Follow TV Tropes

Following

History Fanfic / Atlas

Go To

OR

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* TheMentallyIll: Despite undergoing AdaptationalVillainy in ''Atlas'' Obito has a better justification for his heinous actions than in canon due to suffering brain damage so bad that he doesn't even remember that Madara or Rin ''exist'' half the time. Ironically, he receives little sympathy compared to his canon counterpart.

to:

* TheMentallyIll: TheMentallyDisturbed: Despite undergoing AdaptationalVillainy in ''Atlas'' Obito has a better justification for his heinous actions than in canon due to suffering brain damage so bad that he doesn't even remember that Madara or Rin ''exist'' half the time. Ironically, he receives little sympathy compared to his canon counterpart.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Need more context.


* ThirdPersonPerson: ''The'' Han.
* WeakButSkilled: Naruto.

to:

* %%* ThirdPersonPerson: ''The'' Han.
* %%* WeakButSkilled: Naruto.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* BadassNormal: Naruto is established as one early on, due to [[YouShouldKnowThisAlready a lack of chakra.]]

to:

* BadassNormal: Naruto is established as one early on, due to [[YouShouldKnowThisAlready a lack of chakra.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Up To Eleven is being dewicked.


* {{Determinator}}: Naruto is one just like in canon and less hypocritical. [[spoiler: The Dragon is also one; it was the first snake to fly because ''[[UpToEleven nature gave up on trying to stop it.]]'']]

to:

* {{Determinator}}: Naruto is one just like in canon and less hypocritical. [[spoiler: The Dragon is also one; it was the first snake to fly because ''[[UpToEleven nature ''nature gave up on trying to stop it.]]'']]'']]

Added: 185

Removed: 175

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* NotSoInvincibleAfterAll: It turns out that having your head crushed by tons of rocks has actual repercussions when the author doesn't give a Uchiha PlotArmor thicker than an iceberg.



* RealityEnsues: It turns out that having your head crushed by tons of rocks has actual repercussions when the author doesn't give a Uchiha PlotArmor thicker than an iceberg.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Disambiguating; deleting and renaming wicks as appropriate. Moved to discussion


* InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons: The Ryuchi Cave apparently hosts the Dragon, the first snake to ever shed his skin and achieve flight. [[spoiler:The Dragon shows up later on, and the horns alone are mistaken by Naruto for small hills in the lake it sleeps in.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


--> Sakura: ''I will drink this scene into oblivion.''

to:

--> Sakura: '''Sakura:''' ''I will drink this scene into oblivion.''
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None



to:

!!This fanfic contains examples of:



* FromNobodyToNightmare: While not evil, [[spoiler:the Dragon is clearly this; it states that it was once nothing more than an ordinary horned viper. Centuries, or millenia later, it is the lord of the snake summons, and easily the largest and most powerful summon in the story (the ''head alone'' was apparently the size of a hill).]]

to:

* FromNobodyToNightmare: While not evil, [[spoiler:the Dragon is clearly this; it states that it was once nothing more than an ordinary horned viper. Centuries, or millenia millennia later, it is the lord of the snake summons, and easily the largest and most powerful summon in the story (the ''head alone'' was apparently the size of a hill).]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* AdaptationalVillainy: Obito is ''not'' portrayed as an AntiVillain in this story and receives absolutely no sympathy from anyone due to his cruel and petty actions. Ironically, being portrayed as a shrieking psychopath has made him more popular with the reviewers compared to his canonical scrappy status.

to:

* AdaptationalVillainy: Obito is ''not'' portrayed as an AntiVillain in this story and receives absolutely no sympathy from anyone due to his cruel and petty actions. Ironically, being portrayed as a shrieking psychopath has made him more popular with the reviewers compared to his canonical scrappy base-breaking status.



* TheMentallyIll: Despite undergoing AdaptationalVillainy in ''Atlas'' Obito has a better justification for his heinous actions than in canon due to suffering brain damage so bad that he doesn't even remember that Madara or Rin ''exist'' half the time.

to:

* TheMentallyIll: Despite undergoing AdaptationalVillainy in ''Atlas'' Obito has a better justification for his heinous actions than in canon due to suffering brain damage so bad that he doesn't even remember that Madara or Rin ''exist'' half the time. Ironically, he receives little sympathy compared to his canon counterpart.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* HomoeroticSubtext: Itachi and Kisame exclude HoYay.

to:

* HomoeroticSubtext: Itachi and Kisame exclude exude HoYay.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Article was missing link


The fanfic ''Atlas'', by Kagaseo, is a fanfic where, due to the meddling of the Kyuubi with his chakra system at a young age, Naruto is the only living being to not possess a chakra system, rendering him as the biggest {{Muggle}} in the world.

to:

