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* BlackAndWhiteInsanity: To the villagers, everything inside Gaea's walls is good, while everything outside them is bad. [[spoiler:To the point where they'll murder one of their own children without hesitation for trying to leave the village, because being outside the walls and beyond the reach of Gaea's love is considered a FateWorseThanDeath.]]
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* BlackAndWhiteInsanity: To the villagers, everything inside Gaea's walls is good, while everything outside them is bad. [[spoiler:To the point where they'll murder one of their own children foals without hesitation for trying to leave the village, because being outside the walls and beyond the reach of Gaea's love is considered a FateWorseThanDeath.]]
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-->'''Whisperleaf''': [[spoiler:They buried Fairy Dust in the village so that Gaea could still love her. She’s a little mound of dirt with a twig sticking out of it now. They rescued her before she stopped loving Gaea, so she’s still a good pony. That’s what her mommy and daddy told me.]]
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A ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{Fanfic}} by Filler.
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A 2012 ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' {{Fanfic}} by Filler.
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In this peaceful forest village surrounded by walls, a little filly named Whisperleaf has never known anything but safety and Gaea's love. But her friend Fairy Dust is starting to get curious about what's beyond the wall.
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In this peaceful forest village surrounded by walls, a little filly named Whisperleaf has never known anything but safety and Gaea's love.the love of Gaea, the goddess who watches over them. But her friend Fairy Dust is starting to get curious about what's beyond the wall.
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* CensoredChildDeath: [[spoiler:Fairy Dust's death is never explicitly shown, as the the story cuts from Whisperleaf about to tell on her for attempting to leave the village to Whisperleaf describing her fate.]]
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* CensoredChildDeath: [[spoiler:Fairy Dust's death execution is never explicitly shown, as the the story cuts from Whisperleaf about to tell on her for attempting to leave the village to Whisperleaf describing her fate.]]
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* CensoredChildDeath: [[spoiler:Fairy Dust's death is never explicitly shown, as the the story cuts from Whisperleaf about to tell on her for attempting to leave the village to Whisperleaf describing her fate.]]
-->'''Whisperleaf''': [[spoiler:They buried Fairy Dust in the village so that Gaea could still love her. She’s a little mound of dirt with a twig sticking out of it now. They rescued her before she stopped loving Gaea, so she’s still a good pony. That’s what her mommy and daddy told me.]]
-->'''Whisperleaf''': [[spoiler:They buried Fairy Dust in the village so that Gaea could still love her. She’s a little mound of dirt with a twig sticking out of it now. They rescued her before she stopped loving Gaea, so she’s still a good pony. That’s what her mommy and daddy told me.]]
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* AffablyEvil: The villagers are kind, friendly, peaceful ponies...[[spoiler:as long as you're not from outside the wall, for which you will be executed without hesitation, because Gaea doesn't love you, and life without Gaea's love is a torture that only death can free you from. And if you're a villager and try to go outside the wall, you will also be executed without hesitation to ensure that your body remains in the village forever and Gaea still loves you]].
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* AffablyEvil: The villagers are kind, friendly, peaceful ponies...[[spoiler:as long as you're not from outside the wall, for which you will be executed without hesitation, because Gaea doesn't love you, only loves those within her walls and life without Gaea's her love is a torture that only death can free you from. And if you're a villager and try to go outside the wall, you will also be executed without hesitation to ensure that your body remains in the village forever and Gaea still loves you]].
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* BlindObedience: [[spoiler:Whisperleaf does what she's told, and reports on Fairy Dust for trying to leave the village, which gets her executed.]]
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* BlindObedience: [[spoiler:Whisperleaf does what she's told, told because "she's a good pony," and reports tattles on her friend Fairy Dust for trying to leave the village, which gets her executed.]]
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* BlackAndWhiteInsanity: To the villagers, everything inside Gaea's walls is good, while everything outside them is bad. [[spoiler:To the point where they'll murder a filly without hesitation for trying to leave the village, because being outside the walls and beyond the reach of Gaea's love is considered a FateWorseThanDeath.]]
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* BlackAndWhiteInsanity: To the villagers, everything inside Gaea's walls is good, while everything outside them is bad. [[spoiler:To the point where they'll murder a filly one of their own children without hesitation for trying to leave the village, because being outside the walls and beyond the reach of Gaea's love is considered a FateWorseThanDeath.]]
* BlindObedience: [[spoiler:Whisperleaf does what she's told, and reports on Fairy Dust for trying to leave the village, which gets her executed.]]
