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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Sunset makes it clear to the Humane 5 that she no longer trusts them because they turning on her on flimsy evidence proved that they had never trusted her, and the relationships between the CMC and their older sisters are still pretty broken. However, there's still hope for reconciliation between everybody in the future. Sunset is going to see a psychologist for her depression, and leaves the business card for them, hinting for them to do the same. Furthermore, because the CMC confessed to the physical bullying they've been through and stood up to their tormentors, they and everybody who submitted secrets to them are tracked down and punished.]]

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Sunset makes it clear to the Humane 5 that she no longer trusts them because they them turning on her on flimsy evidence proved that they had never trusted her, and the relationships between the CMC and their older sisters are still pretty broken. However, there's still hope for reconciliation between everybody in the future. Sunset is going to see a psychologist for her depression, and leaves the business card for them, hinting for them to do the same. Furthermore, because the CMC confessed to the physical bullying they've been through and stood up to their tormentors, they and everybody who submitted secrets to them are tracked down and punished.]]



* EvilCannotComprehendGood: [[spoiler: While not EVIL per say, Gilda is beyond shocked when Principal Celestia suspends her for punching Apple Bloom in the eye because she doesn't understand why the Principal would still protect the CMC even after everything they had done]].

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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Played with.[[spoiler: While not EVIL per say, Gilda is beyond shocked when Principal Celestia suspends her for punching Apple Bloom in the eye because she doesn't understand why the Principal would still protect the CMC even after everything they had done]].done, apparently not getting that as principal, it her ''job'' to discipline any and all students who break the rules, which Gilda and her friends did by assaulting Apple Bloom on school grounds]].
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**Gilda's two friends took pictures of her assaulting Apple Bloom, and sent them to other students. These pictures eventually wind up in Celestia's hands, and all three are suspended for two weeks.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Sunset makes it clear to the Humane 5 that she no longer trusts them because they turning on her on flimsy evidence proved that they had never trusted her, and the relationships between the CMC and their older sisters are still pretty broken. However, there's still hope for reconciliation between everybody in the future. Sunset is going to see a psychologist for her depression, and gives the Humane 5 a business card for a relationship therapist in order to mend the bond between their sisters. Furthermore, because the CMC confessed to the physical bullying they've been through and stood up to their tormentors, they and everybody who submitted secrets to them are tracked down and punished.]]

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Sunset makes it clear to the Humane 5 that she no longer trusts them because they turning on her on flimsy evidence proved that they had never trusted her, and the relationships between the CMC and their older sisters are still pretty broken. However, there's still hope for reconciliation between everybody in the future. Sunset is going to see a psychologist for her depression, and gives leaves the Humane 5 a business card for a relationship therapist in order them, hinting for them to mend do the bond between their sisters.same. Furthermore, because the CMC confessed to the physical bullying they've been through and stood up to their tormentors, they and everybody who submitted secrets to them are tracked down and punished.]]



* DisproportionateRetribution: {{Deconstructed|Trope}}; While the CMC creating Anon-A-Miss and framing Sunset for it was bad enough in the eyes of the Rainbooms and CHS. However, Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle's reason (they wanted to spend more time with their sisters) and the fact that Scootaloo hardly had an excuse disgusts CHS even more because it highlights how petty Anon-A-Miss truly was.

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* DisproportionateRetribution: {{Deconstructed|Trope}}; While the The CMC creating Anon-A-Miss and framing Sunset for it was bad enough in the eyes of the Rainbooms and CHS. However, Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle's reason (they wanted to spend more time with their sisters) and the fact that Scootaloo hardly had an excuse disgusts CHS even more because it highlights how petty Anon-A-Miss truly was.
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88The Humane 5 become this to Sunset after all they put her through. [[spoiler: By the end of the story, she's willing to move on, but isn't willing to call them her friends again, yet.]]

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88The ** The Humane 5 become this to Sunset after all they put her through. [[spoiler: By the end of the story, she's willing to move on, but isn't willing to call them her friends again, yet.]]

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* AccusationFic: The Humane 5 are called out on abandoning Sunset based on extremely flimsy evidence, and the CMC are called out on how pathetic and cruel their actions were.

