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* SurpriseMultipleBirth: Mistress and Warden have no idea what they're having or even ''how many'' they're having. Warden, for the most part, is convinced that they're only expecting one baby. It isn't until Mistress gives birth on their wedding day in Chapter 13 that they find out they were expecting twins the whole time.
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* AdultFear:
** Mistress goes into labor while eight months pregnant in Chapter 12. She and her new husband are utterly terrified by this, to say the least. [[spoiler: Fortunately, everybody is fine come the next chapter.]]
** Chapter 14 mentions how the inmates are always abducting the twins. This is magnified when Maddie and her brother run off while their father's looking away.
** Mistress goes into labor while eight months pregnant in Chapter 12. She and her new husband are utterly terrified by this, to say the least. [[spoiler: Fortunately, everybody is fine come the next chapter.]]
** Chapter 14 mentions how the inmates are always abducting the twins. This is magnified when Maddie and her brother run off while their father's looking away.
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* InstantBirthJustAddWater: This happens in Chapter 13 when the Mistress goes into labor at the altar during her and the Warden's wedding. However, this is subverted as she doesn't actually give birth at the altar right away. There's actually enough time for Warden to send Jailbot and NOVA out to find a [[DeliveryGuy doctor]], for the robots to come back with said doctor, and for Mistress to be moved into another room where she can give birth without being in danger.
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* InstantBirthJustAddWater: InstantBirthJustAddLabor: This happens in Chapter 13 when the Mistress goes into labor at the altar during her and the Warden's wedding. However, this is subverted as she doesn't actually give birth at the altar right away. There's actually enough time for Warden to send Jailbot and NOVA out to find a [[DeliveryGuy doctor]], for the robots to come back with said doctor, and for Mistress to be moved into another room where she can give birth without being in danger.
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* [[PsychoExGirlfriend Psycho Ex-Boyfriend]]: William in Chapter 7.
** The unofficial sequel seems to imply that Mistress broke up with him because he was already married to Zora at the time.
** The unofficial sequel seems to imply that Mistress broke up with him because he was already married to Zora at the time.
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* EndOfAnAge: The fanfic ends with Warden and Mistress leaving Superjail along with their youngest child to go live in the White House, but not before handing the reins of Superjail and Ultraprison over to the twins. Thus, their eras as wardens of Superjail and Ultraprison come to an end.
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* NewBabyEpisode: Mistress gives birth in Chapter 13 to twins.
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** Chancellor Bilqiis Cali is female, Somali, and presumably a lesbian.
* YourCheatingHeart: Zora quotes this almost verbatim in Chapter 3 when referring to her ex-husband William.
* YourCheatingHeart: Zora quotes this almost verbatim in Chapter 3 when referring to her ex-husband William.
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** Chancellor Bilqiis Cali is female, Somali, and presumably a lesbian.
* YourCheatingHeart: Zora quotes this almost verbatim in Chapter 3 when referring to her ex-husband William.lesbian.
* YourCheatingHeart: Zora quotes this almost verbatim in Chapter 3 when referring to her ex-husband William.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8803490/1/Extended-Stay Extended Stay]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but having to stay longer than expected when a few things come up. RomanceEnsues. The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and considering its wordcount to be over 14,000 words, would definintely be a {{Novelette}}. It should be noted that the fanfic also [[FollowTheLeader followed in the footsteps]], plot-wise, of Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of her first ''WesternAnimation/{{Superjail}}'' fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7955447/1/The-Story-Of-Us The Story Of Us]]''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8803490/1/Extended-Stay Extended Stay]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but having to stay longer than expected when a few things come up. RomanceEnsues. RomanceEnsues.
The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and considering its wordcount to be over 14,000 words, would definintely be a {{Novelette}}. It should be noted that the fanfic also [[FollowTheLeader followed in the footsteps]], plot-wise, of Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of her first ''WesternAnimation/{{Superjail}}'' fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7955447/1/The-Story-Of-Us The Story Of Us]]''.
The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and considering its wordcount to be over 14,000 words, would definintely be a {{Novelette}}. It should be noted that the fanfic also [[FollowTheLeader followed in the footsteps]], plot-wise, of Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of her first ''WesternAnimation/{{Superjail}}'' fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7955447/1/The-Story-Of-Us The Story Of Us]]''.
