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* LethalChef: During Chapter 35.7, Chie, Yukiko and Rise decide to use the club's stove to make some curry as a nice gesture. The result blows up the stove, splattering the room, Fuuka and the other three in brown sludge. Needless to say, Natsuki decides to give them cooking lessons.



* TemptingFate: In Chapter 17.11, the girls agree that if "sexy Bowser" ever becomes a meme, they'll be bad ''Sonic'' [=OCs=] ("the world's cheapest furries") for a Loop. Cue JustForFun/{{Bowsette}}, and Chapter 22.6 is the result.

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In Chapter 17.11, the girls agree that if "sexy Bowser" ever becomes a meme, they'll be bad ''Sonic'' [=OCs=] ("the world's cheapest furries") for a Loop. Cue JustForFun/{{Bowsette}}, and Chapter 22.6 is the result.result.
** In Chapter 35.7, Fuuka asks Chie, Yukiko and Rise if they're sure that they know what they're doing while making curry. Chie and Yukiko confirm that they do, but their cooking blows up the stove, sending brown sludge on the room and the girls. Cue Fuuka wailing "I thought you said you knew what you were doing?"

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* RageAgainstTheAuthor: After the Dokis find out about Meta Enterprise Solutions, their in-universe creators and how their actions were planned from the very beginning, Monika sends Paula Miner a formal complaint about how the Dokis were treated and most importantly, how Monika showed remorse. Monika then says how long she's atoned for her sins and finding out what happened just because Meta Enterprise Solutions treated the girls as playthings to prove something and saying she's not going to deny having an author to rage against. She then finishes her letter with "In conclusion, I and the rest of the Literature Club have been incredibly hurt by your actions against us, and are being forced to take drastic action against you. Have a good day. Sincerely, Just Monika. P.S. Don't look behind you."



** In one of the loops, Monika gets a message from Psyche, which is initially garbled, until he declares that they're getting an expansion, with the Dokis wondering what's different... until they discover Metaverse Enterprise Solutions, their in-universe creators.

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** In one of the loops, Monika gets a message from Psyche, which is initially garbled, until he she declares that they're getting an expansion, with the Dokis wondering what's different... until they discover Metaverse Enterprise Solutions, their in-universe creators.
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** Hilariously, ''[[VideoGame/DokiDokiLiteratureClub DDLC+]]'' '''''does''''' have an route that can lead to happiness in the literature club... and is $14.99.


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** In one of the loops, Monika gets a message from Psyche, which is initially garbled, until he declares that they're getting an expansion, with the Dokis wondering what's different... until they discover Metaverse Enterprise Solutions, their in-universe creators.
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* TheBattleDidntCount: Seras tells Yuri this in Chapter 30.1 (after shooting her in the gut) saying that their battle didn't count as she (Yuri) had help from Natsuki.
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-->''*Then Toph Woke Up.''* ''Cue Toph turning the battle around in two seconds.'''

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-->''*Then Toph Woke Up.''* ''Cue Toph turning the battle around in two seconds.'''''
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-->"Then Toph Woke Up." Cue Toph turning the battle around in two seconds.

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-->"Then -->''*Then Toph Woke Up." Cue ''* ''Cue Toph turning the battle around in two seconds.'''
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* RatedMForManly: Discussed in Chapter 11.7, complete with making up a manly cereal commercial.
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* LampshadeHanging: Numerous examples, with one being Chapter 17.9 when the girls are discussing how they came to be due to [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Xenahort]] capturing Hiroaka, putting him to sleep and spiritually vivisecting him as well as them still being girls despite Hiroaka being a boy and Monika saying that by the metaphysics of this world, they shouldn't exist and Kingdom Hearts lore is really confusing.

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* LampshadeHanging: Numerous examples, with one being Chapter 17.9 when the girls are discussing how they came to be due to [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Xenahort]] Xehanort]] capturing Hiroaka, putting him to sleep and spiritually vivisecting him as well as them still being girls despite Hiroaka being a boy and Monika saying that by the metaphysics of this world, they shouldn't exist and Kingdom Hearts lore is really confusing.
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* DidIJustSayThatOutLoud: Sayori has this reaction in Chapter 37 after saying that the Crest of Flames was the Fire Emblem out loud. Luckily, everyone's too busy celebrating the defeat of "those that slither" to pay any mind.

