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* YourTomcatIsPregnant: Marvin is actually female. Nath decides not to tell Carter.
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* YourTomcatIsPregnant: Marvin is actually female. Nath decides not to tell Carter.Carter.
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%% commented out because I don't know how to properly rewrite this * ABoyAndHisX: Where X stands for Undead Skeleton Mouse. (See also: CoolPet, ParrotPetPosition.)
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%% commented out because I don't know how to properly rewrite this * ABoyAndHisX: Where X stands for Undead Skeleton Mouse. (See also: CoolPet, ParrotPetPosition.)
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Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
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* AdorableAbomination: Nath is described as being very pretty but in a way that's [[UncannyValley just incredibly wrong somehow]], regularly kills and eats human beings, and has flat pupil-less blood-red eyes. And she is ''adorable''.
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* AdorableAbomination: Nath is described as being very pretty but in a way that's [[UncannyValley just incredibly wrong somehow]], somehow, regularly kills and eats human beings, and has flat pupil-less blood-red eyes. And she is ''adorable''.
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* ReallySeventeenYearsOld: Nath is [[JailBait only 75]]. Miri doesn't take this revelation very well, though after having some time to think about it her qualms stem more from Nath's obvious abuse and emotional vulnerability than from age differences.
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* ReallySeventeenYearsOld: Nath is [[JailBait [[JailbaitTaboo only 75]]. Miri doesn't take this revelation very well, though after having some time to think about it her qualms stem more from Nath's obvious abuse and emotional vulnerability than from age differences.
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* TokenGoodTeammate: Allerod, after Miri's [[CharacterAlignment Alignment]] shifts.
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%% commented out as ZeroContextExample * AbusiveParents: '' ''' Fileth. ''' ''
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%% commented out as ZeroContextExample Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * AbusiveParents: '' ''' Fileth. ''' ''
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%% commented out as ZeroContextExample * DarkMagicalGirl: Nath. And ''how''.
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%% commented out as ZeroContextExample Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * DarkMagicalGirl: Nath. And ''how''.
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%% commented out as ZeroContextExample Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * LameComeback: "''You'' shut up." Miri is a ''Bard''.
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%% commented out as ZeroContextExample * TranquilFury: Nath is a ''master''.
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%% commented out as ZeroContextExample Administrivia/ZeroContextExample * TranquilFury: Nath is a ''master''.
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* GroinAttack: Mentioned as part of Miri's response to her heckler:
--> To make a long story short he pushed me off my chair, and I might have kicked him in the balls on the way down, and somehow three Paladins, a Cleric with really good aim and a bobcat got involved…"
--> To make a long story short he pushed me off my chair, and I might have kicked him in the balls on the way down, and somehow three Paladins, a Cleric with really good aim and a bobcat got involved…"
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How To Write An Example - Irrelevant Pothole.
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* ConstantlyCurious: [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal Carter]] wants to know everything about everything.
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* ConstantlyCurious: [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal Carter]] Carter wants to know everything about everything.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: A misguided Paladin accidentally slices Miri's calf open in an attempt to "rescue" her from her drow "captor". Literally the instant Miri's blood is spilled, Nath releases a burst of Epic-level magic that rends open the earth and bisects the entire city of Unther, [[PowersViaPossession actively channeling the raw power of Lolth]] seemingly for no reason other than to make absolutely certain that Darrell Remington realized the deep and profound degree to which he had screwed up before he died in agony.
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* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Possibly the shortest one in history. All it takes for Nath to ''instantly'' drop her channeling of Lolth, calm the magical storm/earthquakes, and revert to gentle, nonthreatening concern and the use of benign sleep and healing spells is Miri whispering ''"Nath, you're scaring me."''
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* TheHeckler: A righteous Crusader calls Miri a godless heathen for singing [[{{Discworld}} the Hedgehog Song]]. She responds by cheerfully informing him that he left out the part about being a [[SelfDeprecation bastard]] [[HalfHumanHybrid half-breed]].
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* TheHeckler: A righteous Crusader calls Miri a godless heathen for singing [[{{Discworld}} [[Literature/{{Discworld}} the Hedgehog Song]]. She responds by cheerfully informing him that he left out the part about being a [[SelfDeprecation bastard]] [[HalfHumanHybrid half-breed]].
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* ExternalRetcon: AlternativeCharacterInterpretation is acknowledged in the foreword in the case of the cameo by Drizzt Do'urden, who is portrayed as heroic in his source material but whom the authors strongly disliked. Artistic license was also taken with the nature of the Drow and their society so as to make the mechanics of the world more believable.
** Arguably the character of "Darrell Remington" could be another example, though it's really more of a {{Deconstruction}}. The [[Characters/SupernaturalDeanWinchester Winchesters]] are commonly considered heroic by the fanbase; but while their counterparts are portrayed loyally to the show's characterization, it's a lot harder to ignore their FantasticRacism when the audience has gotten to know and love the "demon" they intend to kill.
** Arguably the character of "Darrell Remington" could be another example, though it's really more of a {{Deconstruction}}. The [[Characters/SupernaturalDeanWinchester Winchesters]] are commonly considered heroic by the fanbase; but while their counterparts are portrayed loyally to the show's characterization, it's a lot harder to ignore their FantasticRacism when the audience has gotten to know and love the "demon" they intend to kill.
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* ExternalRetcon: ExternalRetcon:
** AlternativeCharacterInterpretation is acknowledged in the foreword in the case of the cameo by Drizzt Do'urden, who is portrayed as heroic in his source material but whom the authors strongly disliked. Artistic license was also taken with the nature of the Drow and their society so as to make the mechanics of the world more believable.
**Arguably the The character of "Darrell Remington" could be another example, though it's really more of a {{Deconstruction}}. The [[Characters/SupernaturalDeanWinchester Winchesters]] are commonly considered heroic by the fanbase; but while their counterparts are portrayed loyally to the show's characterization, it's a lot harder to ignore their FantasticRacism when the audience has gotten to know and love the "demon" they intend to kill.
** AlternativeCharacterInterpretation is acknowledged in the foreword in the case of the cameo by Drizzt Do'urden, who is portrayed as heroic in his source material but whom the authors strongly disliked. Artistic license was also taken with the nature of the Drow and their society so as to make the mechanics of the world more believable.
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