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* AbusiveParents: Warden's father and Mistress's mom are said to play this trope horribly straight, with the former being emotionally, psychologically and mentally abusive (''especially'' [[{{Jerkass}} in canon]]) and the latter being verbally abusive.
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* AbusiveParents: AbusiveParents:
** Warden's father and Mistress's mom are said to play this trope horribly straight, with the former being emotionally, psychologically and mentally abusive (''especially'' [[{{Jerkass}} in canon]]) and the latter being verbally abusive.
** Warden's father and Mistress's mom are said to play this trope horribly straight, with the former being emotionally, psychologically and mentally abusive (''especially'' [[{{Jerkass}} in canon]]) and the latter being verbally abusive.
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* AdultFear: Mistress goes into labor while eight months pregnant in Chapter 12. She and her new husband are utterly terrified by this, to say the least. [[spoiler: Fortunately, everybody is fine come the next chapter.]]
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* AdultFear: AdultFear:
** Mistress goes into labor while eight months pregnant in Chapter 12. She and her new husband are utterly terrified by this, to say the least. [[spoiler: Fortunately, everybody is fine come the next chapter.]]
** Mistress goes into labor while eight months pregnant in Chapter 12. She and her new husband are utterly terrified by this, to say the least. [[spoiler: Fortunately, everybody is fine come the next chapter.]]
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-->'''Mistress''': Warden, you are obviously not alright. You need to sleep.
-->'''Warden''': But, I can't...I have to...finish the paperwork...
-->'''Mistress''': Warden, you just let me take care of that. You need to sleep. Right, now. No ifs, ands, or buts about it.
-->'''Warden''': Heh...you said...butts...
-->'''Warden''': But, I can't...I have to...finish the paperwork...
-->'''Mistress''': Warden, you just let me take care of that. You need to sleep. Right, now. No ifs, ands, or buts about it.
-->'''Warden''': Heh...you said...butts...
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-->'''Mistress''': Warden, you are obviously not alright. You need to sleep.
-->'''Warden''':sleep.\\
'''Warden''': But, I can't...I have to...finish thepaperwork...
-->'''Mistress''':paperwork...\\
'''Mistress''': Warden, you just let me take care of that. You need to sleep. Right, now. No ifs, ands, or buts aboutit.
-->'''Warden''':it.\\
'''Warden''': Heh...you said...butts...
-->'''Warden''':
'''Warden''': But, I can't...I have to...finish the
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'''Mistress''': Warden, you just let me take care of that. You need to sleep. Right, now. No ifs, ands, or buts about
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'''Warden''': Heh...you said...butts...
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* WhamLine: There's two of these. The first one comes in Chapter 10 when Ultraprison is about to leave until Cherice reveals that something came up, forcing them to stay. And that something is...?
-->'''Mistress''': [[spoiler: I-I'm pregnant...]]
-->'''Mistress''': [[spoiler: I-I'm pregnant...]]
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* WhamLine: There's two of these. WhamLine:
** The first one comes in Chapter 10 when Ultraprison is about to leave until Cherice reveals that something came up, forcing them to stay. And that something is...?
-->'''Mistress''': --->'''Mistress''': [[spoiler: I-I'm pregnant...]]
** The first one comes in Chapter 10 when Ultraprison is about to leave until Cherice reveals that something came up, forcing them to stay. And that something is...?
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* [[WeddingDay Wedding Chapter]]: At last, they get married in Chapter 12.
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* [[WeddingDay Wedding Chapter]]: WeddingEpisode: At last, they the leads get married in Chapter 12.
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* TheFamilyThatSlaysTogether: This is definitely starting to look like the case with Warden and Mistress's family.
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* GladToBeAliveSex: Implied to be happening at the end of Chapter 7 after Warden gets into a scuffle with one of his inmates (who also happens to be an ex-boyfriend of Mistress). It's probably safe to assume that this is how the twins were conceived, too.
