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* {{Beat}}: A lengthy one in a snip about Monika dealing with ''Plus'' making the code much more buggy after Natsuki says "Creepy as f... fudge donut... flavored... ghost... zombies."
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-->'''WebOriginal/JennyEverywhere:''' Lit-tle too loud there, Ganesha.\\
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** In Chapter 35.11, after the girls realize what the pun about Natsuki's name is (Escargotski), Natsuki says "Yes! Yes! Finally, a pun loop where it's a fucking GOOD pun! You hear me, Tree!? Thank you! ''No more shitty Nat puns''!" Then, at the start of the next loop, she's Caratsuki and a pink diamond on a leather choker that Yuri's wearing. Natsuki says "Never tempt fate" after Monika asks "So, what have we learned?"
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** In one Loop, Monika gets a message from Psyche, which is initially garbled until she declares that they're getting an expansion, with the Dokis wondering what's different... until they discover Metaverse Enterprise Solutions, their in-universe creators.
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** In one Loop, Monika gets a message from Psyche, which is initially garbled until she declares that they're getting an expansion, with the Dokis wondering what's different... until they discover Metaverse Enterprise Solutions, their in-universe creators.creators and being moved from Mike's laptop to a supercomputer running for the express purpose of their game.
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-->''*Then Toph Woke Up.''* ''Cue Toph turning the battle around in two seconds.''
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-->''*Then Toph Woke Up.''* ''Cue Cue Toph turning the battle around in two seconds.''
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* BigWhat: Yuri and Saki do this in Chapter 27 when Monika reveals they tied during their race, leaving at the same time and crossing the finish line at the same time.
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* TheNicknamer: Like in canon, [[Anime/ZombieLandSaga Saki]] is this in Chapter 27, calling Monika "Glitch", Sayori "Peach", Natsuki "Cupcake" and Yuri "Papercut".
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* When Natsuki is replacing Natalie during a Fused Loop with ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'', Natsuki mentions Dumbledore let her destroy his office when she replaced Harry and is surprised when that happened as well as the fact that Adrien and Plagg are letting her do it as well.
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* When Natsuki is replacing Natalie during a Fused Loop with ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'', Natsuki mentions Dumbledore let her destroy his office when she replaced Harry and is surprised when that happened as well as the fact that Adrien and Plagg are letting her do it as well.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Monika telling Annie how she figured out the latter was the anchor for the ''VideoGame/Skullgirls'' Loop:
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Monika telling Annie how she figured out the latter was the anchor for the ''VideoGame/Skullgirls'' ''VideoGame/{{Skullgirls}}'' Loop:
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* MundaneMadeAwesome: Loop 26.4 has Monika getting rid of a Captcha by staging it as an execution.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: Monika telling Annie how she figured out the latter was the anchor for the ''VideoGame/Skullgirls'' Loop:
--> '''Monika:''': The requirements were stable, important, and obscure. Stable meant I just had to go through the character list of the Hub wiki. Important narrowed it down from that-the ones who have a serious role in the story, who could connect the most loopers. It could have been the Skullgirl, but Marie's already looping and she's not the Anchor. Obscure just meant it had to be somewhere people wouldn't look... and going from the Skullgirl option, we have famous Skullgirl hunters. Annie, Girl of the Stars, a show about a supposedly immortal child hero that, unbeknownst to the general public, is propaganda based on hidden history and has fans even amongst the loopers... honestly, I'm kind of surprised nobody local's figured you out yet."
--> '''Monika:''': The requirements were stable, important, and obscure. Stable meant I just had to go through the character list of the Hub wiki. Important narrowed it down from that-the ones who have a serious role in the story, who could connect the most loopers. It could have been the Skullgirl, but Marie's already looping and she's not the Anchor. Obscure just meant it had to be somewhere people wouldn't look... and going from the Skullgirl option, we have famous Skullgirl hunters. Annie, Girl of the Stars, a show about a supposedly immortal child hero that, unbeknownst to the general public, is propaganda based on hidden history and has fans even amongst the loopers... honestly, I'm kind of surprised nobody local's figured you out yet."
