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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: King Thunder Fist and Prince Steel Nerves of the Minotaurs, who are able to take on twenty griffons by themselves at the same time.
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* RankScalesWithAsskicking: King Thunder Fist and Prince Steel Nerves of the Minotaurs are able to take on twenty griffons by themselves at the same time.
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** A pony version of ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' is referenced at one point.
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** A pony version of ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' ''WesternAnimation/{{Frozen|2013}}'' is referenced at one point.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/183541/mlp-next-generation-love-conquers-all-avarice-takes-it-all MLP Next Generation: Love Conquers All! Avarice Takes it All!]] is a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and the GreenLantern series being written
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/183541/mlp-next-generation-love-conquers-all-avarice-takes-it-all MLP Next Generation: Love Conquers All! Avarice Takes it All!]] is a crossover between ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and the GreenLantern ComicBook/GreenLantern series being written
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Obsolete trope.
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** BiggerBad: [[spoiler: But as a Black Lantern, he's now a servant of a higher power in the form of Nekron.]]
** TheHeavy: All things considered, Nox barely shows up, with the role of main antagonist being divided between Anubis the Jackal Diamond Dog in Annie's story, and [[TheCorruption the Orange ring itself]] in Nidra's story. [[spoiler: Shortly after Anubis is killed, Nidra is corrupted completely, making her the FinalBoss of the story as a whole.]]
** TheHeavy: All things considered, Nox barely shows up, with the role of main antagonist being divided between Anubis the Jackal Diamond Dog in Annie's story, and [[TheCorruption the Orange ring itself]] in Nidra's story. [[spoiler: Shortly after Anubis is killed, Nidra is corrupted completely, making her the FinalBoss of the story as a whole.]]
* TheHeavy: All things considered, Nox barely shows up, with the role of main antagonist being divided between Anubis the Jackal Diamond Dog in Annie's story, and [[TheCorruption the Orange ring itself]] in Nidra's story. [[spoiler: Shortly after Anubis is killed, Nidra is corrupted completely, making her the FinalBoss of the story as a whole.]]
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* [[PuppetKing Puppet Queen]]: Gilda is crowned Empress in light of her father Stratus [[spoiler: being killed]] at the end of the previous story. But she's [[UnwittingPawn being manipulated]] by her brother, who's "offering help" from the sidelines, while her own military doesn't respect her authority.
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* [[PuppetKing Puppet Queen]]: PuppetQueen: Gilda is crowned Empress in light of her father Stratus [[spoiler: being killed]] at the end of the previous story. But she's [[UnwittingPawn being manipulated]] by her brother, who's "offering help" from the sidelines, while her own military doesn't respect her authority.
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The story centers around Creator/{{Kilala97}}'s OC's: [[http://kilala97.deviantart.com/art/Next-Generation-Anthea-444628758 Anthea]]; Fluttershy's adopted Daughter, and [[http://kilala97.deviantart.com/art/Next-Generation-Nidra-440445210?q=gallery%3Akilala97%2F47827126&qo=11 Nidra]]; Duaghter of Princess Luna and [[http://kilala97.deviantart.com/art/Daddy-s-Girl-461817968 Supernova]].
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The story centers around Creator/{{Kilala97}}'s OC's: [[http://kilala97.deviantart.com/art/Next-Generation-Anthea-444628758 Anthea]]; Fluttershy's adopted Daughter, and [[http://kilala97.deviantart.com/art/Next-Generation-Nidra-440445210?q=gallery%3Akilala97%2F47827126&qo=11 Nidra]]; Duaghter Daughter of Princess Luna and [[http://kilala97.deviantart.com/art/Daddy-s-Girl-461817968 Supernova]].
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* DemotedToExtra: Starbust, due to the story shifting its focus to Annie and Nidra. [[spoiler: She doesn't even show up until fourteen chapters in, and then leaves in the following chapter.]]
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** In the final chapter, [[spoiler: when an exhausted Starburst is about to be overwhelmed by griffon forces, Nidra shows up and wipes them out with the Orange ring.]]
* DemotedToExtra: Starbust, due to the story shifting its focus to Annie and Nidra. [[spoiler: She doesn't even show up until fourteen chapters in,and then leaves in the following chapter.chapter, only to get most of the last chapter dedicated to her.]]
* DemotedToExtra: Starbust, due to the story shifting its focus to Annie and Nidra. [[spoiler: She doesn't even show up until fourteen chapters in,
* TheExile: [[spoiler: Nidra exiles herself out of shame for her actions when under the Orange Ring's influence, joining up with Starburst to fight the griffons.]]
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* HeroicSecondWind: [[spoiler: Annie is easily defeated by Orange Lantern Nidra and tossed into a Sensory Deprivation dimension, with nothing but Nidra's {{Breaking Lecture}}s playing in her head. But then her ring finds her, and a construct of Starburst (which may have been the real thing talking) helps reminds her what she's fighting for, and she breaks free to fight Nidra again and free her from the Orange Ring's influence.]]
