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* ButterflyOfDoom:
** In the old timeline, Sanji and the rest of the Straw-Hats decided to fight Big Mom and stay at Dressrosa instead of fleeing to Zou, which led to the capture of Caesar. Law was so enraged by this development that after Dressrosa was saved, he and Luffy severed their friendship and went their separate ways. And from there, the Straw-Hats sailed right into the Marine ambush.
** [[spoiler:Because of Zoro's near death injuries, the Straw Hat Armada arrived at Nami's island two days later than they did the first time. Because Nami and Ussop weren't there to intervine, the revenge seeking child and Gen were both killed by Arlong]].



* ForWantOfANail:
** In the old timeline, Sanji and the rest of the Straw-Hats decided to fight Big Mom and stay at Dressrosa instead of fleeing to Zou, which led to the capture of Caesar. Law was so enraged by this development that after Dressrosa was saved, he and Luffy severed their friendship and went their separate ways. And from there, the Straw-Hats sailed right into the Marine ambush.
** [[spoiler:Because of Zoro's near death injuries, the Straw Hat Armada arrived at Nami's island two days later than they did the first time. Because Nami and Ussop weren't there to intervine, the revenge seeking child and Gen were both killed by Arlong]].

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* ForWantOfANail:
** In the old timeline, Sanji and the rest of the Straw-Hats decided to fight Big Mom and stay at Dressrosa instead of fleeing to Zou, which led to the capture of Caesar. Law was so enraged by this development that after Dressrosa was saved, he and Luffy severed their friendship and went their separate ways. And from there, the Straw-Hats sailed right into the Marine ambush.
** [[spoiler:Because of Zoro's near death injuries, the Straw Hat Armada arrived at Nami's island two days later than they did the first time. Because Nami and Ussop weren't there to intervine, the revenge seeking child and Gen were both killed by Arlong]].
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-->'''Garp''': ''(livid, with a DeathGlare)'' Luffy.
-->''(everyone begins retreating from Garp)''
-->'''Luffy''': ''(calmly)'' Hey, Gramps. Wow, I can see your veins from here. Have you been taking your blood pressure medicine? You know Boggart wouldn't bug you if it weren't important.
-->'''Garp''': ''Brat.'' I'm going to give you one chance, ''one chance,'' to explain yourself. If I don't like your answer, I'm throwing you into Impel Down myself until I think you've learned your lesson.
-->''({{Beat}})''
-->'''Luffy''': If I became a Marine, I would surely perish.
-->'''Garp''': ''(gritting his teeth so hard that they crack) That's'' your excuse? You were afraid to get killed? Marines lead a dangerous life, I told you that from day one. You telling me I trained a coward?!
-->'''Luffy''': You misunderstand. I did not say I would die in battle. I said I would perish. Disappear. Or maybe, if they wanted to make a point of it, ''executed.''
-->'''Garp''': What the hell are you talking about?
-->'''Luffy''': A healthy tree may bear a bad apple, but the tree is still seen as healthy. That one bad apple is just bad luck. But only a bad seed may grow from bad soil. Its nature is decided for it by the circumstances of its creation. ''(looks Garp in the eye, regretfully)'' I may be your beloved grandson, Gramps. But nothing you do, nothing you say, nothing ''I'' say or do will change the fact that I'm ''his'' son.
