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* LighterAndSofter: Kinda. Dainn isn't carved from stone in this version, nor is he a raging sociopath (having a "girlfriend" slave girl whom he treats rather well). The council also rejects a proposal to do away with the less attractive does out of hand; treating the councilmember who suggested it as a RichIdiotWithNoDayJob, wherein the older version they'd have done it without second thought. They also brought along their SlaveRace, whom they left do die originally.
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* LighterAndSofter: Kinda. Dainn isn't carved from stone in this version, nor is he a raging sociopath (having a "girlfriend" slave girl whom he treats rather well). The council also rejects a proposal to do away with the less attractive does dies out of hand; treating the councilmember who suggested it as a RichIdiotWithNoDayJob, an UpperClassTwit, wherein the older version they'd have done it without second thought. They also brought along their SlaveRace, whom they left do die originally.
* {{Nepotism}}: Councilman Frey only has his seat because it was a condition of his father helping Dainn.
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* RichIdiotWithNoDayJob: Councilman Frey, who only has his seat because it was a condition of his father helping Dainn.
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* TheHighKing: Svardagr.
** He was ''called'' High King, but he was far closer to an EvilOverlord.
** He was ''called'' High King, but he was far closer to an EvilOverlord.
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%% * TheHighKing: Svardagr.
%% ** He was ''called'' High King, but he was far closer to an EvilOverlord.
%% ** He was ''called'' High King, but he was far closer to an EvilOverlord.
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* AdaptedOut: Gunne and Ginna are nowhere to be seen.
** Cardinal had planned to involve them at a later point, he just canceled his story before he got to them. I guess it technically still counts.
** Cardinal had planned to involve them at a later point, he just canceled his story before he got to them. I guess it technically still counts.
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* AdaptedOut: Gunne and Ginna are nowhere to be seen.
**seen. Cardinal had planned to involve them at a later point, he just but canceled his story before he got to them. I guess it technically still counts.them.
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* BadDreams: Dainn and Twilight have them.
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''Fall of Equestria'' is the first story in ''Fall of Equestria: Redux,'' a remake of the popular ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' AU series Fall of Equestria. It can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/406492/fall-of-equestria here]].
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''Fall of Equestria'' is the first story in ''Fall of Equestria: Redux,'' a remake of the popular ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' AU series Fall about a race of Equestria. It patriarchal Caribou conquering Equestria and enslaving all mares. The first story can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/406492/fall-of-equestria here]].
