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** Wilbur also wore a beanie sometimes.
** Phil's bucket hat is naturally commented on.
** In Quackity's first appearance, Niki's narration comments on his LAFD beanie, and is seen to be wearing one in his later appearances.
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* OnePersonBirthdayParty: As expected of Exile, Tommy's beach party was attended by no one other than Dream, who obviously {{invoked|Trope}} this as per canon. Except canon... except the BDAM universe has it be no ordinary party, but [[ABirthdayNotABreak Tommy's 17th birday birthday party]].
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** As opposed to canon, where he is an AbsenteeActor, George fights Eret during the Manberg-Pogtopia War.
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** Tubbo gives a brutal one to Quackity after Technoblade escapes his execution and Quackity screams at him for letting him get away.
--> '''Tubbo:''' You were wrong, Quackity! Attacking Techno was not the right move. Dream got in the way anyway. He was always the problem. I shouldn't have had listened to you! We kicked a hornets nest, pissing Technoblade off! Now we have more to deal with!\\
'''Quackity:''' What the hell does that mean?\\
'''Tubbo:''' Come on, it's obvious! I'm not stupid! Maybe I was, initially encouraging this, but... I noticed how you acted around him. That pleasure you took in seeing him so helpless. This was never about the country. This was never about protecting us, or helping Tommy. This was your own sick and twisted wants, some need for revenge! A need to see someone suffer because you did! And look where that got us! We put our people in danger, we made another enemy! All because... Because I trusted you! And I never should have!\\
'''Quackity:''' Oh yeah? Is that right?\\
'''Tubbo:''' You are a self-centered, manipulative asshole! [[NotSoDifferentRemark …It seems Schlatt taught you well.]]
--> '''Tubbo:''' You were wrong, Quackity! Attacking Techno was not the right move. Dream got in the way anyway. He was always the problem. I shouldn't have had listened to you! We kicked a hornets nest, pissing Technoblade off! Now we have more to deal with!\\
'''Quackity:''' What the hell does that mean?\\
'''Tubbo:''' Come on, it's obvious! I'm not stupid! Maybe I was, initially encouraging this, but... I noticed how you acted around him. That pleasure you took in seeing him so helpless. This was never about the country. This was never about protecting us, or helping Tommy. This was your own sick and twisted wants, some need for revenge! A need to see someone suffer because you did! And look where that got us! We put our people in danger, we made another enemy! All because... Because I trusted you! And I never should have!\\
'''Quackity:''' Oh yeah? Is that right?\\
'''Tubbo:''' You are a self-centered, manipulative asshole! [[NotSoDifferentRemark …It seems Schlatt taught you well.]]
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* EyeScream: [[spoiler:Schlatt goes blind in one eye after Techno's fireworks massacre at the Festival.]]
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** [[spoiler:Schlatt goes blind in one eye after Techno's fireworks massacre at the Festival.]]]]
** As per canon as well, Quackity gets one for being on the wrong end of Techno's pickaxe in BHAV Chapter 102, "The Hog Hunt (Part 6)". It's described [[FamilyUnfriendlyViolence very graphically]].
** [[spoiler:Schlatt goes blind in one eye after Techno's fireworks massacre at the Festival.
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* MyGreatestFailure / ItsAllMyFault: According to ''The Captain's Journals'', several Hybrids and their Ancestors carry traits based on guilt.
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** The BHAV arc titled "The Hog Hunt" is naturally one to SAD-ist's animatic of the Butcher Army going up againstTechnoblade.Technoblade. The structuring of the chapters are also closely tied to the animatic, such as how the scenes shift.
** In Chapter 100, "The Hog Hunt (Part 4)" in particular, Techno's [[HearingVoices voices]] can be heard singing "Voices" by Derivakat.
** The BHAV arc titled "The Hog Hunt" is naturally one to SAD-ist's animatic of the Butcher Army going up against
** In Chapter 100, "The Hog Hunt (Part 4)" in particular, Techno's [[HearingVoices voices]] can be heard singing "Voices" by Derivakat.
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'''George:''' [[VillainousBreakdown If we win this election we're going to bring L'Manberg back to what it should have always been – Nothing more but an extension of the DreamSMP!]]\\
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'''George:''' [[VillainousBreakdown If we win this election election]] we're going to bring L'Manberg back to what it should have always been – Nothing more but an extension of the DreamSMP!]]\\[=DreamSMP=]!\\
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** During the second half of the presidential debate, Tommy delivers a cutting one to George that calls him and the [=DreamSMP=] as a whole out for starting the War for Independence and gets him to admit he's only running for Quackity's vice president to reduce L'Manburg to an extension of the Dream SMP.