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* AccusationFic: The Humane 5 are called out on abandoning Sunset based on extremely flimsy evidence, and the CMC are called out on how pathetic and cruel their actions were. Sunset also calls Celestia and Luna for not doing anything during the Anon-A-Miss reign.



* BrokenPedestal: The Humane 5 become this to Sunset after all they put her through. [[spoiler: By the end of the story, she's willing to move on, but isn't willing to call them her friends again, yet.]]
** An inverted example happens with Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash, as not only does the older athlete slap Scootaloo and call her a brat after the CMC reveal themselves as being Anon-A-Miss, but she doesn't want anything to do with her surrogate little sister anymore.
* CarFu: Scootaloo's dad punished her for Anon-A-Miss by destroying her laptop, TV, and phone by running them over with his truck.

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* BrokenPedestal: The BrokenPedestal:
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Humane 5 become this to Sunset after all they put her through. [[spoiler: By the end of the story, she's willing to move on, but isn't willing to call them her friends again, yet.]]
** An inverted example happens with Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash, as not only does the older athlete slap Scootaloo and call her a backstabbing brat after the CMC reveal themselves as being Anon-A-Miss, but Rainbow is so hurt over Scootaloo's involvement that she doesn't want anything to do pretty much breaks ties with her surrogate little sister anymore.her.
* CarFu: Scootaloo's dad punished her for Anon-A-Miss by destroying her laptop, TV, and phone by running them over with his truck.



* DisproportionateRetribution: {{Deconstructed|Trope}}; While the CMC creating Anon-A-Miss and framing Sunset for it was bad enough in the eyes of the Rainbooms and CHS, their reason for it (they wanted to spend more time with their sisters) disgusts them even more because of how petty it was.

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* DisproportionateRetribution: {{Deconstructed|Trope}}; While the CMC creating Anon-A-Miss and framing Sunset for it was bad enough in the eyes of the Rainbooms and CHS, their CHS. However, Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle's reason for it (they wanted to spend more time with their sisters) and the fact that Scootaloo hardly had an excuse disgusts them CHS even more because of it highlights how petty it Anon-A-Miss truly was.



** The CMC are ''NOT'' let off easily for what they did. Not only were they given detention for the rest of the year and banned from the school computers, they got their Christmas presents confiscated, everybody including their own families loses trust in them, and became as welcome as the plague in CHS.

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** The CMC are ''NOT'' let off easily for what they did. Not only were they given detention for the rest of the year and banned from the school computers, they got their Christmas presents confiscated, everybody including their own families loses trust in respect for them, and they became as welcome as the plague in CHS.targets of hate for vengeful CHS students.

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* AesopAmnesia: When Twilight chews the Humane 5 out on immediately suspecting Sunset of being Anon-A-Miss on flimsy evidence, she admits she honestly thought that they would have learned the first time. Before Twilight first came to CHS, the Humane 5 were at each others' throats over a stupid fight, and while they were tricked into it, Twilight points out that not a single one of them talked to each other and tried to figure out what was going on, and as a result they lost three years of their friendship. This makes the Humane 5 realize that they have truly learned nothing.

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* AesopAmnesia: When Twilight chews the Humane 5 out on immediately suspecting Sunset of being Anon-A-Miss on flimsy evidence, she admits she honestly thought that they would have learned the first time. Before Twilight first came to CHS, the Humane 5 were at each others' throats over a stupid fight, and while they were tricked into it, Twilight points out that not a single one of them talked bothered to talk to each other and tried or try to figure out what was going on, and as a result they lost three years of their friendship. This makes the Humane 5 realize that they have truly learned nothing.



* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Sunset states perfectly well that she can no longer trust the Humane 5 because they turning on her on flimsy evidence proved that they had never trusted her, and the relationships between the CMC and their older sisters are still pretty broken. However, there's hope for reconciliation between everybody in the future as Sunset is going to see a psychologist for her depression, and gives the Humane 5 a business card for a relationship therapist in order to mend the bond between their sisters. Furthermore, because the CMC confessed to the physical bullying they've been through and stood up to their tormentors, they and everybody who submitted secrets to them are tracked down and punished.]]

