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** [[{{Firefly}} "Shiny"]] originated as a LanguageBarrier when Nath didn't know a Goblin word for "pretty", and became something of a loving in-joke used to reassure each other during stressful situations.
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** [[{{Firefly}} [[{{Series/Firefly}} "Shiny"]] originated as a LanguageBarrier when Nath didn't know a Goblin word for "pretty", and became something of a loving in-joke used to reassure each other during stressful situations.
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* ContainmentField: Circles of Protection from Evil, aka ''copfe''s, aka [[{{Supernatural}} Devil's Traps]].
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* GodInHumanForm: Or non-human, as it happens. [[Characters/SupernaturalSamWinchester Seth Remington]] is the [[TheAntichrist Favoured Soul]] of [[DarkIsEvil Mask]], and [[spoiler: Nath is the avatar of [[SatanicArchetype Lolth]]]].
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** [[Characters/SupernaturalSamWinchester Seth Remington]] is the [[TheAntichrist Favoured Soul]] of [[DarkIsEvilMask]], and Mask]]; and
** [[spoiler: Nath is the avatar of [[SatanicArchetype Lolth]]]].
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** [[spoiler: Nath is the avatar of [[SatanicArchetype Lolth]]]].
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Word of God has stated that ''All That Dwell Within Your Gates'' will be the first of [[http://archiveofourown.org/series/208544 a series]], though given the lengths of each installment the second has yet to be released. However, a brief interlude oneshot set in Arc III ("[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3284240 Sorry, I Don't Speak Common]]")was published to celebrate Femslash February 2015.
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Word of God has stated that ''All That Dwell Within Your Gates'' will be the first of [[http://archiveofourown.org/series/208544 a series]], though given the lengths of each installment the second has yet to be released. However, a brief interlude oneshot set in Arc III ("[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3284240 Sorry, I Don't Speak Common]]")was Common]]") was published to celebrate Femslash February 2015.
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* [[AnimalsHateHim Animals Hate Her]]: Nath somehow managed to kill a pet skeleton.
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* FiveManBand: Works well, other than the fact that Nath is technically the leader of the group, as she's the one on a quest.
** TheHero: Allerod, despite playing a very small role in the first story, fits the calm, gentle, levelheaded, reasonable and more importantly Good-aligned archetype to a T.
** TheLancer: Rennic is everything Allerod is not, namely a good person, pleasant to be around, and according to WordOfGod actually ''invited''.
** TheSmartGuy: Nath's Intelligence score is actually frightening.
** TheBigGuy: Kadek's weapon of choice is a warhammer with an axe blade on one end, and he enjoy smashing skulls almost as much as drinking.
** TheHeart: Miri, who also keeps Al from being the OnlySaneMan in the group.
** TheHero: Allerod, despite playing a very small role in the first story, fits the calm, gentle, levelheaded, reasonable and more importantly Good-aligned archetype to a T.
** TheLancer: Rennic is everything Allerod is not, namely a good person, pleasant to be around, and according to WordOfGod actually ''invited''.
** TheSmartGuy: Nath's Intelligence score is actually frightening.
** TheBigGuy: Kadek's weapon of choice is a warhammer with an axe blade on one end, and he enjoy smashing skulls almost as much as drinking.
** TheHeart: Miri, who also keeps Al from being the OnlySaneMan in the group.
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* [[GodInHumanForm Gods In Human Form]]: GodInHumanForm: Or non-human, as it happens. [[Characters/SupernaturalSamWinchester Seth Remington]] is the [[TheAntichrist Favoured Soul]] of [[DarkIsEvil Mask]], and [[spoiler: Nath is the avatar of [[SatanicArchetype Lolth]]]].
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* [[MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels My Hovercraft Is Full Of Cherry Pancakes]]: Miri is not to speak Goblin much good.
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* TeamMom: Allerod to the party; Katerina Thatcher while the group is in Freedale. Rather a given as she's [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin actually Miri's mom]] and the matriarch of the family.
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* {{Villain Protagonist}}s: We really ''shouldn't'' be rooting for Nath. Or the party in general, really.Unther.
* {{Villain Protagonist}}s: We really ''shouldn't'' be rooting for Nath. Or the party in general, really.
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* AnachronicOrder: The series description expands on this by dividing events into three of the titular 'Arcs'.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1173747/chapters/2391075 All That Dwell Within Your Gates]]'' is a 50,000-word collaboration between [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/guardingdark guardingdark]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/mylordshesacactus mylordshesacactus]], taking place in a reinterpretation of the [[DungeonsAndDragons Dungeons & Dragons]] universe.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1173747/chapters/2391075 All That Dwell Within Your Gates]]'' is a 50,000-word collaboration between [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/guardingdark guardingdark]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/mylordshesacactus mylordshesacactus]], taking place in a reinterpretation of the [[DungeonsAndDragons Dungeons & Dragons]] ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' universe.
