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* InstantBirthJustAddWater: This happens in Chapter 13 when the Mistress goes into labor at the altar during her and the Warden's wedding. However, this is subverted as she doesn't actually give birth at the altar right away. There's actually enough time for Warden to send Jailbot and NOVA out to find a [[DeliveryGuy doctor]], for the robots to come back with said doctor, and for Mistress to be moved into another room where she can give birth without being in danger.
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* MaternityCrisis: In Chapter 12, just as they are about to kiss and wrap up the wedding ceremony, Mistress's water breaks right in front of everyone.
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** Apparently this is enough to make our two lovers in Chapter 13 decide they're going to be better parents than their own ever were and could be.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: In chapter 13, following the Mistress going into [[MaternityCrisis sudden labor]] during her and the Warden's wedding, the inmates [[BallroomBlitz start to riot]]. This prompts the priest marrying the two lovers to flee for his life, only to be [[EpicFail caught and killed by one of the female inmates seconds later]].
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* RomanceEnsues: One chapter has Warden and Mistress kissing in his office. They both then realize their feelings for one another near the end of the chapter.
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* RomanceEnsues: One chapter on the earlier chapters has Warden and Mistress kissing in his office. They both then realize their feelings for one another near the end of the chapter.another.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8803490/1/Extended-Stay Extended Stay]]'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but staying longer than expected due to a blossoming romance between her and the Warden. The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and considering its wordcount to be over 14,000 words, would definintely be a {{Novelette}}. It should be noted that later on, the fanfic also [[FollowTheLeader followed in the footsteps]], plot-wise, of Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of her first ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7955447/1/The-Story-Of-Us The Story Of Us]]''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8803490/1/Extended-Stay Extended Stay]]'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but staying having to stay longer than expected due to when a blossoming romance between her and the Warden.few things come up. RomanceEnsues. The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and considering its wordcount to be over 14,000 words, would definintely be a {{Novelette}}. It should be noted that later on, the fanfic also [[FollowTheLeader followed in the footsteps]], plot-wise, of Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of her first ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7955447/1/The-Story-Of-Us The Story Of Us]]''.
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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: In Chapter 14, the Warden and the Mistress, after getting worked up over their 4-year-old twins Matilda and Ethan running off, finally find them beating and whipping the inmates alongside Jailbot, NOVA, Alice and Bruce. Oddly enough, Warden convinces his wife that this means they are good parents and they actually decide to help their children [[KidsAreCruel beat the crap out of their victims]].
** Although to be fair, the parents in this case are prison wardens who take pleasure in straight-up torturing and murdering their prisoners, so it'd actually be no surprise the children would pick up on that.
** Although to be fair, the parents in this case are prison wardens who take pleasure in straight-up torturing and murdering their prisoners, so it'd actually be no surprise the children would pick up on that.
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* CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon: In Chapter 13, Mistress threatens to kill both her new husband Warden and the DeliveryGuy and turn their skins into her personal pajamas while she's in labor. The scariest part? It's said a couple paragraphs later that she's actually capable of doing this.
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* CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon: In Chapter 13, Mistress threatens to kill both her new husband Warden and the DeliveryGuy and turn their skins into her personal pajamas while she's in labor. The scariest part? It's said a couple paragraphs later that she's actually capable of doing this.this as she pleases.
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* ShoutOutThemeNaming: Matilda and Ethan are, of course, named for the StarCrossedLovers in ''Literature/EthanFrome''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8803490/1/Extended-Stay Extended Stay]]'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but staying longer than expected due to a blossoming romance between her and the Warden. The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and considering its wordcount to be over 14,000 words, would definintely be a {{Novelette}}. It should be noted that later on, the fanfic also [[FollowTheLeader followed in the footsteps]], plot-wise, of Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8803490/1/Extended-Stay Extended Stay]]'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but staying longer than expected due to a blossoming romance between her and the Warden. The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and considering its wordcount to be over 14,000 words, would definintely be a {{Novelette}}. It should be noted that later on, the fanfic also [[FollowTheLeader followed in the footsteps]], plot-wise, of Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily''.
her first ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7955447/1/The-Story-Of-Us The Story Of Us]]''.