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Sunset states perfectly well that she can no longer trust makes it clear to the Humane 5 that she no longer trusts them because they turning on her on flimsy evidence proved that they had never trusted her, and the relationships between the CMC and their older sisters are still pretty broken. However, there's still hope for reconciliation between everybody in the future as future. Sunset is going to see a psychologist for her depression, and gives the Humane 5 a business card for a relationship therapist in order to mend the bond between their sisters. Furthermore, because the CMC confessed to the physical bullying they've been through and stood up to their tormentors, they and everybody who submitted secrets to them are tracked down and punished.]]


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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted. [[spoiler: Sunset decides to see a psychologist at the end and encourages the others to do the same]].
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* DisproportionateRetribution: {{Deconstructed|Trope}}; While the CMC creating Anon-A-Miss and framing Sunset for it was bad enough in the eyes of the Rainbooms and CHS, their reason for it (they wanted to spend more time with their sisters) disgusts them even more because of how petty it was.
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** The fic demonstrates that a huge act of betrayal is ''not'' something that can be [[EasilyForgiven resolved in a day or forgiven instantly]]. The CMC trying to break apart their sisters' friendship with Sunset caused the Humane Five to lose all trust in them. In Rainbow's case she can't bring herself to forgive Scootaloo and more or less breaks ties with her. Likewise, Sunset does not just easily forgive and forget her so-called friends for ditching her the moment something went wrong.

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** The fic demonstrates that a huge act of betrayal is ''not'' something that can be [[EasilyForgiven resolved in a day or forgiven instantly]]. The CMC trying to break apart their sisters' friendship with Sunset caused completely disgusted the Humane Five to lose all trust in them.Five. In Rainbow's case she can't bring herself to forgive Scootaloo and more or less breaks ties with her. Likewise, Sunset does not just easily forgive and forget her so-called friends for ditching her the moment something went wrong.
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** The CMC are ''NOT'' let off easily for what they did. Not only were they given detention for the rest of the year and banned from the school computers, they got their Christmas presents confiscated and became as welcome as the plague in CHS. And their Anon-A-Miss plan blew up spectacularly in their face because trying to break apart their sisters' friendship with Sunset caused the Humane Five to lose all trust in them. In Rainbow's case she can't bring herself to forgive Scootaloo and more or less breaks ties with her.
** Likewise, Sunset does not just easily forgive and forget her so-called friends for ditching her the moment something went wrong.

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** The CMC are ''NOT'' let off easily for what they did. Not only were they given detention for the rest of the year and banned from the school computers, they got their Christmas presents confiscated confiscated, everybody including their own families loses trust in them, and became as welcome as the plague in CHS. And their Anon-A-Miss plan blew up spectacularly CHS.
** The fic demonstrates that a huge act of betrayal is ''not'' something that can be [[EasilyForgiven resolved
in their face because a day or forgiven instantly]]. The CMC trying to break apart their sisters' friendship with Sunset caused the Humane Five to lose all trust in them. In Rainbow's case she can't bring herself to forgive Scootaloo and more or less breaks ties with her. \n** Likewise, Sunset does not just easily forgive and forget her so-called friends for ditching her the moment something went wrong.
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* AesopAmnesia: When Twilight chews the Humane 5 out on immediately suspecting Sunset of being Anon-A-Miss on flimsy evidence, she admits she honestly thought that they would have learned the first time. Before Twilight first came to CHS, the Humane 5 were at each others' throats over a stupid fight and while they were tricked into it Twilight points out that not a single one of them talked to each other and tried to figure out what was going on and as a result they lost three years of their friendship. This makes the Humane 5 realize that they have truly learned nothing.

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* AesopAmnesia: When Twilight chews the Humane 5 out on immediately suspecting Sunset of being Anon-A-Miss on flimsy evidence, she admits she honestly thought that they would have learned the first time. Before Twilight first came to CHS, the Humane 5 were at each others' throats over a stupid fight fight, and while they were tricked into it it, Twilight points out that not a single one of them talked to each other and tried to figure out what was going on on, and as a result they lost three years of their friendship. This makes the Humane 5 realize that they have truly learned nothing.



* EvilCannotComprehendGood: [[spoiler: Gilda is beyond shocked when Principal Celestia suspends her for punching Apple Bloom in the eye because she doesn't understand why the Principal would still protect the CMC even after everything they had done]].