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* HeroicSecondWind: [[spoiler: Annie is easily defeated by Orange Lantern Nidra and tossed into a Sensory Deprivation dimension, with nothing but Nidra's {{Breaking Lecture}}s playing in her head. But then her ring finds her, and a construct of Starburst (which may have been turns out to be the real thing talking) one somehow talking to her) helps reminds her what she's fighting for, and she breaks free to fight Nidra again and free her from the Orange Ring's influence.]]
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** [[spoiler: Nidra is horrified at her actions when she's freed from the Orange ring's corruption, to the point that she flees Canterlot and tells everyone not to follow her.]]
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** [[spoiler: Nidra is horrified at her actions when she's freed from the Orange ring's corruption, to the point that she flees Canterlot and tells everyone not to follow her. She later tells Starburst that she's exiled herself for her actions.]]
* SequelHook: Like ''Know Fear'', it ends with three: first, there's [[spoiler: a self-exiled (and still partially corrupted) Nidra joining up with Starburst]], then there's Annie deciding to keep fighting to protect Equestria, and finally, two more rings -- one Red, one Indigo -- arrive in orbit, but pause there due to complications in finding hosts.
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** Orange!Nidra hands these out like candy.
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** Orange!Nidra Orange Lantern Nidra hands these out like candy.
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* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler: After Orange Lantern Nidra defeats Annie, she tosses her into a Sensory Deprivation pocket dimension, in order to drive her insane. Fortunately, she's not in there long before her ring finds her and frees her.]]
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** So far, Annie has kept to the Star Sapphires' traditional oath.
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** So far, Annie has kept keeps to the Star Sapphires' traditional oath.oath for most of the story, but coins a new one when [[spoiler: escaping from the Sensory Deprivation dimension Nidra put her in]]:
-->"From the warm embrace of Celestia's light,
-->"To the cool breeze of Luna's night,
-->"I bring many wonders from my ring of light,
-->"My love gives me strength... from my sapphire light!"
-->"From the warm embrace of Celestia's light,
-->"To the cool breeze of Luna's night,
-->"I bring many wonders from my ring of light,
-->"My love gives me strength... from my sapphire light!"
** TheHeavy: All things considered, Nox barely shows up, with the role of main antagonist being divided between Anubis the Jackal Diamond Dog in Annie's story, and [[TheCorruption the Orange ring itself]] in Nidra's story. [[spoiler: Shortly after Anubis is killed, Nidra is corrupted completely, making her the FinalBoss of the story as a whole.]]
* HeroicSecondWind: [[spoiler: Annie is easily defeated by Orange Lantern Nidra and tossed into a Sensory Deprivation dimension, with nothing but Nidra's {{Breaking Lecture}}s playing in her head. But then her ring finds her, and a construct of Starburst (which may have been the real thing talking) helps reminds her what she's fighting for, and she breaks free to fight Nidra again and free her from the Orange Ring's influence.]]
** [[spoiler: Nidra is horrified at her actions when she's freed from the Orange ring's corruption, to the point that she flees Canterlot and tells everyone not to follow her.]]
* OneWingedAngel: [[spoiler: During Annie and Nidra's final fight, the latter turns into a Nightmare, fueled by Avarice.]]
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* SimultaneousArcs: The story is currently following Anthea, as she and Twilight investigate griffon incursions into minotaur territory, and Nidra, as she deals with the temptations of the Orange ring's power.
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* SimultaneousArcs: The story is currently following Anthea, as she and Twilight investigate griffon incursions into minotaur territory, and Nidra, as she deals with the temptations of the Orange ring's power. [[spoiler: These storylines ultimately intertwine when Nidra gives into the ring, and Annie has to fight her.]]
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** The Troublemakers themselves really step it up from their appearance in ''Know Fear!'', where they got their asses kicked by Starburst in short order. Here, they are not only capable enough soldiers to fight alongside Twilight's forces on the field, but at the climax are even able to [[spoiler: fight Orange Lantern Nidra evenly, for a time.]]
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** And of course, Nidra's unrequited feelings for Turquoise are a major plot point.
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* SomethingElseAlsoRises: Turquoise gets a "wingboner" when he sees Annie in her Star Sapphire uniform.
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** [[spoiler: During their fight, Star and Annie attack each other with construct hawks and doves, respectfully]], a shout out to Marvel superhero duo Hawk and Dove. It also doubles as a shout out to [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/241319/mldc-next-generation-teen-titans another story]] by the same author, wherein [[spoiler: Star and Annie ''become'' Hawk and Dove]].
* SomethingElseAlsoRises: Turquoise gets a "wingboner" when he first sees Annie in her Star Sapphire uniform.
* SomethingElseAlsoRises: Turquoise gets a "wingboner" when he first sees Annie in her Star Sapphire uniform.