---> '''Tommy:''' May I start, please? First of all, I would like to formerly apologize for my outburst earlier. But I think I can provide you for a good reason why. At the core, it all boils down to the unprofessional and downright childish behaviour of my debating opponent – Because that's the truth, ladies and gentlemen. George has been lying this whole time, turning this story against me to make me look bad. You may say what you wish about mine and Wilbur's policies, but do you want a liar in your government?\\
'''George!''' Me? A liar? What do you mean? I've said nothing that was a lie. Not a single thing. I've simply decided to bring up the past of your nation. You advocate for a future with words over violence and yet your very nation was born of violence and suffering. I'm sorry to bring up the past here, but... Don't you think it's a little hypocritical?\\
'''Tommy:''' [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Well where is the source of that violence? What does it all boil down to?]] You're acting as if we up and just started a war for no good reason! Let me remind you, when L'Manberg first formed we offered a peaceful solution. We asked for our land to be granted to us without war. But you refused – You'd rather hurt us.\\
'''George:''' There was no need for L'Manberg first and foremost. We never did anything to wrong you. We welcomed you to our city with open arms, and you separated yourself and took resources from us we could have used to develop the [=DreamSMP=] more. The only way to repair this divide again is for cooperation to start between the two of us-\\
'''Tommy:''' And what about other bits of the past you never seem to mention? What about locking Tubbo up in his house to make potions for him all the time? What about threatening to burn down our home simply because we wanted to make potions a common resource? What about everything that came before L'Manberg and motivated us to found it in the first place?\\
'''George:''' You... You lot were trying to topple the system we had in place to keep our city safe. We fought back against what could have left our city in shambles. We did the right thing, and L'Manberg was a disappointing side-effect of that.\\
'''Tommy:''' And yet, by starting this war, you did the exact opposite. You sent the [=DreamSMP=] into a state of ruin, suffering and a lack of leadership for almost five months. The only reason the city stood tall when you returned was because of The Blade, who miraculously showed up and saved us from the forest when you couldn't protect us like you swore to.\\
'''George:''' If we hadn't fought you would have just carried on with breaking our rules and tearing down our city! Why wouldn't we try to oppose that? The war that followed was unfortunate, but opposition in the first place was what brought us to that point!\\
'''Tommy:''' So you think we shouldn't stand up for what we believe in? Try to oppose what isn't right? Funny you say that! I thought that was exactly what you and Quackity are claiming to do. And now you're telling me it's a bad thing?\\
'''George:''' You and Wilbur are trying to create a nation that can never, ever hope to even live up to what the [=DreamSMP=] is! If you keep closed forever you can never develop! You'll crash and burn!\\
'''Tommy:''' Oh? And I thought your win in this election was guaranteed. Now you seem convinced that me and Wilbur will get re-elected. Did something change your mind?\\
'''George:''' [[VillainousBreakdown If we win this election we're going to bring L'Manberg back to what it should have always been – Nothing more but an extension of the DreamSMP!]]\\
'''Tommy:''' Sorry, big man, but I doubt that will happen with how you're acting right now.\\
'''George:''' You're such a little... Brat! How did you even get in a position of power?\\
'''Tommy:''' [[LampshadeHanging By keeping my cool far better than an adult can manage to, it seems.]]\\
'''Tubbo:''' That's enough! Clearly Mr. [=GeorgeNotFound=] has no idea how to debate properly. With how childish and inappropriate everyone here has been acting today I have no choice but to cut this event short! I'm truly sorry for wasting all of your time...\\
'''Tommy:''' ''(pats George on the back)'' [[SarcasmMode Good debating there, Gogy. But try harder next time.]]
