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** Egbet Faubley rips into Aultcray about how he is a complete and utter failure on every level for his actions, from failing as a son for not honoring his adoptive father's wishes to failing as a husband in letting his first wife die.
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** Egbet Egbert Faubley rips into Aultcray about how he is a complete and utter failure on every level for his actions, from failing as a son for not honoring his adoptive father's wishes to failing as a husband in letting his first wife die.
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* RescueArc:
** Throughout chapter 119-120, Naofumi, Malty, Oersted, and Uranus are rescued by the arrival of Lord Noches and Malty's servants coming to save them from the dungeons locking them. Once Naofumi, Malty, Oersted, and Uranus are freed, they work together with their rescuers to fight off all their pursuers, until being able to finally escape out of Melromarc.
** Arriving into Balafon village by chapter 130 and in later chapters, Naofumi and Malty do an infiltration of the village to plan out their actions to liberate all the villagers being exploited by Consevatie and the Three Heroes Church.
** Throughout chapter 119-120, Naofumi, Malty, Oersted, and Uranus are rescued by the arrival of Lord Noches and Malty's servants coming to save them from the dungeons locking them. Once Naofumi, Malty, Oersted, and Uranus are freed, they work together with their rescuers to fight off all their pursuers, until being able to finally escape out of Melromarc.
** Arriving into Balafon village by chapter 130 and in later chapters, Naofumi and Malty do an infiltration of the village to plan out their actions to liberate all the villagers being exploited by Consevatie and the Three Heroes Church.
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The Hate Sink members of the Three Heroes Church feel their worst, because of the absurd power they have to endure defeat.
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* AntagonistAbilities: A HateSink member or major {{Jerkass}} of the Three Heroes Church pose as the main antagonist of ''FanFic/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincess'', and they all have a massive amount of manpower that make them an almost unstoppable force for the heroes to defeat. Even when the Three Heroes Church encounter horrible losses from the members' own stupidity to think ahead, they can always brush them off, because of their political power surpassing the noble houses and major higher ups being given a DeusExitMachina.
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* ThePromisedLand: Discussed by Uranus, Naofumi, and Mein about the religious fate relating to the Chief God in chapter 116, they bring up a land called "Flangey". Legends say that the missionaries who originated from Flangey are messengers of the Chief God, and while the people of Medea attempted to find the land, Flangey was never found anywhere in the world.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13260174/1/Ambition-of-the-Red-Princess Ambition of the Red Princess]]'' is a ''[[Literature/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero Rising of the Shield Hero]]'' AlternateUniverseFic co-written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1201144/Qinlongfei Qinlongfei]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9514744/Comrade-Broseph Comrade Broseph]], with edits and later additions by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/10033161/Angel-Wraith Angel Wraith]] and [https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2881124/Ace-Triad [Ace-Triad]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13260174/1/Ambition-of-the-Red-Princess Ambition of the Red Princess]]'' is a ''[[Literature/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero Rising of the Shield Hero]]'' AlternateUniverseFic co-written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1201144/Qinlongfei Qinlongfei]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9514744/Comrade-Broseph Comrade Broseph]], with edits and later additions by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/10033161/Angel-Wraith Angel Wraith]] and [https://www.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2881124/Ace-Triad [Ace-Triad]].
Ace-Triad]].
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Gotta spread the love to myself and Angel Wraith as major contributors to the fic.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13260174/1/Ambition-of-the-Red-Princess Ambition of the Red Princess]]'' is a ''[[Literature/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero Rising of the Shield Hero]]'' AlternateUniverseFic co-written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1201144/Qinlongfei Qinlongfei]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9514744/Comrade-Broseph Comrade Broseph]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13260174/1/Ambition-of-the-Red-Princess Ambition of the Red Princess]]'' is a ''[[Literature/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero Rising of the Shield Hero]]'' AlternateUniverseFic co-written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1201144/Qinlongfei Qinlongfei]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9514744/Comrade-Broseph Comrade Broseph]].
Broseph]], with edits and later additions by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/10033161/Angel-Wraith Angel Wraith]] and [https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2881124/Ace-Triad [Ace-Triad]].
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** As of Chapters 44 and 45, the ''sheer'' amount of fight scene and style shoutouts during Weiss' duel against Eclair makes it a case of ReferenceOverdosed, as some have observed.
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* FusionFic: ''FanFic/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincess'' has a huge cast of characters that extend way beyond the amount of characters ''Literature/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero'' had. To play the plotline of a political warfare and intrigue, lots of characters were borrowed from existing franchises. The most notable series being ''Series/GameOfThrones'', ''Franchise/FireEmblem'', and types of [[VideoGame/DarkSouls open]]-[[VideoGame/DemonsSouls world]] [[Franchise/TheElderScrolls adventuring]] [[{{VideoGame/Bloodborne}} games.]]