-->''(Garp looks down in shame)''
-->'''Luffy''': I'm not saying it would happen right away. It might take weeks; it might take months. Hell, it might be years. But sooner or later, they'll start to think it. That I'm a sleeper agent. Or that I'm leaking information. Or that my [[PrecisionFStrike goddamn]] blood is just dirty. [[TheFarmerAndTheViper And it wouldn't matter if I was the Commander-in-Chief when it happened. They would kill me without a second thought,]] 'for the good of the world'. And there wouldn't be anything I could do to defend myself. For my ''sin'', is ''existing''.
-->'''Garp''': ''(shaking his head in denial)'' No, no, they wouldn't do that!
-->'''Luffy''': ''(hardening his heart)'' Baterilla! ''(Garp looks up in shock)'' Based on the rumor of a rumor, Marines spent over a year scouring the island for a sign, any at all, of a child of the Pirate King. Pregnant women were kidnapped to be put through blood tests. Infants were put through the most invasive, comprehensive battery of exams available. Any who resisted were executed. And if they ''had'' found such a child, [[WouldHurtAChild he would have been]] ''[[WouldHurtAChild murdered]]'' [[WouldHurtAChild in his cradle.]] In the ''womb''. [[SinsOfOurFathers This is how much stock the Government puts in a person's bloodline.]] Do you deny it?
-->'''Garp''': ''(fighting tears of anger, frustration, and guilt)'' Luffy, you fool! I thought of all that! I cleared everything with Sengoku! You would have had a fair chance!
-->'''Luffy''': Ah, but Sengoku isn't the top of the food chain, is he? Even he must bow to orders from Kong or the Gorosei. And it's not like he'll be Fleet Admiral forever. Can you imagine how ''[[GeneralRipper Sakazuki]]'' would react to news of ''his'' son in the Marine ranks? His first order after being promoted would be my death warrant.
-->'''Garp''': Luffy, Kong's a good man. And I know people don't always understand why they do what they do, but the Gorosei are ''just''. They wouldn't kill you just because—
-->'''Luffy''': [[LeaveNoSurvivors Ohara.]] And Nico Robin. ''(smiles sadly at Garp's surprise)'' The Voice told me a lot, Gramps.
-->'''Garp''': Sakazuki isn't the only one who could take Sengoku's place! He might never find out!
-->'''Luffy''': Ah, yes. I might be spared from 'Absolute Justice.' But that doesn't mean I'm safe. Kuzan and his 'Lazy Justice' would wait a decade after he heard the truth, but eventually he would act. And with that 'Unclear Justice' of Borsalino's, he might not even go for me. [[AccompliceByInaction He would go for Dadan and Foosha for not lynching me when I was young.]] ''(shakes his head)'' I'm sorry, Gramps. I know you believe in redemption, but your superiors don't. They only understand corruption. And there's not a single future where if I became a Marine I would not die.
-->'''Garp''': ''(desperately)'' Luffy...
-->'''Luffy''': I like to think I'm a decent guy, Gramps. But I'm not so selfless as to knowingly go to my death just so I might be able to save people. So, if the path of a Marine was barred from me, what else could I do? How could I live my life, in a world that does not want me to survive? ''(grins)'' That's when I remembered an old dream.
-->'''Garp''': No...don't say it...
-->'''Luffy''': I WILL BECOME THE PIRATE KING!