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'''Sans:''' ''[hanging upside-down from the ceiling by the ankles, his body wrapped in chains]'' hey, tori...so, turns out, some girls get ''really'' scary when you make them mad.

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'''Sans:''' ''[hanging upside-down from the ceiling by the ankles, his body wrapped in chains]'' hey, tori...so, turns out, some girls get ''really'' scary when you make them mad.\\
''[Toriel facepalms]''
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* AWizardDidIt: Used in the author's notes for 26.7 as to how Monika beat [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender Ozai]]:
---> ''In case you were curious how Monika made herself fireproof, A Wizard Did It. Except it was actually a witch. And that witch's name was Monika. She used a Fireproofing Charm on herself.''


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** Monika, Natsuki and Yuri pull this in response to the [=MC's=] rambling poetry in 32.4 with Monika off exploring the code while having left a placeholder model and Natsuki declaring that she's got blue milk cookies to bake and then leaves, dragging along a half-asleep Yuri.
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* ShuttingUpNow: Yuri does this in Chapter 6.6, saying "I'll…I'll be quiet–" after her OpenMouthInsertFoot moment.
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* LampshadeHanging: Numerous examples, with one being Chapter 17.9 when the girls are discussing how they came to be due to [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Xenahort]] capturing Hiroaka, putting him to sleep and spiritually vivisecting him as well as them still being girls despite Hiroaka being a boy and Monika saying that be the metaphysics of this world, they shouldn't exist and Kingdom Hearts lore is really confusing.

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* LampshadeHanging: Numerous examples, with one being Chapter 17.9 when the girls are discussing how they came to be due to [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Xenahort]] capturing Hiroaka, putting him to sleep and spiritually vivisecting him as well as them still being girls despite Hiroaka being a boy and Monika saying that be by the metaphysics of this world, they shouldn't exist and Kingdom Hearts lore is really confusing.
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* AbnormalAmmo: In Chapter 6.4, the club collectively decides to fight using pies pre-Awakening, then continues it afterward. Apparently, UnAwake Monika came up with it to make the other three girls completely intolerable.

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* AbnormalAmmo: In Chapter 6.4, the club collectively decides to fight using pies pre-Awakening, then continues it afterward. Apparently, UnAwake [=UnAwake=] Monika came up with it to make the other three girls completely intolerable.

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* AbnormalAmmo: In Chapter 6.4, the club collectively decides to fight using pies pre-Awakening, then continues it afterward.

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* AbnormalAmmo: In Chapter 6.4, the club collectively decides to fight using pies pre-Awakening, then continues it afterward. Apparently, UnAwake Monika came up with it to make the other three girls completely intolerable.


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* LampshadeHanging: Numerous examples, with one being Chapter 17.9 when the girls are discussing how they came to be due to [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Xenahort]] capturing Hiroaka, putting him to sleep and spiritually vivisecting him as well as them still being girls despite Hiroaka being a boy and Monika saying that be the metaphysics of this world, they shouldn't exist and Kingdom Hearts lore is really confusing.
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** ---> "Then Toph Woke Up." Cue Toph turning the battle around in two seconds.

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** ---> "Then -->"Then Toph Woke Up." Cue Toph turning the battle around in two seconds.
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** "Then Toph Woke Up." Cue Toph turning the battle around in two seconds.

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** ---> "Then Toph Woke Up." Cue Toph turning the battle around in two seconds.
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** 11.11 which starts with the Dokis and Hiroaka relaxing...only for Monika to check the news and sees the Earth is about to be destroyed by collision with another planet. After Sayori Pockets Hiroaka, Monika Pockets them and then gets her and the others into the only spaceship available: [[Anime/Shelter Rin's]].

