weight and mass in regards to Miss Valentine's powers.

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* AllMenArePerverts: Basically the entire armada passes out from nosebleeds over the amount of ClothingDamage Alvida and Miss Valentine suffered in their fight.

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* ClothingDamage: Alvida's fight with Miss Valentine ends with both of them in only their underwear.

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* LogicalWeakness: While Alvida's frictionless skin makes it almost impossible to hit her, it also makes it almost impossible to hit someone else. Furthermore, she can be hit through her clothing as only her skin is frictionless.

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* SeenItAll: Any veteran from the Grand Line about the insanity that goes on there. It goes to the point that Crocus guesses the core crew are time travellers and doesn't immediately dismiss the idea because "Stranger things have happened" (Zeff does, but then again he never went to the New World, Crocus did).

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** This line from Usopp in Chapter 10: "By the time I'm done with you, every one of you will have more gadgets and gizmos than [[{{Batman}} a billionaire vigilante with a flair for theatricality and some misplaced sense of self-righteousness]]."

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** This line from Usopp in Chapter 10: "By the time I'm done with you, every one of you will have more gadgets and gizmos than ~~[[{{Batman}}~~ [[Franchise/{{Batman}} a billionaire vigilante with a flair for theatricality and some misplaced sense of self-righteousness]]."

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** Calling Gaimon Gai-sensei gives him [[Anime/{{Naruto}} the strange urge to style his eyebrow and start shouting about youth]].

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-->'''Tashigi''': [[PiratesOfTheCaribbean You cheated!]]
-->'''Zoro''': [[PiratesOfTheCaribbean Pirate.]]

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-->'''Tashigi''': ~~[[PiratesOfTheCaribbean~~ [[Film/PiratesOfTheCaribbeanTheCurseOfTheBlackPearl You cheated!]]
-->'''Zoro''': ~~[[PiratesOfTheCaribbean~~ [[Film/PiratesOfTheCaribbeanTheCurseOfTheBlackPearl Pirate.]]

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In popularity, it is second only to ''Fanfic/LuffysRenewedAdventure'', another Peggy Sue fic.

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In popularity, it is second only to ''Fanfic/LuffysRenewedAdventure'', another Peggy Sue fic.

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* CurbStompBattle: Most of the fights in the fic are so much this that calling them “battles” is probably a stretch.

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* CurbStompBattle: Most of the fights in the fic are so much this that calling them “battles” is probably a stretch. That's what happens when you stick a New World crew smack-dab in the middle of the ''weakest sea''.

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Jul 6th 2016 at 12:11:55 AM

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* InsultBackfire: When Mr. 9 declares there's a special place in hell reserved for Nami, she agrees; it's called a throne.

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* OhCrap: Igaram's reaction to seeing Luffy in Whiskey Peak, immediately recognizing him and assuming that they are doomed considering that [[spoiler:his bounty is higher than Crocodile's.]]

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** When Alvida finds out that Miss Valentine's powers allow her to lose weight without even trying, she demolishes the building that said Officer Agent was standing on and prepares to beat her face in, 'for fat girls everywhere!'

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** [[spoiler:Brook]] vs. Whiskey Peak Bounty Hunters

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10415350/1/New-Game-Plus New Game Plus]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue FanFiction by [=DuncanIdaho2014=][[note]]Or at least this one is; there are several other Fan Fictions by the same name[[/note]]. Swarmed by a group of Marines led by Akainu himself, the Straw Hats escape certain death thanks to Dr. Vegapunk’s experimental time machine, sending their minds five years into the past. When time catches up to them, Luffy resolves to do things differently to ensure that things don’t end that way again, and subsequently decides to take a leaf out of Whitebeard’s book. How will the adventures proceed differently for the Straw Hat Armada?

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10415350/1/New-Game-Plus New Game Plus]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue FanFiction by [=DuncanIdaho2014=][[note]]Or at least this one is; there are several other Fan Fictions by the same name[[/note]]. It is the third most popular Peggy Sue story in the ''One Piece'' fandom, as well as the third most popular story overall.

Swarmed by a group of Marines led by Akainu himself, the Straw Hats escape certain death thanks to Dr. Vegapunk’s experimental time machine, sending their minds five years into the past. When time catches up to them, Luffy resolves to do things differently to ensure that things don’t end that way again, and subsequently decides to take a leaf out of Whitebeard’s book. How will the adventures proceed differently for the Straw Hat Armada?

