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!! ''Mirai SMP'' contains examples of:
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* ArcWords: "Always stick together" is a major example during the earlier chapters -- it's a message that Techno, Cooper and Travis recieve on their phones, and Cooper doesn't listen to, leading to his demise. These three words nag at Techno for a long while after this.
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* ArcWords: "Always stick together" is a major example during the earlier chapters -- it's a message that Techno, Cooper and Travis recieve receive on their phones, and Cooper doesn't listen to, leading to his demise. These three words nag at Techno for a long while after this.
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* BackForTheDead: Cooper gets revived... Only to die again quickly after when he gets into an argument with Schlatt.
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* DeathActivatedSuperpower:
** {{Inverted|Trope}} with each diary holder's special ability, which is unlocked upon them killing someone.
** Played straight with Travis's resurrection ability, which is unlocked upon his own death.
** {{Inverted|Trope}} with each diary holder's special ability, which is unlocked upon them killing someone.
** Played straight with Travis's resurrection ability, which is unlocked upon his own death.
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!Due to the nature of this work, [[Administrivia/SpoilersOff all spoilers will be unmarked]]. Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned.
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!Due to the nature of this work, work focusing entirely around major character death, [[Administrivia/SpoilersOff all spoilers will be unmarked]]. Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned.
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* BaitAndSwitchGunshot: In the parking garage, when Techno hears a gunshot go off, he initially assumes that Jordan must have shot at him, until he sees that Taylor is bleeding, and then notices that the shot came from ''Travis''.
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* BaitAndSwitchGunshot: In the parking garage, when Techno hears a gunshot go off, he initially assumes that Jordan must have shot at him, until he sees that Taylor is bleeding, and then notices that the shot came from the NervousWreck cutie ''Travis''.
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* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: POV changes are common, but Ryan's first chapter is a shock due to how late it occurs.
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* AscendedExtra: For the first half of the fic, Ryan seems to be a largely unimportant character who rarely comes up. That is, [[AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent until we are suddenly thrust into his perspective]] and he becomes a major character in the plot.
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* BloodyHorror: Gratuitous amounts of blood are present in the hospital near the start.
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* CharactersDroppingLikeFlies: Constantly, given the fic runs on a DeadlyGame premise.
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* CorpseLand: It is revealed at the end that the hospital Techno explored at the start is full of the dead bodies of the diary holders from all the previous resets during God's attempt to make Techno win.
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* InvoluntaryBattleToTheDeath: The entire plot is based around this trope, as only one character can live to the end.
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* TakingTheBullet: When Yetz (in control of Joko's body) shoots Techno near the end, he's saved by Travis getting in front of him. The unfairness of Travis's death is what causes him to unlock revival.
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* WalkingSpoiler: Talking about anything Travis does following the explosion is a ''major'' spoiler, since [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated the reader is supposed to believe he died]].
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* DysfunctionJunction: Nearly all the characters have their own issues or baggage, and the ones who don't already from the start ''definitely'' do by the end.
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* RealityWritingBook: It turns out that the diaries don't just interpret someone's future -- they ''are'' their future, and that breaking someone's diary will cause them to stop existing.
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* SoulJar: The diaries qualify as type 1a -- breaking a diary holder's phone will kill them.
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* SymbolicMutilation: Schlatt gives up his leg for a hang-glider -- as in the phrase "paid an arm and a leg" taken literally.