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** 11.11 which starts with the Dokis and Hiroaka relaxing...only for Monika to check the news and sees the Earth is about to be destroyed by collision with another planet. After Sayori Pockets Hiroaka, Monika Pockets them and then gets her and the others into the only spaceship available: [[Anime/Shelter [[Anime/Shelter2016 Rin's]].
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* BaitAndSwitch: 7.8 starts with the MC reciting his lines from the game: "I really didn't want to have to enter her room like this... Isn't it kind of a breach of privacy? But she really leaves me no choice." and then he opens the door and sees Sayori meditating, prompting him to breathe a sigh of relief.


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* CurbStompBattle: The battle between Natsuki and an Unawake Toph in 15.2 starts as this due to Natsuki (Sand Cat) specializing in the sand part of Earthbending which throws off Toph's seismic sense. Then, Toph Wakes Up and takes two seconds to turn the fight around. Natsuki does lose the resulting fight but not without making it as fun as possible.


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* WhamLine: In 15.2, Natsuki (Sand Cat) is about to win her battle with an Unawake Toph when this happens:
** "Then Toph Woke Up." Cue Toph turning the battle around in two seconds.

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* BrownBagMask: Monika wears one for a Loop when her face is overridden (in Chapter 5.9) by her [[NightmareFace jumpscare face]] from Baseline.

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* BrownBagMask: Monika wears one for a Loop when her face is overridden (in Chapter 5.9) by her [[NightmareFace jumpscare face]] from Baseline. The commentary says that Natsuki added bunny ears and whiskers, naturally.


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* RiddleForTheAges: The Loop Natsuki was in in 23.5. She was rather upset about it, as detailed above but she thought the bad guys looked cool and decides to recreate the frosting tigers.


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* WhamEpisode:
** 11.11 which starts with the Dokis and Hiroaka relaxing...only for Monika to check the news and sees the Earth is about to be destroyed by collision with another planet. After Sayori Pockets Hiroaka, Monika Pockets them and then gets her and the others into the only spaceship available: [[Anime/Shelter Rin's]].
** 31.11 which has Sayori seeing that Hiroaka (now named Kevin) has an actual face and voice and then it's revealed that this has been happening for several loops. Ganesha then contacts the Dokis and reveals that he's going to be passing Admin duties to Psyche due to the fact he's overseeing many loops.
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** Can also happen during snippets, such as Chapter 11.11, which starts out calm before shifting gears something fierce when [[spoiler:Monika discovers that Earth is going to be destroyed]]. The rest of the snippet [[spoiler:takes place in [[Anime/{{Shelter}} Rin]]'s spaceship]], wherein many emotions are felt.

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** Can also happen during snippets, such as Chapter 11.11, which starts out calm before shifting gears something fierce when [[spoiler:Monika discovers that Earth is going to be destroyed]]. The rest of the snippet [[spoiler:takes place in [[Anime/{{Shelter}} [[Anime/{{Shelter|2016}} Rin]]'s spaceship]], wherein many emotions are felt.

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Trope has been renamed to Sex Starts Story Stops. Removing for not fitting the definition.


* CoitusEnsues: Happens offscreen during Chapter 30.1 with [[spoiler:Natsuki and Vampire!Yuri]].
-->'''[[spoiler:Natsuki]]:''' I'm way too relaxed to give a crap. My brain is ''swimming'' in endorphins right now. [[spoiler:Vampire chicks]], am I right, man?\\
'''[[Anime/{{Hellsing}} Pip]]:''' Damn straight. ''[fistbump]''



* NaughtyTentacles: Referenced by Sayori, of all people - when Monika reveals her squid legs in Chapter 8.8, Sayori grabs Hiroaka and runs out, saying that she's seen enough {{Hentai}} to know [[CoitusEnsues where this is going]]. After Monika leaves to soak in the pool, Natsuki and Yuri realize what Sayori said - and the fact that she was ''Unawake'' at the time.