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-->'''Garp''': ''(livid, with a DeathGlare)'' Luffy.
-->''(everyone
Luffy.\\
''(everyone
begins retreating from Garp)''
-->'''Luffy''':
Garp)''\\
'''Luffy''':
''(calmly)'' Hey, Gramps. Wow, I can see your veins from here. Have you been taking your blood pressure medicine? You know Boggart wouldn't bug you if it weren't important.
-->'''Garp''':
important.\\
'''Garp''':
''Brat.'' I'm going to give you one chance, ''one chance,'' to explain yourself. If I don't like your answer, I'm throwing you into Impel Down myself until I think you've learned your lesson.
-->''({{Beat}})''
-->'''Luffy''':
lesson.\\
''({{Beat}})''\\
'''Luffy''':
If I became a Marine, I would surely perish.
-->'''Garp''':
perish.\\
'''Garp''':
''(gritting his teeth so hard that they crack) That's'' your excuse? You were afraid to get killed? Marines lead a dangerous life, I told you that from day one. You telling me I trained a coward?!
-->'''Luffy''':
coward?!\\
'''Luffy''':
You misunderstand. I did not say I would die in battle. I said I would perish. Disappear. Or maybe, if they wanted to make a point of it, ''executed.''
-->'''Garp''':
''\\
'''Garp''':
What the hell are you talking about?
-->'''Luffy''':
about?\\
'''Luffy''':
A healthy tree may bear a bad apple, but the tree is still seen as healthy. That one bad apple is just bad luck. But only a bad seed may grow from bad soil. Its nature is decided for it by the circumstances of its creation. ''(looks Garp in the eye, regretfully)'' I may be your beloved grandson, Gramps. But nothing you do, nothing you say, nothing ''I'' say or do will change the fact that I'm ''his'' son.
-->''(Garp
son.\\
''(Garp
looks down in shame)''
-->'''Luffy''':
shame)''\\
'''Luffy''':
I'm not saying it would happen right away. It might take weeks; it might take months. Hell, it might be years. But sooner or later, they'll start to think it. That I'm a sleeper agent. Or that I'm leaking information. Or that my [[PrecisionFStrike goddamn]] blood is just dirty. [[TheFarmerAndTheViper And it wouldn't matter if I was the Commander-in-Chief when it happened. They would kill me without a second thought,]] 'for the good of the world'. And there wouldn't be anything I could do to defend myself. For my ''sin'', is ''existing''.
-->'''Garp''':
''existing''.\\
'''Garp''':
''(shaking his head in denial)'' No, no, they wouldn't do that!
-->'''Luffy''':
that!\\
'''Luffy''':
''(hardening his heart)'' Baterilla! ''(Garp looks up in shock)'' Based on the rumor of a rumor, Marines spent over a year scouring the island for a sign, any at all, of a child of the Pirate King. Pregnant women were kidnapped to be put through blood tests. Infants were put through the most invasive, comprehensive battery of exams available. Any who resisted were executed. And if they ''had'' found such a child, [[WouldHurtAChild he would have been]] ''[[WouldHurtAChild murdered]]'' [[WouldHurtAChild in his cradle.]] In the ''womb''. [[SinsOfOurFathers This is how much stock the Government puts in a person's bloodline.]] Do you deny it?
-->'''Garp''':
it?\\
'''Garp''':
''(fighting tears of anger, frustration, and guilt)'' Luffy, you fool! I thought of all that! I cleared everything with Sengoku! You would have had a fair chance!
-->'''Luffy''':
chance!\\
'''Luffy''':
Ah, but Sengoku isn't the top of the food chain, is he? Even he must bow to orders from Kong or the Gorosei. And it's not like he'll be Fleet Admiral forever. Can you imagine how ''[[GeneralRipper Sakazuki]]'' would react to news of ''his'' son in the Marine ranks? His first order after being promoted would be my death warrant.
-->'''Garp''':
warrant.\\
'''Garp''':
Luffy, Kong's a good man. And I know people don't always understand why they do what they do, but the Gorosei are ''just''. They wouldn't kill you just because—
-->'''Luffy''':
because—\\
'''Luffy''':
[[LeaveNoSurvivors Ohara.]] And Nico Robin. ''(smiles sadly at Garp's surprise)'' The Voice told me a lot, Gramps.
-->'''Garp''':
Gramps.\\
'''Garp''':
Sakazuki isn't the only one who could take Sengoku's place! He might never find out!
-->'''Luffy''':
out!\\
'''Luffy''':
Ah, yes. I might be spared from 'Absolute Justice.' But that doesn't mean I'm safe. Kuzan and his 'Lazy Justice' would wait a decade after he heard the truth, but eventually he would act. And with that 'Unclear Justice' of Borsalino's, he might not even go for me. [[AccompliceByInaction He would go for Dadan and Foosha for not lynching me when I was young.]] ''(shakes his head)'' I'm sorry, Gramps. I know you believe in redemption, but your superiors don't. They only understand corruption. And there's not a single future where if I became a Marine I would not die.
-->'''Garp''':
die.\\
'''Garp''':
''(desperately)'' Luffy...
-->'''Luffy''':
Luffy...\\
'''Luffy''':
I like to think I'm a decent guy, Gramps. But I'm not so selfless as to knowingly go to my death just so I might be able to save people. So, if the path of a Marine was barred from me, what else could I do? How could I live my life, in a world that does not want me to survive? ''(grins)'' That's when I remembered an old dream.
-->'''Garp''':
dream.\\
'''Garp''':
No...don't say it...
-->'''Luffy''':
it...\\
'''Luffy''':
I WILL BECOME THE PIRATE KING!



