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* {{Defictionalization}}: Fluttershy's lullaby in Chapter 11 has been recorded by a fan and can be found [[http://mylittleremix.com/viewtopic.php?f=17&t=288 here.]]
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Deleting Aerith And Bob as the trope explictly does not apply when used diliberatley to represent differing cultures.
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* AerithAndBob: Justified; different cultures have different styles of naming.
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** This is eventually explained as [[spoiler:a side-effect of the potency of her powers: the more magical ability one has, the worse the ravages of Horn Rot can become. Indeed, Zecora's prediction ends up being almost too long]].
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** This is eventually explained as [[spoiler:a side-effect of the potency of her powers: the more magical ability one has, the worse the ravages of Horn Rot can become. Indeed, Zecora's prediction ends up being almost too long]].long]].
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Finally has a proper sequel, ''Besides the Will of Evil'', which can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/183040/besides-the-will-of-evil here]].
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Finally has a proper sequel, ''Besides the Will of Evil'', ''FanFic/BesidesTheWillOfEvil'', which can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/183040/besides-the-will-of-evil here]].
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A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic by [=Jetfire=], ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/182859/its-a-dangerous-business-going-out-your-door It's a Dangerous Business, Going Out Your Door]]'' fleshes out the lands beyond Ponyville with a grand tale of adventure, rife with CharacterDevelopment, particularly for its three heroines. A short fluffy informal sequel by the same author can be read [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/08/story-day-for-spike-and-twilight.html here.]]
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A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic by [=Jetfire=], ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/182859/its-a-dangerous-business-going-out-your-door ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7477382/1/It-s-a-dangerous-business-going-out-your-door It's a Dangerous Business, Going Out Your Door]]'' fleshes out the lands beyond Ponyville with a grand tale of adventure, rife with CharacterDevelopment, particularly for its three heroines. A short fluffy informal sequel by the same author can be read [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/08/story-day-for-spike-and-twilight.html here.]]
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** A reader from the story's comments section did the math, and concluded that [[spoiler: the World Snake is the size of [[http://electioninfo.files.wordpress.com/2010/03/guam2.jpg Guam.]]]]
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** A reader from the story's comments section did the math, and concluded that [[spoiler: the World Snake is the size of [[http://electioninfo.''[[http://electioninfo.files.wordpress.com/2010/03/guam2.jpg Guam.]]]]]]'']]
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** [[spoiler: Ironically, she's reluctant to go ahead when the date actually comes]].
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A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic by [=Jetfire=], ''[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/its-dangerous-business-going-out-your.html It's a Dangerous Business, Going Out Your Door]]'' fleshes out the lands beyond Ponyville with a grand tale of adventure, rife with CharacterDevelopment, particularly for its three heroines. A short fluffy informal sequel by the same author can be read [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/08/story-day-for-spike-and-twilight.html here.]]
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A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic by [=Jetfire=], ''[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/its-dangerous-business-going-out-your.html fimfiction.net/story/182859/its-a-dangerous-business-going-out-your-door It's a Dangerous Business, Going Out Your Door]]'' fleshes out the lands beyond Ponyville with a grand tale of adventure, rife with CharacterDevelopment, particularly for its three heroines. A short fluffy informal sequel by the same author can be read [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/08/story-day-for-spike-and-twilight.html here.]]
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Finally has a proper sequel, ''Besides the Will of Evil'', which can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/183040/besides-the-will-of-evil here]].
Finally has a proper sequel, ''Besides the Will of Evil'', which can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/183040/besides-the-will-of-evil here]].
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A Plot Hole is when something happens that isn\'t explained. The World snake\'s lack of resolution is more accuratly Left Hanging or possibly What Happened To The Mouse.
* LeftHanging: [[spoiler: Whatever happened to the World Snake?]]
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* PlotHole: [[spoiler: Whatever happened to the World Snake?]]
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* PlotDetour: Applejack is extremely worried about this, to the point that she [[WhatTheHellHero calls Rainbow Dash]] on wanting to learn more about the Pronghorns and, in Chapter 14, [[spoiler:attempts to convince Dash to go on without her and Rarity to grab the Beneviolet. Luckily, she doesn't. If she had, the mission would have failed and Twilight would have died, either by picking the wrong Beneviolet or death by World Snake.]]