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* NaughtyTentacles: Referenced by Sayori, of all people - when Monika reveals her squid legs in Chapter 8.8, Sayori grabs Hiroaka and runs out, saying that she's seen enough {{Hentai}} to know [[CoitusEnsues where this is going]].going. After Monika leaves to soak in the pool, Natsuki and Yuri realize what Sayori said - and the fact that she was ''Unawake'' at the time.
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* CharacterBlog: Monika's [[https://twitter.com/lilmonix3 Twitter account]] is brought up in Chapter 6.6, with Natsuki mentioning that it has pictures of herself making chocolates, Sayori tying a gift box, Yuri making love notes, and Monika handing the viewer a box of chocolates with a romantic letter on the side (all of which were posted on said account in February 2018).

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* CharacterBlog: Monika's [[https://twitter.com/lilmonix3 Twitter account]] is brought up in Chapter 6.6, with Natsuki mentioning that it has pictures of herself making chocolates, Sayori tying a gift box, Yuri making love notes, and Monika handing the viewer a box of chocolates with a romantic letter on the side (all of which were posted on said account in February 2018). Needless to say, Monika is ''not'' happy that she'd betray her friends like that.



* OpenMouthInsertFoot: Yuri does this in Chapter 6.6 when Natsuki tells Monika and Yuri about the CharacterBlog for Monika in Baseline and the Valentine Day picture for Monika is her handing the viewer a box of chocolates with a letter on the side (basically taking credit for what Sayori, Natsuki and Yuri's pictures showed them doing). Yuri tries to say that it's a lot less worse than Baseline, claiming she could see Monika do that if Monika still kind of had her obsession with the player...and after flinching from Monika's DeathGlare tries to cover it up by saying the Baseline self would do something like that, not the looping one before saying she'll be quiet

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* OpenMouthInsertFoot: Yuri does this in Chapter 6.6 when Natsuki tells Monika and Yuri about the CharacterBlog for Monika in Baseline and the Valentine Day picture for Monika is her handing the viewer a box of chocolates with a letter on the side (basically taking credit for what Sayori, Natsuki and Yuri's pictures showed them doing). Yuri tries to say that it's a lot less worse than Baseline, claiming she could see Monika do that if Monika still kind of had her obsession with the player...and after flinching from Monika's DeathGlare tries to cover it up by saying the Baseline self would do something like that, not the looping one before saying she'll be quietquiet.
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* PutOnABus: Ganesha makes Psyche the new admin for the [=DDLC=] loops in chapter 32.12 due to the fact that he's busy with a lot of loops (including Evangelion, one of the first loops) and Psyche is an expert in soul-coding, psychology is a major interest of hers and her compassionate nature makes her a perfect fit. Psyche ends up doing a solid, sleepless night of multiple playthroughs of the game and mad-note taking and says she'll do it with the latter half being Psyche introducing herself to the girls and mentally whispering to them that she knows what each of them are going through.
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-->'''Sans:''' [[AllLowercaseLetters hey, i'm sans.]] we should totally [[{{Pun}} hang]] sometime.\\

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-->'''Sans:''' [[AllLowercaseLetters hey, i'm sans.]] we should totally [[{{Pun}} hang]] ha]][[BlackComedy ng]] sometime.\\
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* DoNotCallMePaul: During Chapter 3.1 (which [[PaintingTheMedium takes the form of]] a typical Wiki/SCPFoundation entry), Monika reacts negatively to her SCP designation - SCP-8888-A-579 [[labelnote:explanation]]("8888" is the number used by the Foundation for Loops, with "A" designating Anchors {other Loopers get "L", with Sayori, Yuri, and Natsuki numbered 6810, 6811, and 6812 respectively} and "579" referring to the number of Branches/Anchors encountered by the Foundation; Malicious Looping Entities get "MLE" instead of "A" or "L")[[/labelnote]] - and says she is "not mere numbers", soon forcefully crashing the computer ''DDLC'' was on. Fortunately for the Foundation (and very much unlike entities such as [[http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-2128 SCP-2128]]), this is as far as she goes in retaliation, with Dr. Simon Glass' report [[note]](Glass is the Anchor of the Foundation's Branch, and as such oversees all SCP-8888 research and documentation)[[/note]] noting that Monika will crash the computer if addressed by her SCP designation but is cooperative if addressed by name.