-->'''Jango''': And I thought that afro jack-in-the-box was weird.
-->'''Gaimon''': I heard that!

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-->'''Jango''': And I thought that afro jack-in-the-box was weird.
-->'''Gaimon''':
weird.\\
'''Gaimon''':
I heard that!



* WorthyOpponent: Mihawk ''immediately'' pegs Zoro as this the first time they meet. [[spoiler:After Zoro defeats him in their subsequent duel, he declares it an honor to die by Zoro's hand. Zoro, in turn, declares it was ''his'' honor to face and defeat Mihawk for the title of World's Greatest Swordsman]].

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* WorthyOpponent: Mihawk ''immediately'' pegs Zoro as this the first time they meet. [[spoiler:After Zoro defeats him in their subsequent duel, he declares it an honor to die by Zoro's hand. Zoro, in turn, declares it was ''his'' honor to face and defeat Mihawk for the title of World's Greatest Swordsman]].Swordsman]].

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* ShoutOut: Oh, so much. In chronological order:
** Vegapunk identifies his time machine as the [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture Flux Capacitor]].
*** And in Chapter 12, it's stated that Usopp read the term out of a book to Chopper once in the future past.
** The three members of Buggy’s crew that they pick up en route to Orange Town introduce themselves as Moe, Larry, and Shemp, collectively known as Film/TheThreeStooges. The author even lampshades it:
-->'''Duncan''': (A/N: Yes, yes I did just do that)
** Nami mentions Literature/LordOfTheFlies once in Chapter 3.
** Luffy quotes The Charge of the Light Brigade in Chapter 4.
-->'''Duncan''': And yes, poetry was part of his training. Don’t ask why, you’re not ready.
** After falling down a pit that Usopp made as a booby trap, Moe quotes Lockhart from the film adaptation of Film/HarryPotterAndTheChamberOfSecrets:
-->'''Moe''': Really quite filthy down here.
** Usopp debuts much in the same way as [[Film/TheWizardOfOz Oz, the great and terrible.]]
** Usopp and Kaya, who have become a couple in this fic, refer to each other as [[Literature/TheGreatGatsby Gatsby and Daisy]].
** Kaya is once described as ‘unconsciously channeling the best healer of [[{{Manga/Bleach}} Soul Society]].’
** A Shout-Out to the 4Kids dub when Sanji sucks on lollipops instead of smoking while in the vicinity of the recovering [[spoiler:Zoro.]]
** The Black Cat Pirates.
*** Kuro references himself from the 4Kids dub of the video game ''One Piece Grand Battle''.
*** One is a short ginger-haired man named [[WesternAnimation/OliverAndCompany Oliver]].
*** Abraham, Giuseppe, Casey, O’Malley, Toulouse, and Berlioz are all taken from ''WesternAnimation/TheAristocats''.
*** Jiji comes from ''Anime/KikisDeliveryService''.
*** Salem comes from ''SabrinaTheTeenageWitch''. One of the other crewmates even calls him by that cat's surname, Saberhagen.
** Calling Gaimon Gai-sensei gives him [[Anime/{{Naruto}} the strange urge to style his eyebrow and start shouting about youth]].
** When Nami tells Sanji to show Nezumi her displeasure at trying to take her loot, he simply nods and responds with "As you wish." (a reference to The Princess Bride.)
** Another one given to Film/TheWizardOfOz in Chapter 8, though much briefer.
** The other staff of the Syrup Village mansion are the staff from ''WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast''.
** The Veggie Trio quotes [[Franchise/StarTrek The Borg]]’s iconic “Resistance is futile. You will be assimilated.”
** Due to the ShockAndAwe with which Nami defeats Arlong, her epithet is changed to “[[Literature/PercyJacksonAndTheOlympians Lightning Thief]].“
** Luffy's freakout when he realizes a furious and vengeful Garp is in Loguetown ends with "[[WesternAnimation/TheGrimAdventuresOfBillyAndMandy DESTROY US ALL! DESTROY US ALL! DESTROY US ALL! DESTROY US ALL!]]"
** After some hard thinking about how to handle Garp, Luffy proclaims [[Film/GuardiansOfTheGalaxy he has 12% of a plan. Zoro quips that it's better than 11%]].
** When Cabaji remarks on how weird the armada is thus far and asks if it could get any weirder, Mohji replies that it could if they got an amorphous white creature with ADD and OCD that was a powerful RealityWarper and annoying enough to make the sun grimace. This, as well as the sun morphing, winking to the audience, and morphing back afterwards, is a clear reference to ''Manga/SoulEater''.
** Alvida's description of herself after eating the Sube Sube no Mi comes directly from ''[[WesternAnimation/{{Shrek2}} Shrek 2]]'' after the eponymous ogre sees the result of him drinking the Happily Ever After potion.
** The most traditional sense of one in the Author's Notes at the start of the tenth chapter, praising the One Piece SelfInsert fic ''Fanfic/ThisBites'' as "Hands down the best SI I've ever read."
** This line from Usopp in Chapter 10: "By the time I'm done with you, every one of you will have more gadgets and gizmos than [[Franchise/{{Batman}} a billionaire vigilante with a flair for theatricality and some misplaced sense of self-righteousness]]."
** Perhaps unintentional, as it was muffled by distance, but when Usopp chastises the owner of a Queen Transponder Snail about neglecting the poor creature, said owner's speech is about as coherent as any given adult in the ComicStrip/{{Peanuts}} series.
** After Zoro wins his "fight" with Tashigi by disarming her with a knife hand:
-->'''Tashigi''': [[Film/PiratesOfTheCaribbeanTheCurseOfTheBlackPearl You cheated!]]
-->'''Zoro''': [[Film/PiratesOfTheCaribbeanTheCurseOfTheBlackPearl Pirate.]]
** Luffy compares Smoker to [[Franchise/LesMiserables Javert]].
** In Chapter 12, the narration refers to Mr. 9 and Miss Wednesday as [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} a male Jessie and female James, sans Meowth.]]
** The antics and species of some of Gaimon's [[MixAndMatchCritter menagerie]] reflect the antics of [[WesternAnimation/TheManyAdventuresOfWinnieThePooh the denizens of the Hundred-Acre Wood.]] A SneezeCut shows them all sneezing in another dimension.
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* GadgeteerGenius: Usopp is this UpToEleven; with no chance of getting his Pop Greens, he had to develop some serious ammo to match his New World strength. The results are shown both with his skills, and the way that he helps Buggy Take a Level in Badass.

