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* [[AwesomeMcCoolName Awesome [=McCool=] Name]]: Appears to be a requirement to work for the MSEA. But, above all, ''October Harper Maynard''.
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* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: ''Interlude: the Madness of Tara Gilesbe''.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Aphrodite's electric blue hair.
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* {{Anticlimax}}: [[spoiler:The defeat of Sapphire, once they finally catch up to her.]] Lampshaded by Draco.
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* BeautyBrainsAndBrawn: Aphrodite, October, Charlie.
** Luna, Hermione, Ginny.
** Tara, Jenny, The Anonymous
* BetterThanABareBulb: Most tropes that pop up are lampshaded. Repeatedly.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: ''Brandon'', of all people.
** Luna, Hermione, Ginny.
** Tara, Jenny, The Anonymous
* BetterThanABareBulb: Most tropes that pop up are lampshaded. Repeatedly.
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* BigWhat: Charlie upon finding out October's mother is coming to visit.
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* {{BFG}}: Charlie has a couple.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Jenny, who turns out to be a pretty nasty piece of work.
** [[spoiler:Missy as well.]]
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Jenny, who turns out to be a pretty nasty piece of work.
** [[spoiler:Missy as well.]]
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* DragonInChief: Jenny is far smarter, and thus, more dangerous than Tara.
* EnemyMine: Harry and co. call a truce with Draco so they can take out Ebony (and later, Sapphire).
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* TheFaceless: [[spoiler:The Anonymous, who always keeps her face hidden, even from Missy.]]
* FairPlayVillain: Tara and Jenny, but mostly Jenny.
* FiveManBand:
** The MSEA:
*** TheHero: October
*** TheLancer: Brandon
*** TheBigGuy: Charlie
*** TheSmartGuy: Gigi
*** TheChick: Aphrodite
*** TheSixthRanger: Missy/Victoria
** The canon characters can also be viewed as this:
*** TheHero: Harry
*** TheLancer: Ron
*** TheBigGuy: Ginny
*** TheSmartGuy: Hermione
*** TheChick: Luna
*** TheSixthRanger: Draco
** Villains:
*** BigBad: The Anonymous
*** TheDragon: [[spoiler:Missy]]
*** TheEvilGenius: Jenny
*** TheBrute: [[{{Mooks}} The Jerks]]
*** TheDarkChick: Tara
* {{Foil}}: Sapphire for Ebony. Both are Sues, but in completely different ways.
* FairPlayVillain: Tara and Jenny, but mostly Jenny.
* FiveManBand:
** The MSEA:
*** TheHero: October
*** TheLancer: Brandon
*** TheBigGuy: Charlie
*** TheSmartGuy: Gigi
*** TheChick: Aphrodite
*** TheSixthRanger: Missy/Victoria
** The canon characters can also be viewed as this:
*** TheHero: Harry
*** TheLancer: Ron
*** TheBigGuy: Ginny
*** TheSmartGuy: Hermione
*** TheChick: Luna
*** TheSixthRanger: Draco
** Villains:
*** BigBad: The Anonymous
*** TheDragon: [[spoiler:Missy]]
*** TheEvilGenius: Jenny
*** TheBrute: [[{{Mooks}} The Jerks]]
*** TheDarkChick: Tara
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* TheGunslinger: Charlie
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Every time a Mary Sue dies, a new one is born in it's place. And the Sue that replaced Ebony is even WORSE.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Every time a Mary Sue dies, a new one is born in it's its place. And the Sue that replaced Ebony is even WORSE.
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''Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way vs. Canon'' is a Literature/HarryPotter fanfiction by Cookie [=VanDeKamp=]. It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7351304/1/ here.]] The story begins on a normal day for Ron, Hermione, and Harry. And then... [[Fanfic/MyImmortal a certain Mary Sue shows up.]] After a few chapters of watching Ebony torment the students of Hogwarts, the Trio, Ginny, Luna, and Draco make it their business to get rid of her, once and for all.
The sequel, ''Sapphire Eleanor Rose Suzette de Mont vs. Canon'' (read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7762173/1/Sapphire_Eleanor_Rose_Suzette_de_Mont_vs_Canon here]]) shakes up the formula a bit. A new Mary Sue arrives, but this one is of the IncorruptiblePurePureness variety. Once again, the Hogwarts students decide to get rid of her, but it turns out the MSEA (Mary Sue Extermination Association) had the same idea. The two groups join forces. Partway through this story, the series was titled ''The MSEA Files''.
The third entry, ''The MSEA Reloaded'', can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8670356/1/ here.]] Seemingly dead.
Prior the posting of ''Reloaded'', the author also launched a Tumblr blog for the MSEA Files [[http://www.themseafiles.tumblr.com here.]] There, she posts Useless MSEA Facts, which is ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin. The account was deleted.
