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''Look Over His Shoulder'' is a ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia'' ForWantOfANail [[OneShotFic One-Shot]] by ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/liketolaugh/pseuds/liketolaugh liketolaugh]]''.
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''Look Over His Shoulder'' is a ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia'' ForWantOfANail IncitingIncident [[OneShotFic One-Shot]] by ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/liketolaugh/pseuds/liketolaugh liketolaugh]]''.
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It should be noted that this FanWork isn't playing around in certain area's. A story where Mineta's creepy pervertedness is not PlayedForLaughs and instead has serious implications of what could easily happen if Mineta turned things up a notch and became a much darker character. It has dark themes of sexual harassment and AttemptedRape so, please keep that in mind before reading this story.
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It should be noted that this FanWork isn't playing around in certain area's.areas. A story where Mineta's creepy pervertedness is not PlayedForLaughs and instead has serious implications of what could easily happen if Mineta turned things up a notch and became a much darker character. It has dark themes of sexual harassment and AttemptedRape so, so please keep that in mind before reading this story.
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* AttemptedRape: Mineta tried this with Hagakure first when he roofied the soda so he could rape her when she was disoriented and unconscious but thankfully it spilt all over her shirt before she drank anything. Then he tried the same thing with Momo only to fail when the others figured out he roofied the drink. [[spoiler: Later Mineta will attempt to rape her in her own apartment. He fails obviously and that'll be his downfall.]]
* FirstPersonPerspective: Though out the whole story the [[OneShotFic One-Shot]] is only done in Mina's PointOfView though other characters get plenty of screen time.
* FirstPersonPerspective: Though out the whole story the [[OneShotFic One-Shot]] is only done in Mina's PointOfView though other characters get plenty of screen time.
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* AttemptedRape: Mineta tried this with Hagakure first when he roofied the soda so he could rape her when she was disoriented and unconscious but thankfully it spilt all over her shirt before she drank anything. Then he tried the same thing with Momo only to fail when the others figured out he roofied the drink. [[spoiler: Later [[spoiler:Later Mineta will attempt to rape her in her own apartment. He fails obviously and that'll be his downfall.]]
* FirstPersonPerspective:Though out Throughout the whole story story, the [[OneShotFic One-Shot]] is only done in Mina's PointOfView though other characters get plenty of screen time.
* FirstPersonPerspective:
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* HairTriggerTemper: Bakugou's temper hasn't gotten much better over the years and this really shows whenever Mineta is brought up. Kirishima was forced to talk him out of ''murder'' a time or two and he always stomps around in a huff whenever he Mineta is brought up. ''Not that anyone can blame him really.''
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* HairTriggerTemper: Bakugou's temper hasn't gotten much better over the years and this really shows whenever Mineta is brought up. Kirishima was forced to talk him out of ''murder'' a time or two and he always stomps around in a huff whenever he Mineta is brought up. ''Not that anyone can blame him really.''
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* HateSink: '''''Mineta''''' ''definitely''. The more you read this fic the more depraved his actions are. ''Everybody'' hates him and for good reason too after all the crap he puts his former classmates though. All the creepy stalking, pictures he's taken, fan mail he's sent, and calls he's made. There literally isn't a single redeeming trait on him.
* PoliceAreUseless: Kind of the theme for the whole fic and why Mineta was still allowed to walk around freely despite stalking and harassing them for so long. According to the police, the girls can handle one simple pervert themselves because they're ''heroes'' after all. They generally ignore the issue because there wasn't enough evidence or eyewitnesses accounts to arrest him. It takes a public sexual harassment charge that'll finally give Momo a restraining order against him and [[spoiler: an attempt to rape Mina in her own apartment before they finally arrest him.]]
* PowerfulAndHelpless: In spite of All Might's decade long service and influence, not even he is able to get the local police to do anything to help his former students. Mina even wonders if the word of "All Might" himself has no value in the present day.
