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* Deconstruction: Over the topic of sexism and extremism. Misa is a man hater with a DarkAndTroubledPast and she vows to liberate women from man's oppression. While her past was difficult and wanting to fight injustice is not bad, her ACTIONS are not acceptable as she tries to physically hurt both men AND women who get in her way.
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* Deconstruction: {{Deconstruction}}: Over the topic of sexism and extremism. Misa is a man hater with a DarkAndTroubledPast and she vows to liberate women from man's oppression. While her past was difficult and wanting to fight injustice is not bad, her ACTIONS are not acceptable as she tries to physically hurt both men AND women who get in her way.
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* Woobie: Paige is a painfully shy girl with a big crush on Danny and has trouble getting the courage to ask him out. She has some self confidence issues and is clumsy, especially when she gets nervous...
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* PrecociousCrush: Inverted in this story. Michelle Lynne Clarke is a 17 year old senior, 2 years older than Dash and had expressed some interest in him...until the bad luck ruined their date.
[[spoiler: She however ends up choosing Danny, who is the same age as Dash ]].
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* PrecociousCrush: Inverted in this story. Michelle Lynne Clarke is a 17 year old senior, 2 years older than Dash and had expressed some interest in him...until the bad luck ruined their date. \n [[spoiler: She however ends up choosing Danny, who is the same age as Dash ]].
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* Adorkable: Paige's normal self is very shy and clumsy, but still appealing enough for Danny to consider giving a chance.
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* Adorkable: {{Adorkable}}: Paige's normal self is very shy and clumsy, but still appealing enough for Danny to consider giving a chance.
* ShipperOnDeck: Missy is pretty supportive with Paige and gives advice on how to approach Danny.
* ShrinkingViolet: Paige, prior to her encounter with Enchantra.
* ShrinkingViolet: Paige, prior to her encounter with Enchantra.
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* ShrinkingViolet: Paige, prior to her encounter with Enchantra.
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* WomanChild: Paulina.
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* WomanChild: Paulina.
Paulina.In this fanfic, she acts like a spoiled nine year old rather then a teenager. She acts like she a princess during her time as a captive and when Danny finally saves her, she act like they really were going to get married, much to Danny's horror.
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* JerkAss: Dash
* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk:Again, Dash.
* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk:Again, Dash.
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* JerkAss: Dash
Dash Baxter in spades. Dash. Just like in canon, he enjoys being a bully and always gets away with it because he is popular and the star of the football team.
* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk:Again, Dash. After the entire ordeal was over and it looks like he was grateful to Danny and his friends for helping him, does he actually thank them and keep his promise to stop bullying them? NO! He almost immediately goes back to being a great, big jerk to them and makes it clear that he does not care that they helped and breaks his end of the deal with them much to their shock and outrage.
* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk:Again, Dash. After the entire ordeal was over and it looks like he was grateful to Danny and his friends for helping him, does he actually thank them and keep his promise to stop bullying them? NO! He almost immediately goes back to being a great, big jerk to them and makes it clear that he does not care that they helped and breaks his end of the deal with them much to their shock and outrage.
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* SmittenTeenageGirL: Once again, Paige Smith. She's totally gaga over Danny and wants to date him, thoughshe's normally very shy around him.
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* SmittenTeenageGirL: SmittenTeenageGirl: Once again, Paige Smith. She's totally gaga over Danny and wants to date him, thoughshe's though she's normally very shy around him.
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* LongingLook: Paige sends a couple towards Danny during the story.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Despite a lot of hiccups in their relationship, Paige actually does have some similarities to Danny in terms of personality. They both seem to get easily embarrassed by their parents, both can be timid around a crush, can get a little clumsy (though Paige is more explicit that Danny is), both at one point have expressed desire to be popular and accepted by their peers and most of all, a genuine and sincere loyalty to their friends. Suffice to say, she is a lot like Danny prior to his own CharacterDevelopment .
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* SmittenTeenageGirL: Once again, Paige Smith. She's totally gaga over Danny and wants to date him, thoughshe's normally very shy around him.
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* AnAesop: Like any Danny Phantom episode, each story delivers at least one important moral and life lesson.
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* SeriesFic:SeriesFic: This series is an expansion to season 3 of ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'', before Phantom Planet
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!!In General:
* OriginalCharacter: Each story introduce a new, original character made by the author.
** Royal Pain: Grimhilde and Winston.
** Gender Defender: Misa Andry
** Cursed at Casper High: Michelle Lynne Clarke
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* StatusQuoIsGod: These stories are set during season 3, and don't make any big changes to season 3.
* OriginalCharacter: Each story introduce a new, original character made by the author.
** Royal Pain: Grimhilde and Winston.
** Gender Defender: Misa Andry
** Cursed at Casper High: Michelle Lynne Clarke
* SeriesFic:
* StatusQuoIsGod: These stories are set during season 3, and don't make any big changes to season 3.
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[[folder: In General]]
* OriginalCharacter: Each story introduce a new character made by the author made by the author.
** Royal Pain: Grimhilde and Winston.
** Gender Defender: Misa Andry
** Cursed at Casper High: Michelle Lynne Clarke
* SeriesFic:
* StatusQuoIsGod: These stories are set during season 3, and don't directly change any major events during the show.
* OriginalCharacter: Each story introduce a new character made by the author made by the author.
** Royal Pain: Grimhilde and Winston.
** Gender Defender: Misa Andry
** Cursed at Casper High: Michelle Lynne Clarke
* SeriesFic:
* StatusQuoIsGod: These stories are set during season 3, and don't directly change any major events during the show.