** Jschlatt tears [=AntVenom=] a new one after he insults Philza in front of him.
--->'''Schlatt:''' Fraud? You sit in an office built with money you got from exploiting the city and yet you call Phil of all people a fraud? Do you know how much that man did for this city?\\
'''[=AntVenom=]:''' [[SarcasmMode Right. Of course.]] It's the two of you that are frauds. Letting your father take the fall for something you did. What an honourable thing to do.\\
'''Schlatt:''' How fucking dare you? I can't fucking believe that I used to admire you! You're an asshole! You leech off people and then try to paint them as the bad guy? What sort of person does that?\\
'''[=AntVenom=]:''' [[NothingPersonal It's called business.]] I thought someone like you would get that, but you don't seem to-\\
'''Schlatt:''' [[BrokenPedestal I used to look up to you.]] I'd see you up on that stage and I'd imagine being by your side. I even had this stupid little dream where we fought the Ender Dragon together. You know, a fairytale – Because I was just a kid with an idol. A naive kid you used.\\
'''[=AntVenom=]:''' It's not like you were the only one-\\
'''Schlatt:''' 'But lo and behold, every person I thought to be good turned out to be my enemy. [[AtLeastIAdmitIt Ted Nivison might be a complete asshole, but at least he doesn't try to hide it.]] [[BrokenPedestal Congratulations, not only did you take Phil away from us, you took my hero away from me.]]
** During the second half of the presidential debate, Tommy delivers a cutting one to George that calls him and the [=DreamSMP=] as a whole out for starting the War for Independence and gets him to admit he's only running for Quackity's vice president to reduce L'Manburg to an extension of the Dream SMP.
---> '''Tommy:''' May I start, please? First of all, I would like to formerly apologize for my outburst earlier. But I think I can provide you for a good reason why. At the core, it all boils down to the unprofessional and downright childish behaviour of my debating opponent – Because that's the truth, ladies and gentlemen. George has been lying this whole time, turning this story against me to make me look bad. You may say what you wish about mine and Wilbur's policies, but do you want a liar in your government?\\
'''George!''' Me? A liar? What do you mean? I've said nothing that was a lie. Not a single thing. I've simply decided to bring up the past of your nation. You advocate for a future with words over violence and yet your very nation was born of violence and suffering. I'm sorry to bring up the past here, but... Don't you think it's a little hypocritical?\\
'''Tommy:''' [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Well where is the source of that violence? What does it all boil down to?]] You're acting as if we up and just started a war for no good reason! Let me remind you, when L'Manberg first formed we offered a peaceful solution. We asked for our land to be granted to us without war. But you refused – You'd rather hurt us.\\
'''George:''' There was no need for L'Manberg first and foremost. We never did anything to wrong you. We welcomed you to our city with open arms, and you separated yourself and took resources from us we could have used to develop the [=DreamSMP=] more. The only way to repair this divide again is for cooperation to start between the two of us-\\
'''Tommy:''' And what about other bits of the past you never seem to mention? What about locking Tubbo up in his house to make potions for him all the time? What about threatening to burn down our home simply because we wanted to make potions a common resource? What about everything that came before L'Manberg and motivated us to found it in the first place?\\
'''George:''' You... You lot were trying to topple the system we had in place to keep our city safe. We fought back against what could have left our city in shambles. We did the right thing, and L'Manberg was a disappointing side-effect of that.\\
'''Tommy:''' And yet, by starting this war, you did the exact opposite. You sent the [=DreamSMP=] into a state of ruin, suffering and a lack of leadership for almost five months. The only reason the city stood tall when you returned was because of The Blade, who miraculously showed up and saved us from the forest when you couldn't protect us like you swore to.\\
'''George:''' If we hadn't fought you would have just carried on with breaking our rules and tearing down our city! Why wouldn't we try to oppose that? The war that followed was unfortunate, but opposition in the first place was what brought us to that point!\\
'''Tommy:''' So you think we shouldn't stand up for what we believe in? Try to oppose what isn't right? Funny you say that! I thought that was exactly what you and Quackity are claiming to do. And now you're telling me it's a bad thing?\\
'''George:''' You and Wilbur are trying to create a nation that can never, ever hope to even live up to what the [=DreamSMP=] is! If you keep closed forever you can never develop! You'll crash and burn!\\
'''Tommy:''' Oh? And I thought your win in this election was guaranteed. Now you seem convinced that me and Wilbur will get re-elected. Did something change your mind?\\
'''George:''' [[VillainousBreakdown If we win this election we're going to bring L'Manberg back to what it should have always been – Nothing more but an extension of the DreamSMP!]]\\
'''Tommy:''' Sorry, big man, but I doubt that will happen with how you're acting right now.\\
'''George:''' You're such a little... Brat! How did you even get in a position of power?\\
'''Tommy:''' [[LampshadeHanging By keeping my cool far better than an adult can manage to, it seems.]]\\
'''Tubbo:''' That's enough! Clearly Mr. [=GeorgeNotFound=] has no idea how to debate properly. With how childish and inappropriate everyone here has been acting today I have no choice but to cut this event short! I'm truly sorry for wasting all of your time...\\
'''Tommy:''' ''(pats George on the back)'' [[SarcasmMode Good debating there, Gogy. But try harder next time.]]
