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* TheWallAroundTheWorld: A giant stone wall surrounds the village, keeping the villagers inside and forest monsters away. [[spoiler:The penalty for trying to go beyond the wall is immediate execution.]]

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* TheWallAroundTheWorld: A giant stone wall surrounds the village, keeping the villagers inside and forest monsters away. [[spoiler:The penalty punishment for trying to go beyond the wall is immediate execution.]]
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* TheWallAroundTheWorld: A giant stone wall surrounds the village, keeping the villagers inside and forest monsters away. [[spoiler:The penalty for trying to go beyond the wall is immediate execution.]]
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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Fairy Dust is killed by the villagers for trying to venture outside the wall, and Whisperleaf decides to carry on being a good little pony and not think about what's beyond the wall any longer]].

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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Fairy Dust is killed executed by the villagers for trying to venture outside the wall, and Whisperleaf decides to carry on being a good little pony and not think about what's beyond the wall any longer]].
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* BlackAndWhiteInsanity: To the villagers, everything inside Gaea's walls is good, and everything outside them is bad, end of story.

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* BlackAndWhiteInsanity: To the villagers, everything inside Gaea's walls is good, and while everything outside them is bad, end bad. End of story.
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* AffablyEvil: The villagers are kind, friendly, peaceful ponies...[[spoiler:as long as you're not from outside the wall, for which you will be executed without hesitation, because Gaea doesn't love you. And if you're a villager and try to go outside the wall, you will also be executed without hesitation to ensure that your body remains in the village forever and Gaea still loves you]].

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* AffablyEvil: The villagers are kind, friendly, peaceful ponies...[[spoiler:as long as you're not from outside the wall, for which you will be executed without hesitation, because Gaea doesn't love you.you, and life without Gaea's love is a torture that only death can free you from. And if you're a villager and try to go outside the wall, you will also be executed without hesitation to ensure that your body remains in the village forever and Gaea still loves you]].
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler:What happens when Whisperleaf finds out Fairy Dust is trying to go beyond the wall. In any other story, Whisperleaf would run away with Fairy Dust, or they would try to change the villagers' minds, or ThePowerOfFriendship would make Whisperleaf decide to keep her friend's secret. Instead, Whisperleaf goes to the elder to tell him what Fairy Dust is doing, and Fairy Dust is executed.]]

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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler:What happens when Whisperleaf finds out Fairy Dust is trying to go beyond the wall. In any other story, Whisperleaf would run away with Fairy Dust, or they would try to change the villagers' minds, or ThePowerOfFriendship would make Whisperleaf decide to keep her friend's secret. Instead, Whisperleaf goes to the village elder to tell him what Fairy Dust is doing, and Fairy Dust is executed.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler:What happens when Whisperleaf finds out Fairy Dust is trying to go beyond the wall. In any other story, Whisperleaf would run away with Fairy Dust, or they would try to change the villagers' minds, or ThePowerOfFriendship would make Whisperleaf decide to keep her friend's secret. Instead, Whisperleaf goes to the elder to tell him what Fairy Dust is doing, and Fairy Dust is executed.]]
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* BlackAndWhiteInsanity: To the villagers, everything inside Gaea's walls is good, and everything outside them is bad.

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* BlackAndWhiteInsanity: To the villagers, everything inside Gaea's walls is good, and everything outside them is bad.bad, end of story.
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* BlackAndWhiteInsanity: To the villagers, everything inside Gaea's walls is good, and everything outside them is bad.
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* CoverInnocentEyesAndEars: Fairy Dust covers Whisperleaf's eyes so she doesn't see [[spoiler:the villagers murdering Rainbow Dash]].

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* CoverInnocentEyesAndEars: Fairy Dust covers Whisperleaf's eyes so she doesn't have to see [[spoiler:the villagers murdering Rainbow Dash]].
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* HiddenElfVillage: The village is located in the middle of a forest (implied to be the Everfree Forest), surrounded by a giant stone wall that keeps anypony from getting in or out.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: All the villagers are terrified of "forest monsters" that lurk outside the walls.