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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: [[spoiler: While not EVIL per say, Gilda is beyond shocked when Principal Celestia suspends her for punching Apple Bloom in the eye because she doesn't understand why the Principal would still protect the CMC even after everything they had done]].
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**Rainbow actually punches Scootaloo in the face after she confesses to her part in Anon-A-Miss, and fails to provide a decent excuse for it. (Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle at least had jealousy as their motivation; the best Scootaloo can come up with is that "it seemed like a good idea at the time.")
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: [[spiler: Gilda is beyond shocked when Principal Celestia suspends her for punching Apple Bloom in the eye because she doesn't understand why the Principal would still protect the CMC even after everything they had done]].

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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: [[spiler: [[spoiler: Gilda is beyond shocked when Principal Celestia suspends her for punching Apple Bloom in the eye because she doesn't understand why the Principal would still protect the CMC even after everything they had done]].



** [[spoiler: After the CMC finally fess up about the physical bullying they had been through Principal Celestia [[WhatTheHellHero chews the entire school out for their behavior]] and harshly punishes their tormenters. While what Apple Bloom, Scootaloo, and Sweetie Belle did was wrong, it doesn't give the other kids free reign to bully them in revenge]].

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** [[spoiler: After the CMC finally fess up about the physical bullying assault they had been through through, Principal Celestia [[WhatTheHellHero chews the entire school out for their behavior]] and harshly punishes their the tormenters. While what Apple Bloom, Scootaloo, and Sweetie Belle did was wrong, it doesn't give the other kids free reign to bully bullying them in revenge]].revenge is equally unexcusable]].
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: [[spiler: Gilda is beyond shocked when Principal Celestia suspends her for punching Apple Bloom in the eye because she doesn't understand why the Principal would still protect the CMC even after everything they had done]].


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** [[spoiler: After the CMC finally fess up about the physical bullying they had been through Principal Celestia [[WhatTheHellHero chews the entire school out for their behavior]] and harshly punishes their tormenters. While what Apple Bloom, Scootaloo, and Sweetie Belle did was wrong, it doesn't give the other kids free reign to bully them in revenge]].
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* CirclingMonologue: Adagio and Aria do this when mocking the Humane 5 over their failures as Sunset's friends.



* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: Adagio tells the CMC that they would have made excellent sirens, and "congratulates" them and the Humane 5 for doing a better job of breaking Sunset than they ever did.

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* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: Adagio tells the CMC that they would have made excellent sirens, and "congratulates" them and the Humane 5 for doing a better job of breaking Sunset than they ever did.did.
* YouExclamation: Rainbow, when the sirens show up. Adagio gives the requisite "Me" in response.
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* AesopAmnesia: When Twilight chews the Humane 5 out on imediately suspecting Sunset of being Anon-A-Miss on flimsey evidence, she admits she honestly thought that they would have learned the first time. Before Twilight first came to CHS, the Humane 5 were at each others' throats over a stupid fight and while they were tricked into it Twiligh points out that not a single one of them talked to each other and tried to figure out what was going on and as a result they lost three years of their friendship. This makes the Humane 5 realize that they have truly learned nothing.

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* AesopAmnesia: When Twilight chews the Humane 5 out on imediately immediately suspecting Sunset of being Anon-A-Miss on flimsey flimsy evidence, she admits she honestly thought that they would have learned the first time. Before Twilight first came to CHS, the Humane 5 were at each others' throats over a stupid fight and while they were tricked into it Twiligh Twilight points out that not a single one of them talked to each other and tried to figure out what was going on and as a result they lost three years of their friendship. This makes the Humane 5 realize that they have truly learned nothing.



* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Sunset states perfectly well that she can no longer trust the Humane 5 because they turning on her on flimsey evidence proved that they had never trusted her, and the relationships between the CMC and their older sisters are still pretty broken. However, there's hope for reconcilement between everybody in the future as Sunset is going to see a psychologist for her depression, and gives the Humane 5 a business card for a relationship therapist in order to mend the bond between their sisters. Furthermore, because the CMC confessed to the physical bullying they've been through and stood up to their tormentors, they and everybody who submitted secrets to them are tracked down and punished.]]