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* FailedAttemptAtDrama: From Chapter 7.11, this bit of narration when Undyne bursts into Grillby's to challenge Sayori:
--> ''Then, suddenly, the doors to Grillby's blew open! Triumphant, heart-pounding music started pulsing through the air! A tall figure, wrapped up in a steel-plated parka, stood in the doorway, her cape billowing in the harsh, arctic wind! (By which I mean Papyrus was standing behind her, shaking her cape up and down and making 'whooshing' noises with his mouth, because the wind was totally dead today.)''
--> ''Then, suddenly, the doors to Grillby's blew open! Triumphant, heart-pounding music started pulsing through the air! A tall figure, wrapped up in a steel-plated parka, stood in the doorway, her cape billowing in the harsh, arctic wind! (By which I mean Papyrus was standing behind her, shaking her cape up and down and making 'whooshing' noises with his mouth, because the wind was totally dead today.)''
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* AWizardDidIt: Used in the author's notes for 26.7 as to how Monika beat [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender Ozai]]:
---> ''In case you were curious how Monika made herself fireproof, A Wizard Did It. Except it was actually a witch. And that witch's name was Monika. She used a Fireproofing Charm on herself.''
* BaitAndSwitch: 7.8 starts with the MC reciting his lines from the game: "I really didn't want to have to enter her room like this... Isn't it kind of a breach of privacy? But she really leaves me no choice." and then he opens the door and sees Sayori meditating, prompting him to breathe a sigh of relief.
---> ''In case you were curious how Monika made herself fireproof, A Wizard Did It. Except it was actually a witch. And that witch's name was Monika. She used a Fireproofing Charm on herself.''
* BaitAndSwitch: 7.8 starts with the MC reciting his lines from the game: "I really didn't want to have to enter her room like this... Isn't it kind of a breach of privacy? But she really leaves me no choice." and then he opens the door and sees Sayori meditating, prompting him to breathe a sigh of relief.
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* AWizardDidIt: Used in the author's Skaz's notes for Chapter 26.7 as to how Monika beat [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender Ozai]]:
---> ''In -->"In case you were curious how Monika made herself fireproof, A Wizard Did It. Except it was actually a witch. And that witch's name was Monika. She used a Fireproofing Charm on herself.''
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* BaitAndSwitch: Chapter 7.8 starts withthe MC reciting his lines from the game: Hiroaka saying "I really didn't want to have to enter her room like this... Isn't it kind of a breach of privacy? But she really leaves me no choice." and then he opens opening the door and sees Sayori to see Sayori... meditating, prompting him to breathe a sigh of relief.
* BaitAndSwitch: Chapter 7.8 starts with
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* CurbStompBattle: The battle between Natsuki and an Unawake Toph in 15.2 starts as this due to Natsuki (Sand Cat) specializing in the sand part of Earthbending which throws off Toph's seismic sense. Then, Toph Wakes Up and takes two seconds to turn the fight around. Natsuki does lose the resulting fight but not without making it as fun as possible.
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* CurbStompBattle: The battle between Natsuki and an Unawake Toph in Chapter 15.2 starts as this due to Natsuki the former (Sand Cat) specializing in the sand part of Earthbending which throws off Toph's seismic sense. Then, Toph Wakes Up and takes two seconds to turn the fight around. Natsuki does lose the resulting fight fight, but not without making it as fun as possible.
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** Hilariously, ''[[VideoGame/DokiDokiLiteratureClub DDLC+]]'' '''''does''''' have an route that can lead to happiness in the literature club... and is $14.99.
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** Hilariously, ''[[VideoGame/DokiDokiLiteratureClub DDLC+]]'' '''''does''''' '''does''' have an a route that can lead to happiness in the literature club...Literature Club... and is $14.99.
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* HGame: Glimpsed in Chapter 12.4, with [[NoodleIncident very few details given]] other than the fact the character files are renamed, all four girls are Awake, and Hiroaka...well...
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* HGame: Glimpsed in Chapter 12.4, with [[NoodleIncident very few details given]] other than the fact the character files are renamed, all four girls are Awake, and Hiroaka...well...er...