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* GladToBeAliveSex: Implied to be happening at the end of Chapter 7 after Warden gets into a scuffle with one of his inmates (who also happens to be an ex-boyfriend of Mistress). It's probably safe to assume that this is how the twins were conceived, too.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8803490/1/Extended-Stay Extended Stay]]'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but having to stay longer than expected when a few things come up. RomanceEnsues. The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and considering its wordcount to be over 14,000 words, would definintely be a {{Novelette}}. It should be noted that the fanfic also [[FollowTheLeader followed in the footsteps]], plot-wise, of Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of her first ''WesternAnimation/{{Superjail}}'' fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7955447/1/The-Story-Of-Us The Story Of Us]]''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8803490/1/Extended-Stay Extended Stay]]'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' ''WesternAnimation/{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but having to stay longer than expected when a few things come up. RomanceEnsues. The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and considering its wordcount to be over 14,000 words, would definintely be a {{Novelette}}. It should be noted that the fanfic also [[FollowTheLeader followed in the footsteps]], plot-wise, of Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of her first ''WesternAnimation/{{Superjail}}'' fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7955447/1/The-Story-Of-Us The Story Of Us]]''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8803490/1/Extended-Stay Extended Stay]]'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but having to stay longer than expected when a few things come up. RomanceEnsues. The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and considering its wordcount to be over 14,000 words, would definintely be a {{Novelette}}. It should be noted that the fanfic also [[FollowTheLeader followed in the footsteps]], plot-wise, of Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of her first ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7955447/1/The-Story-Of-Us The Story Of Us]]''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8803490/1/Extended-Stay Extended Stay]]'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4120793/Prepare-for-the-crazy Prepare-for-the-crazy]] about the Mistress having to stop at Superjail so she can refuel Ultraprison, but having to stay longer than expected when a few things come up. RomanceEnsues. The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and considering its wordcount to be over 14,000 words, would definintely be a {{Novelette}}. It should be noted that the fanfic also [[FollowTheLeader followed in the footsteps]], plot-wise, of Creator/{{Voltalia}}'s ''Fanfic/AnUnexpectedChild'' and a bit of her first ''{{Superjail}}'' ''WesternAnimation/{{Superjail}}'' fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7955447/1/The-Story-Of-Us The Story Of Us]]''.
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* WallBangHer: Implied to be happening at the end of Chapter 7.
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* AlliterativeFamily: Two of the children are named Ethan and Edward; the OddNameOut is Matilda (though her middle name Elizabeth counts).
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* AlliterativeFamily: Two of the children are named Ethan and Edward; the OddNameOut is Matilda (though her middle name Elizabeth name, Elizabeth, counts).
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* AlliterativeFamily: Two of the children are named Ethan and Edward; the OddNameOut is Matilda (though her middle name Elizabeth counts).
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* AdultFear: The idea that your child could be born prematurely.
** The idea that your children could easily be abducted if you even turn your back on them for a second.
** The idea that your children could easily be abducted if you even turn your back on them for a second.
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* AdultFear: The idea that your child could be born prematurely.
Mistress goes into labor while eight months pregnant in Chapter 12. She and her new husband are utterly terrified by this, to say the least. [[spoiler: Fortunately, everybody is fine come the next chapter.]]
**The idea that your children could easily be abducted if you even turn your back on them for a second.Chapter 14 mentions how the inmates are always abducting the twins. This is magnified when Maddie and her brother run off while their father's looking away.
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* BrotherSisterIncest=/={{Twincest}}: Mentioned in chapter 9 to have occurred between [[spoiler: Matilda and Ethan]].
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* BrotherSisterIncest=/={{Twincest}}: BrotherSisterIncest[=/=]{{Twincest}}: Mentioned in chapter 9 to have occurred between [[spoiler: Matilda and Ethan]].
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* AdultFear: The idea that your child could be born prematurely.
** The idea that your children could easily be abducted if you even turn your back on them for a second.
** The idea that your children could easily be abducted if you even turn your back on them for a second.
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* BrotherSisterIncest: Mentioned in chapter 9 to have occurred between [[spoiler: Matilda and Ethan]].
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* BrotherSisterIncest: BrotherSisterIncest=/={{Twincest}}: Mentioned in chapter 9 to have occurred between [[spoiler: Matilda and Ethan]].