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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: All the villagers are terrified of "forest monsters" that lurk outside the walls. In fact, they believe ''everything'' outside the village walls is a forest monster, no matter what it looks like.
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* CoverInnocentEyesAndEars: Fairy Dust covers Whisperleaf's eyes so she doesn't see [[spoiler:the villagers murdering Rainbow Dash]].
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-->'''Mr. Amber''': [[spoiler:So you are from beyond the wall, and thus, you do not love Gaea, nor does Gaea love you. We release you from your tortured existence]].
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* KickTheDog: [[spoiler:The villagers murder Rainbow Dash when she accidentally lands in the village, simply because she's an outsider and they believe everything outside the village is a forest monster]].
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* AffablyEvil: The villagers are kind, friendly, peaceful ponies...[[spoiler:as long as you're not from outside the wall, for which you will be executed without hesitation, because Gaea doesn't love you. And if you're a villager and try to go outside the wall, you will be executed without hesitation, so that your body remains in the village forever and Gaea still loves you]].

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* AffablyEvil: The villagers are kind, friendly, peaceful ponies...[[spoiler:as long as you're not from outside the wall, for which you will be executed without hesitation, because Gaea doesn't love you. And if you're a villager and try to go outside the wall, you will also be executed without hesitation, so hesitation to ensure that your body remains in the village forever and Gaea still loves you]].

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* ExactWords: As long as you remain inside the village, Gaea will always love you. [[spoiler:And to the villagers, being dead and buried in the village, loved by Gaea, is preferable to being outside the village and alive, but not loved by Gaea]].

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* ExactWords: As long as you remain inside the village, Gaea will always love you. [[spoiler:And to the villagers, being dead and buried in the village, loved by Gaea, is preferable to being outside the village walls and alive, but not loved by Gaea]].


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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: All the villagers are terrified of "forest monsters" that lurk outside the walls.
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* RayOfHopeEnding: If even that. Whisperleaf decides to be a good pony and [[spoiler:tells the elder that Fairy Dust is trying to leave the village, and as a result, Fairy Dust is killed. But, maybe, Whisperleaf might change her mind someday and want to escape the village too like her sister did, to see what lies beyond the wall...but that's a pretty big "maybe"]].

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* RayOfHopeEnding: If even that. Whisperleaf decides to be a good pony and [[spoiler:tells the elder that Fairy Dust is trying to leave the village, and as a result, Fairy Dust is killed. But, maybe, Whisperleaf might change her mind someday and want to escape the village too like her sister did, to see what lies beyond the wall...but that's a pretty big "maybe"]].

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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Blackberry and Strongoak's older daughter Whispersilk was eaten by forest monsters. [[spoiler:Actually, not really. She managed to escape the village and they never saw her again]].

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Blackberry and Strongoak's older daughter Whispersilk was eaten by forest monsters. [[spoiler:Actually, not really. She managed to escape the village and they never saw her again]].again]].
** [[spoiler:Fairy Dust's parents are okay with her being killed so she can never leave the village, because as long as she stays in the village (even if it's her dead body), Gaea will love her forever]].
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Has nothing to do with the ''Series/GameOfThrones'' episode [[Recap/GameOfThronesS7E6BeyondTheWall "Beyond the Wall"]].
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* ExactWords: As long as you remain inside the village, Gaea will always love you. [[spoiler:And to the villagers, being dead and buried in the village, loved by Gaea, is preferable to being outside the village and alive, but not loved by Gaea]].
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* ChocolateBaby: Fairy Dust was born a pegasus, even though her parents are earth ponies. In fact, she's the only pegasus in the entire village.

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* ChocolateBaby: Fairy Dust was born a pegasus, even though her parents are earth ponies. In fact, she's the only pegasus in the entire village. She's never discriminated against for it...[[spoiler:until Whisperleaf's mother starts worrying that she might use her wings to someday fly away from the village]].
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* TheFundamentalist: Everypony in the village believes that Gaea only loves those inside her walls, and hates everything outside them.
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* AffablyEvil: The villagers are kind, friendly, peaceful ponies...[[spoiler:as long as you're not from outside the wall, or trying to leave the village. For those crimes, you will be executed without hesitation, because Gaea doesn't love you]].