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* LampshadeHanging: Numerous examples, with one being Chapter 17.9 when the girls are discussing how they came to be due to [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Xehanort]] capturing Hiroaka, putting him to sleep and spiritually vivisecting him as well as them still being girls despite Hiroaka being a boy and Monika saying that by the metaphysics of this world, they shouldn't exist and Kingdom Hearts lore is really confusing.
* LargeHam: Natsuki goes straight here in Chapter 14.9, a Loop where she has control of the game's code.
* LargeHam: Natsuki goes straight here in Chapter 14.9, a Loop where she has control of the game's code.
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* LampshadeHanging: Numerous examples, with one being examples. For instance, in Chapter 17.9 when the girls are discussing how they came to be due to [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Xehanort]] capturing Hiroaka, putting him to sleep and spiritually vivisecting him as well as them still being girls despite Hiroaka being a boy and Monika saying that by the metaphysics of this world, they shouldn't exist and Kingdom Hearts ''Kingdom Hearts'' lore is really confusing.
* LargeHam: Natsuki goes straight here in Chapter 14.9, a Loop where she has sole control of the game's code.
* LargeHam: Natsuki goes straight here in Chapter 14.9, a Loop where she has sole control of the game's code.
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* LethalChef: During Chapter 35.7, Chie, Yukiko and Rise decide to use the club's stove to make some curry as a nice gesture. The result blows up the stove, splattering the room, Fuuka and the other three in brown sludge. Needless to say, Natsuki decides to give them cooking lessons.
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* LethalChef: During Chapter 35.7, Chie, Yukiko Yukiko, and Rise decide to use the club's stove to make some curry as a nice gesture. The result blows up the stove, splattering the room, Fuuka Fuuka, and the other three in brown sludge. Needless to say, Natsuki decides to give them cooking lessons.
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* OpenMouthInsertFoot: Yuri does this in Chapter 6.6 when Natsuki tells Monika and Yuri about the CharacterBlog for Monika in Baseline and the Valentine Day picture for Monika is her handing the viewer a box of chocolates with a letter on the side (basically taking credit for what Sayori, Natsuki and Yuri's pictures showed them doing). Yuri tries to say that it's a lot less worse than Baseline, claiming she could see Monika do that if Monika still kind of had her obsession with the player...and after flinching from Monika's DeathGlare tries to cover it up by saying the Baseline self would do something like that, not the looping one before saying she'll be quiet.
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* OpenMouthInsertFoot: Yuri does this in Chapter 6.6 when Natsuki tells Monika and Yuri about the CharacterBlog for Monika in Baseline and the Valentine Valentine's Day picture for of Monika is her handing the viewer a box of chocolates with a letter on the side (basically taking credit for what Sayori, Natsuki Natsuki, and Yuri's pictures showed them doing). Yuri tries to say that it's a lot less worse than Baseline, claiming she could see Monika do that if Monika the latter still kind of had her obsession with the player...and after flinching from Monika's DeathGlare tries to cover it up by saying the Monika's Baseline self would do something like that, not the looping one Looping one, before saying she'll be quiet.
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* PutOnABus: Ganesha makes Psyche the new admin for the [=DDLC=] loops in chapter 32.12 due to the fact that he's busy with a lot of loops (including Evangelion, one of the first loops) and Psyche is an expert in soul-coding, psychology is a major interest of hers and her compassionate nature makes her a perfect fit. Psyche ends up doing a solid, sleepless night of multiple playthroughs of the game and mad-note taking and says she'll do it with the latter half being Psyche introducing herself to the girls and mentally whispering to them that she knows what each of them are going through.
* RageAgainstTheAuthor: After the Dokis find out about Meta Enterprise Solutions, their in-universe creators and how their actions were planned from the very beginning, Monika sends Paula Miner a formal complaint about how the Dokis were treated and most importantly, how Monika showed remorse. Monika then says how long she's atoned for her sins and finding out what happened just because Meta Enterprise Solutions treated the girls as playthings to prove something and saying she's not going to deny having an author to rage against. She then finishes her letter with "In conclusion, I and the rest of the Literature Club have been incredibly hurt by your actions against us, and are being forced to take drastic action against you. Have a good day. Sincerely, Just Monika. P.S. Don't look behind you."
