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* CanadaEh: Both Frederic and his father Richard are from Canada, though only Frederic talks in an accent.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Over 900k words long and still ongoing.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Over 900k 1 million words long and still ongoing.
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** The chapter "A Talent Duel!" has Lance sing three songs for a talent competition. In order, the songs are "Good Riddance (Time Of Our Life)" by Music/GreenDay, "Higher" by {{Music/Creed}}, and "Lil Pip" by Pinkie Guy.
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** The chapter "A Talent Duel!" has Lance sing three songs for a talent competition. In order, the songs are "Good Riddance (Time Of Our Life)" by Music/GreenDay, "Higher" by {{Music/Creed}}, {{Music/Creed|band}}, and "Lil Pip" by Pinkie Guy.
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* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: This is a MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic, so naturally this applies. Special mention to Lance though. He's a zebra with cyan fur, red stripes, and a black mane.
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* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: This is a MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic, so naturally this applies. Special mention to Lance though. He's a zebra with cyan fur, red stripes, and a black mane.
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* SolidClouds: A natural effect of being set in the MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic universe. Characters will occasionally be seen sleeping on clouds.
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* SolidClouds: A natural effect of being set in the MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic universe. Characters will occasionally be seen sleeping on clouds.
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** During the "Crossover of Consciences" arc Razor Graze from Fanfic/ThreeOfMeSchoolSociety shows off his consciences Kill and Joy. Graze can [[FusionDance fuse]] with his consciences to go into his [[SuperpoweredEvilSide Killjoy]] form.
** Pinkie Pie has her Consciences Pinkamena and Suprise, but they only appear briefly in ''Living The Dream''. They have a much larger role in ''Fanfic/ThreeOfMeSchoolSociety'' though.
** Pinkie Pie has her Consciences Pinkamena and Suprise, but they only appear briefly in ''Living The Dream''. They have a much larger role in ''Fanfic/ThreeOfMeSchoolSociety'' though.
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** During the "Crossover of Consciences" arc Razor Graze from Fanfic/ThreeOfMeSchoolSociety DarthWiki/ThreeOfMeSchoolSociety shows off his consciences Kill and Joy. Graze can [[FusionDance fuse]] with his consciences to go into his [[SuperpoweredEvilSide Killjoy]] form.
** Pinkie Pie has her Consciences Pinkamena and Suprise, but they only appear briefly in ''Living The Dream''. They have a much larger role in''Fanfic/ThreeOfMeSchoolSociety'' ''DarthWiki/ThreeOfMeSchoolSociety'' though.
** Pinkie Pie has her Consciences Pinkamena and Suprise, but they only appear briefly in ''Living The Dream''. They have a much larger role in
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* WalkingSpoiler: [[spoiler: The Watcher]].
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** Subverted later on. [[spoiler: It's later revealed that Lance and Twilight have been [[ParentalNeglect neglecting]] her because of a mind block placed on them by Frederic.]]
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* TheHero: Lance Greenfield is the point of view for a majority of the story. He is wiling to help someone in need of course.
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* ReincarnatedAsANonHumanoid: Lance dies on Earth during the rapture and becomes a pony in Equestria.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Over 600k words long and still ongoing.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Over 600k 900k words long and still ongoing.
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* {{Crossover}}: With [[https://fimfetch.net/story/2034/omnius-travels-equestria/1 ''Omnious' Travels: Equestria'']] and ''Fanfic/ThreeOfMeSchoolSociety''.
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* {{Crossover}}: With [[https://fimfetch.net/story/2034/omnius-travels-equestria/1 ''Omnious' Travels: Equestria'']] and ''Fanfic/ThreeOfMeSchoolSociety''.''DarthWiki/ThreeOfMeSchoolSociety''.
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''Living The Dream'' is a ''MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' adventure and slice of life fanfiction written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3292034/kickass222urmom Kickass222urmom]].
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''Living The Dream'' is a ''MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' adventure and slice of life fanfiction written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3292034/kickass222urmom Kickass222urmom]].
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Over 350k words long. If you counted the side stories it would be 400k words.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Over 350k 600k words long. If you counted the side stories it would be 400k words.long and still ongoing.
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* FantasticGhetto: In the new testament timeline bronies are forced to live in decrepit shanty towns such as New Ripman.
* FantasticRacism: Bronies are considered a subhuman menace in the new testament timeline. Bronies are hated, forced to live in decaying ghettos, and are forcefully branded with a capital B. Even having [[OneDropRule one drop]] of brony blood is enough to qualify for such treatment.
