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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9195768/1/How-To-Survive-In-Middle-Earth-When-You-re-A-Teenaged-Girl How to Survive in Middle Earth When You're a Teenaged Girl]]'', by Peppery Mints, dumps a modern girl into the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. It happens by accident, when Priscilla of Texas falls down a well. This is one of the more realistic stories in its genre, as Priscilla deals with the LanguageBarrier, homesickness, and being a FishOutOfTemporalWater.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9195768/1/How-To-Survive-In-Middle-Earth-When-You-re-A-Teenaged-Girl How to Survive in Middle Earth When You're a Teenaged Girl]]'', by Peppery Mints, dumps a modern girl into the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. It happens by accident, when Priscilla of Texas falls down a well. This is one of the more realistic stories in its genre, as Priscilla deals with the LanguageBarrier, homesickness, and being a FishOutOfTemporalWater.
FishOutOfTemporalWater. [[DeadFic It was last updated in August 2014]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9195768/1/How-To-Survive-In-Middle-Earth-When-You-re-A-Teenaged-Girl How To Survive In Middle Earth When You're A Teenaged Girl]]'', by Peppery Mints, dumps a modern girl into the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. It happens by accident, when Priscilla of Texas falls down a well. This is one of the more realistic stories in its genre, as Priscilla deals with the LanguageBarrier, homesickness, and being a FishOutOfTemporalWater.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9195768/1/How-To-Survive-In-Middle-Earth-When-You-re-A-Teenaged-Girl How To to Survive In in Middle Earth When You're A a Teenaged Girl]]'', by Peppery Mints, dumps a modern girl into the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. It happens by accident, when Priscilla of Texas falls down a well. This is one of the more realistic stories in its genre, as Priscilla deals with the LanguageBarrier, homesickness, and being a FishOutOfTemporalWater.
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* CallBack: In "Doodles" chapter 2, Elrohir calls back to the main story, book 1, chapter 14. From his own memory, Elrohir repeats his lesson to Priscilla. He says the same lines and makes the same motions.
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* CallBack: In "Doodles" chapter 2, Elrohir calls back to the main story, book 1, chapter 14. From his own memory, Elrohir repeats his lesson to Priscilla. He says the same lines and makes the same motions. Priscilla says, "You remembered."
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Peppery Mints also wrote [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10185221/1/Doodles-In-The-Margin "Doodles In The Margin"]] as side material.
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* BonusMaterial: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10185221/1/Doodles-In-The-Margin "Doodles In The Margin"]] contain alternate events that fit not into the main story.
* HidingBehindTheLanguageBarrier: For a moment in chapter 13, Priscilla speaks English to prove that she is a foreigner. The characters of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings'' have no knowledge of English.
* HidingBehindTheLanguageBarrier: For a moment in chapter 13, Priscilla speaks English to prove that she is a foreigner. The characters of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings'' have no knowledge of English.
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* BonusMaterial: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10185221/1/Doodles-In-The-Margin "Doodles In The Margin"]] contain alternate events that fit not into the main story.
story. The main story is already an AlternateUniverseFic, so these doodles are alternate universes of an alternate universe.
* CallBack: In "Doodles" chapter 2, Elrohir calls back to the main story, book 1, chapter 14. From his own memory, Elrohir repeats his lesson to Priscilla. He says the same lines and makes the same motions.
* HidingBehindTheLanguageBarrier: For a moment in book 1, chapter 13, Priscilla speaks English to prove that she is a foreigner. The characters of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings'' have no knowledge of English.
* CallBack: In "Doodles" chapter 2, Elrohir calls back to the main story, book 1, chapter 14. From his own memory, Elrohir repeats his lesson to Priscilla. He says the same lines and makes the same motions.
* HidingBehindTheLanguageBarrier: For a moment in book 1, chapter 13, Priscilla speaks English to prove that she is a foreigner. The characters of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings'' have no knowledge of English.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9195768/1/How-To-Survive-In-Middle-Earth-When-You-re-A-Teenaged-Girl How To Survive In Middle Earth When You're A Teenaged Girl]]'', by Peppery Mints, dumps a modern girl into the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. It happens by accident, when Priscilla of Texas falls down a well. This is one of the more realistic stories in its genre, as Priscilla deals with the LanguageBarrier, homesickness, and being a FishOutOfWater.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9195768/1/How-To-Survive-In-Middle-Earth-When-You-re-A-Teenaged-Girl How To Survive In Middle Earth When You're A Teenaged Girl]]'', by Peppery Mints, dumps a modern girl into the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. It happens by accident, when Priscilla of Texas falls down a well. This is one of the more realistic stories in its genre, as Priscilla deals with the LanguageBarrier, homesickness, and being a FishOutOfWater.
FishOutOfTemporalWater.
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* BonusMaterial: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10185221/1/Doodles-In-The-Margin "Doodles In The Margin"]] contain alternate events that fit not into the main story.
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* OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent: Priscilla is the "Teenaged Girl" from a cattle ranch near Magnolia, Texas. The story did not show Priscilla in school, but it was summer, when most schools have summer break.
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* OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent: Priscilla is the "Teenaged Girl" of seventeen years from a cattle ranch near Magnolia, Texas. The story did not show Priscilla in school, but it was summer, when most schools have summer break.