The fanfic ''Atlas'', [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8637770/1/Atlas Atlas]], by Kagaseo, is a fanfic where, due to the meddling of the Kyuubi with his chakra system at a young age, Naruto is the only living being to not possess a chakra system, rendering him as the biggest {{Muggle}} in the world.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* AdaptationalVillainy: Obito is ''not'' portrayed as an AntiVillain in this story and receives absolutely no sympathy from anyone due to his cruel and petty actions...Ironically being portrayed as a shrieking psychopath has made him more popular with the reviewers compared to his canonical scrappy status.

to:

* AdaptationalVillainy: Obito is ''not'' portrayed as an AntiVillain in this story and receives absolutely no sympathy from anyone due to his cruel and petty actions...Ironically actions. Ironically, being portrayed as a shrieking psychopath has made him more popular with the reviewers compared to his canonical scrappy status.



* DumbMuscle: While Pain is charismatic and powerful but without Tobi and Sasori running his life for him begins to make lots of stupid mistakes...you get the feeling the only reason he's alive is because of his [[SuperPowerLottery Rinneagan]] and PlotArmor.
* ForTheEvulz: Due to memory loss half the time Obito's evil isn't motivated by Madara and Rin but because he's a dick.

to:

* DumbMuscle: While Pain is charismatic and powerful powerful, but without Tobi and Sasori running his life for him him, he begins to make lots of stupid mistakes...you get the feeling the only reason he's alive is because of his [[SuperPowerLottery Rinneagan]] Rinnegan]] and PlotArmor.
* ForTheEvulz: Due to memory loss loss, half the time Obito's evil isn't motivated by Madara and Rin Rin, but because he's a dick.



* HomoeroticSubtext: Itachi and Kisame exclude HoeYay.

to:

* HomoeroticSubtext: Itachi and Kisame exclude HoeYay.HoYay.



* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Itachi tells Kisame that if he ever speaks of the above GroinAttack to anyone and Itachi's reaction, he will kill him.
* TheMentallyIll: Despite undergoing AdaptationalVillainy in ''Atlas'' Obito has a better justification for his heinous actions than in canon due to suffering brain damage so bad that he doesn't even remember that Madara or Rin exists half the time.

to:

* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Itachi tells Kisame that if he ever speaks of the above GroinAttack to anyone and Itachi's reaction, reaction to it, he will kill him.
* TheMentallyIll: Despite undergoing AdaptationalVillainy in ''Atlas'' Obito has a better justification for his heinous actions than in canon due to suffering brain damage so bad that he doesn't even remember that Madara or Rin exists ''exist'' half the time.



* OnlyFriend: Kisame is the only person that Itachi has ever truly held a positive relationship with even if he refuses to admit it.

to:

* OnlyFriend: Kisame is the only person that Itachi has ever truly held a positive relationship with with, even if he refuses to admit it.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* DumbMuscle: While Pain is charismatic and powerful without Tobi and Sasori running his life for him begins to make lots of stupid mistakes...you get the feeling the only reason he's alive is because of his [[SuperPowerLottery Rinneagan]] and PlotArmor.

to:

* DumbMuscle: While Pain is charismatic and powerful but without Tobi and Sasori running his life for him begins to make lots of stupid mistakes...you get the feeling the only reason he's alive is because of his [[SuperPowerLottery Rinneagan]] and PlotArmor.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* AdaptationalVillainy: Obito is ''not'' portrayed as an AntiVillain in this story and receives sympathy from anyone due to his cruel and petty actions...Ironically being portrayed as a shrieking psychopath has made him more popular with the reviewers compared to his canonical scrappy status.

to:

* AdaptationalVillainy: Obito is ''not'' portrayed as an AntiVillain in this story and receives absolutely no sympathy from anyone due to his cruel and petty actions...Ironically being portrayed as a shrieking psychopath has made him more popular with the reviewers compared to his canonical scrappy status.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* BigBadEnsemble: Obito and Pain fight over the resources of Akatsuki and the right to be the BigBad.

Added: 1592

Changed: 22

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* AdaptationalVillainy: Obito is ''not'' portrayed as an AntiVillain in this story and receives sympathy from anyone due to his cruel and petty actions...Ironically being portrayed as a shrieking psychopath has made him more popular with the reviewers compared to his canonical scrappy status.
* AscendedExtra: Yugao, Kisame, Han, Fuu, and Sasori are much bigger players than in canon.



