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* ShoutOut: King DeDeDe and Rick have their Southern and Australian accents from the dub of ''Anime/KirbyRightBackAtYa''.
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* ShoutOut: King DeDeDe and Rick have their Southern and Australian accents from the dub of ''Anime/KirbyRightBackAtYa''.
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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: The fic begins with this line: ''The world was falling apart. Buildings were flying, animals were running for their lives, and Kirby was in a desperate race against time to stop Planet Popstar and everything on it from being annihilated. In short, the usual climax to one of his adventures''.
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* OddFriendship: Cold, somewhat detached GeniusBruiser Susie forms a strong bond with KindheartedSimpleton Gooey.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: When Kirby questions how the other Star Allies knew about what was going on, the others point out that it wasn't hard to miss the giant portal getting opened up by Fecto Elfilis, as well as over half the population disappearing.
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: The fate of several Star Allies (namely [[spoiler:Taranza, the Animal Buddies, the Squeak Squad and Adeleine]]), [[spoiler:Captain Vul and Dyna Blade]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38660688/chapters/96651765 Heroes in Forgone Dreams]]'' is a ''VideoGame/KirbyAndTheForgottenLand'' fanfic written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/ParzivalBo/pseuds/ParzivalBo ParzivalBo]]. It is currently ongoing.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38660688/chapters/96651765 Heroes in Forgone Dreams]]'' is a ''VideoGame/KirbyAndTheForgottenLand'' fanfic written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/ParzivalBo/pseuds/ParzivalBo ParzivalBo]]. It is currently ongoing.complete at 27 chapters.
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* {{Cliffhanger}}: Chapter 25 ends with [[spoiler:Genesis Elfilis absorbing Kirby himself.]]
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* HeroicRROD: During the fight with [[spoiler:Genesis Elfilis]], Zan winds up overexerting herself and passes out.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Marx bails on the group in chapter 25, claiming that he's finished with everything.
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* MassOhCrap: The Star Allies' reaction when Soul Fecto manages to take down [[spoiler:Dyna Blade]], which gives Fecto the chance to assimilate them all.
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* CanonCharacterAllAlong: Prince Fluff brings up a pen pal a few times. Said pen pal is later revealed to be Elline.
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* ForWantOfANail: Due to the Star Allies appearing during the final battle, Elfilis fails to put up enough resistance to Kirby's final attack to force him back onto Popstar following the end of the battle, leading to him staying on the New World rather than needing to wait for Elfilin to create a portal.
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* BreatherEpisode: Chapter 22, which is simply the Star Allies battling each other in the Arena in their own tournament, comes after the frantic battles with both [[spoiler:Soul Forgo and Morpho Knight.]] It also happens to be an InUniverse example as Kirby plans it ''because'' everyone needs a break.
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* MoodWhiplash: Chapter 23 ends on one, going from a heartfelt conversation between Kirby and Zan to [[spoiler:the reveal of [[TrueFinalBoss Genesis Elfilis]]]].
* FormulaBreakingEpisode: Chapter 9, instead of focusing on the Star Allies, the chapter focuses on Shadow Kirby and his battles in the
* MoodWhiplash: Chapter 23 ends on one, going from a heartfelt conversation between Kirby and Zan to [[spoiler:the reveal of [[TrueFinalBoss Genesis Elfilis]]]].
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: When they face each other in the Star Allies cup, Dedede expects Susie to go down easy, owing to her lack of physical prowess. When they actually battle, however, she completely crushes him.
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: When they face each other in the Star Allies cup, Dedede expects Susie to go down easy, owing to her lack of physical prowess. When they actually battle, however, she completely crushes him.
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* AndNowForSomethingCompletelyDifferent: Chapter 9, instead of the Star Allies, the chapter focuses on Shadow Kirby and his battles in the Coliseum.
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A continuation has been confirmed to be in development.
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* SeriesFic: A part of the ''Allies Evermore'' series.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: When Kirby questions how the other Star Allies knew about what was going on, the others point out that it wasn't hard to miss the giant portal getting opened up by Fecto Elfilis.
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* YearInsideHourOutside: Downplayed, but Magolor reveals that while it was only a few days on Popstar, ten had passed in the New World.
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** How the story kicks off, with the Star Allies joining Kirby, Bandana Waddle Dee, Meta Knight, King Dedede and Elfilin in the final assault on Fecto and proving support.
