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* BadassNormal: Connor is still badass [[spoiler: as a pony. He still decides to take on the Changeling Queen. He loses, but he tried, and is able to take down some Changelings.]]
* FamedInStory: Connor is treated as a celebrity for his exploits and attracts a lot of attention when he arrives in Canterlot.

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* BadassNormal: Connor is still badass [[spoiler: as a pony. He still decides fights off Queen Chrysalis, who at that point had enough power to take on the Changeling Queen. He defeat Celestia, and even though he loses, but he tried, and is able to take down some Changelings.still survives.]]
* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulu: [[spoiler: Connor vocally expresses his disgust at the implications of Chrysalis impersonating Cadence.
* FamedInStory: Connor is treated as a celebrity for his exploits and attracts a lot of attention when he arrives in Canterlot. \n A young colt even asks him for his autograph.
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!! Connor At The Royal Wedding.
* BadassNormal: Connor is still badass [[spoiler: as a pony. He still decides to take on the Changeling Queen. He loses, but he tried, and is able to take down some Changelings.]]
* FamedInStory: Connor is treated as a celebrity for his exploits and attracts a lot of attention when he arrives in Canterlot.
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* AesopAmnesia: Played with: While first wary of Connor, like they were of Zecora, the Mane 6 and Spike do make an effort to be his friend. Problem is, ''the rest of Ponyville'' don't see the way they treat Connor as the same as they treated Zecora.

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* AesopAmnesia: Played with: While first wary of Connor, like they were of Zecora, the Mane 6 and Spike do make an effort to be his friend. Problem is, ''the rest of Ponyville'' don't see the way they treat Connor as the same as they treated Zecora. In fact, they start treating the Mane 6 as pariahs for associating with Connor.
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* [[spoiler: SixthRanger]]: [[spoiler: After Connor returns to Equestria, as is reborn as pony, he more or less joins the Mane Cast as this.]]



* WhatTheHellTownspeople: Ponyville at first treats Connor like they use to treat Zecora, by closing their shops every time he walks by. Connor being a good Samaritan doesn't change their attitude, and soon the whole town start avoiding the Mane 6, boycotting their businesses, and refusing to help them prepare for a festival for Princess Celestia. The reaches a peak when [[spoiler: Connor is beaten up by the Royal Guards (actually Dragonfire spies) after he saves Princess Celestia from getting skewered, and town just watch it happen. (In the original, they just laughed at Connor for having a crush on Fluttershy).]] Connor runs off in anger, and Princess Celestia tells the town off for treating a visitor so coldly.

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* WhatTheHellTownspeople: Ponyville at first treats Connor like they use to treat Zecora, by closing their shops every time he walks by. Connor being a good Samaritan doesn't change their attitude, and soon the whole town start avoiding the Mane 6, boycotting their businesses, and refusing to help them prepare for a festival for Princess Celestia. The reaches a peak when [[spoiler: Connor is beaten up by the Royal Guards (actually Dragonfire spies) after he saves Princess Celestia from getting skewered, and town just watch it happen. (In the original, they just laughed at Connor for having a crush on Fluttershy).]] Connor runs off in anger, and Princess Celestia tells the town off for treating a visitor so coldly.coldly.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Connor has to battle prejudice, isolation from the few friends he's made [[spoiler: and a crazy terrorist]] before he can earn Ponyville's love and trust.
** [[spoiler: Princess Celestia herself decides he's earned a ''second'' one, and puts a sign on him that allows his spirit to return to Equestria, so he can have a new life.]]
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* AesopAmnesia: Played with: While first wary of Connor, like they were of Zecora, the Mane 6 and Spike do make an effort to be his friend. Problem is, ''the rest of Ponyville'' don't see the way they treat Connor as the same as they treated Zecora.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: [[spoiler: Connor saves Celestia by pushing her out of the way of all falling spike. How is he rewarded: He is beat up by her Royal Guards. It is justified since those guards were actually Dragonfire [[{{Mole}} Moles]]. Princess Celestia did try to thank Connor, unfortunately that event pushed him over the edge before he could get a word in edgewise.]]