* {{Determinator}}: Naruto is one just like in canon. [[spoiler: The Dragon is also one; it was the first snake to fly because ''[[UpToEleven nature gave up on trying to stop it.]]'']]

to:

* {{Determinator}}: Naruto is one just like in canon.canon and less hypocritical. [[spoiler: The Dragon is also one; it was the first snake to fly because ''[[UpToEleven nature gave up on trying to stop it.]]'']]]]'']]
* DiscOneFinalBoss: [[spoiler: Sasori and Orochimaru act as the main threat of the story for the first act before dying at the end of the Chuunin Exams.]]
* DumbMuscle: While Pain is charismatic and powerful without Tobi and Sasori running his life for him begins to make lots of stupid mistakes...you get the feeling the only reason he's alive is because of his [[SuperPowerLottery Rinneagan]] and PlotArmor.
* ForTheEvulz: Due to memory loss half the time Obito's evil isn't motivated by Madara and Rin but because he's a dick.


Added DiffLines:

* HomoeroticSubtext: Itachi and Kisame exclude HoeYay.


Added DiffLines:

* TheMentallyIll: Despite undergoing AdaptationalVillainy in ''Atlas'' Obito has a better justification for his heinous actions than in canon due to suffering brain damage so bad that he doesn't even remember that Madara or Rin exists half the time.


Added DiffLines:

* NotSoStoic: Kisame has a million ways to ruffle Itachi's feathers.
* OnlyFriend: Kisame is the only person that Itachi has ever truly held a positive relationship with even if he refuses to admit it.


Added DiffLines:

* RealityEnsues: It turns out that having your head crushed by tons of rocks has actual repercussions when the author doesn't give a Uchiha PlotArmor thicker than an iceberg.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* GroinAttack: Han tries to do this to Itachi. Itachi swiftly activates Susanoo, and is shown to be actually angry.

to:

* GroinAttack: Han tries to do this to Itachi. Itachi swiftly instantly activates Susanoo, and is shown to be actually angry.his Susanoo.



* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: The Third is shown to be one. However, he is also shown to be very cunning and ruthless when the situation calls for it.

to:

* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: The Third is shown to be one. However, he is also shown to be very [[PragmaticHero cunning and ruthless ruthless]] when the situation calls for it.

Added: 452

Changed: 154

Removed: 24

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* BadassNormal: Naruto is established as one early on, due to a lack of any chakra of his own.

to:

* BadassNormal: Naruto is established as one early on, due to [[YouShouldKnowThisAlready a lack of any chakra of his own.chakra.]]



* CombatPragmatist: Heavily featured, especially by Naruto. The ninja villages are ninja for a reason, not samurai.
* CovertPervert: Neji turns out to be one.
* CrazyAwesome: The Han.

to:

* CombatPragmatist: Heavily featured, especially by Naruto. The ninja villages are ninja ''ninja'' for a reason, not samurai.
* CovertPervert: Neji turns out to be one.
* CrazyAwesome: The Han.
one. Part of the reason Naruto sends him to train with Jiraiya is because he thinks the two will bond over it.


Added DiffLines:

* GroinAttack: Han tries to do this to Itachi. Itachi swiftly activates Susanoo, and is shown to be actually angry.


Added DiffLines:

* TheJuggernaut: WordOfGod is that this is Han's fighting style.


Added DiffLines:

* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Itachi tells Kisame that if he ever speaks of the above GroinAttack to anyone and Itachi's reaction, he will kill him.
* MeaningfulName: Sarutobi actually gave Naruto his codename after the Greek myth, though he doesn't know where it came from.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* Determinator: Naruto is one just like in canon. [[spoiler: The Dragon also gets this honor; it was the first snake to fly, because ''[[UpToEleven nature gave up on trying to stop it.]]'']]
* FromNobodyToNightmare: While not evil, [[spoiler:the Dragon is clearly this; it states that it was once nothing more than an ordinary horned viper. Centuries, or millenia later, it is the lord of the snake summons, and easily the largest and most powerful summon in the story (the ''head alone'' was apparently the size of a hill.]]

to:

* Determinator: {{Determinator}}: Naruto is one just like in canon. [[spoiler: The Dragon is also gets this honor; one; it was the first snake to fly, fly because ''[[UpToEleven nature gave up on trying to stop it.]]'']]
* FromNobodyToNightmare: While not evil, [[spoiler:the Dragon is clearly this; it states that it was once nothing more than an ordinary horned viper. Centuries, or millenia later, it is the lord of the snake summons, and easily the largest and most powerful summon in the story (the ''head alone'' was apparently the size of a hill.hill).]]

Added: 42

Changed: 1

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* CovertPervert: Neji turns out to be one.