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* BigDamnHeroes: How the story kicks off, with the Star Allies joining Kirby, Bandana Waddle Dee, Meta Knight, King Dedede and Elfilin in the final assault on Fecto and proving support.
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** Happens again when the Star Allies [[spoiler:return to the Isolated Isles to help Kirby deal with Morpho Knight DX.]]
** How the story kicks off, with the Star Allies joining Kirby, Bandana Waddle Dee, Meta Knight, King Dedede and Elfilin in the final assault on Fecto and proving
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* SheatheYourSword: When fighting Soul Forgo, Kirby realizes that the way to win the battle is not to actually attack Fecto, but instead [[spoiler:to travel back to past areas and get the assimilated Star Allies out of Forgo Dreams in order to remove Fecto's access to their powers.]]
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38660688/chapters/96651765 Heroes in Forgone Dreams]]'' is a ''VideoGame/KirbyAndTheForgottenLand'' fanfic written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/ParzivalBo/pseuds/ParzivalBo ParzivalBo]]. It is currently ongoing.
With Fecto destroyed, it's time to pick up the pieces.\\
Thankfully, Kirby doesn't have to do it alone.\\
Star Allies, GO!!!
This story takes place in the post-game, where the Star Allies join Kirby in the New World during the FinalBoss and join him in hunting for Leon's soul pieces, leading to many new team ups and CharacterDevelopment.
'''All spoilers for the main game are unmarked!'''
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AdaptedOut: The Phantom bosses, outside of Phantom Meta Knight, are instead replaced with [[spoiler:Forgo versions of the missing Star Allies.]]
* AdaptationalBadass: Sailor Dee is a capable fighter in this story, while in canon, he's implied to be a NonActionGuy.
* AffectionateNickname: Kirby is prone to addressing Zan as "Zanzan".
* AndNowForSomethingCompletelyDifferent: Chapter 9, instead of the Star Allies, the chapter focuses on Shadow Kirby and his battles in the Coliseum.
* TheAssimilator: Fecto uses this trick again, only this time, it absorbs the Star Allies.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Gooey is a nice, KindheartedSimpleton who is friendly with just about everyone. Hurt his friends however, and he will remind you that he is a piece of Dark Matter. [[spoiler:Forgo Taranza]] learns this hard way after he hurts Susie.
* BigDamnHeroes: How the story kicks off, with the Star Allies joining Kirby, Bandana Waddle Dee, Meta Knight, King Dedede and Elfilin in the final assault on Fecto and proving support.
* BossSubtitles: All of the boss fights have subtitles in the style of the game they hail from.
** [[spoiler:Primal Puppeteer - Forgo Taranza]]
** [[spoiler:Trifecta of Ferocity - Forgo Rick & Kine & Coo]]
** [[spoiler:Chrome Crustacean - Heavy Lobster mkIV]]
** [[spoiler:Merciless Machinist - Forgo Captain Vul]]
** The Isolated Illusion - Phantom Meta Knight
** [[spoiler:Herald of Hellfire - Forgo Landia]]
** [[spoiler:Primeval Pickpocket - Forgo Daroach]]
** [[spoiler:Ashen Altostratus - Charcoal Kracko]]
** [[spoiler:Unrestrained Artist - Forgo Adeleine]]
** [[spoiler:Sanctified Savage - Forgo Dyna Blade]]
** Berserk Beast King - Forgo Leon
** [[spoiler:Psychic Phantom - Soul Forgo]]
** Fluttering Dream Eater - Morpho Knight
** [[spoiler:Aeonic Armageddon - Morpho Knight DX]]
* OhCrap: The Star Allies' reaction when Soul Fecto manages to take down [[spoiler:Dyna Blade]], which gives Fecto the chance to assimilate them all.
* RedHerring: Due to the pattern of past bosses, many readers were quick to guess that the boss of Forgo Zone was going to be [[spoiler:Forgo versions of]] Francisca and Flamberge. Instead, however, it's revealed that they, along with Hyness, are currently protecting Dreamland, revealing why they aren't in the story. The boss of Forgo Zone is instead [[spoiler:Forgo Dyna Blade.]]
* ResistTheBeast: Dark Meta Knight is revealed to be constantly fighting off Dark Mind's influence and his control gets weaker the more he pushes himself.