* RageAgainstTheAuthor: After the Dokis find out about Meta Enterprise Solutions, their in-universe creators and how their actions were planned from the very beginning, Monika sends Paula Miner a formal complaint about how the Dokis were treated and most importantly, how Monika showed remorse. Monika then says how long she's atoned for her sins and finding out what happened just because Meta Enterprise Solutions treated the girls as playthings to prove something and saying she's not going to deny having an author to rage against. She then finishes her letter with "In conclusion, I and the rest of the Literature Club have been incredibly hurt by your actions against us, and are being forced to take drastic action against you. Have a good day. Sincerely, Just Monika. P.S. Don't look behind you."
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* PutOnABus: Ganesha makes Psyche the new admin Admin for the [=DDLC=] loops ''DDLC'' Loops in chapter Chapter 32.12 due to the fact that he's busy with a lot of loops Loops (including Evangelion, ''Evangelion'', one of the first loops) Loops) and Psyche is an expert in soul-coding, psychology is a major interest of hers hers, and her compassionate nature makes her a perfect fit. Psyche ends up doing a solid, solid sleepless night of multiple playthroughs of the game and mad-note taking and says she'll do it it, with the latter half being Psyche introducing herself to the girls and mentally whispering to them that she knows what each of them are going through.
* RageAgainstTheAuthor: After the Dokis find out about Meta Enterprise Solutions, their in-universe creators and how their actions were planned from the very beginning, Monika sends Paula Miner a formal complaint about how the Dokis were treated and most importantly, how Monika showed remorse. Monika then says how long she's atoned for her sins and finding out what happened just because Meta Enterprise Solutions treated the girls as playthings to prove something and saying she's not going to deny having an author to rageagainst. She then finishes her letter with "In against.
-->"In conclusion, I and the rest of the Literature Club have been incredibly hurt by your actions against us, and are being forced to take drastic action against you. Have a good day. Sincerely, Just Monika. P.S. Don't look behind you."
* RageAgainstTheAuthor: After the Dokis find out about Meta Enterprise Solutions, their in-universe creators and how their actions were planned from the very beginning, Monika sends Paula Miner a formal complaint about how the Dokis were treated and most importantly, how Monika showed remorse. Monika then says how long she's atoned for her sins and finding out what happened just because Meta Enterprise Solutions treated the girls as playthings to prove something and saying she's not going to deny having an author to rage
-->"In conclusion, I and the rest of the Literature Club have been incredibly hurt by your actions against us, and are being forced to take drastic action against you. Have a good day. Sincerely, Just Monika. P.S. Don't look behind you."
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* RiddleForTheAges: The Loop Natsuki was in in 23.5. She was rather upset about it, as detailed above but she thought the bad guys looked cool and decides to recreate the frosting tigers.
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* RiddleForTheAges: The Loop Natsuki was mentions in in Chapter 23.5. She was rather upset about it, as detailed above above, but she thought the bad guys looked cool and decides to recreate the frosting tigers.
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** Monika, Natsuki and Yuri pull this in response to the [=MC's=] rambling poetry in 32.4 with Monika off exploring the code while having left a placeholder model and Natsuki declaring that she's got blue milk cookies to bake and then leaves, dragging along a half-asleep Yuri.
* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Natsuki and Yuri claim this of each other. [[spoiler:They eventually hook up in Chapter 19.]]
* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Natsuki and Yuri claim this of each other. [[spoiler:They eventually hook up in Chapter 19.]]
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** Monika, Natsuki Natsuki, and Yuri pull this in response to the [=MC's=] [=MCs=] rambling poetry in 32.4 with Monika off exploring the code while having left a placeholder model and Natsuki declaring that she's got blue milk cookies to bake and then leaves, dragging along a half-asleep Yuri.
* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Natsuki and Yuri claim this of each other. [[spoiler:They [[spoiler:..at first. They eventually hook up in Chapter 19.]]
* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Natsuki and Yuri claim this of each other.
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* ShuttingUpNow: Yuri does this in Chapter 6.6, saying "I'll…I'll be quiet–" after her OpenMouthInsertFoot moment.