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* AffablyEvil: The villagers are kind, friendly, peaceful ponies...[[spoiler:as long as you're not from outside the wall, or trying to leave the village. For those crimes, for which you will be executed without hesitation, because Gaea doesn't love you. And if you're a villager and try to go outside the wall, you will be executed without hesitation, so that your body remains in the village forever and Gaea still loves you]].
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* AffablyEvil: The villagers are kind, friendly, peaceful ponies...[[spoiler:as long as you're not from outside the wall, or trying to leave the village. For those crimes, you will be executed without hesitation, because Gaea doesn't love you]].
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->''Never enter the woods alone, for there are monsters there. They can look like anything, even another pony. And if you waver in Gaea's love, you will become one.''
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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Fairy Dust is killed by the villagers for trying to venture outside the wall, and Whisperleaf decide to carry on being a good little pony and not think about what's beyond the wall any longer]].

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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Fairy Dust is killed by the villagers for trying to venture outside the wall, and Whisperleaf decide decides to carry on being a good little pony and not think about what's beyond the wall any longer]].

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* TheOneWhoMadeItOut: [[spoiler:Before Whisperleaf was born, her older sister Whispersilk successfully escaped the village and was never seen again. Their parents told Whisperleaf that her sister was eaten by forest monsters]].

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* TheOneWhoMadeItOut: [[spoiler:Before Whisperleaf was born, her older sister Whispersilk successfully escaped the village and was never seen again.came back. Their parents told Whisperleaf that her sister was eaten by forest monsters]].


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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Blackberry and Strongoak's older daughter Whispersilk was eaten by forest monsters. [[spoiler:Actually, not really. She managed to escape the village and they never saw her again]].
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!!''Beyond the Wall'' contains examples of:
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A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{Fanfic}} by Filler.

In this peaceful forest village surrounded by walls, a little filly named Whisperleaf has never known anything but safety and Gaea's love. But her friend Fairy Dust is starting to get curious about what's beyond the wall.

Can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/28269/beyond-the-wall here]].
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* AmbiguousSituation: It is not made clear if Gaea actually exists or was just made up by the village to keep everypony scared of going outside the wall.
* ChocolateBaby: Fairy Dust was born a pegasus, even though her parents are earth ponies. In fact, she's the only pegasus in the entire village.
* CrapsaccharineWorld: The forest village is a lovely, friendly place where everypony has everything they need, and everypony is happy and cares for one another...but no one can come in, and no one can go out. Because Gaea doesn't love anything or anypony outside the wall, [[spoiler:intruders are killed on sight, and any villager that tries to leave is killed and buried within the village grounds so Gaea will still love them]].
* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Fairy Dust is killed by the villagers for trying to venture outside the wall, and Whisperleaf decide to carry on being a good little pony and not think about what's beyond the wall any longer]].
* TheOneWhoMadeItOut: [[spoiler:Before Whisperleaf was born, her older sister Whispersilk successfully escaped the village and was never seen again. Their parents told Whisperleaf that her sister was eaten by forest monsters]].
* OnlySaneMan: Fairy Dust is just a filly, yet the only pony in the village to even consider the possibility that not everything beyond the wall is a forest monster.
* RayOfHopeEnding: If even that. Whisperleaf decides to be a good pony and [[spoiler:tells the elder that Fairy Dust is trying to leave the village, and as a result, Fairy Dust is killed. But, maybe, Whisperleaf might change her mind someday and want to escape the village too like her sister did, to see what lies beyond the wall...but that's a pretty big "maybe"]].
* ThemeNaming: Because the village is located in the middle of a forest, all the villagers are named after something that occurs in nature -- Whisperleaf, Fungal Bloom, Beetle Bark, Blackberry.
* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Fairy Dust, a little filly, is killed for trying to leave the village's walls]].

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