* ProperlyParanoid: The girls are all paranoid and for good reason. Somehow Mineta keeps finding all their phone numbers and texting them creepy perverted messages no matter how many times they block him. They don't open up any fan mail anymore just in case he sends them creepy photographs about themselves anymore. They're all jumpy at night afraid he might break in all the sudden. It only makes it worse with how [[PoliceAreUseless the police won't do anything about it.]]
* PoliceAreUseless: Kind of the theme for the whole fic and why Mineta was still allowed to walk around freely despite stalking and harassing them for so long. According to the police, the girls can handle one simple pervert themselves because they're ''heroes'' after all. They generally ignore the issue because there wasn't enough evidence or eyewitnesses accounts to arrest him. It takes a public sexual harassment charge that'll finally give Momo a restraining order against him and [[spoiler: an attempt to rape Mina in her own apartment before they finally arrest him.]]
* PowerfulAndHelpless: In spite of All Might's decade long service and influence, not even he is able to get the local police to do anything to help his former students. Mina even wonders if the word of "All Might" himself has no value in the present day.
* ProperlyParanoid: The girls are all paranoid and for good reason. Somehow Mineta keeps finding all their phone numbers and texting them creepy perverted messages no matter how many times they block him. They don't open up any fan mail anymore just in case he sends them creepy photographs about themselves anymore. They're all jumpy at night afraid he might break in all the sudden. It only makes it worse with how [[PoliceAreUseless the police won't do anything about it.]]
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* HateSink: '''''Mineta''''' ''definitely''. The more you read this fic the more depraved his actions are. ''Everybody'' hates him and for good reason too after all the crap he puts his former classmates though.through. All the creepy stalking, pictures he's taken, fan mail he's sent, and calls he's made. There literally isn't a single redeeming trait on in him.
* PoliceAreUseless: Kind of the theme for the whole fic and why Mineta was still allowed to walk around freely despite stalking and harassing them for so long. According to the police, the girls can handle one simple pervert themselves because they're ''heroes'' after all. They generally ignore the issue because there wasn't enough evidence oreyewitnesses eyewitness accounts to arrest him. It takes a public sexual harassment charge that'll finally give Momo a restraining order against him and [[spoiler: an attempt to rape Mina in her own apartment before they finally arrest him.]]
* PowerfulAndHelpless: In spite of All Might'sdecade long decade-long service and influence, not even he is able to get the local police to do anything to help his former students. Mina even wonders if the word of "All Might" himself has no value in the present day.
* ProperlyParanoid: The girls are all paranoid and for good reason. Somehow Mineta keeps finding all their phone numbers and texting them creepy perverted messages no matter how many times they block him. They don't open up any fan mail anymore just in case he sends them creepy photographs about themselves anymore. They're all jumpy at night afraid he might break in allthe of a sudden. It only makes it worse with how [[PoliceAreUseless the police won't do anything about it.]]
* PoliceAreUseless: Kind of the theme for the whole fic and why Mineta was still allowed to walk around freely despite stalking and harassing them for so long. According to the police, the girls can handle one simple pervert themselves because they're ''heroes'' after all. They generally ignore the issue because there wasn't enough evidence or
* PowerfulAndHelpless: In spite of All Might's
* ProperlyParanoid: The girls are all paranoid and for good reason. Somehow Mineta keeps finding all their phone numbers and texting them creepy perverted messages no matter how many times they block him. They don't open up any fan mail anymore just in case he sends them creepy photographs about themselves anymore. They're all jumpy at night afraid he might break in all
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* SpottingTheThread: When Momo started getting tired all the sudden no one suspected Mineta of any nefarious deeds and just thought she was exhausted from studying too much. That is until Todoroki got suspicious and remembered Momo accepted an opened soda from Mineta...
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* SpottingTheThread: When Momo started getting tired all the sudden of a sudden, no one suspected Mineta of any nefarious deeds and just thought she was exhausted from studying too much. That is until Todoroki got suspicious and remembered Momo accepted an opened soda from Mineta...