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Sunset states perfectly well that she can no longer trust the Humane 5 because they turning on her on flimsey flimsy evidence proved that they had never trusted her, and the relationships between the CMC and their older sisters are still pretty broken. However, there's hope for reconcilement reconciliation between everybody in the future as Sunset is going to see a psychologist for her depression, and gives the Humane 5 a business card for a relationship therapist in order to mend the bond between their sisters. Furthermore, because the CMC confessed to the physical bullying they've been through and stood up to their tormentors, they and everybody who submitted secrets to them are tracked down and punished.]]



** The CMC are ''NOT'' let off easily for what they did. Not only were they given detention for the rest of the year and banned from the school computers, they got their christmas presents confiscated and became as welcome as the plauge in CHS. And their Anon-A-Miss plan blew up spectacularly in their face because trying to break apart their sister's friendship with Sunset caused the Humane Five to lose all trust in them. In Rainbow's case she can't bring herself to forgive Scootaloo and more or less breaks ties with her.

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** The CMC are ''NOT'' let off easily for what they did. Not only were they given detention for the rest of the year and banned from the school computers, they got their christmas Christmas presents confiscated and became as welcome as the plauge plague in CHS. And their Anon-A-Miss plan blew up spectacularly in their face because trying to break apart their sister's sisters' friendship with Sunset caused the Humane Five to lose all trust in them. In Rainbow's case she can't bring herself to forgive Scootaloo and more or less breaks ties with her.
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* AesopAmnesia: When Twilight chews the Humane 5 out on imediately suspecting Sunset of being Anon-A-Miss on flimsey evidence, she admits she honestly thought that they would have learned the first time. Before Twilight first came to CHS, the Humane 5 were at each others' throats over a stupid fight and while they were tricked into it Twiligh points out that not a single one of them talked to each other and tried to figure out what was going on and as a result they lost three years of their friendship. This makes the Humane 5 realize that they have truly learned nothing.

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* DidntThinkThisThrough: The CMC were so intent on getting their sisters to spend more time with them that they didn't consider how much they would hurt Sunset by framing her. Or how disgusted and betrayed their sisters would feel when they found out that they were behind the scheme. Or how much the entire school would hate them once they were outed.



* EasilyForgiven: Completely and utterly averted. Sunset does not simply forgive and forget her so called friends for abandoning her on flimsey evidence, and NOBODY forgives Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo for creating Anon-A-Miss.



* {{Hypocrite}}: All the students, like Diamond Tiara, who sent information to Anon-A-Miss, only to act upset by the situation and start bullying the CMC in revenge. [[spoiler: They're all eventually called out and punished by Principal Celestia.]]

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All the students, like Diamond Tiara, who sent information to Anon-A-Miss, only to act upset by the situation and start bullying the CMC in revenge. [[spoiler: They're all eventually called out and punished by Principal Celestia.]]]]
** Rainbow Dash states this trope as the reason why she can't bring herself to forgive Scootaloo for her role in the Anon-A-Miss incident even two months later;
--> '''Rainbow''': I want to. Believe me I really want to. But I can't. If I do, it'll make me a filthy hypocrite. How can I justify forgiving [Scootaloo] when I wouldn't even give Sunset a chance? How can I without being an even worse friend than I already am?



* RealityEnsues: The CMC are ''NOT'' let off easily for what they did. Not only were they given detention for the rest of the year and banned from the school computers, they got their christmas presents confiscated and became as welcome as the plauge in CHS. And their sisters lost all trust in them, so their Anon-A-Miss plan blew up spectacularly in their face.

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It is now complete. A sequel of sorts, the aftermath story ''Life Goes On'', can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/346265/life-goes-on here]].
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Sunset states perfectly well that she can no longer trust the Humane 5 because they turning on her on flimsey evidence proved that they had never trusted her, and the relationships between the CMC and their older sisters are still pretty broken. However, there's hope for reconcilement between everybody in the future as Sunset is going to see a psychologist for her depression, and gives the Humane 5 a business card for a relationship therapist in order to mend the bond between their sisters. Furthermore, because the CMC confessed to the physical bullying they've been through and stood up to their tormentors, they and everybody who submitted secrets to them are tracked down and punished.]]