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* FusionFic: ''FanFic/AmbitionOfTheRedPrincess'' has a huge cast of characters that extend way beyond the amount of characters ''Literature/TheRisingOfTheShieldHero'' had. To play the plotline of a political warfare and intrigue, lots of characters were borrowed from existing franchises. The most notable series being ''Series/GameOfThrones'', ''Franchise/FireEmblem'', ''VideoGame/DemonsSouls'', ''VideoGame/DarkSouls'', ''{{VideoGame/Bloodborne}}'' and types of [[VideoGame/DarkSouls open]]-[[VideoGame/DemonsSouls world]] [[Franchise/TheElderScrolls adventuring]] [[{{VideoGame/Bloodborne}} games.]]open-world adventuring games, like Franchise/TheElderScrolls.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The reason for Malty's unofficial engagement to the Pig King of Faubley: back when Melromarc was being ravaged by the Wailing Death plague, Aultclay procured the cure by ''invading Faubley'', and his adopted brother Egbert, the Pig King, demanded Malty's hand in marriage as reward for his leniency in not declaring war.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: NiceJobBreakingItHero:
** The reason for Malty's unofficial engagement to the Pig King of Faubley: back when Melromarc was being ravaged by the Wailing Death plague, Aultclay procured the cure by ''invading Faubley'', and his adopted brother Egbert, the Pig King, demanded Malty's hand in marriage as reward for his leniency in not declaring war.
** The reason for Malty's unofficial engagement to the Pig King of Faubley: back when Melromarc was being ravaged by the Wailing Death plague, Aultclay procured the cure by ''invading Faubley'', and his adopted brother Egbert, the Pig King, demanded Malty's hand in marriage as reward for his leniency in not declaring war.
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** ResolvedNoodleIncident: Chapter 41 reveals that Malty took Mein, her pet filorial, out into the woods and ran into a pack of bone dogs. Mein threw Malty into the bushes and led the bone dogs away, where all of them fell off a cliff and died.
* ObliviousGuiltSlinging: To each time Naofumi and his companions give praise for Malty's heroism, they serve as a reminder to her lies and the guilt she is holding over hiding her status as a princess.
* ObliviousGuiltSlinging: To each time Naofumi and his companions give praise for Malty's heroism, they serve as a reminder to her lies and the guilt she is holding over hiding her status as a princess.
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* ObliviousGuiltSlinging:
**ResolvedNoodleIncident: Chapter 41 reveals that Malty took Mein, her pet filorial, out into the woods and ran into a pack of bone dogs. Mein threw Malty into the bushes and led the bone dogs away, where all of them fell off a cliff and died.
* ObliviousGuiltSlinging:To each time Naofumi and his companions give praise for Malty's heroism, they serve as a reminder to her lies and the guilt she is holding over hiding her status as a princess.
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* PapaWolf: When King Aultcray hears rumors of Naofumi allegedly threatening Malty with Balloons, his men have to hold him down as he rants and raves about killing Naofumi's entire family.
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* PapaWolf: PapaWolf:
** When King Aultcray hears rumors of Naofumi allegedly threatening Malty with Balloons, his men have to hold him down as he rants and raves about killing Naofumi's entire family.
** When King Aultcray hears rumors of Naofumi allegedly threatening Malty with Balloons, his men have to hold him down as he rants and raves about killing Naofumi's entire family.
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** PopCulturalOsmosisFailure: Since each of them come from different Earths, the Cardinal Heroes often get confused by specific references. When Motoyasu brings up the [[Franchise/JusticeLeagueofAmerica Justice League]], he compares Naofumi to Owlman rather than Batman. Ren hasn't heard of either but says they remind him of Nighthawk of the [[ComicBook/SquadronSupreme Squadron Supreme]]. Meanwhile, Superhero comics stopped being made in Itsuki's world after Espers started appearing.
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* ResolvedNoodleIncident: Chapter 41 reveals that Malty took Mein, her pet filorial, out into the woods and ran into a pack of bone dogs. Mein threw Malty into the bushes and led the bone dogs away, where all of them fell off a cliff and died.
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-->'''Consevatie:''' What do you think this is!? A WishFulfillment story written for your narcissistic fantasy?! Where the world is all [[CrapsackWorld fucked up]] for you to fix to [[JerkJustifications justify acting like a smug little shit]]!? Where all your opponents are [[TooDumbToLive incompetent idiot clowns]], to make [[DamnedByFaintPraise you look smart by comparison]]!? [[HaremGenre Where all the pretty women open their legs for you, and let you pick and choose at your leisure!?]]