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* PlotDetour: Applejack is extremely worried about this, to the point that she [[WhatTheHellHero calls Rainbow Dash]] on wanting to learn more about the Pronghorns and, in Chapter 14, [[spoiler:attempts to convince Dash to go on without her and Rarity to grab the Beneviolet. Luckily, she doesn't. If she had, the mission would have failed and Twilight would have died, either by picking the wrong Beneviolet or death Rainbow being killed by the World Snake.]]
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* CaptainErsatz: Gildedale is seen by a lot of fans as a pony version of [[TheLordOfTheRings Rohan]].
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* CaptainErsatz: Gildedale is seen by a lot of fans as a pony version of [[TheLordOfTheRings [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings Rohan]].
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* HighConcept: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic meets LordOfTheRings.
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* HighConcept: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic meets LordOfTheRings.Literature/LordOfTheRings.
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* ShoutOut: The title is one (of ''many'') to ''TheLordOfTheRings''.
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* ShoutOut: The title is one (of ''many'') to ''TheLordOfTheRings''.''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''.
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* XMeetsY: ''MLP:[=FiM=]'' as written by [[TheLordOfTheRings Tolkien]].
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* XMeetsY: ''MLP:[=FiM=]'' as written by [[TheLordOfTheRings [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings Tolkien]].
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** In fact, the deer in general are Tolkein's elves with the serial numbers filed off, even by admission of the story's fans.
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** In fact, the deer in general are Tolkein's Tolkien's elves with the serial numbers filed off, even by admission of the story's fans.
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* SharedUniverse: An author named Solaris90 is using this work as part of the back story for his [[Fanfic/KnightsofEquestria "Knights of Equestria"]] series.
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* SharedUniverse: An author named Solaris90 is using this work as part of the back story for his [[Fanfic/KnightsofEquestria [[Fanfic/KnightsOfEquestria "Knights of Equestria"]] series.
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** In chapter 3, Pinkie Pie worries about the monsters Rainbow Dash could meet beyond Equestria's borders. Unfortunately for Applejack and company, one of them turns out to be real: [[spoiler: a world snake.]]
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** In chapter 3, Pinkie Pie worries about the monsters Rainbow Dash could meet beyond Equestria's borders. Unfortunately for Applejack and company, one of them turns out to be real: [[spoiler: a world snake.World Snake.]]
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* PlotHole: [[spoiler: Whatever happened to the World Serpent?]]
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* PlotHole: [[spoiler: Whatever happened to the World Serpent?]]Snake?]]
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: The Earth Ponies of Gildedale have darker coats, rather than the pastels of Ponyville.
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: ColorCodedCharacters: The Earth Ponies of Gildedale have darker coats, rather than the pastels of Ponyville.
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It started so ''simply'', on what should have been a wonderful Plowpony's Day... Twilight Sparkle was just trying to help her friend Rarity learn how to teleport. But when an attempt to demonstrate goes horribly wrong, Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Rarity set out to find a way to fix her damaged horn before she runs out of time. But their quest will take them out of Equestria, forcing them to face the elements, the unknown, and their own demons and self-doubt along the way.
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It started so ''simply'', on what should have been a wonderful Plowpony's Day... Twilight Day…Twilight Sparkle was just trying to help her friend Rarity learn how to teleport. But when an attempt to demonstrate goes horribly wrong, Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Rarity set out to find a way to fix her damaged horn before she runs out of time. But their quest will take them out of Equestria, forcing them to face the elements, the unknown, and their own demons and self-doubt along the way.
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** And everything the girls learn-- Applejack learning to Stand Firm from the earth ponies of Gildedale, Rainbow Dash learning to control lightning from the pronghorns, Rarity learning how to teleport from the deer--comes in handy during the confrontation with [[spoiler: the World Snake]] in Chapter 18. Basically, had ''anything'' gone differently, Twilight would have been toast.
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** And everything the girls learn-- learn -- Applejack learning to Stand Firm from the earth ponies of Gildedale, Rainbow Dash learning to control lightning from the pronghorns, Rarity learning how to teleport from the deer--comes in handy during the confrontation with [[spoiler: the World Snake]] in Chapter 18. Basically, had ''anything'' gone differently, Twilight would have been toast.