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* OriginalCharacter: Each story introduce a new character made by the author made by the author.
** Royal Pain: Grimhilde and Winston.
** Gender Defender: Misa Andry
** Cursed at Casper High: Michelle Lynne Clarke
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* StatusQuoIsGod: These stories are set during season 3, and don't directly change any major events during the show.
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[[/folder]]In General
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[[/folder]]In General
* OriginalCharacter: Each story introduce a new character made by the author made by the author.
** Royal Pain: Grimhilde and Winston.
** Gender Defender: Misa Andry
** Cursed at Casper High: Michelle Lynne Clarke
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* StatusQuoIsGod: These stories are set during season 3, and don't directly change any major events during the show.
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* AnAesop: A true leader is one who cares about their people, fear and intimidation will not make anyone loyal to you, just fear you. In other words, a real leader is made by the people who follow them by choice, not tradition and intimidation.
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* AnAesop: It's wrong to punish an entire group/race for the actions of a few bad members. Also you must be careful about what methods you use in order to accomplish your goals, because regardless of how "noble" you think your goal is, you may end up hurting the very people you wish to help.
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* AnAesop: Always BeYourself. Don't change who you are in order to please people and get them to notice you, they are not worth it. The people who do matter will already like you as you are and wouldn't change a thing about you.
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* CharacterDevelopment: Because of the events of the story Paige Smith gains more confidence in herself and realizes that being popular it not worth it and that what matters is being yourself.
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* SweetPollyOliver: Dash unfortunately gets the hots for Danny's female alter ego Danika…Ew!
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* SweetPollyOliver: SweetOnPollyOliver: Dash unfortunately gets the hots for Danny's female alter ego Danika…Ew!
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* LovableAlphaBitch : Michelle Lynne Clarke is a beautiful and popular senior but she can be friendly to non popular students
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* LovableAlphaBitch : Michelle Lynne Clarke is a beautiful and popular senior but at Casper High that is pursued by Dash and she has any male admirers. However, she is apparently nicer than the other popular kids, as she can be friendly to non popular studentsstudents, regardless of age or popularity status.
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* PrecociousCrush: Inverted in this story. Michelle Lynne Clarke is a 17 year old senior, 2 years older than Dash and had expressed some interest in him...until the bad luck ruined their date. [[ spoiler: She however ends up choosing Danny, who is the same age as Dash ]].
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* PrecociousCrush: Inverted in this story. Michelle Lynne Clarke is a 17 year old senior, 2 years older than Dash and had expressed some interest in him...until the bad luck ruined their date. [[ spoiler:
[[spoiler: She however ends up choosing Danny, who is the same age asDash ]]. Dash ]].
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* FallingIntoHisArms: [[ spoiler: As part of some REAL karma for going back on his word with the gang, Dash accidentally causes his crush Michelle to lose her balance. He tries to catch her, only to fall out of the stands and Michelle lands in Danny's arms, which is hinted to have caused Michelle to develop a slight interest in Danny ]].
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* FallingIntoHisArms: [[ spoiler: [[spoiler: As part of some REAL karma for going back on his word with the gang, Dash accidentally causes his crush Michelle to lose her balance. He tries to catch her, only to fall out of the stands and Michelle lands in Danny's arms, which is hinted to have caused Michelle to develop a slight interest in Danny ]].
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* FallingIntoHisArms: [[ spoiler: As part of some REAL karma for going back on his word with the gang, Dash accidentally causes his crush Michelle to lose her balance. He tries to catch her, only to fall out of the stands and Michelle lands in Danny's arms, which is hinted to have caused Michelle to develop a slight interest in Danny ]].
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* GirlOfTheWeek: Michelle Lynne Clarke is the object of Dash's desire in this story. However she ends up becoming this to Danny of all people at the end of the story.
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** His GirlOfTheWeek Michelle Lynne Clarke is a lesser example due to Dash's own actions. Due to Dash's bad luck, she gets caught in the crossfire, which makes her like him less and less as the story goes.
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* KarmaJackpot: Danny Tucker, and Sam try to help Dash get rid of his bad luck, despite the way he always treats them. Even those Dash goes back on his word at the end, they are rewarded by going to a senior party which Dash misses out on because of his actions and Danny even unintentionally wins over the girl that Dash wanted for himself.
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* KarmaJackpot: KarmicJackpot: Danny Tucker, and Sam try to help Dash get rid of his bad luck, despite the way he always treats them. Even those Dash goes back on his word at the end, they are rewarded by going to a senior party which Dash misses out on because of his actions and Danny even unintentionally wins over the girl that Dash wanted for himself.
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* KarmaJackpot: Danny Tucker, and Sam try to help Dash get rid of his bad luck, despite the way he always treats them. Even those Dash goes back on his word at the end, they are rewarded by going to a senior party which Dash misses out on because of his actions and Danny even unintentionally wins over the girl that Dash wanted for himself.
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* Deconstruction: Over the topic of sexism and extremism. Misa is a man hater with a DarkAndTroubledPast and she vows to liberate women from man's oppression. While her past was difficult and wanting to fight injustice is not bad, her ACTIONS are not acceptable as she tries to physically hurt both men AND women who get in her way.
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* NiceGuy: Danny Fenton is an all out boy scout compared to Dash. He tried to train Dash to become one of these in hopes of eliminating his bad karma... [[spoiler: it didn't stick, unfortunately. ]].