The sequel, ''Sapphire Eleanor Rose Suzette de Mont vs. Canon'' (read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7762173/1/Sapphire_Eleanor_Rose_Suzette_de_Mont_vs_Canon here]]) shakes up the formula a bit. A new Mary Sue arrives, but this one is of the IncorruptiblePurePureness variety. Once again, the Hogwarts students decide to get rid of her, but it turns out the MSEA (Mary Sue Extermination Association) had the same idea. The two groups join forces. Partway through this story, the series was titled ''The MSEA Files''.
The third entry, ''The MSEA Reloaded'', can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8670356/1/ here.]] Seemingly dead.
Prior the posting of ''Reloaded'', the author also launched a Tumblr blog for the MSEA Files [[http://www.themseafiles.tumblr.com here.]] There, she posts Useless MSEA Facts, which is ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin. The account was deleted.
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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Charlie's not a villain, or even overtly cruel, just a tad... over-enthusiastic. When [[spoiler:Missy]] is reading out her charges, Charlie says that she doesn't remember doing half the things on the list. (Of course, it ''was'' a really ''long'' list...)
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* EyeColourChange: As said in the second chapter of ''Sapphire Eleanor Rose Suzette de Mont vs Canon'': Sapphire's eyes ''somehow'' change color every day:
--> '''Ginny:''' "Morning, Sapph—weren't your eyes blue yesterday?"\\
'''Sapphire:''' "They change color every day."
--> '''Ginny:''' "Morning, Sapph—weren't your eyes blue yesterday?"\\
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* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: Sapphire.
-->''Look at me! Look at this long, luxurious, never-gets-tangled-ever golden hair, symbolizing my purity! I'm—I'm a hag!''
-->''Look at me! Look at this long, luxurious, never-gets-tangled-ever golden hair, symbolizing my purity! I'm—I'm a hag!''
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* OnlySaneMan: Harry and Hermione, what with the Weasley's eagerness to destroy Ebony, Draco's sheer terror at being stalked by Ebony, and Luna's being... herself. Best displayed when he talks to [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} Charlie]].
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* WhoNamesTheirKidDude:
-->"What kind of a jerk would hate their kid enough to make one of her middle names ''Dementia''?" asked Dean. "I mean, doesn't it mean 'crazy' or something?"
-->"What kind of a jerk would hate their kid enough to make one of her middle names ''Dementia''?" asked Dean. "I mean, doesn't it mean 'crazy' or something?"
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* GrayEyes: October, showing her strong-willed nature and dedication to her work.
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* FiveBadBand:
** BigBad: The Anonymous
** TheDragon: [[spoiler:Missy]]
** TheEvilGenius: Jenny
** TheBrute: [[{{Mooks}} The Jerks]]
** TheDarkChick: Tara
* FiveManBand: The MSEA:
** TheHero: October
** TheLancer: Brandon
** TheBigGuy: Charlie
** TheSmartGuy: Gigi
** TheChick: Aphrodite
** TheSixthRanger: Missy/Victoria
** BigBad: The Anonymous
** TheDragon: [[spoiler:Missy]]
** TheEvilGenius: Jenny
** TheBrute: [[{{Mooks}} The Jerks]]
** TheDarkChick: Tara
* FiveManBand: The MSEA:
** TheHero: October
** TheLancer: Brandon
** TheBigGuy: Charlie
** TheSmartGuy: Gigi
** TheChick: Aphrodite
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FiveManBand:
**BigBad: The Anonymous
** TheDragon: [[spoiler:Missy]]
** TheEvilGenius: Jenny
** TheBrute: [[{{Mooks}} The Jerks]]
** TheDarkChick: Tara
* FiveManBand:The MSEA:
** *** TheHero: October
** *** TheLancer: Brandon
** *** TheBigGuy: Charlie
** *** TheSmartGuy: Gigi
** *** TheChick: Aphrodite
** *** TheSixthRanger: Missy/Victoria
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** TheDragon: [[spoiler:Missy]]
** TheEvilGenius: Jenny
** TheBrute: [[{{Mooks}} The Jerks]]
** TheDarkChick: Tara
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*** BigBad: The Anonymous
*** TheDragon: [[spoiler:Missy]]
*** TheEvilGenius: Jenny
*** TheBrute: [[{{Mooks}} The Jerks]]
*** TheDarkChick: Tara
*** BigBad: The Anonymous
*** TheDragon: [[spoiler:Missy]]
*** TheEvilGenius: Jenny
*** TheBrute: [[{{Mooks}} The Jerks]]
*** TheDarkChick: Tara
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The third entry, ''The MSEA Reloaded'', can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8670356/1/ here.]]
Seemingly dead.
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Seemingly dead.
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]] Seemingly dead.