** Jschlatt tears [=AntVenom=] a new one after he insults Philza in front of him.
--->'''Schlatt:''' Fraud? You sit in an office built with money you got from exploiting the city and yet you call Phil of all people a fraud? Do you know how much that man did for this city?\\
'''[=AntVenom=]:''' [[SarcasmMode Right. Of course.]] It's the two of you that are frauds. Letting your father take the fall for something you did. What an honourable thing to do.\\
'''Schlatt:''' How fucking dare you? I can't fucking believe that I used to admire you! You're an asshole! You leech off people and then try to paint them as the bad guy? What sort of person does that?\\
'''[=AntVenom=]:''' [[NothingPersonal It's called business.]] I thought someone like you would get that, but you don't seem to-\\
'''Schlatt:''' [[BrokenPedestal I used to look up to you.]] I'd see you up on that stage and I'd imagine being by your side. I even had this stupid little dream where we fought the Ender Dragon together. You know, a fairytale – Because I was just a kid with an idol. A naive kid you used.\\
'''[=AntVenom=]:''' It's not like you were the only one-\\
'''Schlatt:''' 'But lo and behold, every person I thought to be good turned out to be my enemy. [[AtLeastIAdmitIt Ted Nivison might be a complete asshole, but at least he doesn't try to hide it.]] [[BrokenPedestal Congratulations, not only did you take Phil away from us, you took my hero away from me.]]
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* BreatherEpisode: In BHAV, the sections titled "The Entertainer" and "The Game" has ''Love or Host'' integrated into the plotline as this, partially to cut through the horrors of Exile.
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* OnePersonBirthdayParty: As expected of Exile, Tommy's beach party was attended by no one other than Dream, who obviously {{invoked|Trope}} this as per canon. Except the BDAM universe has it be no ordinary party, but [[ABirthdayNotABreak Tommy's 17th birday party]].
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* BlueIsHeroic: The L'Manbergians wear blue coats.
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* AmbitionIsEvil: Squid Hybrids and Ancestors are said to have this sort of characterization, though the definition of 'evil' may be stretched depending on the individual.
-->''"Hybrids displaying squid traits are often thought to be ambitious and driven – But only because of selfish reasons. A squid Hybrid will often try to gain power or money and become incredibly skilled, but in the end the Nether will deem their skill and hard work rotten, considering their ambition being something it sees as selfish. Ancestors who pass down this trait are similar, although often fail at what they set out to achieve, rendering their endless greed more harmful than beneficial."''
-->''"Hybrids displaying squid traits are often thought to be ambitious and driven – But only because of selfish reasons. A squid Hybrid will often try to gain power or money and become incredibly skilled, but in the end the Nether will deem their skill and hard work rotten, considering their ambition being something it sees as selfish. Ancestors who pass down this trait are similar, although often fail at what they set out to achieve, rendering their endless greed more harmful than beneficial."''
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** All of BDAM Chapter 29, "The Portals (Part 2)", being a page out of the Captain's journals, contains detailed lore explanations about supernatural phenomena associated with the Nether. This becomes vital to the plot later on, as the author's note at the bottom of the chapter lampshades eventually.
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*** ''The Captain's Journals'' Chapter 24, "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29704890/chapters/81662620 The Traits]]", contains all of the information from BDAM Chapter 29 and ''more'', providing even ''more'' foreshadowing for characters outside of Schlatt, Techno, and Wilbur.
** In BDAM Chapter 127, "The Explosives", Tommy catches Techno making fireworks, as Techno explains how launching fireworks directly with a crossbow can [[FatalFireworks cause permanent damage]], including and not limited to burn scars, deafness, and blindness. Come the Manberg Festival...
** In BDAM Chapter 127, "The Explosives", Tommy catches Techno making fireworks, as Techno explains how launching fireworks directly with a crossbow can [[FatalFireworks cause permanent damage]], including and not limited to burn scars, deafness, and blindness. Come the Manberg Festival...
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* MamaBear: {{Discussed|Trope}} by Kristin in BHAV why Sources as gods were supposed to be taken away from their parents -- their mothers, in particular -- for training.
-->'''Kristin:''' The Nether works in mysterious, unusual ways. But most of all, it wants to create a world where all are broken and completely free to be put under its endless control. Harming everyone in its way is something it would, of course, always do. This was just another form of creating a future vessel – A mother who loses a child is more dangerous than any weapon.
