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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/342147/fallout-equestria-survivors-guilt Fallout Equestria: Survivor's Guilt]]'' is a story set in the universe of Fanfic/FalloutEquestria written by Ruin Queen of Oblivion, set roughly 10 to 11 years after the events of the original story.
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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/342147/fallout-equestria-survivors-guilt Fallout Equestria: Survivor's Guilt]]'' is a story set in the universe of Fanfic/FalloutEquestria ''Fanfic/FalloutEquestria'' written by Ruin Queen of Oblivion, set roughly 10 to 11 years a decade after the events of the original story.
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** Winter Breeze sometimes uses Sofia Lamb's CatchPhrase "Ask yourself..." from VideoGame/Bioshock2.
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** Winter Breeze sometimes uses Sofia Lamb's CatchPhrase catchphrase "Ask yourself..." from VideoGame/Bioshock2.
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* SpinOffspring: Scootaloo's distant descendant Serenity.
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* WretchedHive: Reino, the Trope Namer is even quoted.
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* ZeroApprovalGambit: The whole thing with the Stables as before.
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** This dialogue in chapter 8 to ''Machinima/RedVsBlue'':
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** This dialogue in chapter 8 to ''Machinima/RedVsBlue'':''WebAnimation/RedVsBlue'':
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* DarthVaderClone: Tornado, being an expy of Frank Horrigan.
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** Nomad City in chapter 7 was named after a mining facility that appeared in the first book of TheThrawnTrilogy.
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** Nomad City in chapter 7 was named after a mining facility that appeared in the first book of TheThrawnTrilogy.Literature/TheThrawnTrilogy.
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** Sparky quotes Andrew Ryan from BioShock1, which Scootaloo lampshades by saying that sounds like a quote.
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** Sparky quotes Andrew Ryan from BioShock1, VideoGame/BioShock1, which Scootaloo lampshades by saying that sounds like a quote.
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** Winter Breeze sometimes uses Sofia Lamb's CatchPhrase "Ask yourself..." from Bioshock2.
** In chapter 19, Scootaloo references MetalGear
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** Winter Breeze sometimes uses Sofia Lamb's CatchPhrase "Ask yourself..." from Bioshock2.
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** The Mysterious Mare-Do-Well has had several incarnations and is a shoutout to {{Batman}} and BlueBeetle.
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* BiTheWay: While not stated, Scootaloo has been in a relationship with both a mare and a stallion.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: In chapter 6 where Scootaloo finally finds her only known surviving descendant Serenity in Crystal City they share a heartwarming moment when they finally connect.
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** When Scootaloo reveals exactly what the Enclave is after in chapter 27.
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** At the end of chapter 32 when Winter Breeze is branded.
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** The Mysterious Mare-Do-Well has had several incarnations and is a shoutout to [[Batman]] and BlueBeetle.
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** The Mysterious Mare-Do-Well has had several incarnations and is a shoutout to [[Batman]] and BlueBeetle.
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** At the end of chapter 13 when they find out that the Enclave has taken over Tenpony Tower and Manehattan
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** At the end of chapter 31 when Celestia One hits Thunderhead.
** At the end of chapter 31 when Celestia One hits Thunderhead.
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** [[spoiler:That Winter Breeze is really Scootaloo's descendant in chapter 19.]]
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** [[spoiler:That [[spoiler: That Winter Breeze is really Scootaloo's descendant in chapter 19.]]
** [[spoiler: That Tornado is actually Scootaloo's believed dead husband Sky Walker in chapter 33.]]
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** Tornado, an Enclave Alicorn, seems to share several qualities with Frank Horrigan from Fallout1.
** Scootaloo serves as a slight expy of the Sole Survivor from Fallout4 in that she spent time in stasis and is looking for her family.
** Xiraia reprises her role from ''Wasteland Jewel'' as an expy of Three Dog from Fallout3.
** President Winter Breeze is likely based on President John Henry Eden from Fallout3.
** Scootaloo serves as a slight expy of the Sole Survivor from Fallout4 in that she spent time in stasis and is looking for her family.
** Xiraia reprises her role from ''Wasteland Jewel'' as an expy of Three Dog from Fallout3.
** President Winter Breeze is likely based on President John Henry Eden from Fallout3.
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** Tornado, an Enclave Alicorn, seems to share several qualities with Frank Horrigan from Fallout1.
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** Xiraia reprises her role from ''Wasteland Jewel'' as an expy of Three Dog fromFallout3.
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** The brief encounter with an Enclave Alicorn references the possible early encounter with Frank Horrigan in Fallout2.
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** The brief encounter with an Enclave Alicorn references the possible early encounter with Frank Horrigan in Fallout2.
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** Played straight in chapter 12 when Scootaloo passes unnoticed as an Enclave soldier.
** Subverted in chapter 19 while it works temporarily, Winter Breeze quickly sees through Scootaloo's disguise when she tries it again with a member of her Secret Service detail.
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'''Sweetie Belle:''' That's one of life's great mysteries isn't it?\\
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'''Sweetie Belle:''' That's one of life's great mysteries mysteries, isn't it?\\