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: The earth ponies of Gildedale have darker coats, rather than the pastels of Ponyville.
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* CultureClash: Gildedale is a ''FAR'' cry from what the heroines are used to in Ponyville...
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* FantasticRacism: Gildedale, an Earth Pony country, looks down upon pegasi and unicorns and scorns their magic. Naturally, this causes tension when they discover Dash and Rarity's presence in their land...
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* FantasticRacism: Gildedale, an Earth Pony country, looks down upon pegasi Pegasi and unicorns Unicorns and scorns their magic. Naturally, this causes tension when they discover Dash and Rarity's presence in their land...land…
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** Early on, Rainbow Dash mentions that pegasi don't get cold. Turns out [[spoiler:her mentor Firefly was the exact opposite -- she never got ''hot'', but struggled with the cold]].
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** Early on, Rainbow Dash mentions that pegasi Pegasi don't get cold. Turns out [[spoiler:her mentor Firefly was the exact opposite -- she never got ''hot'', but struggled with the cold]].
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* [[GrammarNazi Grammar Nightmare]]: Rarity gets irritated when Rainbow Dash refers to her race as 'pegasuses' instead of 'pegasi'.
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* {{Precursors}}: In ancient times, the Deer were the dominiant race, but grew too proud and all but destroyed themselves in a vast, sprawling war. While pockets survive, such as the denizens of the Shimmerwood, they can no longer rise to their former glory, nor do they wish to.
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* {{Precursors}}: In ancient times, the Deer were the dominiant dominant race, but grew too proud and all but destroyed themselves in a vast, sprawling war. While pockets survive, such as the denizens of the Shimmerwood, they can no longer rise to their former glory, nor do they wish to.
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* TheResenter: Rainbow Dash resents having to take Applejack and Rarity along, believing they'll only slow her down -- without them, she just KNOWS she could've made the trip in two days flat! Worried about running out of time, she vows to herself that if they haven't found the Beneviolet after ten days, she'll go on ahead without them...
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* TheResenter: Rainbow Dash resents having to take Applejack and Rarity along, believing they'll only slow her down -- without them, she just KNOWS she could've made the trip in two days flat! Worried about running out of time, she vows to herself that if they haven't found the Beneviolet after ten days, she'll go on ahead without them...them…
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** Lady Falalauria of the Deerfolk. [[spoiler:Though what she ''doesn't'' do is also important, given how she was weighing the lives of our heroines versus the ''potential'' tragedy they could cause in the course of their journey...]]
* RuleOfEmpathy: Despite their distaste for pegasi and unicorns, several members of the Dale Guard clearly sympathize with their plight.
* RuleOfEmpathy: Despite their distaste for pegasi and unicorns, several members of the Dale Guard clearly sympathize with their plight.
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** Lady Falalauria of the Deerfolk. [[spoiler:Though what she ''doesn't'' do is also important, given how she was weighing the lives of our heroines versus the ''potential'' tragedy they could cause in the course of their journey...]]
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* RunningGag: Rainbow Dash being corrected on her pluralization of 'pegasus'.
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* UndyingLoyalty: Rainbow Dash, of course, due to her Element of Loyalty. However, Lady Falalauria tells her that she can inspire that same loyalty in other ponies toward their own causes...[[CharmPerson or towards her own causes, if she so chooses.]]
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* UndyingLoyalty: Rainbow Dash, of course, due to her Element of Loyalty. However, Lady Falalauria tells her that she can inspire that same loyalty in other ponies toward their own causes...[[CharmPerson causes…[[CharmPerson or towards her own causes, if she so chooses.]]
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* RideTheLightning: The Pronghorns teach Rainbow Dash this skill. The Sonic Rainboom means she can travel at the speed of sound. Her new lightning ability means she scan travel ''at the speed of light.''
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** In fact, the deer in general are Tolkein's elves with the serial numbers filed off, even by admission of the story's fans.
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* CallForward: Lady Falalauria's parting words to the trio asks them [[spoiler:not to be too disappointed by what happens at the Gala]], much to their confusion.
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* CallForward: Lady Falalauria's parting words to the trio asks them [[spoiler:not to be too disappointed by what happens at the Gala]], [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E26TheBestNightEver Gala]]]], much to their confusion.