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* TechnicianVsPerformer: Weiss and Eclair's duel. Weiss is much faster and well trained with her rapier, but still loses to Eclair who uses punches, kicks, shoulder tackles and more. Eclair criticizes Weiss for dancing around so much, not only wasting energy, but also frequently exposing her back to her enemy. Eclair's style isn't as well suited for duels, being meant for fighting on the battlefield, but she has far better defenses.
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* TechnicianVsPerformer: TechnicianVsPerformer:
** Weiss and Eclair's duel. Weiss is much faster and well trained with her rapier, but still loses to Eclair who uses punches, kicks, shoulder tackles and more. Eclair criticizes Weiss for dancing around so much, not only wasting energy, but also frequently exposing her back to her enemy. Eclair's style isn't as well suited for duels, being meant for fighting on the battlefield, but she has far better defenses.
** Weiss and Eclair's duel. Weiss is much faster and well trained with her rapier, but still loses to Eclair who uses punches, kicks, shoulder tackles and more. Eclair criticizes Weiss for dancing around so much, not only wasting energy, but also frequently exposing her back to her enemy. Eclair's style isn't as well suited for duels, being meant for fighting on the battlefield, but she has far better defenses.
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* ThisIsReality: While checking out the dungeon outside Balafon, Naofumi comments that something must be wrong as they've been walking for an hour without reaching the end. Though Motoyasu comments how dungeons always do that to pad playtime, Naofumi refutes that they're not playing a videogame. The dungeon was supposed to be someone's laboratory and such a long trip would be impractical.
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* ThisIsReality: ThisIsReality:
** While checking out the dungeon outside Balafon, Naofumi comments that something must be wrong as they've been walking for an hour without reaching the end. Though Motoyasu comments how dungeons always do that to pad playtime, Naofumi refutes that they're not playing a videogame. The dungeon was supposed to be someone's laboratory and such a long trip would be impractical.
** While checking out the dungeon outside Balafon, Naofumi comments that something must be wrong as they've been walking for an hour without reaching the end. Though Motoyasu comments how dungeons always do that to pad playtime, Naofumi refutes that they're not playing a videogame. The dungeon was supposed to be someone's laboratory and such a long trip would be impractical.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Naofumi calls out Aultcray in particular and Melromarc in general for constantly demonizing him for things past Shield Heroes did and for actions that are perfectly legal (such as owning demi-human slaves).
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** Naofumi calls out Aultcray in particular and Melromarc in general for constantly demonizing him for things past Shield Heroes did and for actions that are perfectly legal (such as owning demi-human slaves).
** Naofumi calls out Aultcray in particular and Melromarc in general for constantly demonizing him for things past Shield Heroes did and for actions that are perfectly legal (such as owning demi-human slaves).
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* ForWantOfANail: Malty's goal is changed from satisfying petty sadism to proving her mother wrong about her and becoming queen, which snowballs into the current story.
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* WhatIf: Iris explains that she would have gone and secured Naofumi's allegiance if Malty had gone through with the King's plan to frame the Shield Hero. This is briefly shown in an Omake, where Itsuki didn't have his Justice-rant outburst and thus cause Malty to throw her allegiance with him. Iris approaches Naofumi's party after he was betrayed, with her, Katarina and Bertia joining his party, and plotting to turn Malty into a PuppetKing, a FateWorseThanDeath for someone like canon!Malty, while Iris and Naofumi hold all the power and rule the country from the shadows. Meanwhile, Raphtalia ends up in Motoyasu's party.
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* WhatIf: WhatIf:
** Malty's goal is changed from satisfying petty sadism to proving her mother wrong about her and becoming queen, which snowballs into the current story.
** Iris explains that she would have gone and secured Naofumi's allegiance if Malty had gone through with the King's plan to frame the Shield Hero. This is briefly shown in an Omake, where Itsuki didn't have his Justice-rant outburst and thus cause Malty to throw her allegiance with him. Iris approaches Naofumi's party after he was betrayed, with her, Katarina and Bertia joining his party, and plotting to turn Malty into a PuppetKing, a FateWorseThanDeath for someone like canon!Malty, while Iris and Naofumi hold all the power and rule the country from the shadows. Meanwhile, Raphtalia ends up in Motoyasu's party.
** Malty's goal is changed from satisfying petty sadism to proving her mother wrong about her and becoming queen, which snowballs into the current story.
** Iris explains that she would have gone and secured Naofumi's allegiance if Malty had gone through with the King's plan to frame the Shield Hero. This is briefly shown in an Omake, where Itsuki didn't have his Justice-rant outburst and thus cause Malty to throw her allegiance with him. Iris approaches Naofumi's party after he was betrayed, with her, Katarina and Bertia joining his party, and plotting to turn Malty into a PuppetKing, a FateWorseThanDeath for someone like canon!Malty, while Iris and Naofumi hold all the power and rule the country from the shadows. Meanwhile, Raphtalia ends up in Motoyasu's party.