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* GadgeteerGenius: Usopp is this UpToEleven; Usopp; with no chance of getting his Pop Greens, he had to develop some serious ammo to match his New World strength. The results are shown both with his skills, and the way that he helps Buggy Take a Level in Badass.
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* NiceHat: Mihawk's. [[spoiler:And Zoro decides to wear it as a trophy.]]
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* [[spoiler:CoveredWithScars]]: Zoro is re-introduced without his large chest scar of course, nor does he re-gain it. However, [[spoiler:the fight with Mihawk leaves him with ''lots'' of smaller scars on his body]].

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* [[spoiler:CoveredWithScars]]: CoveredWithScars: Zoro is re-introduced without his large chest scar of course, nor does he re-gain it. However, [[spoiler:the fight with Mihawk leaves him with ''lots'' of smaller scars on his body]].



* [[spoiler:DuelToTheDeath: Zoro and Mihawk. You get one guess as to who survived it.]]

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* [[spoiler:DuelToTheDeath: DuelToTheDeath: [[spoiler: Zoro and Mihawk. You get one guess as to who survived it.]]
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: [[spoiler:Despite being sliced to pieces and coughing up blood, Mihawk can't help but laugh when he realizes he never got Zoro's name before their duel. Judging by Zoro's grin, he finds the situation equally amusing]].



