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* AdaptationalVillainy: Downplayed. Lisbeth was already a HateSink and cult leader in canon, but she never directly killed anyone- the only death was an indirect result of her promoting her faith healing, and she does try to kill the Diaz family but fails. In here, she is a monster rivaling [[VideoGame/LifeIsStrange Mark Jefferson]] and [[VideoGame/LifeIsStrangeBeforeTheStorm Damon Merrick]], as she deliberately wipes out all her followers (save Daniel) with her ritual.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Downplayed. AdaptationalJerkass: Lisbeth was already a HateSink and cult leader in canon, but she never directly killed anyone- the only death was an indirect result of her promoting her faith healing, and she does try to kill the Diaz family but fails. In here, she is a monster rivaling [[VideoGame/LifeIsStrange Mark Jefferson]] and [[VideoGame/LifeIsStrangeBeforeTheStorm Damon Merrick]], as she deliberately wipes out all her followers (save Daniel) with her ritual.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Lisbeth was already a HateSink and cult leader in canon, but she never directly killed anyone- the only death was an indirect result of her promoting her faith healing, and she does try to kill the Diaz family but fails. In here, she wipes out all her followers (save Daniel) with her ritual.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Downplayed. Lisbeth was already a HateSink and cult leader in canon, but she never directly killed anyone- the only death was an indirect result of her promoting her faith healing, and she does try to kill the Diaz family but fails. In here, she is a monster rivaling [[VideoGame/LifeIsStrange Mark Jefferson]] and [[VideoGame/LifeIsStrangeBeforeTheStorm Damon Merrick]], as she deliberately wipes out all her followers (save Daniel) with her ritual.
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* SinisterMinister: Lisbeth, as in canon, is the leader of the Haven Point cult who exploits her followers, though in this fic she has the added crime of killing them all via MurderSuicide ritual.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Lisbeth was already a HateSink and cult leader in canon, but she never directly killed anyone- the only death was an indirect result of her promoting her faith healing, and she does try to kill the Diaz family but fails. In here, she wipes out all her followers (save Daniel) with her ritual.
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* TheChosenOne: David learns that he has been given the powers needed to save the planet from the asteroid.
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* TheChosenOne: David Daniel learns that he has been given the powers needed to save the planet from the asteroid.
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* ItsAllMyFault: David, upon waking up, blames himself for letting his powers go out of control in Merrill's hideout. He compares it to his dad getting shot for the same reason, an event he also blames himself for.
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* ItsAllMyFault: David, Daniel, upon waking up, blames himself for letting his powers go out of control in Merrill's hideout. He compares it to his dad getting shot for the same reason, an event he also blames himself for.
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->Frankly, child, you were wicked from the moment I saw you. You were never going to get into Heaven like the true believers. But even Judas had a purpose in God’s plan - as it is with you.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Lisbeth and Nicholas are willing to stab and shoot at Daniel, and their ritual results in the death of Sarah as well.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Lisbeth and Nicholas are willing to stab and shoot at Daniel, and their ritual results in the death of Sarah as well.well.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Lisbeth, after using Daniel to slaughter all her followers, prepares to kill Daniel herself, outright admitting she never cared about him:
->Frankly, child, you were wicked from the moment I saw you. You were never going to get into Heaven like the true believers. But even Judas had a purpose in God’s plan - as it is with you.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Lisbeth, after using Daniel to slaughter all her followers, prepares to kill Daniel herself, outright admitting she never cared about him:
->Frankly, child, you were wicked from the moment I saw you. You were never going to get into Heaven like the true believers. But even Judas had a purpose in God’s plan - as it is with you.
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* ItsAllMyFault: David, upon waking up, blames himself for letting his powers go out of control in Merrill's hideout. He compares it to his dad getting shot for the same reason, an event he also blames himself for.
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* ItsAllMyFault: David, upon waking up, blames himself for letting his powers go out of control in Merrill's hideout. He compares it to his dad getting shot for the same reason, an event he also blames himself for.for.
* MurderSuicide: Lisbeth's ritual is this on a large scale- she provokes Daniel's powers and kills everyone in the church except herself. She then tries to stab Daniel, planning to off herself afterwards.
* WouldHurtAChild: Lisbeth and Nicholas are willing to stab and shoot at Daniel, and their ritual results in the death of Sarah as well.
* MurderSuicide: Lisbeth's ritual is this on a large scale- she provokes Daniel's powers and kills everyone in the church except herself. She then tries to stab Daniel, planning to off herself afterwards.
* WouldHurtAChild: Lisbeth and Nicholas are willing to stab and shoot at Daniel, and their ritual results in the death of Sarah as well.
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* HalfwayPlotSwitch: The first half of the story concerns Daniel's experiences with Haven Point, as in the game. The second half goes into a completely new territory as he learns of the true nature of his powers and that he must use them to save the world.
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* HalfwayPlotSwitch: The first half of the story concerns Daniel's experiences with Haven Point, as in the game. The second half goes into a completely new territory as he learns of the true nature of his powers and that he must use them to save the world.world.
* ItsAllMyFault: David, upon waking up, blames himself for letting his powers go out of control in Merrill's hideout. He compares it to his dad getting shot for the same reason, an event he also blames himself for.
* ItsAllMyFault: David, upon waking up, blames himself for letting his powers go out of control in Merrill's hideout. He compares it to his dad getting shot for the same reason, an event he also blames himself for.
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* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The asteroid that is heading towards Earth threatens to destroy all humanity. Daniel's role is to stop it.
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* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The asteroid that is heading towards Earth threatens to destroy all humanity. Daniel's role is to stop it.it.
* HalfwayPlotSwitch: The first half of the story concerns Daniel's experiences with Haven Point, as in the game. The second half goes into a completely new territory as he learns of the true nature of his powers and that he must use them to save the world.
* HalfwayPlotSwitch: The first half of the story concerns Daniel's experiences with Haven Point, as in the game. The second half goes into a completely new territory as he learns of the true nature of his powers and that he must use them to save the world.
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[[https://www.archiveofourown.org/works/21680500 Child of the Eclipse]] is a ''VideoGame/LifeIsStrange2'' fanfic. It serves as an alternate version of Episode 4, told from Daniel's point of view as he becomes integrated into Haven Point, eventually learning his destiny to save the world.
'''Warning: due to the short length, spoilers are unmarked!'''
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!This fic contains examples of:
* BigBad: In the first half, Lisbeth Fischer reprises her role from Episode 4 as the leader of the Haven Point cult who, in this fic, engineers a mass murder/suicide and tries to kill Daniel. Afterwards, the story has no sentient antagonist- the main threat becomes the asteroid heading towards Earth.
* TheChosenOne: David learns that he has been given the powers needed to save the planet from the asteroid.
* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The asteroid that is heading towards Earth threatens to destroy all humanity. Daniel's role is to stop it.
'''Warning: due to the short length, spoilers are unmarked!'''
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!This fic contains examples of:
* BigBad: In the first half, Lisbeth Fischer reprises her role from Episode 4 as the leader of the Haven Point cult who, in this fic, engineers a mass murder/suicide and tries to kill Daniel. Afterwards, the story has no sentient antagonist- the main threat becomes the asteroid heading towards Earth.
* TheChosenOne: David learns that he has been given the powers needed to save the planet from the asteroid.
* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The asteroid that is heading towards Earth threatens to destroy all humanity. Daniel's role is to stop it.