* FantasticRacism: Bronies are considered a subhuman menace in the new testament timeline. Bronies are hated, forced to live in decaying ghettos, and are forcefully branded with a capital B. Even having [[OneDropRule one drop]] of brony blood is enough to qualify for such treatment.
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* FantasticGhetto: In the new testament dark timeline bronies are forced to live in decrepit shanty towns such as New Ripman.
* FantasticRacism: Bronies are considered a subhuman menace in thenew testament dark timeline. Bronies are hated, forced to live in decaying ghettos, and are forcefully branded with a capital B. Even having [[OneDropRule one drop]] of brony blood is enough to qualify for such treatment.
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* MarkOfShame: In the new testament timeline bronies are branded with a on their flank.
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* MarkOfShame: In the new testament dark timeline bronies are branded with a on their flank.
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* OneDropRule: In the new testament timeline, anyone who has any human blood in them are considered a brony.
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* OneDropRule: In the new testament dark timeline, anyone who has any human blood in them are considered a brony.
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* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent:
** During the fight with Violent Inferno the perspective suddenly changes to Alexander and Fluttershy.
** After the Final Act, [[spoiler: the story focusses on Scamp and her obsession with ''[[TitleDrop Living The Dream]]'']].
** During the fight with Violent Inferno the perspective suddenly changes to Alexander and Fluttershy.
** After the Final Act, [[spoiler: the story focusses on Scamp and her obsession with ''[[TitleDrop Living The Dream]]'']].
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* MarkOfShame: In the new testament timeline bronies are branded with a on their flank.
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* FantasticGhetto: In the new testament timeline bronies are forced to live in decrepit shanty towns such as New Ripman.
* FantasticRacism: Bronies are considered a subhuman menace in the new testament timeline. Bronies are hated, forced to live in decaying ghettos, and are forcefully branded with a capital B. Even having [[OneDropRule one drop]] of brony blood is enough to qualify for such treatment.
* FantasticRacism: Bronies are considered a subhuman menace in the new testament timeline. Bronies are hated, forced to live in decaying ghettos, and are forcefully branded with a capital B. Even having [[OneDropRule one drop]] of brony blood is enough to qualify for such treatment.
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* OneDropRule: In the new testament timeline, anyone who has any human blood in them are considered a brony.
-->'''Calypso:''' If one of your parents is a Brony, you are labeled as a Brony. Same goes for anyone who has human blood in their family tree. It's why so many ponies avoid getting with Bronies, don't want to doom your kids and their kids.
-->'''Calypso:''' If one of your parents is a Brony, you are labeled as a Brony. Same goes for anyone who has human blood in their family tree. It's why so many ponies avoid getting with Bronies, don't want to doom your kids and their kids.
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* AbsurdPhobia: Lance has a fear of tree frogs because he swallowed one when he was young.
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* AbsurdPhobia: When Lance has was four, a fear of tree frogs because frog crawled down his throat. Since then he swallowed one when he was young. has developed an intense aversion to tree frogs.
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''Living the Dream'' was first uploaded to fanfiction.net on November 25, 2011. The fanfiction ran for two years until the final act on November 8th, 2013. The story would get an epilogue posted three years later on September 1st, 2016. On October 5th, 2022, ''Living The Dream'' has been revived and is currently ongoing.
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''Living the Dream'' was first uploaded to fanfiction.net on November 25, 2011. The fanfiction ran for two years until the final act on November 8th, 2013. The story would get an epilogue posted three years later on September 1st, 2016. On As of October 5th, 2022, ''Living The Dream'' has been revived and is currently ongoing.
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Living The Dream is back?????
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''Living the Dream'' was first uploaded to fanfiction.net on November 25, 2011. The fanfiction ran for two years until the final act on November 8th, 2013. The story would get an epilogue posted three years later on September 1st, 2016.
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''Living the Dream'' was first uploaded to fanfiction.net on November 25, 2011. The fanfiction ran for two years until the final act on November 8th, 2013. The story would get an epilogue posted three years later on September 1st, 2016.
2016. On October 5th, 2022, ''Living The Dream'' has been revived and is currently ongoing.
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* FountainOfYouth: Lance is tricked into rubbing poison joke all over himself and is turned into a child for several chapters.
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* FountainOfYouth: FountainOfYouth:
** In the chapter "Who Am I", Lance is tricked into rubbing poison joke all over himself and is turned into a child for the next severalchapters.chapters.
