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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16916052/chapters/39743268 live to see the end of the world]] by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/lightningb0nes/pseuds/lightningb0nes godmarked]] is a ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' AlternateUniverse Fanfic.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16916052/chapters/39743268 live to see the end of the world]] by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/lightningb0nes/pseuds/lightningb0nes godmarked]] is a ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' ''Literature/SwordArtOnline'' AlternateUniverse Fanfic.
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-->'''Kirito''': [[spoiler: I swear, I tried to save them.]]
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-->'''Kirito''': [[spoiler: I swear, I tried to save them.]]
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'''Keita''': [[spoiler: YOU SHOULD HAVE TRIED HARDER!]]
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* StepfordSmiler: SingleAttemptGame: It uses the same premise as its source material, that "players die when their avatars do", in ''Sword Art Online''.
* StpfordSmiler: Asuna keeps her smile on most of the time, even when she's furious.
* StpfordSmiler: Asuna keeps her smile on most of the time, even when she's furious.
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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehaviour: Silica is only 13, but she's already an incredibly experienced fighter, and she curses like a sailor until Kirito steps in.in.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16916052/chapters/39743268 live to see the end of the world]] by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/lightningb0nes/pseuds/lightningb0nes lightningb0nes]] is a ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' AlternateUniverse Fanfic.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16916052/chapters/39743268 live to see the end of the world]] by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/lightningb0nes/pseuds/lightningb0nes lightningb0nes]] godmarked]] is a ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' AlternateUniverse Fanfic.
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** StepfordSmiler: Asuna keeps her smile on most of the time, even when she's furious.
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* AbusiveParents: It's heavily implied throughout the fic that [[spoiler: Asuna's father, alongside Kirito and Suguha's Grandfather,]] are abusive verbally and physically.
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** [[spoiler: Asuna, upon Kirito's apparent death in Chapter 16.]]
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** NiceGuy: Despite putting on the appearance of a rugged badass, Kirito is a self-described "sucker for people in need" who just wants to help people escape from the game.
*NervesOfSteel: Downplayed. Due to most of the main cast being accustomed to fighting terrifying monsters, it takes quite a bit to scare them.
* RunningGag: Kirito just [[spoiler: keeps getting stabbed, mostly by Asuna.]]
** StepfordSmiler: Asuna keeps her smile on most of the time, even when she's furious.
* TheStoic: Kirito, but it's just to hide his soft and squishy interior.
* TroublingUnchildlikeBehaviour: Silica is only 13, but she's already an incredibly experienced fighter, and she curses like a sailor until Kirito steps in.
*NervesOfSteel: Downplayed. Due to most of the main cast being accustomed to fighting terrifying monsters, it takes quite a bit to scare them.
* RunningGag: Kirito just [[spoiler: keeps getting stabbed, mostly by Asuna.]]
** StepfordSmiler: Asuna keeps her smile on most of the time, even when she's furious.
* TheStoic: Kirito, but it's just to hide his soft and squishy interior.
* TroublingUnchildlikeBehaviour: Silica is only 13, but she's already an incredibly experienced fighter, and she curses like a sailor until Kirito steps in.
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* HeroicBSOD: HeroicBSOD:
** Downplayed with Kirito in Chapter 4, after [[spoiler: the entirety of his guild dies.]]
** [[spoiler: Asuna, upon Kirito's apparent death in Chapter 16.]]
** Downplayed with Kirito in Chapter 4, after [[spoiler: the entirety of his guild dies.]]
** [[spoiler: Asuna, upon Kirito's apparent death in Chapter 16.]]
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* Heroicbsod: [[spoiler: Asuna, upon Kirito's apparent death in Chapter 16.]]
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* HeroicBSoD: Heroicbsod: [[spoiler: Asuna, upon Kirito's apparent death in Chapter 16.]]
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* ArmorPiercingResponse: Keita to Kirito, in Chapter 4.
-->'''Kirito''': [[spoiler: I swear, I tried to save them.]]
-->'''Keita''': [[spoiler: YOU SHOULD HAVE TRIED HARDER!]]
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-->'''Asuna''': [[spoiler: Do tell, Kirito-kun, are you in love? Do they love you back?]]back?]]