* MellowFellow: Bear Hybrids and Ancestors are typically "very calm and collected people who are mostly at peace with themselves".
-->'''Kristin:''' The Nether works in mysterious, unusual ways. But most of all, it wants to create a world where all are broken and completely free to be put under its endless control. Harming everyone in its way is something it would, of course, always do. This was just another form of creating a future vessel – A mother who loses a child is more dangerous than any weapon.
* MellowFellow: Bear Hybrids and Ancestors are typically "very calm and collected people who are mostly at peace with themselves".
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** The Captain explains a lot about the Nether and relevant supernatural phenomenona associated with it through his Journal.
** Phil also explains several little-known aspects about Sources, while Minx and Drista elaborate on how they live as Dreamons.
** Phil also explains several little-known aspects about Sources, while Minx and Drista elaborate on how they live as Dreamons.
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** The Captain explains a lot about the Nether and relevant supernatural phenomenona phenomena associated with it through his Journal.
** Phil also explains several little-known aspects about Sources, while Minx and Drista elaborate on how they live asDreamons.
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** Kristin also gives some input on how Sources and Gods work.
* MyGreatestFailure / ItsAllMyFault: According to ''The Captain's Journals'', several Hybrids and their Ancestors carry traits based on guilt.
** Ancestors carrying fox traits are characterized by a feeling of regret for "an action they could have prevented and fully knew the results of, however decided to step aside to make life easier for themselves". In Wilbur's case, it was [[spoiler:choosing to 'exile' his best friend and adopted brother in [=SMPLive=]]].
** Hedgehog Hybrids are described to be "ridden with overwhelming guilt. It is often that they are aware of something they did, or perhaps subconsciously blame themselves for something that happened, which results in them developing the trait". In Connor's case, [[spoiler:it is likely something to do with Schlatt as well]].
** Salmon Hybrids are also associated with feelings of overwhelming guilt, but "theirs will always relate to abandoning someone".
** Phil also explains several little-known aspects about Sources, while Minx and Drista elaborate on how they live as
** Kristin also gives some input on how Sources and Gods work.
* MyGreatestFailure / ItsAllMyFault: According to ''The Captain's Journals'', several Hybrids and their Ancestors carry traits based on guilt.
** Ancestors carrying fox traits are characterized by a feeling of regret for "an action they could have prevented and fully knew the results of, however decided to step aside to make life easier for themselves". In Wilbur's case, it was [[spoiler:choosing to 'exile' his best friend and adopted brother in [=SMPLive=]]].
** Hedgehog Hybrids are described to be "ridden with overwhelming guilt. It is often that they are aware of something they did, or perhaps subconsciously blame themselves for something that happened, which results in them developing the trait". In Connor's case, [[spoiler:it is likely something to do with Schlatt as well]].
** Salmon Hybrids are also associated with feelings of overwhelming guilt, but "theirs will always relate to abandoning someone".
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Schlatt and Wilbur were [[spoiler:adoptive brothers]] during their time on [=SMPLive=], until [[spoiler:]].
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* EvilDetectingDog: Clementine the seagull pecks Dream when he visits her human friend, Tommy, in Exile.
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* SlippingAMickey: Dream puts a knockout drug in Tommy's tea in BHAV Chapter 53, "The Exile - Act 3 (Part 3)".
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* CanonForeigner: Minx doesn't appear on the SMP proper, and Sykkuno gets a mention from [[spoiler:Corpse]] as well.
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** Skeppy signs the shipment of weapons and supplies to the L'Manberg revolutionaries with his name to signify that they can trust him and he supports their endeavours.
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* AdaptationSpeciesChange: [[spoiler:Friend the sheep is actually Schlatt's Spirit.]]
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** [[spoiler:Friend the sheep is actually Schlatt's Spirit.]]
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* AdaptationalBadass:
** Unlike in canon, George fights with Manberg in the Manberg-Pogtopia War, and so does Schlatt.
** Unlike in canon, George fights with Manberg in the Manberg-Pogtopia War, and so does Schlatt.
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**AdaptationalBadass: Unlike in canon, George fights with Manberg in the Manberg-Pogtopia War, and so does Schlatt.
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* ArcWords:
** "Partners in crime, till the end of time" throughout the first installment, symbolizing the friendship between Schlatt and Wilbur. This hits especially hard due to the fact that the two end up dying on the same day.