** In the final act, [[spoiler: Lance is reverted to his seventeen year old self after The Watcher restarted the timeline]].
** In the chapter "Who Am I", Lance is tricked into rubbing poison joke all over himself and is turned into a child for the next several
** In the final act, [[spoiler: Lance is reverted to his seventeen year old self after The Watcher restarted the timeline]].
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* IWillOnlySlowYouDown: When Zorrow is tackled by Pinkie Pie during The Heat, he tells the everyone else to run and immediately regrets it.
-->'''Zorrow:''' Run man, save yourself.
-->'''Lance:''' Thanks dude, I so owe you!
-->'''Zorrow:''' What the fuck! I didn't fucking mean it! Get back here and save me!
-->'''Zorrow:''' Run man, save yourself.
-->'''Lance:''' Thanks dude, I so owe you!
-->'''Zorrow:''' What the fuck! I didn't fucking mean it! Get back here and save me!
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* RememberedICouldFly: Lance is often put into dangerous situations only to remember he could fly. For example, he and Frederic are being chased by a group of enraged monkeys, only facehoof and fly away.
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* RememberedICouldFly: Lance is often put into dangerous situations only to remember he could can fly. For example, he and Frederic are being chased by a group of enraged monkeys, only to facehoof and fly away.
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* RememberedICouldFly: Lance is often put into dangerous situations only to remember he could fly. For example, he and Frederic are being chased by a group of enraged monkeys, only facehoof and fly away.
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* SecretIdentity:
** Averted. Most of the bronies are introduced with their pony name to hide that they are human, but in most cases they get quickly dropped in favor of their human names.
** Played straight with Shadow Breeze and Vinetion.
** Averted. Most of the bronies are introduced with their pony name to hide that they are human, but in most cases they get quickly dropped in favor of their human names.
** Played straight with Shadow Breeze and Vinetion.
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* SecretIdentity:
**SecretIdentity: Averted. Most of the bronies are introduced with their pony name to hide that they are human, but in most cases they get quickly dropped in favor of their human names. \n** Played straight with Shadow Breeze and Vinetion.
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* SatelliteLoveInterest: With the exception of Twilight, the bronie's love interests are rarely show doing anything of note.
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* MessianicArchetype: Lance Greenfield is the Equestrian equivalent of Jesus. He easily forgives those for their wrongdoings and befriends them. He He was hated at first because of his appearance, before becoming a well known hero. To top it off Lance has been killed and revived several times, even [[spoiler: becoming one of [[AngelicTransformation God's angels]] after sacrificing himself]].
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* MessianicArchetype: Lance Greenfield is the Equestrian equivalent of Jesus. He easily forgives those for their wrongdoings and befriends them. He has a group of loyal companions in the bronies. He was hated at first because of his appearance, before becoming a well known respected hero. To top it off off, Lance has been killed and revived several times, even [[spoiler: becoming one of [[AngelicTransformation God's angels]] after sacrificing himself]].
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* MessianicArchetype: Lance Greenfield is the Equestrian equivalent of Jesus. He easily forgives those for their wrongdoings and befriends them. He He was hated at first because of his appearance, before becoming a well known hero. To top it off Lance has been killed and revived several times, even [[spoiler: becoming one of [[AngelicTransformation God's angels]] after sacrificing himself]].
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* MeaningfulName:
** Greg's pony name, Mellow Haze, is quite fitting with his [[TheStoner stoner habits]].
** Likewise, Greg's stoner dog is named Weedy.
** The physical manifestation of evil is referred to as The Nightmare.
** Greg's pony name, Mellow Haze, is quite fitting with his [[TheStoner stoner habits]].
** Likewise, Greg's stoner dog is named Weedy.
** The physical manifestation of evil is referred to as The Nightmare.
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* NonindicativeName: Little Fawn is a pony, not a deer.
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** Lance forgives Rainbow Dash even after she tried to [[AttemptedRape rape]] him and tried to destroy his journal. He even forgave her after she accidentally killing him while she was trying to poison Twilight. The worst part is after Lance forgives her she tries to [[CrossesThelineTwice rape]] him again.
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** Lance forgives Rainbow Dash even after she tried to [[AttemptedRape rape]] him and tried to destroy his journal. He even forgave her after she accidentally killing killed him while she was trying to poison Twilight. The worst part is after Lance forgives her she tries to [[CrossesThelineTwice rape]] him again.