* VillainousBreakdown: Kuro gets a big one. Like Kaya's relationship with Usopp wasn't an obstacle already (see the AngstWhatAngst entry), upon "first" meeting him the Strawhats make him nervous with cat-related jokes. As he shows up on the shore the next day, witnessing how his crew has been quickly defeated, he already lets out that he wanted to kill them anyway. He is then confronted by a Luffy that's way out of his league, completely losing any cool left until [[CurbStompBattle Luffy one-shots him]].

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* VillainousBreakdown: Kuro gets a big one. Like Kaya's relationship with Usopp wasn't an obstacle already (see the AngstWhatAngst entry), upon "first" meeting him the Strawhats make him nervous with cat-related jokes. As he shows up on the shore the next day, witnessing how his crew has been quickly defeated, he already lets out that he wanted to kill them anyway. He is then confronted by a Luffy that's way out of his league, completely losing any cool left until [[CurbStompBattle Luffy one-shots him]].him]].
* WorthyOpponent: Mihawk ''immediately'' pegs Zoro as this the first time they meet. [[spoiler:After Zoro defeats him in their subsequent duel, he declares it an honor to die by Zoro's hand. Zoro, in turn, declares it was ''his'' honor to face and defeat Mihawk for the title of World's Greatest Swordsman]].
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* SideBet: Zoro and Sanji had one regarding whether Luffy was actually asexual or just had morals too strong to let him have sex. Finding out that Luffy avoided sex with Hancock because he didn't want to get her pregnant results in Zoro saying he wins the bet.

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* AdaptationalBadass: All of the members of the Straw Hat Armada, past and present, but the one that bears the most mentioning is Kaya; Duncan seems to have based her personality off of Unohana from {{Manga/Bleach}}, a motherly YamatoNadeshiko ProperLady sort whose TranquilFury is nearly as potent as Conqueror’s Haki. Heck, there’s a blatant Shout-Out to Unohana shortly after Kaya is first introduced.

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* AdaptationalBadass: AdaptationalBadass:
**
All of the members of the Straw Hat Armada, past and present, but the one that bears the most mentioning is Kaya; Duncan seems to have based her personality off of Unohana from {{Manga/Bleach}}, a motherly YamatoNadeshiko ProperLady sort whose TranquilFury is nearly as potent as Conqueror’s Haki. Heck, there’s a blatant Shout-Out to Unohana shortly after Kaya is first introduced.introduced.
** Garp in this story knows how to use Conqueror’s Haki.

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** As in canon, Luffy doesn’t take kindly to threats against his True Companions. But he also doesn’t take kindly to abuse of pets. Mohji, due to being his comrade when he finds that he had been neglecting feeding Richie, gets off relatively easy…with a Haki-empowered death threat.

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** As in canon, Luffy doesn’t take kindly to threats against his True Companions.TrueCompanions. But he also doesn’t take kindly to abuse of pets. Mohji, due to being his comrade when he finds that he had been neglecting feeding Richie, gets off relatively easy…with a Haki-empowered death threat.



* BodyHorror: [[spoiler:The extent of Zoro's scarring following his battle with Mihawk is described as very unpleasant to the eye; among other things, he's lost ''a chunk of his nose'', and he's got even scars on his scalp where hair may never grow back again.]]

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* BodyHorror: [[spoiler:The extent of Zoro's scarring following his battle with Mihawk is described as very unpleasant to the eye; among other things, he's lost ''a chunk of his nose'', and he's got even scars on his scalp where hair may never grow back again.]]again]].



* LogicalWeakness: While Alvida's frictionless skin makes it almost impossible to hit her, it also makes it almost impossible to hit someone else. Furthermore, she can be hit through her clothing as only her skin is frictionless.

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* LogicalWeakness: LogicalWeakness:
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While Alvida's frictionless skin makes it almost impossible to hit her, it also makes it almost impossible to hit someone else. Furthermore, she can be hit through her clothing as only her skin is frictionless.



* OfficialCouple: Usopp and Kaya.

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* OfficialCouple: OfficialCouple:
**
Usopp and Kaya.