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** Threatening Silica or Suguha in front of Kirito.
** Reminding Kirito of the Black Cat's deaths
*BigBrotherInstinct: Kirito just can't help himself from adopting every girl who reminds him of Suguha.
*HeroicBSoD: [[spoiler: Asuna, upon Kirito's apparent death in Chapter 16.]]
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** Threatening Silica or Suguha in front of Kirito.
** Reminding Kirito of the Black Cat's deaths
*BigBrotherInstinct: Kirito just can't help himself from adopting every girl who reminds him of Suguha.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Kirito to Wren, in Chapter Eight.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Kirito Asuna to Wren, Kirito, in Chapter Eight.
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-->'''Asuna''': [[spoiler:What sort of monster did Do tell, Kirito-kun, are you make me, Wren?]]in love? Do they love you back?]]
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* AdaptationExpansion: Due to the fact that the author isn't confined by short episode or seasons, most arcs take several chapters to cover, and several characters and settings that are glossed over in canon are explored.
*ArmorPiercingQuestion: Kirito to Wren, in Chapter Eight.
-->'''Kirito:''' [[spoiler: What sort of monster did you make me, Wren?]]
* AdaptationExpansion: Due to the fact that the author isn't confined by short episode or seasons, most arcs take several chapters to cover, and several characters and settings that are glossed over in canon are explored.
*ArmorPiercingQuestion: Kirito to Wren, in Chapter Eight.
-->'''Kirito:''' [[spoiler: What sort of monster did you make me, Wren?]]
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He is terribly, apocalyptically, indescribably wrong.
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He is terribly, apocalyptically, indescribably wrong.wrong.
[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16916052/chapters/39743268 live to see the end of the world]] by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/lightningb0nes/pseuds/lightningb0nes lightningb0nes]] is a ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' AlternateUniverse Fanfic.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16916052/chapters/39743268 live to see the end of the world]] by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/lightningb0nes/pseuds/lightningb0nes lightningb0nes]] is a ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' AlternateUniverse Fanfic.
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An OriginalFlavor ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' fanfiction created by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/lightningb0nes/pseuds/lightningb0nes lightningb0nes]]. It may be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16916052/chapters/39743268 here]].
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---> Kirito, to Rosalia & Wren
Kirigaya Kazuto has always felt like he's been waiting for something. When the full version of Sword Art Online is released, he thinks it may
He is terribly, apocalyptically, indescribably wrong.
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An OriginalFlavor ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' fanfiction created by lightningb0nes. It may be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16916052/chapters/39743268 here]].
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An OriginalFlavor ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' fanfiction created by lightningb0nes.[[https://archiveofourown.org/users/lightningb0nes/pseuds/lightningb0nes lightningb0nes]]. It may be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16916052/chapters/39743268 here]].
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An OriginalFlavor ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' fanfiction created by lightningb0nes. It may be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16916052/chapters/39743268]].org/works/16916052/chapters/39743268 here]].
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An [Original Flavor](https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/OriginalFlavour?from=Main.OriginalFlavor) [Sword Art Online](https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/LightNovel/SwordArtOnline) fanfiction created by lightningb0nes. It can be found [here](https://archiveofourown.org/works/16916052/chapters/39743268).
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An [Original Flavor](https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/OriginalFlavour?from=Main.OriginalFlavor) [Sword Art Online](https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/LightNovel/SwordArtOnline) OriginalFlavor ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' fanfiction created by lightningb0nes. It can may be found [here](https://archiveofourown.org/works/16916052/chapters/39743268).[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16916052/chapters/39743268]].
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* Live to See the End of The World* is an [Original Flavor](https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/OriginalFlavour?from=Main.OriginalFlavor) [Sword Art Online](https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/LightNovel/SwordArtOnline) Fanfiction created by lightningb0nes. It can be found [here](https://archiveofourown.org/works/16916052/chapters/39743268).
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*Live to See the End of The World* is an [Original Flavor](https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/OriginalFlavour?from=Main.OriginalFlavor) [Sword Art Online](https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/LightNovel/SwordArtOnline) Fanfiction created by lightningb0nes. It can be found [here](https://archiveofourown.org/works/16916052/chapters/39743268).