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--> ''"I'm from a different world, y'all," I said flatly. "If you don't like it, that sucks for you. I'm also the only person who knows right now that everything's going ''wrong'', and I'm the only person who can ''fix it''. So you better start liking me real quick before I decide I've had enough and go off on my own."''
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--> ''"I'm "I'm from a different world, y'all," I said flatly. "If you don't like it, that sucks for you. I'm also the only person who knows right now that everything's going ''wrong'', and I'm the only person who can ''fix it''. So you better start liking me real quick before I decide I've had enough and go off on my own."''"
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* OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent: Priscilla, Priscilla is the "Teenaged Girl" from Texas.a cattle ranch near Magnolia, Texas. The story did not show Priscilla in school, but it was summer, when most schools have summer break.
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* HidingBehindTheLanguageBarrier: Priscilla speaks English to prove that she is a foreigner. "I'm from a different world, y'all," she says flatly. The characters of ''The Lord of the Rings'' speak no English. Priscilla rants about her own importance, and concludes, "So you better start liking me real quick before I decide I've had enough and go off on my own."
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* HidingBehindTheLanguageBarrier: For a moment in chapter 13, Priscilla speaks English to prove that she is a foreigner. "I'm The characters of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings'' have no knowledge of English.
--> ''"I'm from a different world, y'all,"she says I said flatly. The characters of ''The Lord of "If you don't like it, that sucks for you. I'm also the Rings'' speak no English. Priscilla rants about her own importance, only person who knows right now that everything's going ''wrong'', and concludes, "So I'm the only person who can ''fix it''. So you better start liking me real quick before I decide I've had enough and go off on my own.""''
--> ''"I'm from a different world, y'all,"
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* HidingBehindTheLanguageBarrier: Priscilla speaks English to prove that she is a foreigner. "I'm from a different world, y'all," she says flatly. The characters of ''The Lord of the Rings'' speak no English. Priscilla rants about her own importance, and concludes, "So you better start liking me real quick before I decide I've had enough and go off on my own."
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9195768/1/How-To-Survive-In-Middle-Earth-When-You-re-A-Teenaged-Girl How To Survive In Middle Earth When You're A Teenaged Girl]]'', by Pepper Mints, dumps a modern girl into the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. It happens by accident, when Priscilla of Texas falls down a well. This is one of the more realistic stories in its genre, as Priscilla deals with the LanguageBarrier, homesickness, and being a FishOutOfWater.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9195768/1/How-To-Survive-In-Middle-Earth-When-You-re-A-Teenaged-Girl How To Survive In Middle Earth When You're A Teenaged Girl]]'', by Pepper Peppery Mints, dumps a modern girl into the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. It happens by accident, when Priscilla of Texas falls down a well. This is one of the more realistic stories in its genre, as Priscilla deals with the LanguageBarrier, homesickness, and being a FishOutOfWater.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Priscilla Henders changes her name to Cilla, so others can say it. Priscilla is from Texas, and her name is foreign to Middle-earth.
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* SoftWater: When Priscilla falls down the well, and enters another world, she splashes down somewhere in Middle-earth. "From that height, I should have spontaneously flattened against the surface of the river, thin as a pancake, and then slowly disintegrated." She survived, but not without pain.
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->'' '''Rule #1:''' Don't fall there in the first place. It sucks here. Every day, it'll feel like your heart is getting torn out of your chest and stomped on because you miss your family. Not to mention the food is bad.''
-->--'''Priscilla''', chapter 13
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9195768/1/How-To-Survive-In-Middle-Earth-When-You-re-A-Teenaged-Girl How To Survive In Middle Earth When You're A Teenaged Girl]]'', by Pepper Mints, dumps a modern girl into the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. It happens by accident, when Priscilla of Texas falls down a well. This is one of the more realistic stories in its genre, as Priscilla deals with the LanguageBarrier, homesickness, and being a FishOutOfWater.
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* LanguageBarrier: Peppery Mints is one of the few authors to remember that [[CommonTongue Westron]] is not English. When Priscilla arrives in Middle-earth, she cannot talk to anyone.
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* OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent: Priscilla, the "Teenaged Girl" from Texas.
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: Priscilla, girl from Texas, falls into Middle-earth.
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-->--'''Priscilla''', chapter 13
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9195768/1/How-To-Survive-In-Middle-Earth-When-You-re-A-Teenaged-Girl How To Survive In Middle Earth When You're A Teenaged Girl]]'', by Pepper Mints, dumps a modern girl into the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. It happens by accident, when Priscilla of Texas falls down a well. This is one of the more realistic stories in its genre, as Priscilla deals with the LanguageBarrier, homesickness, and being a FishOutOfWater.
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%%* AlternateUniverseFic
%%* InSeriesNickname
* LanguageBarrier: Peppery Mints is one of the few authors to remember that [[CommonTongue Westron]] is not English. When Priscilla arrives in Middle-earth, she cannot talk to anyone.
%%* MundaneLuxury
* OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent: Priscilla, the "Teenaged Girl" from Texas.
%%* SailorEarth
%%* SoftWater
* TrappedInAnotherWorld: Priscilla, girl from Texas, falls into Middle-earth.
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