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* CutHimselfShaving: As part of the torment the CMC go through, they've been subject to several "accidents" such as Scootaloo "tripping" and cutting her knee open, Sweetie Belle "accidentally" spilling grape juice on her shirt, and Apple Bloom getting a black eye from Gilda and telling the nurse that she tripped and smacked her face on a door frame. They don't tell the truth no matter how much the suspicious Nurse Redheart probes them because they believe they deserve it. [[spoiler: After Sunset's emotional breakdown lands her in the hospital, the CMC get fed up and finally confess to Redheart, who passes on the information to Celestia.]]
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** During a massive emotional breakdown, Sunset slams her forehead and fists into Fluttershy's bathroom mirror, resulting in serious injuries. Obviously, this is recognized as ''not'' healthy behavior, and Sunset's depression does not instantly go away when Twilight comes to visit her in the hospital. Twilight even recognizes that Sunset has problems she is not qualified to fix. Sunset resolves to see a psychiatrist near the end of the fic.

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** During a massive emotional breakdown, Sunset slams her forehead and fists into Fluttershy's bathroom mirror, resulting in serious injuries. Obviously, this is recognized as ''not'' healthy behavior, and Sunset's depression does not instantly go away when Twilight comes to visit her in the hospital. Twilight even recognizes that Sunset has problems she is not qualified to fix. Sunset resolves to see a psychiatrist near the end of the fic.
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* {{Dull Eyes of Unhappiness}}: Sunset gains these after spending two months bottling up her anger and resentment. While she tries to convince others she's fine, it's pretty obvious that she's not.
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* Angrish: Twilight is so furious at the Humane 5 for their actions that she can't even form ''words''. This happens twice in the same chapter.

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* Angrish: Twilight is so furious at the Humane 5 for their actions that she can't even form ''words''. This happens twice in the same chapter.

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* AccusationFic: The Humane 5 are called out on abandoning Sunset based on extremely flimsy evidence, and the CMC are called out on how pathetic and cruel their actions were. Both are done by Twilight Sparkle.

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* AccusationFic: The Humane 5 are called out on abandoning Sunset based on extremely flimsy evidence, and the CMC are called out on how pathetic and cruel their actions were. Both are done by Twilight Sparkle.



* CarFu: Scootaloo's dad punished her for Anon-A-Miss by destroying her laptop, TV, and phone by running them over with his truck.



* LetMeGetThisStraight: When Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo confess being Anon-A-Miss to the Humane 5 and explain their reasons for doing so, Rainbow responds with this to make them realize how stupid they were:
--> '''Rainbow Dash''': [[TranquilFury Let me see if I got this right]]. You posted our most private and embarrassing secrets, made us laughingstocks of the entire school, framed Sunset, and turned the school completely on its head... because you didn't get invited to a ''freaking slumber party''. That's what you're telling me."



* RealityEnsues: The CMC are ''NOT'' let off easily for what they did.

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* RealityEnsues: The CMC are ''NOT'' let off easily for what they did. Not only were they given detention for the rest of the year and banned from the school computers, they got their christmas presents confiscated and became as welcome as the plauge in CHS. And their sisters lost all trust in them, so their Anon-A-Miss plan blew up spectacularly in their face.
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* MoreThanMindControl: On two separate occasions, people compare Anon-A-Miss to the cruelties Sunset experienced during the Sirens' rampage, and it's explained to anyone protesting that comparison that the Sirens' HatePlague only mad people angrier and more competitive; anything they said and did was all their own doing.


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* WhatTheHellHero: Twilight tears the Humane 5 a collective new one for how they treated Sunset, practically breaking down in the middle of it from sheer frustration and disgust.

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* CruelMercy: Apple Bloom views Principal Celestia not expelling her as this, since now she is the subject of bullying and nobody in the school including the staff and her own siblings trust her anymore.

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** An inverted example happens with Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash, as not only does the older athlete slap Scootaloo and call her a brat after the CMC reveal themselves as being Anon-A-Miss, but she doesn't want anything to do with her surrogate little sister anymore.
* CruelMercy: Apple Bloom views Principal Celestia not expelling her and her friends as this, since now she is the subject of bullying and hate and nobody in the school including the staff and her own siblings trust her anymore.

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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/340985/bitter-tears-an-anon-a-miss-fanfic Bitter Tears: An Anon-A-Miss Fanfic]]'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/hattafan2593 hattafan2593]].