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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: [[spoiler: Connor saves Celestia by pushing her out of the way of all falling spike. How is he rewarded: He is beat up by her Royal Guards. It is justified since those guards were actually Dragonfire [[{{Mole}} Moles]]. Princess Celestia did try to thank Connor, unfortunately Connor. Unfortunately that event pushed him over the edge and he stormed off before he she could get a word in edgewise.]]
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: [[spoiler: Connor saves Celestia by pushing her out of the way of all falling spike. How is he rewarded: He is beat up by her Royal Guards. It is justified since those guards were actually Dragonfire [[{{Mole}} Moles]]. Princess Celestia did try to thank Connor, unfortunately that event pushed him over the edge before he could get a word in edgewise.]]
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/147882/having-hands-again HavingHandsAgain]]: Shortly after the theft of Twilight's crown by Sunset Shimmer and Twilight's departure, Equestria's First Human, Connor Powell, goes through the mirror into a world he is most familiar with.

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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/147882/having-hands-again HavingHandsAgain]]: Having Hands Again]]: Shortly after the theft of Twilight's crown by Sunset Shimmer and Twilight's departure, Equestria's First Human, Connor Powell, goes through the mirror into a world he is most familiar with.



* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: When Connor [[spoiler: refuses to help save the town from the Dragonfire ponies]] Spike calls him a loser, and that if he can't let go off his anger, he'll stay that way. Connor agrees, and decides to help him.

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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: When Connor [[spoiler: refuses to help save the town from the Dragonfire ponies]] Spike calls him a loser, and that if he can't let go off his anger, he'll stay that way. Connor agrees, and decides to help him.
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* Badass: Connor and Spike. [[spoiler: With makeshift weapons, they were able to incapacitate all the Dragonfire ponies.]]

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* Badass: {{Badass}}: Connor and Spike. [[spoiler: With makeshift weapons, they were able to incapacitate all the Dragonfire ponies.]]
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48367/the-tale-of-hellfire The Tale of Hellfire]]: Tells the StartOf Darkness for Hellfire, a prequel to EFH. Completed.

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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48367/the-tale-of-hellfire The Tale of Hellfire]]: Tells the StartOf Darkness for Hellfire, Hellfire's StartOfDarkness, a prequel to EFH. Completed.

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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Connor accidentally stabs Hellfire in the face with a piece of glass, cutting out one of his eyes.]]

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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Connor accidentally stabs Hellfire in the face eye with a piece of glass, cutting out one of broken glass.]]
* FallenHero: [[spoiler: Hellfire, after losing
his eyes.wife and child.]]
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* AxCrazy: Hellfire went completely off the deep end long ago.

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* AxCrazy: Hellfire went completely off the deep end long ago.Hellfire, who is prove violent, murderous rages.
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* Badass: Connor and to a lesser extant Spike. [[spoiler: With makeshift weapons, they were able to incapacitate all the Dragonfire ponies.]]

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* Badass: Connor and to a lesser extant Spike. [[spoiler: With makeshift weapons, they were able to incapacitate all the Dragonfire ponies.]]



* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: A chilling example.[[spoiler: Hellfire considers Rarity to be beautiful mare he's seen, and starts nuzzling her and licking her neck. It's implied that Rarity resembles his late wife.]]

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* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: A chilling example.[[spoiler: Hellfire considers Rarity to be beautiful mare he's seen, and starts nuzzling her and licking her neck.neck, and then threatens to slit it. It's implied that Rarity resembles his late wife.]]
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* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: A chilling example.[[spoiler: Hellfire considers Rarity to be beautiful mare he's seen, and starts nuzzling her and licking her neck. He claims it would give him greater joy to ''slit'' it.]]

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* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: A chilling example.[[spoiler: Hellfire considers Rarity to be beautiful mare he's seen, and starts nuzzling her and licking her neck. He claims it would give him greater joy to ''slit'' it.It's implied that Rarity resembles his late wife.]]
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* KnightOfCerebus: While the story was already a little dramatic, dealing with Connor's status as a pariah, and the Mane 6's becoming isolated for their association with him, things become darker when Hellfire shows up. His first act [[spoiler: kill one of his minions over a petty order.]]
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* Badass: Connor and to a lesser extant Spike. [[spoiler: With makeshift weapons, they were able to incapacitate all the Dragonfire ponies.]]
** BadassNormal: [[spoiler: Connor himself defeated Hellfire, a stallion powerful enough to ''slay a dragon''.]]
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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Connor accidentally stabs Hellfire in the face with a piece of glass, cutting out one of his eyes.]]
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* IHaveYouKnowMyPretty: A chilling example.[[spoiler: Hellfire considers Rarity to be beautiful mare he's seen, and starts nuzzling her and licking her neck. He claims it would give him greater joy to ''slit'' it.]]
** [[spoiler: He later does the same thing to Fluttershy, though this is done to taunt Connor who he is aware has a crush on Fluttershy.]]