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* KangarooCourt: In Chapter 15 of ''Sapphire''. [[Fanfic/MyImmortal Tara]] is the judge, and that's just the ''beginning''...
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* KangarooCourt: In Chapter 15 of ''Sapphire''. [[Fanfic/MyImmortal Tara]] Ta]][[TheDitz ra]] is the judge, and that's just the ''beginning''...
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** Draco's line [[Theatre/AVeryPotterMusical "How did you idiots get captured? You were]] ''[[TeamStarkid invisible!"]]''
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* KaleidoscopeEyes: Sapphire's eyes ''somehow'' change color every day.
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** In ''Sapphire'', we get this: [[AVeryPotterMusical [[Theatre/AVeryPotterMusical "Coward! Ten points from Gryffindor!"]]
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* MarySueHunter: The entire point of the MSEA (Mary Sue Extermination Association).
* MarySueTropes: [[LampshadeHanging All]] [[DiscussedTrope used]] [[ParodiedTrope extensively]] {{InUniverse}}.
** JerkSue: Ebony.
** MarySueClassic: Sapphire.
* MarySueTropes: [[LampshadeHanging All]] [[DiscussedTrope used]] [[ParodiedTrope extensively]] {{InUniverse}}.
** JerkSue: Ebony.
** MarySueClassic: Sapphire.
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* MoodWhiplash: Sapphire vs. Canon starts off as another humorous parody, but this time with an entire team of [[MarySueHunter Mary Sue exterminators]]! [[spoiler:Oh, and by the way, one of the interns for the MSEA is a traitor. Also, the HQ just caught on fire.]]
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* MoodWhiplash: Sapphire vs. Canon starts off as another humorous parody, but this time with an entire team of [[MarySueHunter Mary Sue exterminators]]! exterminators! [[spoiler:Oh, and by the way, one of the interns for the MSEA is a traitor. Also, the HQ just caught on fire.]]
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** Right after October does a GlassesPull: [[CSIMiami "YYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAHHHHHH!"]]
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** When Sapphire pops up in the ''Franchise/StarTrek'' universe, [=McCoy=] comments that [[EnsignSueMustDie he thought he was done with this crap when he got rid of Ensign Sue]].
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** When Sapphire pops up in the ''Franchise/StarTrek'' universe, [=McCoy=] comments that [[EnsignSueMustDie [[Webcomic/EnsignSueMustDie he thought he was done with this crap when he got rid of Ensign Sue]].
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* {{Demoted to Extra}}: The canon Harry Potter characters become this in the sequel, despite being initially established as the protagonists in Chapter 1. Even though they tag along with the [[Main/SpotlightStealingSquad MSEA]], they still barely say anything and do nothing for the story.
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* [[Main/SpotlightStealingSquad Spotlight-Stealing Squad]]: The entire MSEA in the sequel, who, five chapters in, no less, replace the original heroes of the story, without any warning whatsoever.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Appears to be a requirement to work for the MSEA. But, above all, ''October Harper Maynard''.
* BannedFromArgo: Charlie is forbidden to enter the ''{{Series/Sherlock}}'' universe ever again. [[NoodleIncident For some reason.]]
** And she's banned from Rio, too.
* BannedFromArgo: Charlie is forbidden to enter the ''{{Series/Sherlock}}'' universe ever again. [[NoodleIncident For some reason.]]
** And she's banned from Rio, too.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: [[AwesomeMcCoolName Awesome [=McCool=] Name]]: Appears to be a requirement to work for the MSEA. But, above all, ''October Harper Maynard''. \n* BannedFromArgo: Charlie is forbidden to enter the ''{{Series/Sherlock}}'' universe ever again. [[NoodleIncident For some reason.]]\n** And she's banned from Rio, too.
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* CerebusSyndrome: Hoo, boy. ''Ebony vs. Canon'' is completely wacky humor, ''Sapphire vs. Canon'' starts out this way but turns into a {{Dramedy}} halfway through, and now ''Reloaded'' is a {{Dramedy}} that's ''very'' heavy on the "drama" side, with only a few jokes to keep it from being a straight up drama.
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** Missy claims that [[spoiler:she is no kind of traitor. You know. After she burned down the MSEA headquarters and revealed herself to be working for the BigBad.]]
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-->'''Gigi:''' ...''Tell me'' she didn't just say that.
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''Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way vs. Canon'' is a HarryPotter Literature/HarryPotter fanfiction by Cookie [=VanDeKamp=]. It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7351304/1/ here.]] The story begins on a normal day for Ron, Hermione, and Harry. And then... [[Fanfic/MyImmortal a certain Mary Sue shows up.]] After a few chapters of watching Ebony torment the students of Hogwarts, the Trio, Ginny, Luna, and Draco make it their business to get rid of her, once and for all.
