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* SuperStrength: Rex was made to be super strong by the tampered Behavio-Ray and he makes great use of it
%%** SuperToughness: Alongside that, they were also made to be super durable and can take a major beatdown with only a few scratches.
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%%* TheMentor: Sabira acts like this towards the Freak Five, trying to teach them good morals, help them with their problems, and just trying to be a good motherly figure to the kids.

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%%* * TheMentor: Sabira acts like this towards the Freak Five, trying to teach them good morals, help them with their problems, and just trying to be a good motherly figure to the kids.
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%%* TheKlutz: Sabira has a bad habit of bumping into things, tripping over herself, and dropping things. It happens so often that she jokes about it being a curse, mostly to shave off her embarrassment.

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%%* * TheKlutz: Sabira has a bad habit of bumping into things, tripping over herself, and dropping things. It happens so often that she jokes about it being a curse, mostly to shave off her embarrassment.
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%%* HeKnowsTooMuch: Stanley is on the run from Kid-Rid because he knew too much about their true intentions.

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%%* * HeKnowsTooMuch: Stanley is on the run from Kid-Rid because he knew too much about their true intentions.
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%%* EnthusiasticNewbieTeacher: Sabira is new to being a behavioral teacher and is very excited to have the Freak Five as her first assignment.

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%%* * EnthusiasticNewbieTeacher: Sabira is new to being a behavioral teacher and is very excited to have the Freak Five as her first assignment.
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* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Violet constantly wants to go into her hero persona and save people, even if it's completely unnecessary.

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* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Violet is constantly wants eager to go into her hero persona and save people, even if it's completely unnecessary.unnecessary at the moment.
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%%*ChronicHeroSyndrome: Violet constantly wants to go into her hero persona and save people, even if it's completely unnecessary.

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%%*ChronicHeroSyndrome: *ChronicHeroSyndrome: Violet constantly wants to go into her hero persona and save people, even if it's completely unnecessary.

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%%*ChronicHeroSyndrome: Violet constantly wants to go into her hero persona and save people, even if it's completely unnecessary.



%%* EvilBrit: Susie terrorizes Stillville with metal cats, causing multiple rampages, and is in kahoots with Kid-Rid, and just so happens to have a British accent.

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%%* EvilBrit: Susie terrorizes Stillville with metal cats, robotic animals, causing multiple rampages, and is in kahoots with Kid-Rid, and just so happens to have a British accent.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/45555796/chapters/114630553 Loud Boy: Altered]] is a fanfiction/rewrite by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Izztreme Izztreme]] for the kids comic, ''ComicBook/DanielBoomAKALoudBoy''. Loud Boy: Altered follows the story of Daniel, Rex, Sid, Violet, Jeannie S., and many others in their many exploits. Each of the main characters have superpowers based around supposed bad habits children often have, and fight their foes to the best of their ability, while also wrangling school, parents, drama, trauma, and friends.

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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/45555796/chapters/114630553 Loud Boy: Altered]] is a fanfiction/rewrite by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Izztreme Izztreme]] Creator/{{Izztreme}} for the kids comic, ''ComicBook/DanielBoomAKALoudBoy''. Loud Boy: Altered follows the story of Daniel, Rex, Sid, Violet, Jeannie S., and many others in their many exploits. Each of the main characters have superpowers based around supposed bad habits children often have, and fight their foes to the best of their ability, while also wrangling school, parents, drama, trauma, and friends.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/45555796/chapters/114630553 Loud Boy: Altered]] is a fanfiction/rewrite by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Izztreme Izztreme]] for the kids comic, ''ComicBook/DanielBoomAKALoudBoy''. Loud Boy: Altered follows the story of Daniel, Rex, Sid, Violet, Jeannie S., and many others in their many exploits. Each of the main characters have minor superpowers, and fight their foes to the best of their ability, while also wrangling school, parents, drama, trauma, and friends.

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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/45555796/chapters/114630553 Loud Boy: Altered]] is a fanfiction/rewrite by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Izztreme Izztreme]] for the kids comic, ''ComicBook/DanielBoomAKALoudBoy''. Loud Boy: Altered follows the story of Daniel, Rex, Sid, Violet, Jeannie S., and many others in their many exploits. Each of the main characters have minor superpowers, superpowers based around supposed bad habits children often have, and fight their foes to the best of their ability, while also wrangling school, parents, drama, trauma, and friends.
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%%* EnthusiasticNewbieTeacher: Sabira is new to being a behavioral teacher and is very excited to have the Freak Five as her first assignment.
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* SuperScream: As a result of not having control over the volume over his voice, he's able to make a very powerful scream.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/45555796/chapters/114630553 Loud Boy: Altered]] is a fanfiction/rewrite by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Izztreme Izztreme]] for the kids comic, ''ComicBook/DanielBoomAKALoudBoy''. While it's still in-progress, Izztreme is proud of their work so far and can't wait to release more chapters as soon as possible. Loud Boy: Altered follows the story of Daniel, Rex, Sid, Violet, Jeannie S., and many others in their many exploits. Each of the main characters have minor superpowers, and fight their foes to the best of their ability, while also wrangling school, parents, drama, trauma, and friends.