* OhCrap: Igaram's reaction to seeing Luffy in Whiskey Peak, immediately recognizing him and assuming that they are doomed considering that [[spoiler:his bounty is higher than Crocodile's.]]

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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
**
Igaram's reaction to seeing Luffy in Whiskey Peak, immediately recognizing him and assuming that they are doomed considering that [[spoiler:his bounty is higher than Crocodile's.]]Crocodile's]].



** [[spoiler: Brook gives one when he briefly contemplates waiting in the Florian Triangle for Luffy to reach him.]]

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** [[spoiler: Brook [[spoiler:Brook gives one when he briefly contemplates waiting in the Florian Triangle for Luffy to reach him.]]him]].



* PsychoactivePowers: [[spoiler: The reason Brook could eat, produce waste, breathe or even get tired is [[ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve because he kept believing he was alive and had a working body, thus his soul replicated those symptoms.]] Once he transcends that belief, he no longer has any limits to his physicality.]]

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* PsychoactivePowers: [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The reason Brook could eat, produce waste, breathe or even get tired is [[ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve because he kept believing he was alive and had a working body, thus his soul replicated those symptoms.]] symptoms]]. Once he transcends that belief, he no longer has any limits to his physicality.]]physicality]].



*** Likewise, he manages to successfully defuse his grandfather's anger towards him becoming a pirate after tricking him into training... by breaking his heart. [[CruelToBeKind Necessary though it is, Luffy doesn't enjoy it.]]

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*** Likewise, he manages to successfully defuse his grandfather's anger towards him becoming a pirate after tricking him into training... by breaking his heart. [[CruelToBeKind Necessary though it is, Luffy doesn't enjoy it.]]it]].



** Zoro, employing both Koshiro and Mihawk’s teachings, is no less powerful than he was in the New World when he rejoins the crew. The proof of this is shown most of all when [[spoiler:he duels Mihawk again at the Baratie, and wins.]]

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** Zoro, employing both Koshiro and Mihawk’s teachings, is no less powerful than he was in the New World when he rejoins the crew. The proof of this is shown most of all when [[spoiler:he duels Mihawk again at the Baratie, and wins.]]wins]].



* TookALevelInKindness: Alvida. Luffy gave her a small TheReasonYouSuckSpeech laced with Conqueror's Haki before sending her flying, and she took it to heart ''hard,'' becoming a humble good Samaritan up until she meets Luffy again and joins his crew. Heck, even after she eats the Sube Sube no Mi, she only cares about what she looks like inside.

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* TookALevelInKindness: Alvida. Luffy gave her a small TheReasonYouSuckSpeech laced with Conqueror's Haki before sending her flying, and she took it to heart ''hard,'' becoming a humble good Samaritan GoodSamaritan up until she meets Luffy again and joins his crew. Heck, even after she eats the Sube Sube no Mi, she only cares about what she looks like inside.



* TranquilFury: Kaya, as seen in the ShoutOut section where she's channeling Retsu Unohana. Even ''Nami'' is terrified of her when she comes under the spotlight, and it's even enough to make Zoro and Sanji cease hostilities. [[spoiler: It shows some inkling of a SplitPersonality.]]

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* TranquilFury: Kaya, as seen in the ShoutOut section where she's channeling Retsu Unohana. Even ''Nami'' is terrified of her when she comes under the spotlight, and it's even enough to make Zoro and Sanji cease hostilities. [[spoiler: It [[spoiler:It shows some inkling of a SplitPersonality.]]SplitPersonality]].
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*** One is a short ginger-haired man named [[Disney/OliverAndCompany Oliver]].
*** Abraham, Giuseppe, Casey, O’Malley, Toulouse, and Berlioz are all taken from Disney/TheAristocats.
*** Jiji comes from Anime/KikisDeliveryService.
*** Salem comes from SabrinaTheTeenageWitch. One of the other crewmates even calls him by that cat's surname, Saberhagen.