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* IHaveYouKnowMyPretty: IHaveYouNowMyPretty: A chilling example.[[spoiler: Hellfire considers Rarity to be beautiful mare he's seen, and starts nuzzling her and licking her neck. He claims it would give him greater joy to ''slit'' it.]]
** [[spoiler: He later does the same thing to Fluttershy, though this is done to taunt Connor who he is aware has a of his crush on Fluttershy.]]
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* IHaveYouKnowMyPretty: A chilling example.[[spoiler: Hellfire considers Rarity to be beautiful mare he's seen, and starts nuzzling her and licking her neck. He claims it would give him greater joy to ''slit'' it.]]
** [[spoiler: He later does the same thing to Fluttershy, though this is done to taunt Connor who he is aware has a crush on Fluttershy.]]
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Equestria's First Human is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Ceehoff Ceehoof]]. Connor Powell, a high school loser, becomes as the title says, Equestria's first human. He befriends the Mane Six, but finds befriending the rest of Ponyville to be more of a challenge since they are wary of strangers. Their ostracism combined with the appearance of a shadowy terrorist group may force Connor to fight for the thing he's desperately wanted all his life: friendship.

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Equestria's First Human is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Ceehoff Ceehoof]].Ceehoff]]. Connor Powell, a high school loser, becomes as the title says, Equestria's first human. He befriends the Mane Six, but finds befriending the rest of Ponyville to be more of a challenge since they are wary of strangers. Their ostracism combined with the appearance of a shadowy terrorist group may force Connor to fight for the thing he's desperately wanted all his life: friendship.
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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech: When Connor [[spoiler: refuses to help save the town from the Dragonfire ponies]] Spike calls him a loser, and that if he can't let go off his anger, he'll stay that way. Connor agrees, and decides to help him.
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* KarmicDeath: [[spoiler: Hellfire is devoured by the hydra he abused and tried to feed the Princess and the Mane 6 to.]]


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* WhatTheHellHero:
** [[spoiler: Connor calls out the Mane 6 for avoiding him like the rest of town, and not helping him integrate, after he is beaten up by the Royal Guards.]]
** Connor tears into Celestia for [[spoiler: For putting the seal on him that brought him to Equestria behind his back. Luna herself is annoyed by Celestia's con. Connor later admits he's more upset about dying and just directed that toward Celestia.]]
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* [[spoiler: Animorphism:]]:[[spoiler: After being killed in a car crash, and his soul being sent to Equestria, Connor is offered the choice of being reborn as a pony or a human. Connor after much soul searching, decides to be reborn as pony, deciding he could better love Fluttershy in that form. Connor is reformed, but takes a while to learn pony walking.]]
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* RageBreakingPoint: After being treated as a plague by the townspeople and ostracized by almost all the friends he's made, Connor snaps [[spoiler: When he rescues Princess Celestia and receives a beating from the Royal Guards (actually Dragonfire spies) and is instead laughed at by the rest of the town for his crush on Fluttershy. In the rewrite, the town simply stood by and watched the beating take place, including the Mane 6. It drives him into leaving town.]]
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The author has also created an enormous amount of fanart and supplemental material which can be found on [[http://ceehoff.deviantart.com Deviantart]] and even a [[http://equestrias-first-human.tumblr.com/ Tumblr]].

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The author has also created an enormous amount of fanart and supplemental material which can be found on [[http://ceehoff.deviantart.com Deviantart]] and even a [[http://equestrias-first-human.tumblr.com/ Tumblr]].Tumblr]].