* {{Troll}}: In chapter 20, Susie denies knowing where Adeleine's black crayon is...even when she knows that Dark Meta Knight took it.
* {{Tsundere}}: Zan. While she acts like an AloofAlly to Kirby, it's made very clear that she cares greatly for him.
* TheVoiceless: Dark Meta Knight never speaks.
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: While she doesn't outright say it, this is Susie's reaction when she learns that Gooey is a piece of Dark Matter.
* ZeroEffortBoss: [[spoiler:Forgo Captain Vul]] goes down in one hit.
With Fecto destroyed, it's time to pick up the pieces.\\
Thankfully, Kirby doesn't have to do it alone.\\
Star Allies, GO!!!
This story takes place in the post-game, where the Star Allies join Kirby in the New World during the FinalBoss and join him in hunting for Leon's soul pieces, leading to many new team ups and CharacterDevelopment.
'''All spoilers for the main game are unmarked!'''
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AdaptedOut: The Phantom bosses, outside of Phantom Meta Knight, are instead replaced with [[spoiler:Forgo versions of the missing Star Allies.]]
* AdaptationalBadass: Sailor Dee is a capable fighter in this story, while in canon, he's implied to be a NonActionGuy.
* AffectionateNickname: Kirby is prone to addressing Zan as "Zanzan".
* AndNowForSomethingCompletelyDifferent: Chapter 9, instead of the Star Allies, the chapter focuses on Shadow Kirby and his battles in the Coliseum.
* TheAssimilator: Fecto uses this trick again, only this time, it absorbs the Star Allies.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Gooey is a nice, KindheartedSimpleton who is friendly with just about everyone. Hurt his friends however, and he will remind you that he is a piece of Dark Matter. [[spoiler:Forgo Taranza]] learns this hard way after he hurts Susie.
* BigDamnHeroes: How the story kicks off, with the Star Allies joining Kirby, Bandana Waddle Dee, Meta Knight, King Dedede and Elfilin in the final assault on Fecto and proving support.
* BossSubtitles: All of the boss fights have subtitles in the style of the game they hail from.
** [[spoiler:Primal Puppeteer - Forgo Taranza]]
** [[spoiler:Trifecta of Ferocity - Forgo Rick & Kine & Coo]]
** [[spoiler:Chrome Crustacean - Heavy Lobster mkIV]]
** [[spoiler:Merciless Machinist - Forgo Captain Vul]]
** The Isolated Illusion - Phantom Meta Knight
** [[spoiler:Herald of Hellfire - Forgo Landia]]
** [[spoiler:Primeval Pickpocket - Forgo Daroach]]
** [[spoiler:Ashen Altostratus - Charcoal Kracko]]
** [[spoiler:Unrestrained Artist - Forgo Adeleine]]
** [[spoiler:Sanctified Savage - Forgo Dyna Blade]]
** Berserk Beast King - Forgo Leon
** [[spoiler:Psychic Phantom - Soul Forgo]]
** Fluttering Dream Eater - Morpho Knight
** [[spoiler:Aeonic Armageddon - Morpho Knight DX]]
* OhCrap: The Star Allies' reaction when Soul Fecto manages to take down [[spoiler:Dyna Blade]], which gives Fecto the chance to assimilate them all.
* RedHerring: Due to the pattern of past bosses, many readers were quick to guess that the boss of Forgo Zone was going to be [[spoiler:Forgo versions of]] Francisca and Flamberge. Instead, however, it's revealed that they, along with Hyness, are currently protecting Dreamland, revealing why they aren't in the story. The boss of Forgo Zone is instead [[spoiler:Forgo Dyna Blade.]]
* ResistTheBeast: Dark Meta Knight is revealed to be constantly fighting off Dark Mind's influence and his control gets weaker the more he pushes himself.
* {{Troll}}: In chapter 20, Susie denies knowing where Adeleine's black crayon is...even when she knows that Dark Meta Knight took it.
* {{Tsundere}}: Zan. While she acts like an AloofAlly to Kirby, it's made very clear that she cares greatly for him.
* TheVoiceless: Dark Meta Knight never speaks.
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: While she doesn't outright say it, this is Susie's reaction when she learns that Gooey is a piece of Dark Matter.
* ZeroEffortBoss: [[spoiler:Forgo Captain Vul]] goes down in one hit.