** "Partners in crime, till the end of time" throughout the first installment, symbolizing the friendship between Schlatt and Wilbur. This hits especially hard due to the fact that the two end up dying on the same day.
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* ArcWords:
**ArcWords: "Partners in crime, till the end of time" throughout the first installment, symbolizing the friendship between Schlatt and Wilbur. This hits especially hard due to the fact that the two end up dying on the same day.
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* NiceHat: In Quackity's first appearance, Niki's narration comments on his LAFD beanie, and is seen to be wearing one in his later appearances. Wilbur also wore a beanie sometimes.
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* NotAlwaysEvil: Dreamons, contrary to what the Captain chronicles about them.
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** Dreamons, contrary to what the Captain chronicles about them.
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!Due to the nature of the work, unmarked spoilers go for events in the fic which are canon compliant to the Dream SMP, while spoilers exclusive to the rewrite and its lore are marked. Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned.
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** All of Chapter 29, "The Portals (Part 2)", being a page out of the Captain's journals, contains detailed lore explanations about supernatural phenomenona associated with the Nether. This becomes vital to the plot later on, as the author's note at the bottom of the chapter lampshades eventually.
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** All of Chapter 29, "The Portals (Part 2)", being a page out of the Captain's journals, contains detailed lore explanations about supernatural phenomenona phenomena associated with the Nether. This becomes vital to the plot later on, as the author's note at the bottom of the chapter lampshades eventually.
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* NotSoSimilar: Wilbur and Tubbo. Both of them were faced with [[SadisticChoice a decision]] to exile their best friend or not, who ultimately gets exiled and are left in an immensely unhealthy headspace for an extended period of time. However, [[spoiler:while Wilbur chose to leave Schlatt behind in [=SMPLive=] and would live to regret the decision for the rest of his life, Tubbo voted not to exile Tommy at all]], making the two distinct in their own right.
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* FirstNameBasis: The usage of someone's name, as opposed to their [[OnlyKnownByTheirNickname title]], is seen as a signifier of trust and closeness.
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* FirstNameBasis: The usage of someone's name, as opposed to their [[OnlyKnownByTheirNickname title]], is seen as a signifier of [[FriendlyAddressPrivileges trust and closeness.closeness]].
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** As reflecting [[{{Polyamory}} canonical ships]], Quackity with Karl and Sapnap in ''Between Dreams and Memories'', with the latter two being concerned for the former on multiple different occasions, even refusing to fight each other during the final battle despite being on opposing sides.
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** As reflecting [[{{Polyamory}} canonical ships]], Quackity with Karl and Sapnap in ''Between Dreams and Memories'', with the latter two being concerned for the former on multiple different occasions, even refusing to fight each other during the final battle despite being on opposing sides. In BHAV, they are seen to be living in the same house and have FriendlyAddressPrivileges.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: Hybrids can be created through exposure to the Nether, or from being descended from an Ancestor.
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--->''" Ever since he was a boy, Jordan Maron knew he was different.\\
It wasn't entirely clear to him at first. Perhaps it was his title – Few used the full name, and even as a young teenager, he had soon become “The Captain” wherever he went. In every place he lived when someone asked for a Captain, it was always The Captain."''
It wasn't entirely clear to him at first. Perhaps it was his title – Few used the full name, and even as a young teenager, he had soon become “The Captain” wherever he went. In every place he lived when someone asked for a Captain, it was always The Captain."''
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It wasn't entirely clear to him at first. Perhaps it was his title – Few used the full name, and even as a young teenager, he had soon become “The Captain” wherever he went. In every place he lived when someone asked for a Captain, it was always The Captain.
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* StealthPun: A meta version. Each fanfiction in the series is titled "Between [X] and [Y]", with "The [X]" being the title of the first chapter and "The [Y]" being that of the last chapter... so the story is ''quite literally'' between [X] and [Y].
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** Connor and Charlie are both introduced during the recounting of [=SMPLive=], i.e. "The Truth" arc in ''Between Dreams and Memories''. They eventually reappear as full-on members of the [=DreamSMP=] in ''Between Heroes and Villains''
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** Puffy and Niki flirt quite a bit throughout ''Between Heroes and Villains'', with Puffy kissing Niki on the hand during their first meeting in Chapter 8, "The New Arrivals".
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** Wilbur revealing Kristin's true nature in Chapter 168, "The Unfinished Symphony".
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** Wilbur revealing Kristin's true nature in Chapter 168, "The Unfinished Symphony".Symphony" of BDAM.