! The Tropes for Equestria's First Human are:
* AxCrazy: Hellfire went completely off the deep end long ago.
* BadBoss: Hellfire. Your minion fails to apprehend a baby dragon, but suggests sending messages through loudspeakers. His response? [[spoiler: Gut him with his sword.]]
* InterspeciesRomance: Connor and Fluttershy fall in love with each other, but don't enter into any carnal relations. [[spoiler: It's averted later on when Connor returns to Equestria and chooses to be reborn as a pony, realizing he could return Fluttershy's affections more easily that way.]]
* WhatTheHellTownspeople: Ponyville at first treats Connor like they use to treat Zecora, by closing their shops every time he walks by. Connor being a good Samaritan doesn't change their attitude, and soon the whole town start avoiding the Mane 6, boycotting their businesses, and refusing to help them prepare for a festival for Princess Celestia. The reaches a peak when [[spoiler: Connor is beaten up by the Royal Guards (actually Dragonfire spies) after he saves Princess Celestia from getting skewered, and town just watch it happen. (In the original, they just laughed at Connor for having a crush on Fluttershy).]] Connor runs off in anger, and Princess Celestia tells the town off for treating a visitor so coldly.
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The author has also created an enormous amount of fanart and supplemental material which can be found on [[http://ceehoff.deviantart.com Deviantart]]] and even a [[http://equestrias-first-human.tumblr.com/ Tumblr]].

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The author has also created an enormous amount of fanart and supplemental material which can be found on [[http://ceehoff.deviantart.com Deviantart]]] Deviantart]] and even a [[http://equestrias-first-human.tumblr.com/ Tumblr]].
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The author has also created an enormous amount of fanart and supplemental material which can be found on [[http://ceehoff.deviantart.com/]] deviantart and [[http://equestrias-first-human.tumblr.com/ tumblr]].

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The author has also created an enormous amount of fanart and supplemental material which can be found on [[http://ceehoff.deviantart.com/]] deviantart com Deviantart]]] and even a [[http://equestrias-first-human.tumblr.com/ tumblr]].Tumblr]].

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* Equestria's First Human is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Ceehoff Ceehoof]]. Connor Powell, a high school loser, becomes as the title says, Equestria's first human. He befriends the Mane Six, but finds befriending the rest of Ponyville to be more of a challenge since they are wary of strangers. Their ostracism combined with the appearance of a shadowy terrorist group may force Connor to fight for the thing he's desperately wanted all his life: friendship.

The story is presently completed and can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/13537/equestrias-first-human here.]]

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* Equestria's First Human is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Ceehoff Ceehoof]]. Connor Powell, a high school loser, becomes as the title says, Equestria's first human. He befriends the Mane Six, but finds befriending the rest of Ponyville to be more of a challenge since they are wary of strangers. Their ostracism combined with the appearance of a shadowy terrorist group may force Connor to fight for the thing he's desperately wanted all his life: friendship.

The story is presently completed and can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/13537/equestrias-first-human here.]]]]

The author has written three sequels detailing [[spoiler: Connor's life in Equestria]] as well as a prequel:

! The following sequel stories are:
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/23216/connor-at-the-royal-wedding Connor At The Royal Wedding]]: The Mane 6 have been cordially invited to the Royal Wedding... Connor, too! Completed
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/27023/sweetie-crush Sweetie Crush]]: Connor and Sweetie Belle have been doing some quality time together: helping with homework, walking to school, playing, talking, comforting after a personal dispute. After a while, Sweetie Belle begins to crush on the colt. She wants more than anything for him to be her coltfriend, but what will hold her back? Completed
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/147882/having-hands-again HavingHandsAgain]]: Shortly after the theft of Twilight's crown by Sunset Shimmer and Twilight's departure, Equestria's First Human, Connor Powell, goes through the mirror into a world he is most familiar with.

! Other Stories
*[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48367/the-tale-of-hellfire The Tale of Hellfire]]: Tells the StartOf Darkness for Hellfire, a prequel to EFH. Completed.

The author has also created an enormous amount of fanart and supplemental material which can be found on [[http://ceehoff.deviantart.com/]] deviantart and [[http://equestrias-first-human.tumblr.com/ tumblr]].
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* Equestria's First Human is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Ceehoff Ceehoof]]. Connor Powell, a high school loser, becomes as the title says, Equestria's first human. He befriends the Mane Six, but finds befriending the rest of Ponyville to be more of a challenge since they are wary of strangers. Their ostracism combined with the appearance of a shadowy terrorist group may force Connor to fight for the thing he's desperately wanted all his life: friendship.

The story is presently completed and can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/13537/equestrias-first-human here.]]

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