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It is published on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14277299/1/Miscalculation here]]), Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/miscalculation-worm-one-shot.1114931/ here]]), Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/miscalculation-worm-one-shot.122084/ here]]), and Questionable Questing ([[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/posts/7351113/ here]]).
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It is published on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14277299/1/Miscalculation here]]), Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/miscalculation-worm-one-shot.1114931/ here]]), Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/miscalculation-worm-one-shot.122084/ here]]), and Questionable Questing ([[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/posts/7351113/ here]]).
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* SuperSpeed: Riley's "surgery" is fast. As in, Jack Slash was completely disassembled into separate piles of organs and bones in less than a second, before his usual Broadcast-powered survival instincts could save him.
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* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: Jack Slash wanted to see what Riley is like deep down, so she takes him apart to see what ''he's'' made of deep down.
--> In the end, it seemed like he was just a bunch of muscles and bones and stuff that Riley didn't have names for.
--> In the end, it seemed like he was just a bunch of muscles and bones and stuff that Riley didn't have names for.
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* LiteralDisarming: Burnscar tries to pull a pistol, so Riley starts by cutting her arm off before going after the rest of her.
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* LiteralDisarming: Burnscar Winter tries to pull a pistol, so Riley starts by cutting her arm off before going after the rest of her.
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* OrificeInvasion: Riley's flaying tentacles kill multiple members of the Nine from the inside out, going down their throats and carving them up.
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* OrificeInvasion: Riley's flaying tentacles kill multiple members of the Nine from the inside out, going down their throats and carving them up. Hatchet Face is actually too tough for Riley to easily cut his skin, so she removes all his innards via his mouth and leaves the skin empty.
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* LiteralDisarming: Burnscar tries to pull a pistol, so Riley starts by cutting her arm off before going after the rest of her.
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* HealingFactor: Mannequin injures Riley even as she does the same to him, but she heals as fast as he cuts, and he doesn't heal at all.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Jack is convinced that Riley has potential waiting to be unlocked. He doesn't realise she has the potential to kill all of the Nine.
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* GoneHorriblyRight: Jack is convinced that Riley has potential waiting to be unlocked. He doesn't realise she has the potential to kill all of the Nine.
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* CombatTentacles: Riley's primary power is the ability to shapeshift her limbs, splitting them into long flexible tentacles that form tools and weapons on the ends to ''disassemble'' her enemies.
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* CombatMedic: Riley still has her canonical medical insights, and in combination with her new shapeshifting limbs, is able to fix her family's injuries in moments, in between killing Hatchet Face and Shatterbird.
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''Miscalculation'' is a one-shot story by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, where the Slaughterhouse Nine try to convert Riley Davis into Bonesaw, but she gets a different powerset, and it ends badly for them.
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''Miscalculation'' is a one-shot story ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfiction by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, where the Slaughterhouse Nine try to convert Riley Davis into Bonesaw, but she gets a different powerset, and it ends badly for them.
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Riley is ''very'' upset about the Nine hurting her family, and once she triggers, she quickly hunts them all down and slaughters them, even William Manton in his van multiple blocks away.
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* AllYourPowersCombined: Riley's trigger is influenced by all the Nine's shards, giving her an extremely lethal powerset that quickly neutralises and ends them.
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* AllYourPowersCombined: Riley's trigger is influenced by all the Nine's shards, giving her an extremely lethal powerset that quickly neutralises and ends them.[[labelnote:Author note]]Broadcast and power nullification let her detect other capes and spread the nullification around to depower them. Her arms can transform into surgical tools and she can regenerate thanks to Crawler, and she can do 'surgery' at super-speed thanks to Chuckles (and she can slow down the reactions of people she's doing it to, or dull their pain, thanks to Winter). From Mannequin she got the ability to incorporate tech into her body and make herself a lot harder to kill. She didn't get anything from Shatterbird or Manton, because they're vial capes.[[/labelnote]]
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* KilledMidSentence: Jack has just started to shake off the dizziness from Riley's trigger and remark, "''That's'' more like--" when Riley turns him to mincemeat.
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-> '''Jack:''' This little girl has a world of potential. Prepare her family. I can't wait to see what we can bring out in her.
''Miscalculation'' is a one-shot story by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, where the Slaughterhouse Nine try to convert Riley Davis into Bonesaw, but she gets a different powerset, and it ends badly for them.
It is published on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14277299/1/Miscalculation here]]), Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/miscalculation-worm-one-shot.1114931/ here]]), Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/miscalculation-worm-one-shot.122084/ here]]), and Questionable Questing ([[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/posts/7351113/ here]]).
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!! Jack Slash wasn't ready for these tropes:
* AllYourPowersCombined: Riley's trigger is influenced by all the Nine's shards, giving her an extremely lethal powerset that quickly neutralises and ends them.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Jack is convinced that Riley has potential waiting to be unlocked. He doesn't realise she has the potential to kill all of the Nine.
* OrificeInvasion: Riley's flaying tentacles kill multiple members of the Nine from the inside out, going down their throats and carving them up.
* PowerParasite: Riley's body is able to absorb other material into itself and use it to raise her threat level even higher.
--> Her whole body was stronger with the metal she'd taken away from the mechanical man.
* SkewedPriorities: Riley likes to be neat. She leaves the Nine's dismembered remains in neat tidy piles.
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''Miscalculation'' is a one-shot story by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, where the Slaughterhouse Nine try to convert Riley Davis into Bonesaw, but she gets a different powerset, and it ends badly for them.
It is published on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14277299/1/Miscalculation here]]), Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/miscalculation-worm-one-shot.1114931/ here]]), Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/miscalculation-worm-one-shot.122084/ here]]), and Questionable Questing ([[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/posts/7351113/ here]]).
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!! Jack Slash wasn't ready for these tropes:
* AllYourPowersCombined: Riley's trigger is influenced by all the Nine's shards, giving her an extremely lethal powerset that quickly neutralises and ends them.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Jack is convinced that Riley has potential waiting to be unlocked. He doesn't realise she has the potential to kill all of the Nine.
* OrificeInvasion: Riley's flaying tentacles kill multiple members of the Nine from the inside out, going down their throats and carving them up.
* PowerParasite: Riley's body is able to absorb other material into itself and use it to raise her threat level even higher.
--> Her whole body was stronger with the metal she'd taken away from the mechanical man.
* SkewedPriorities: Riley likes to be neat. She leaves the Nine's dismembered remains in neat tidy piles.
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