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*** One is a short ginger-haired man named [[Disney/OliverAndCompany [[WesternAnimation/OliverAndCompany Oliver]].
*** Abraham, Giuseppe, Casey, O’Malley, Toulouse, and Berlioz are all taken from Disney/TheAristocats.
''WesternAnimation/TheAristocats''.
*** Jiji comes from Anime/KikisDeliveryService.
''Anime/KikisDeliveryService''.
*** Salem comes from SabrinaTheTeenageWitch.''SabrinaTheTeenageWitch''. One of the other crewmates even calls him by that cat's surname, Saberhagen.



** The other staff of the Syrup Village mansion are the staff from Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast.

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** The other staff of the Syrup Village mansion are the staff from Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast.''WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast''.



** The antics and species of some of Gaimon's [[MixAndMatchCritter menagerie]] reflect the antics of [[Disney/TheManyAdventuresOfWinnieThePooh the denizens of the Hundred-Acre Wood.]] A SneezeCut shows them all sneezing in another dimension.

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** The antics and species of some of Gaimon's [[MixAndMatchCritter menagerie]] reflect the antics of [[Disney/TheManyAdventuresOfWinnieThePooh [[WesternAnimation/TheManyAdventuresOfWinnieThePooh the denizens of the Hundred-Acre Wood.]] A SneezeCut shows them all sneezing in another dimension.
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* ShipperOnDeck: As of Chapter 5, Kaya is determined to get Nami and Luffy together.

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* ShipperOnDeck: As of Chapter 5, Kaya is determined to get Nami and Luffy Sanji together.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10415350/1/New-Game-Plus New Game Plus]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue FanFiction by [=DuncanIdaho2014=][[note]]Or at least this one is; there are several other Fan Fictions by the same name[[/note]]. It is the second most popular Peggy Sue story in the ''One Piece'' fandom, as well as the second most popular story overall.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10415350/1/New-Game-Plus New Game Plus]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue FanFiction by [=DuncanIdaho2014=][[note]]Or at least this one is; there are several other Fan Fictions by the same name[[/note]]. It is the second most popular Peggy Sue story in the ''One Piece'' fandom, as well as the second most popular story overall.\n
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** After some hard thinking about how to handle Garp, Luffy proclaims [[Film/GuardiansOfTheGalaxy he has 12% of a plan. Zoro quips that it's better than 11%]].

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* ForWantOfANail: In the old timeline, Sanji and the rest of the Straw-Hats decided to fight Big Mom and stay at Dressrosa instead of fleeing to Zou, which led to the capture of Caesar. Law was so enraged by this development that after Dressrosa was saved, he and Luffy severed their friendship and went their separate ways. And from there, the Straw-Hats sailed right into the Marine ambush.

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* ForWantOfANail: ForWantOfANail:
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In the old timeline, Sanji and the rest of the Straw-Hats decided to fight Big Mom and stay at Dressrosa instead of fleeing to Zou, which led to the capture of Caesar. Law was so enraged by this development that after Dressrosa was saved, he and Luffy severed their friendship and went their separate ways. And from there, the Straw-Hats sailed right into the Marine ambush.ambush.
** [[spoiler:Because of Zoro's near death injuries, the Straw Hat Armada arrived at Nami's island two days later than they did the first time. Because Nami and Ussop weren't there to intervine, the revenge seeking child and Gen were both killed by Arlong]].
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* MythologyGag: Since Kaya forbade Sanji from smoking around a recovering Zoro, he switched temporarily to lollipops. Fans know that among 4Kids heavy censorship of the anime, Sanji's cigarettes were changed to lollipops.
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* ClusterFBomb: Ace lets out a storm of this once he sees Luffy's first bounty.
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* ShipTease: Between Sanji and Nami.
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* BestServedCold: Luffy decides to let Nami take care to Arlong this time.
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After reaching Whiskey Peak and then being dormant for almost nine full months, the author announced the story was going on semi-permanent hiatus (as he put it, "I am sure that I have no immediate plans to write anymore for the foreseeable future", due to real-life issues) on September 21, 2017 and declared it open to adoption by anyone, along with posting his plans (as they stood) for the rest of the first pre-timeskip half of the series.

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