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* AbusiveParents: Warden's father and Mistress's mom are said to horribly play this trope straight, with the former being emotionally and mentally abusive and the latter being verbally abusive.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8803490/1/Extended-Stay Extended Stay]]'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but staying longer than expected due to a blossoming romance between her and the Warden. The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and considering its wordcount to be over 14,000 words, would definintely be a {{Novelette}}. It should be noted that later on, the fanfic also [[FollowTheLeader followed in the footsteps, footsteps]], plot-wise, of Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8803490/13/Extended-Stay Extended Stay]]'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but staying longer than expected due to a blossoming romance between her and the Warden. The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and considering its wordcount to be over 14,000 words, would definintely be a {{Novelette}}. It should be noted that later on, the fanfic also followed in the footsteps, plot-wise, of Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8803490/13/Extended-Stay net/s/8803490/1/Extended-Stay Extended Stay]]'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but staying longer than expected due to a blossoming romance between her and the Warden. The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and considering its wordcount to be over 14,000 words, would definintely be a {{Novelette}}. It should be noted that later on, the fanfic also followed in the footsteps, plot-wise, of Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily''.
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* CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon: In Chapter 13, Mistress threatens to kill both her new husband and the DeliveryGuy and turn their skins into her personal pajamas while she's in labor. The scariest part? It's said a couple paragraphs later that she's actually capable of doing this.
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* CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon: In Chapter 13, Mistress threatens to kill both her new husband Warden and the DeliveryGuy and turn their skins into her personal pajamas while she's in labor. The scariest part? It's said a couple paragraphs later that she's actually capable of doing this.
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* BallroomBlitz: This happens twice when the inmates riot in the fic. This first happens in Chapter 7 when our central lovers go on a date and happens again in Chapter 13 after Mistress goes into labor during her and the Warden's wedding.
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* BallroomBlitz: This happens twice when the inmates riot in the fic. This They first happens riot in Chapter 7 when our central lovers go on a date and happens they do it again in Chapter 13 after Mistress goes into labor during her and the Warden's wedding.wedding.
* ScreamingBirth: Played straight with Mistress in Chapter 13.
* ScreamingBirth: Played straight with Mistress in Chapter 13.
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* BallroomBlitz: This happens twice when the inmates riot in the fic. This first happens in Chapter 7 when our central lovers go on a date and happens again in Chapter 13 after Mistress goes into labor.
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* BallroomBlitz: This happens twice when the inmates riot in the fic. This first happens in Chapter 7 when our central lovers go on a date and happens again in Chapter 13 after Mistress goes into labor.labor during her and the Warden's wedding.
* ShotgunWedding: Warden and Mistress have one in Chapter 12 while the bride is 8 months pregnant.
* ShotgunWedding: Warden and Mistress have one in Chapter 12 while the bride is 8 months pregnant.
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* StarCrossedLovers: The Warden and the Mistress almost become this until a revelation that [[spoiler: Mistress is pregnant]] is revealed in Chapter 10, allowing her to stay and thus, allowing them to be together.
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* StarCrossedLovers: The Warden and the Mistress almost become this until a revelation that [[spoiler: Mistress is pregnant]] is revealed in Chapter 10, allowing her to stay and thus, allowing them to be together.together.
* WellDoneSonGuy: Warden starts off as this, trying to please his long-deceased daddy.
* WellDoneSonGuy: Warden starts off as this, trying to please his long-deceased daddy.
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* StarCrossedLovers: The Warden and the Mistress almost become this until the a revelation that [[spoiler: Mistress is pregnant]] is revealed, revealed in Chapter 10, allowing her to stay and thus, allowing them to be together.
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''Extended Stay'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but staying longer than expected due to a blossoming romance between her and the Warden. It should be noted that later on, the fanfic followed in the footsteps, plot-wise, of Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily''.
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''Extended Stay'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but staying longer than expected due to a blossoming romance between her and the Warden. The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and considering its wordcount to be over 14,000 words, would definintely be a {{Novelette}}. It should be noted that later on, the fanfic also followed in the footsteps, plot-wise, of Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily''.''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily''.
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''Extended Stay'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but staying longer than expected due to a blossoming romance between her and the Warden. It should be noted that later on, the fanfic followed in the footsteps, plot-wise, of Creator/Voltalia's ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild''.Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily''.
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''Extended Stay'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]].Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but staying longer than expected due to a blossoming romance between her and the Warden. It should be noted that later on, the fanfic followed in the footsteps, plot-wise, of Creator/Voltalia's ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild''.
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