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Word of God has stated that ''All That Dwell Within Your Gates'' will be the first of a series, though given the lengths of each installment the second has yet to be released.
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Word of God has stated that ''All That Dwell Within Your Gates'' will be the first of [[http://archiveofourown.org/series/208544 a series, series]], though given the lengths of each installment the second has yet to be released.released. However, a brief interlude oneshot set in Arc III ("[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3284240 Sorry, I Don't Speak Common]]")was published to celebrate Femslash February 2015.
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* TheHeckler: A righteous Crusader calls Miri a godless heathen for singing [[{{Discworld}} the Hedgehog Song]]. She responds by cheerfully informing him that he left out the part about being a [[SelfDeprecation bastard half-breed]].
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* TheHeckler: A righteous Crusader calls Miri a godless heathen for singing [[{{Discworld}} the Hedgehog Song]]. She responds by cheerfully informing him that he left out the part about being a [[SelfDeprecation bastard bastard]] [[HalfHumanHybrid half-breed]].
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* InsultBackfire: Miri, the [[DisappearedDad illegitimate daughter of an Elven bard]], opens her mockery of Drizzt with a casual "You're a bastard."
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* WouldHurtAChild: Fileth; in a vicious shift from the story's [[MoodWhiplash usually positive]] if not lighthearted tone, Miri is trapped in a memory of Nath's brutal torture at her stepfather's hands. Nath was the drow equivalent of ''five years old'' at the time.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Fileth; in a vicious shift from the story's [[MoodWhiplash [[WorldHalfFull usually positive]] if not lighthearted tone, Miri is trapped in a memory of Nath's brutal torture at her stepfather's hands. Nath was the drow equivalent of ''five years old'' at the time.
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* BerserkButton: Don't hurt Miri in front of Nath. Also, don't taunt her about her stepfather. [[CompleteMonster Actually, don't mention her stepfather at all.]]
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The first story technically follows the ongoing quest of a traditional five-member D&D adventuring party, but centers almost exclusively around the two main characters--half-elf [[TheBard Bard]] Miri Thatcher and drow [[{{Necromancer}} Dread Necromancer]] Nathcyrl Auvryren. The narrative splits through [[AnachronicOrder the frequent use of time-jumps and flashbacks]] between the primary storyline of Nath being introduced Miri's extremely normal human family, and the gradually-revealed backstory of how the two met and developed a romance, with glimpses into their adventures. In true D&D fashion the story also contains countless unobtrusive {{Shoutout}}s to other media, Series/DoctorWho, Series/{{Elementary}}, Literature/{{Discworld}} and Series/{{Supernatural}} foremost among them.
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The first story technically follows the ongoing quest of a traditional five-member D&D adventuring party, but centers almost exclusively around the two main characters--half-elf [[TheBard Bard]] Miri Thatcher and drow [[{{Necromancer}} Dread Necromancer]] Nathcyrl Auvryren. The narrative splits through [[AnachronicOrder the frequent use of time-jumps and flashbacks]] between the primary storyline of Nath being introduced Miri's extremely normal human family, and the gradually-revealed backstory of how the two met and developed a romance, with glimpses into their adventures. In true D&D fashion the story also contains countless unobtrusive {{Shoutout}}s to other media, Series/DoctorWho, Series/{{Elementary}}, Literature/{{Discworld}} with Literature/{{Discworld}}, Series/{{Elementary}} and Series/{{Supernatural}} foremost among them.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1173747/chapters/2391075 All The Dwell Within Your Gates]]'' is a 50,000-word collaboration between [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/guardingdark guardingdark]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/mylordshesacactus mylordshesacactus]], taking place in a reinterpretation of the [[DungeonsAndDragons Dungeons & Dragons]] universe.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1173747/chapters/2391075 All The That Dwell Within Your Gates]]'' is a 50,000-word collaboration between [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/guardingdark guardingdark]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/mylordshesacactus mylordshesacactus]], taking place in a reinterpretation of the [[DungeonsAndDragons Dungeons & Dragons]] universe.
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[CompleteMonster Fileth]]; in a vicious shift from the story's [[MoodWhiplash usually positive]] if not lighthearted tone, Miri is trapped in a memory of Nath's brutal torture at her stepfather's hands. Nath was the drow equivalent of ''five years old'' at the time.
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[CompleteMonster Fileth]]; Fileth; in a vicious shift from the story's [[MoodWhiplash usually positive]] if not lighthearted tone, Miri is trapped in a memory of Nath's brutal torture at her stepfather's hands. Nath was the drow equivalent of ''five years old'' at the time.
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