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* DoNotCallMePaul: During Chapter 3.1 (which [[PaintingTheMedium takes the form of]] a typical Wiki/SCPFoundation Website/SCPFoundation entry), Monika reacts negatively to her SCP designation - SCP-8888-A-579 [[labelnote:explanation]]("8888" is the number used by the Foundation for Loops, with "A" designating Anchors {other Loopers get "L", with Sayori, Yuri, and Natsuki numbered 6810, 6811, and 6812 respectively} and "579" referring to the number of Branches/Anchors encountered by the Foundation; Malicious Looping Entities get "MLE" instead of "A" or "L")[[/labelnote]] - and says she is "not mere numbers", soon forcefully crashing the computer ''DDLC'' was on. Fortunately for the Foundation (and very much unlike entities such as [[http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-2128 SCP-2128]]), this is as far as she goes in retaliation, with Dr. Simon Glass' report [[note]](Glass is the Anchor of the Foundation's Branch, and as such oversees all SCP-8888 research and documentation)[[/note]] noting that Monika will crash the computer if addressed by her SCP designation but is cooperative if addressed by name.
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* KillerYoYo: One of Sayori's [[WeaponOfChoice weapons of choice]]. Chapter 35.2 goes deeper into detail about how it became so, [[EpicFail as well as some of the issues she had to go through in the process.]]

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* KillerYoYo: One of Sayori's [[WeaponOfChoice weapons of choice]].weapons. Chapter 35.2 goes deeper into detail about how it became so, [[EpicFail as well as some of the issues she had to go through in the process.]]
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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: In Chapter 19.12, when Natsuki reveals that the wedding has wanted to make her change her mind about weddings or romance in general and when Sayori gets Natsuki to talk about it, Sayori deliberately ignores the fact that Yuri has taken a sudden interest in what Natsuki has to say about love...


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* OpenMouthInsertFoot: Yuri does this in Chapter 6.6 when Natsuki tells Monika and Yuri about the CharacterBlog for Monika in Baseline and the Valentine Day picture for Monika is her handing the viewer a box of chocolates with a letter on the side (basically taking credit for what Sayori, Natsuki and Yuri's pictures showed them doing). Yuri tries to say that it's a lot less worse than Baseline, claiming she could see Monika do that if Monika still kind of had her obsession with the player...and after flinching from Monika's DeathGlare tries to cover it up by saying the Baseline self would do something like that, not the looping one before saying she'll be quiet
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Trope has been merged into Badass Biker, ZCE.


* BikerBabe: Yuri begins to collect motorcycles as well as knives.
-->'''Sayori:''' Huh. Didn't think you'd like something so...noisy.\\
'''Natsuki:''' She probably likes it for the thrill factor. And the fact that a motorcycle is basically a really big [[ADateWithRosiePalms vib-]]\\
'''Yuri:''' ''Natsuki!''
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* RefugeInAudacity: Chapter 3.11 has the clubroom filled with nooses with a full-sized Sayori doll hanging from each, all in different outfits and having different expressions (some silly-looking, some [[UpToEleven even more disturbing]] than in Baseline, and one that's completely normal aside from having googly-eyes). [[spoiler:It was Sayori's idea, having made a ¥50,000 bet against Natsuki and Yuri that she could make Monika say "[[PrecisionFStrike fuck]]" within five seconds of entering the clubroom. It worked, though Monika is firmly in the DudeNotFunny camp about the whole thing.]]

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* RefugeInAudacity: Chapter 3.11 has the clubroom filled with nooses with a full-sized Sayori doll hanging from each, all in different outfits and having different expressions (some silly-looking, some [[UpToEleven even more disturbing]] disturbing than in Baseline, and one that's completely normal aside from having googly-eyes). [[spoiler:It was Sayori's idea, having made a ¥50,000 bet against Natsuki and Yuri that she could make Monika say "[[PrecisionFStrike fuck]]" within five seconds of entering the clubroom. It worked, though Monika is firmly in the DudeNotFunny camp about the whole thing.]]

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