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* TheApunkalypse: The United States has been a [[CrapsackWorld literal hellhole]] since its society had collapsed years ago. That's not completely the case, though, since Warden and his family are ruling the world.
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* TheApunkalypse: The United States has been a [[CrapsackWorld literal hellhole]] since its society had collapsed years ago. That's not completely the case, though, since Warden and his family are ruling the world.
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* BrotherSisterIncest: Mentioned in chapter 9 between Maddie and Ethan.
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* BrotherSisterIncest: Mentioned in chapter 9 to have occurred between Maddie [[spoiler: Matilda and Ethan.Ethan]].
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* BrotherSisterIncest: Mentioned to be the case between Maddie and Ethan.
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* BrotherSisterIncest: Mentioned to be the case in chapter 9 between Maddie and Ethan.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Subverted in Chapter 12. Mistress starts off her wedding vows describing Warden's flaws before ending with how much she's changed since she fell for him and how she loves him for being a PsychopathicManchild.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Subverted in Chapter 12. Mistress starts off her wedding vows describing listing Warden's flaws before ending with going on to say how much she's changed since she fell for him and how she loves him for being a PsychopathicManchild.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Subverted in Chapter 12. Mistress starts off her wedding vows describing Warden's flaws before ending with how much she's changed since she fell for him and how she loves him for being a PsychopathicManchild.
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* HehHehYouSaidX: This exchanges ensues in Chapter 3 when Mistress tries to get Warden to go to bed.
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* HehHehYouSaidX: This exchanges exchange ensues in Chapter 3 when Mistress tries to get Warden to go to bed.
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* BadDate: Holy shit, the date Warden and Mistress go on in Chapter 7! As if the inmates being roped into participating in the "Lockdown of Love II" and acting totally uncooperative wasn't bad enough, Jared and Cherice both managed to get drunk off of the ''champagne'' they were supposed to serve their bosses and call them out on treating their significant other like shit ''and'' [[FromBadToWorse Mistress's ex-boyfriend showed up with the intent of]] ''[[FromBadToWorse murdering her]]!''
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* BadDate: Holy shit, the date Warden and Mistress go on in Chapter 7! As if the inmates being roped into participating in the "Lockdown of Love II" and acting totally uncooperative wasn't bad enough, Jared and Cherice both managed to get drunk off of the ''champagne'' they were supposed to serve their bosses and [[ItMakesSenseInContext call them out on treating their significant other like shit shit]] ''and'' [[FromBadToWorse Mistress's ex-boyfriend showed up with the intent of]] ''[[FromBadToWorse murdering her]]!''
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-->''Mistress'': Warden, you are obviously not alright. You need to sleep.
-->''Warden'': But, I can't...I have to...finish the paperwork...
-->''Mistress'': Warden, you just let me take care of that. You need to sleep. Right, now. No ifs, ands, or buts about it.
-->''Warden'': Heh...you said...butts...
-->''Warden'': But, I can't...I have to...finish the paperwork...
-->''Mistress'': Warden, you just let me take care of that. You need to sleep. Right, now. No ifs, ands, or buts about it.
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* HehHehYouSaidX: This exchanges ensues in Chapter 3 when Mistress tries to get Warden to go to bed.
-->''Mistress'': Warden, you are obviously not alright. You need to sleep.
-->''Warden'': But, I can't...I have to...finish the paperwork...
-->''Mistress'': Warden, you just let me take care of that. You need to sleep. Right, now. No ifs, ands, or buts about it.
-->''Warden'': Heh...you said...butts...
-->''Mistress'': Warden, you are obviously not alright. You need to sleep.
-->''Warden'': But, I can't...I have to...finish the paperwork...
-->''Mistress'': Warden, you just let me take care of that. You need to sleep. Right, now. No ifs, ands, or buts about it.
-->''Warden'': Heh...you said...butts...
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** Two chapters later, the Warden and the Mistress are just about to kiss after being officially married when [[spoiler: they hear something splash onto the floor]]. It takes a minute before Mistress realizes something's wrong...
-->'''Mistress''': [[spoiler: M-My water just broke...]]
-->'''Mistress''': [[spoiler: M-My water just broke...]]