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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/45555796/chapters/114630553 Loud Boy: Altered]] is a fanfiction/rewrite by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Izztreme Izztreme]] for the kids comic, ''ComicBook/DanielBoomAKALoudBoy''. While it's still in-progress, Izztreme is proud of their work so far and can't wait to release more chapters as soon as possible. Loud Boy: Altered follows the story of Daniel, Rex, Sid, Violet, Jeannie S., and many others in their many exploits. Each of the main characters have minor superpowers, and fight their foes to the best of their ability, while also wrangling school, parents, drama, trauma, and friends.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/45555796/chapters/114630553 Loud Boy: Altered]] is a heavily involved and worked on fanfiction/rewrite by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Izztreme Izztreme]] for the kids comic, ''ComicBook/DanielBoomAKALoudBoy''. While it's still in-progress, Izztreme is proud of their work so far and can't wait to release more chapters as soon as possible. Loud Boy: Altered follows the story of Daniel, Rex, Sid, Violet, Jeannie S., and many others in their many exploits. Each of the main characters have minor superpowers, and fight their foes to the best of their ability, while also wrangling school, parents, drama, trauma, and friends.

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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/45555796/chapters/114630553 Loud Boy: Altered]] is a heavily involved and worked on fanfiction/rewrite by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Izztreme Izztreme]] for the kids comic, ''ComicBook/DanielBoomAKALoudBoy''. While it's still in-progress, Izztreme is proud of their work so far and can't wait to release more chapters as soon as possible. Loud Boy: Altered follows the story of Daniel, Rex, Sid, Violet, Jeannie S., and many others in their many exploits. Each of the main characters have minor superpowers, and fight their foes to the best of their ability, while also wrangling school, parents, drama, trauma, and friends.
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%%* EvilBrit: Susie terrorizes Stillville with metal cats, causing multiple rampages, and is in kahoots with Kid-Rid and The Poison Roses, and just so happens to have a British accent.

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%%* EvilBrit: Susie terrorizes Stillville with metal cats, causing multiple rampages, and is in kahoots with Kid-Rid and The Poison Roses, Kid-Rid, and just so happens to have a British accent.
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* LiteralMinded: Given that Daniel and Violet have Autism, they have trouble interpreting metaphors and rhetorical questions.

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* LiteralMinded: Given that Daniel and Violet have Autism, they tend to have trouble interpreting metaphors and rhetorical questions.
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%%* HeKnowsTooMuch: Stanley is on the run from Kid-Rid because he knew too much about their true intentions.

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%%* EvilChef: Eda is a lunch lady who works with Kid-Rid and despises children.

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%%* EvilChef: Eda is a lunch an ex-lunch lady who works with Kid-Rid and despises children.children to the core.



* HairTriggerTemper: Rex, while tries to keep his cool most of the time, can easily snap with enough pressure. And you really, '''really''' don't want to see him angry.
** Violet can also easily snap, which makes sense for her powers. Though, she's arguably better at handling her temper than Rex.
* HatesBeingTouched: Daniel really dislikes being touched in any matter whatsoever (with the only exception being people he truly trusts.) Justified as he has Autism and sensitive skin, and touching him too much or hugging him unexpectedly will send him into a mild sensory overload and gain a desire to pull himself out of the situation.
%%* TheKlutz: Daniel has a tendency to bump into things and knock things over accidentally.
* LemonyNarrator: There’s two of them, the narrator and the author himself. They often appear at the beginning of the episode and at the end, bickering with each other and snarking at one another, and the narrator often questions the author's rewriting decisions.

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* HairTriggerTemper: Rex, while tries Violet, despite trying her best to keep his cool most of the time, her cool, can easily snap with enough pressure. And you really, '''really''' don't want to see him angry.
** Violet can also
easily snap, which makes sense for her powers. Though, she's arguably better at handling She's working really hard on it, but it still tends to slip from her temper than Rex.
every now and then.
* HatesBeingTouched: Daniel really dislikes being touched in any matter whatsoever (with the only exception being people he truly trusts.) Justified as he has Autism and sensitive skin, and touching him too much or hugging him unexpectedly will send him into a mild sensory overload flurry of stinging pain and gain a desire to pull himself out of the situation.
%%* TheKlutz: Daniel Sabira has a tendency to bump bad habit of bumping into things and knock things things, tripping over accidentally.
herself, and dropping things. It happens so often that she jokes about it being a curse, mostly to shave off her embarrassment.
* LemonyNarrator: There’s two of them, the narrator and the author himself. They often appear at the beginning of the episode and at the end, bickering with each other and snarking at one another, and the narrator often questions the author's rewriting decisions.decisions, while the author messes with the narrator in various ways.
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%%* EvilBrit: Susie is an evil brat with a British accent.

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%%* EvilBrit: Susie is an evil brat terrorizes Stillville with metal cats, causing multiple rampages, and is in kahoots with Kid-Rid and The Poison Roses, and just so happens to have a British accent.
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* %%DrunkOnMilk: Rex is able to get really drunk on apple juice/cider when he drinks enough. Justified as the Behavio-Ray changed his biology in a way that makes him dizzy from eating apples.

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* %%DrunkOnMilk: %%* DrunkOnMilk: Rex is able to get really drunk on apple juice/cider when he drinks enough. Justified as the Behavio-Ray changed his biology in a way that makes him dizzy from eating apples.
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* DrunkOnMilk: Rex is able to get really drunk on apple cider when he drinks enough.

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* DrunkOnMilk: %%DrunkOnMilk: Rex is able to get really drunk on apple cider juice/cider when he drinks enough.enough. Justified as the Behavio-Ray changed his biology in a way that makes him dizzy from eating apples.

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