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* ShuttingUpNow: Yuri does this in Chapter 6.6, saying "I'll…I'll "I'll...I'll be quiet–" after her OpenMouthInsertFoot moment.
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** In Chapter 17.11, the girls agree that if "sexy Bowser" ever becomes a meme, they'll be bad ''Sonic'' [=OCs=] ("the world's cheapest furries") for a Loop. Cue JustForFun/{{Bowsette}}, and Chapter 22.6 is the result.
** In Chapter 35.7, Fuuka asks Chie, Yukiko and Rise if they're sure that they know what they're doing while making curry. Chie and Yukiko confirm that they do, but their cooking blows up the stove, sending brown sludge on the room and the girls. Cue Fuuka wailing "I thought you said you knew what you were doing?"
** In Chapter 35.7, Fuuka asks Chie, Yukiko and Rise if they're sure that they know what they're doing while making curry. Chie and Yukiko confirm that they do, but their cooking blows up the stove, sending brown sludge on the room and the girls. Cue Fuuka wailing "I thought you said you knew what you were doing?"
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** In Chapter 17.11, the girls agree that if "sexy Bowser" ever becomes a meme, they'll be bad ''Sonic'' [=OCs=] ("the world's cheapest furries") for a Loop. Cue JustForFun/{{Bowsette}}, JustForFun/{{Bowsette}} eventually happened, and Chapter 22.6 is was the result.
** In Chapter 35.7, Fuuka asks Chie,Yukiko Yukiko, and Rise if they're sure that they know what they're doing while making curry. Chie and Yukiko confirm that they do, but their cooking blows up the stove, sending brown sludge on the room and the girls. Cue Fuuka wailing "I thought you said you knew what you were doing?"
** In Chapter 35.7, Fuuka asks Chie,
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** 11.11 which starts with the Dokis and Hiroaka relaxing...only for Monika to check the news and sees the Earth is about to be destroyed by collision with another planet. After Sayori Pockets Hiroaka, Monika Pockets them and then gets her and the others into the only spaceship available: [[Anime/Shelter2016 Rin's]].
** 31.11 which has Sayori seeing that Hiroaka (now named Kevin) has an actual face and voice and then it's revealed that this has been happening for several loops. Ganesha then contacts the Dokis and reveals that he's going to be passing Admin duties to Psyche due to the fact he's overseeing many loops.
** In one of the loops, Monika gets a message from Psyche, which is initially garbled, until she declares that they're getting an expansion, with the Dokis wondering what's different... until they discover Metaverse Enterprise Solutions, their in-universe creators.
** 31.11 which has Sayori seeing that Hiroaka (now named Kevin) has an actual face and voice and then it's revealed that this has been happening for several loops. Ganesha then contacts the Dokis and reveals that he's going to be passing Admin duties to Psyche due to the fact he's overseeing many loops.
** In one of the loops, Monika gets a message from Psyche, which is initially garbled, until she declares that they're getting an expansion, with the Dokis wondering what's different... until they discover Metaverse Enterprise Solutions, their in-universe creators.
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** 11.11 which starts with the Dokis and Hiroaka relaxing...relaxing, only for Monika to check the news and sees the see that Earth is about to be destroyed by collision with another planet. After Sayori Pockets Hiroaka, Monika Pockets them and then gets her and the others into group onto the only spaceship available: [[Anime/Shelter2016 Rin's]].
** 31.11which has Sayori seeing that Hiroaka (now named Kevin) has an actual face and voice voice, and then it's revealed that this has been happening for several loops. Loops. Ganesha then contacts the Dokis and reveals that he's going to be passing Admin duties to Psyche due to the fact he's overseeing many loops.
Loops.
** In oneof the loops, Loop, Monika gets a message from Psyche, which is initially garbled, garbled until she declares that they're getting an expansion, with the Dokis wondering what's different... until they discover Metaverse Enterprise Solutions, their in-universe creators.
** 31.11
** In one
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* BigDamnHeroes: Chapter 20.2 has Doremy Sweet bursting in to Sayori's nightmare about committing suicide and eliminating all the wisps that were trying to urge Sayori to do so.