* PowerNullifier: The Hyuuga's normal fightng style which seals off chakra points is ineffective on Naruto, since he doesn't have any. The style which injects chakra into the organs, however, is still lethal if it hits him, according to Neji.

to:

* PowerNullifier: The Hyuuga's normal fightng fighting style which seals off chakra points is ineffective on Naruto, since he doesn't have any. The style which injects chakra into the organs, however, is still lethal if it hits him, according to Neji.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* ThirdPersonPerson: ''The'' Han.

to:

* ThirdPersonPerson: ''The'' Han.Han.
* WeakButSkilled: Naruto.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


The fanfic ''Atlas'', by Kagaseo, is a fanfic where, due to the meddling of the Kyuubi with his chakra system at a young age, Naruto is the only living being to not possess a chakra system, rendering him as the biggest {Muggle} in the world.

to:

The fanfic ''Atlas'', by Kagaseo, is a fanfic where, due to the meddling of the Kyuubi with his chakra system at a young age, Naruto is the only living being to not possess a chakra system, rendering him as the biggest {Muggle} {{Muggle}} in the world.

Added: 190

Changed: 233

Removed: 14

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* BrainBleach: Sakura.
--> ''I will drink this scene into oblivion.''

to:

* BrainBleach: Sakura.
Sakura when the genin teams, Naruto, and Anko all go to a bar.
--> Sakura: ''I will drink this scene into oblivion.''



* Determinator: Naruto is one just like in canon. [[spoiler: The Dragon also gets this honor; it was the first snake to fly, because ''nature gave up on trying to stop it.'']]

to:

* CrazyPrepared: Naruto seems to be taking notes from Batman.
* Determinator: Naruto is one just like in canon. [[spoiler: The Dragon also gets this honor; it was the first snake to fly, because ''nature ''[[UpToEleven nature gave up on trying to stop it.'']]]]'']]



* ThirdPersonPerson: ''The'' Han.
* WhatAnIdiot:

to:

* ThirdPersonPerson: ''The'' Han.
* WhatAnIdiot:
Han.

Added: 125

Changed: 18

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


Of course, those who know [[Naruto Determinator]] even slightly well should know that he wouldn't let something as little as having no chakra stop him from being awesome.

to:

Of course, those who know [[Naruto Determinator]] [[{{Determinator}} Naruto]] even slightly well should know that he wouldn't let something as little as having no chakra stop him from being awesome.


Added DiffLines:

* BrainBleach: Sakura.
--> ''I will drink this scene into oblivion.''


Added DiffLines:

* CrazyAwesome: The Han.


Added DiffLines:

* ThirdPersonPerson: ''The'' Han.

Added: 437

Changed: 174

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


Of course, those who know [[Determinator Naruto]] even slightly well should know that he wouldn't let something as little as having no chakra stop him from being awesome.

to:

Of course, those who know [[Determinator Naruto]] [[Naruto Determinator]] even slightly well should know that he wouldn't let something as little as having no chakra stop him from being awesome.



* Determinator:

to:

* Determinator:Determinator: Naruto is one just like in canon. [[spoiler: The Dragon also gets this honor; it was the first snake to fly, because ''nature gave up on trying to stop it.'']]


Added DiffLines:

* KilledOffForReal: A very long list indeed...
* OvershadowedByAwesome: While Naruto is an excellent BadassNormal, he almost always loses to high-ranking shinobi when forced into a straight fight.


Added DiffLines:

* PowerNullifier: The Hyuuga's normal fightng style which seals off chakra points is ineffective on Naruto, since he doesn't have any. The style which injects chakra into the organs, however, is still lethal if it hits him, according to Neji.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: The Third is shown to be one. However, he is also shown to be very cunning and ruthless when the situation calls for it.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

The fanfic ''Atlas'', by Kagaseo, is a fanfic where, due to the meddling of the Kyuubi with his chakra system at a young age, Naruto is the only living being to not possess a chakra system, rendering him as the biggest {Muggle} in the world.

Of course, those who know [[Determinator Naruto]] even slightly well should know that he wouldn't let something as little as having no chakra stop him from being awesome.

* BadassNormal: Naruto is established as one early on, due to a lack of any chakra of his own.
* CombatPragmatist: Heavily featured, especially by Naruto. The ninja villages are ninja for a reason, not samurai.
* Determinator:
* FromNobodyToNightmare: While not evil, [[spoiler:the Dragon is clearly this; it states that it was once nothing more than an ordinary horned viper. Centuries, or millenia later, it is the lord of the snake summons, and easily the largest and most powerful summon in the story (the ''head alone'' was apparently the size of a hill.]]
* InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons: The Ryuchi Cave apparently hosts the Dragon, the first snake to ever shed his skin and achieve flight. [[spoiler:The Dragon shows up later on, and the horns alone are mistaken by Naruto for small hills in the lake it sleeps in.]]
* PlotRelevantAgeUp: Naruto is 15 instead of 13 when the story starts.
* SanitySlippage: [[spoiler:Tobi has this, due to getting half his head crushed by rocks, and says that he doesn't even remember who pulled him out of them for sure anymore.]]
* WhatAnIdiot:

Top