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* UndyingLoyalty: Rainbow Dash, of course, due to her Element of Loyalty. However, Lady Falalauria tells her that she can inspire that same loyalty in other ponies toward their own causes...[[CharmPerson or towards her own causes, if she so chooses.]]
-->'''Falalauria''': The Element of Loyalty grants those aligned with it the gift of inspiration and strengthening.
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Inspiration? You mean I give them ideas?
-->'''Falalauria''': After a fashion. Because you are so loyal to your friends, your home, and the causes you believe in, you can inspire others to feel the same degree of loyalty to their own causes- or to your causes, or any cause you choose. Moreover, you can inspire them to move forward in the face of daunting challenges. If their courage is failing, you can restore it. If their strength leaves them, you can help them find more. If their spirits are broken, you can mend them. I suppose a better way of putting it is that the Element of Loyalty grants those aligned with it powers of leadership.
-->'''Falalauria''': The Element of Loyalty grants those aligned with it the gift of inspiration and strengthening.
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Inspiration? You mean I give them ideas?
-->'''Falalauria''': After a fashion. Because you are so loyal to your friends, your home, and the causes you believe in, you can inspire others to feel the same degree of loyalty to their own causes- or to your causes, or any cause you choose. Moreover, you can inspire them to move forward in the face of daunting challenges. If their courage is failing, you can restore it. If their strength leaves them, you can help them find more. If their spirits are broken, you can mend them. I suppose a better way of putting it is that the Element of Loyalty grants those aligned with it powers of leadership.
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*** Even better, her mentor [[spoiler:who had also been taught by the pronghorns]] was called ''Series/{{Firefly}}''.
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*** Even better, her mentor [[spoiler:who had also been taught by the pronghorns]] was called ''Series/{{Firefly}}''. Though this may just be a coincidence, given that her mentor is an expy of a past-gen pony by that name.
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** At the same time, Fluttershy is stepping up to fill the void for the other half of their {{Nakama}} in her absence.
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** At the same time, Fluttershy is stepping up to fill the void for the other half of their {{Nakama}} TrueCompanions in her absence.
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* TemptingFate: With their goal practically in sight, AJ, Dash, and Rarity comment that they have not seen any of the strange creatures Pinkie was gushing about at the beginning of it all. You'd think they'd know better.
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: The roving Dale Guard fight by dividing their force into three distinct battle lines, use a recognizable standard as a rallying point, and refer to their formation as a "century." They're basically the early Roman Legions, but in pony form.
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-->'''Rarity:''' '''I! Am! A! Fashion! Designer!'''
** She has another epic one at the beginning of chapter 18.
-->'''Rarity:''' '''I! Am! A! Fashion! Designer!'''
** She has another epic one at the beginning of chapter 18.
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-->'''Rarity:''' '''I! Am! A! Fashion! Designer!'''
** She has another epic one at the beginning of chapter 18.
-->'''Rarity:''' '''I! Am! A! Fashion! Designer!'''
** She has another epic one at the beginning of chapter 18.
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*** Even better, [[spoiler:her mentor who had also been taught by the pronghorns]] was called ''Series/{{Firefly}}''.
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*** Even better, [[spoiler:her her mentor who [[spoiler:who had also been taught by the pronghorns]] was called ''Series/{{Firefly}}''.
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*** Even better, [[spoiler:her mentor who had also been taught by the pronghorns]] was called ''Series/{{Firefly}}''.
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** In fact, in Chapter 14 one of the characters [[FridgeLogic wonders]] why the Pronghorns didn't stop by Gildedale what with it being so close to Equestria, and it's suggested Celestia wants to deliver the news herself as a professional courtesy.
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** In fact, in Chapter 14 one of the characters [[FridgeLogic wonders]] [[invoked]] why the Pronghorns didn't stop by Gildedale what with it being so close to Equestria, and it's suggested Celestia wants to deliver the news herself as a professional courtesy.
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** Similarly, Falalauria has a lot of parallels to Galadriel, in particular her noble beauty and one very brief, [[AccidentalNightmareFuel very terrifying]] moment that reveals a darker side of her.
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** Similarly, Falalauria has a lot of parallels to Galadriel, in particular her noble beauty and one very brief, [[AccidentalNightmareFuel very terrifying]] terrifying moment that reveals a darker side of her.