Sunset was very hurt and betrayed by her so-called friends after they callously dumped her during the Anon-A-Miss incident. However, she can't bring herself to leave; she can't go back to being the person she was - aloof, cold, and alone.
And so she buries it. Tries to forget it. Easier said than done.

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[[https://www.''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/340985/bitter-tears-an-anon-a-miss-fanfic Bitter Tears: An Anon-A-Miss Fanfic]]'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/hattafan2593 hattafan2593]].

Sunset was very hurt and betrayed by her so-called friends after they callously dumped her during the Anon-A-Miss incident. However, she can't bring herself to leave; she can't go back to being the person she was - aloof, cold, and alone.
alone. And so she buries it. Tries to forget it. Easier said than done.



* ArmorPiercingSlap: Twilight gives Flash one as punishment for his part of what Sunset's been through. He admits he deserves it.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Twilight asks several when interrogating the CMC over their actions, the most pertinent being why they just didn't tell their sisters how they felt rather than going through this whole situation. This actually makes the girls flinch, as it apparently hadn't even occurred to them.
* BrokenPedestal: The Humane 5 become this to Sunset after all they put her through. [[spoiler: By the end of the story, she's willing to move on, but isn't willing to call them her friends again, yet.]]



* RealityEnsues: The CMC are ''NOT'' let off easily for what they did.

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* HeelRealization: The CMC have one when Apple Bloom sees Sunset smash her cell phone in grief over how she's been abandoned by her friends, causing the three of them to realize that they've gone too far.
** Most of the student body, especially the Humane 5, have one for how they treated Sunset once the CMC come forward.
* {{Hypocrite}}: All the students, like Diamond Tiara, who sent information to Anon-A-Miss, only to act upset by the situation and start bullying the CMC in revenge. [[spoiler: They're all eventually called out and punished by Principal Celestia.]]
* KickTheDog: The Sirens go out of their way to bump into the Humane 5 and CMC and mock them for all the pain they've caused Sunset.
* LampshadeHanging: The fact that Anon-A-Miss is basically a rehash of Gabby Gums gets brought up by Twilight and Spike, who also point out that the human CMC had far more petty motivations than their pony counterparts.
** The chapter with all the {{Armor Piercing Question}}s is actually ''called'' "Armor Piercing Questions".
* RageBreakingPoint: Invoked, as [[spoiler: Flash intentionally gets Sunset angry so that she'll stop bottling her emotions over the whole situation]]. While it does technically work, everyone calls him out on the stupidity of it.
* RealityEnsues: The CMC are ''NOT'' let off easily for what they did.
** Likewise, Sunset does not just easily forgive and forget her so-called friends for ditching her the moment something went wrong.
* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: Adagio tells the CMC that they would have made excellent sirens, and "congratulates" them and the Humane 5 for doing a better job of breaking Sunset than they ever
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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/340985/bitter-tears-an-anon-a-miss-fanfic Bitter Tears: An Anon-A-Miss Fanfic]]'' is a [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic]] FanFic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/hattafan2593 hattafan2593]].

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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/340985/bitter-tears-an-anon-a-miss-fanfic Bitter Tears: An Anon-A-Miss Fanfic]]'' is a [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic]] WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/hattafan2593 hattafan2593]].
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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/340985/bitter-tears-an-anon-a-miss-fanfic Bitter Tears: An Anon-A-Miss Fanfic]]'' is a [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic]] FanFic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/hattafan2593 hattafan2593]].

Sunset was very hurt and betrayed by her so-called friends after they callously dumped her during the Anon-A-Miss incident. However, she can't bring herself to leave; she can't go back to being the person she was - aloof, cold, and alone.
And so she buries it. Tries to forget it. Easier said than done.

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!!This work provides examples of the following trope:

* AccusationFic: The Humane 5 are called out on abandoning Sunset based on extremely flimsy evidence, and the CMC are called out on how pathetic and cruel their actions were. Both are done by Twilight Sparkle.
* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: The Cutie Mark Crusaders, Apple Bloom especially, become the social pariahs of Canterlot High School after they confess to being Anon-A-Miss.
* CruelMercy: Apple Bloom views Principal Celestia not expelling her as this, since now she is the subject of bullying and nobody in the school including the staff and her own siblings trust her anymore.
* RealityEnsues: The CMC are ''NOT'' let off easily for what they did.

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