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* TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou: When the author notes that Kaya going from Lady to Mistress is rather annoying, she warns him that "No wall stands in the way of a ProperLady, not even the fourth."

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* SlasherSmile: A notable instance in Chapter 13, when Nami's given the opportunity to leave the annoying Mr. 9 and Miss Wednesday to Kaya's...[[TranquilFury care.]]

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*** Salem comes from SabrinaTheTeenageWitch. One of the other crewmates even calls him by that cat's surname, Saberhagen.

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** Due to the ShockAndAwe with which Nami defeats Arlong, her epithet is changed to “[[Literature/PercyJacksonAndTheOlympians Lightning Thief]]. “

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** Due to the ShockAndAwe with which Nami defeats Arlong, her epithet is changed to “[[Literature/PercyJacksonAndTheOlympians Lightning Thief]]. “

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* BrainBleach: Usopp and Nami wish for a bottle when they find out that Luffy doesn't mind having kids with Hancock.

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* ~~BrainBleach:~~ BrainBleach:
** Usopp and Nami wish for a bottle when they find out that Luffy doesn't mind having kids with ~~Hancock.~~Hancock.
** Nami goes GreenAroundTheGills when Kaya hints at just how wild and deviant she and Usopp can get.

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* {{Fanboy}}: Crocus gains a number of these from the Armada when they find out he was a Roger Pirate.

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* InsatiableNewlyweds: Ever since becoming a couple, Usopp and Kaya have been indulging a lot with their love for each other, and it hasn't slowed down since joining the Armada. Especially since there are many hints that [[NaughtyByNight Kaya]] has encouraged Usopp into [[{{UsefulNotes/BDSM}} broadening]] [[MakingLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces his horizons]].

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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Whatever Gin, Buggy and Jango got up to during Cocoyashi's freedom party is this for the three of them. Averted later when they actually do decide to clear the air, revealing it as an orgy that had the three men getting closer than any of them are comfortable with (except maybe [[AmbiguouslyBi Gin]]).

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** The antics and species of some of Gaimon's [[MixAndMatchCritter menagerie]] reflect the antics of [[Disney/TheManyAdventuresOfWinnieThePooh the denizens of the Hundred-Acre Wood.]] A SneezeCut shows them all sneezing in another dimension.

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* TranquilFury: Kaya, as seen in the ShoutOut section where she's channeling Retsu Unohana. Even ''Nami'' is terrified of her when she comes under the spotlight. [[spoiler: It shows some inkling of a SplitPersonality.]]

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* TranquilFury: Kaya, as seen in the ShoutOut section where she's channeling Retsu Unohana. Even ''Nami'' is terrified of her when she comes under the ~~spotlight.~~spotlight, and it's even enough to make Zoro and Sanji cease hostilities. [[spoiler: It shows some inkling of a SplitPersonality.]]

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* PsychoactivePowers: [[spoiler: The reason Brook could eat, produce waste, breathe or even get tired is because he kept believing he was alive and had a working body, thus his spirit replicated those symptoms. Once he transcends that belief, he no longer has any limits to his physicality.]]

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* PsychoactivePowers: [[spoiler: The reason Brook could eat, produce waste, breathe or even get tired is [[ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve because he kept believing he was alive and had a working body, thus his ~~spirit~~ soul replicated those ~~symptoms.~~ symptoms.]] Once he transcends that belief, he no longer has any limits to his physicality.]]

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* PublicSecretMessage: After the events in Arlong Park, Luffy reveals himself as the captain to Nezumi to keep Nami from bearing the full brunt of the Marines' ire. Since he knows he'll be in the newspaper, he puts in a coded message to inform the other four members of his crew that they remember their past lives.

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** [[spoiler:After managing to not snap completely when he found himself back on his ship, Brook strenghtened his body in a few days, recovered his shadow by quickly dispatching Ryuma in Thriller Bark, then traveled all the way back through the Grand Line to reach Laboon; the last part of his travel consisted in ''scaling the Red Line and running along it until Reverse Mountain''. He may now be even stronger than he was before being sent back in time.]]

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*** Jiji comes from Anime/KikisDeliveryService

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*** Jiji comes from ~~Anime/KikisDeliveryService~~Anime/KikisDeliveryService.

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