* BlindObedience: [[spoiler:Whisperleaf does what she's told, and reports on Fairy Dust for trying to leave the village, which gets her executed.]]
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* AmbiguousSituation: It is not made clear if Gaea actually exists or was just made up by the village to keep everypony scared of going outside the wall.
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* AmbiguousSituation: It is not made clear if Does Gaea actually exists exist, or was she just made up by the village to keep everypony scared of going outside the wall.wall? We never get an answer.
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* ChocolateBaby: Fairy Dust was born a pegasus, even though her parents are earth ponies. In fact, she's the only pegasus in the entire village. She's never discriminated against for it...[[spoiler:until Whisperleaf's mother starts worrying that she might use her wings to someday fly away from the village]].
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* ChocolateBaby: Fairy Dust was born a pegasus, even though her parents are earth ponies. In fact, she's the only pegasus in the entire village. She's never discriminated against for it...[[spoiler:until Whisperleaf's mother starts worrying that she might use her wings to someday fly away from the village]].village, and out of the reach of Gaea's love]].
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: The forest village is a lovely, friendly place where everypony has everything they need, and everypony is happy and cares for one another...but no one can come in, and no one can go out. Because Gaea doesn't love anything or anypony outside the wall, [[spoiler:intruders are killed on sight, and any villager that tries to leave is killed and buried within the village grounds so Gaea will still love them]].
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* TownWithADarkSecret: The forest village is a lovely, friendly place where everypony has everything they need, and everypony is happy and cares for one another...but no one can come in, and no one can go out. Because Gaea doesn't love anything or anypony outside the wall, [[spoiler:intruders are killed on sight, and any villager that tries to leave is killed and buried within the village grounds so Gaea will still love them]].
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* BlackAndWhiteInsanity: To the villagers, everything inside Gaea's walls is good, while everything outside them is bad. End of story.
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* BlackAndWhiteInsanity: To the villagers, everything inside Gaea's walls is good, while everything outside them is bad. End [[spoiler:To the point where they'll murder a filly without hesitation for trying to leave the village, because being outside the walls and beyond the reach of story.Gaea's love is considered a FateWorseThanDeath.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Fairy Dust, a little filly, is killed for trying to leave the village's walls]].
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:Fairy Dust, a little filly, is killed Dust finds out the hard way that the villagers' punishment of immediately being executed for trying to leave go beyond the village's walls]].wall also applies to foals]].
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* ReligionOfEvil: The villagers worship a goddess named Gaea and believe that she loves everyone inside her walls, and hates everyone outside them. [[spoiler:They will execute any stranger who wanders into the village (because Gaea doesn't love them), and anyone who tries to leave the village (so they won't stop loving Gaea).]]
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* ReligionOfEvil: The villagers worship a goddess named Gaea and believe that she loves everyone everypony inside her walls, and hates everyone everypony outside them. [[spoiler:They will execute any stranger who wanders into the village (because Gaea doesn't love them), and anyone anypony who tries to leave the village (so they won't stop loving Gaea).]]
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* ThemeNaming: Because the village is located in the middle of a forest, all the villagers are named after something that occurs in nature -- Whisperleaf, Fungal Bloom, Beetle Bark, Blackberry.
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* ThemeNaming: Because the village is located in the middle of a forest, all the villagers are named after something that occurs in nature -- Whisperleaf, Fungal Bloom, Beetle Bark, Blackberry.Blackberry, Strongoak, etc.
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* ReligionOfEvil: The villagers worship a goddess named Gaea and believe that she loves everyone inside her walls, and hates everyone outside them. [[spoiler:They will execute any stranger who wanders into the village (because Gaea doesn't love them), and anyone who tries to leave the village (so they won't stop loving Gaea).]]
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These examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[spoiler:What happens when Whisperleaf finds out Fairy Dust is trying to go beyond the wall. In any other story, Whisperleaf would run away with Fairy Dust, or they would try to change the villagers' minds, or ThePowerOfFriendship would make Whisperleaf decide to keep her friend's secret. Instead, Whisperleaf goes to the village elder to tell him what Fairy Dust is doing, and Fairy Dust is executed.]]
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* TheWallAroundTheWorld: A giant stone wall surrounds the village, keeping the villagers inside and forest monsters away. [[spoiler:The punishment for trying to go beyond the wall is immediate execution.]]
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* TheWallAroundTheWorld: A giant stone wall surrounds the village, keeping the villagers inside and forest monsters away. [[spoiler:The The punishment for trying to go beyond the wall is immediate execution.]][[spoiler:immediate execution]].
