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* HeroesWantRedheads: Shinji is in love with his red-haired teammate.
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* HowIsThatEvenPossible: Asked nearly verbatim by Misato during the FinalBattle when Asuka and Shinji keep fighting after losing their power cables. Ritsuko provides an explanation about Unit 02 absorbing an S2 engine from a mass production model, but can't figure out how Unit 01 is managing to do it and gives up trying to.
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* MercyKill: [[spoiler:Shinji and the remnants of Yui conspire to have Gendo absorbed into Unit 01's core along with her, removing him as a threat and sparing him from trial. It's especially merciful since some sort of reunion with Yui was all Gendo ever wanted to achieve anyway.]]
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Gendo doesn't have Shinji's best interests in mind in splitting him from Asuka, but even most caring parents wouldn't allow two dating 14-year-olds to cohabitate, let alone support their teen in a relationship where there was physical violence. Other characters question how far he takes the separation but not his underlying logic.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3043801/1/A-Glass-of-Wine The original story]] is unfortunately a dead fic due to the [[DiedDuringProduction author's untimely death]] in 2009. Toasterman took it upon himself write [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10393227/1/A-Glass-of-Wine-Rebuilt a rebuilt version]] as both a tribute and a way to give closure to the original fanfiction and its author.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3043801/1/A-Glass-of-Wine The original story]] is unfortunately a dead fic due to the [[DiedDuringProduction author's untimely death]] in 2009. Toasterman took it upon himself to write [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10393227/1/A-Glass-of-Wine-Rebuilt a rebuilt version]] as both a tribute and a way to give closure to the original fanfiction fanfic and its author.
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* MasochismTango: Asuka veers wildly between affection and aggression and physically hurts Shinji pretty badly on two occasions (once [[SlapSlapKiss before they have their first serious make-out session]] and again as part of a break-up). Shinji is less volatile, but rather than trying to address issues in the relationship, he tends to act in sulky and passive aggressive ways. To their mutual credit, they both come to realize these behaviors are not okay, and are striving to do better on their second attempt at a relationship.
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* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: After Asuka spares him in the FinalBattle, [[spoiler:Kaworu]] returns the favor by personally destroying the entire SEELE council.
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* TakingTheBullet: During the FinalBattle, the Lance of Longinus is thrown in a killing strike against Shinji's Eva, which Asuka blocks with her own. She's actually able to continue fighting after this, but her Eva is severely damaged, and she has ongoing phantom pain long afterwards.
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* JerkassRealization: Following the battle with Armisael, Asuka contemplates how she continually pushes people away with her behavior and makes enemies of people she genuinely likes. She wonders if the rest of her existence will just be a series of mistakes punctuated by brief moments of regret that she can't figure out how to change. Fortunately for her, this dark moment of introspection helps her start to turn her life around.
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* ShipperOnDeck: After the mission in the volcano, Misato points to Asuka that Shinji also feels phantom pains after every mission as part of a scheme to put them together.
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* ShipperOnDeck: After the mission in the volcano, Misato points to Asuka that Shinji also feels phantom pains after every mission as part of a scheme to put them together. Notably, while she's okay with romance if that's where it goes, she just wants them to have a ''relationship'' beyond grudging roommates and coworkers because they're both desperately lonely and Misato feels their experiences make them uniquely suited to understand each other.
-->For now, Misato planned to just keep the kids from killing each other, which seemed like a difficult job on its own. Anything that happened on top of that - friendship, boosted teamwork, young love - was just bonus points.
-->For now, Misato planned to just keep the kids from killing each other, which seemed like a difficult job on its own. Anything that happened on top of that - friendship, boosted teamwork, young love - was just bonus points.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The story begins after the battle against Sandalphon and goes through each Angel in canonical order.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The story begins after the battle against Sandalphon and goes through each Angel in canonical order.order at first, but Kaworu shows up immediately after the battle against Zeruel and the timeline diverges heavily after that point.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Kaji warns Misato that pushing Shinji and Asuka together is like putting a cobra and a mouse in the same cage. Misato jokingly asks if he really believes that Asuka will hurt Shinji ''that'' badly. Kaji explains that's not the way he meant it, and that he believes that Shinji only acts the way he does because he's terrified of becoming more like Gendo.
-->'''Kaji:''' There is rage in him. I've seen the footage, and I read your reports.
-->'''Kaji:''' There is rage in him. I've seen the footage, and I read your reports.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: The original story clocks at 115,236 words spread over 22 chapters. The second version was completed at 197,633 words over 38 chapters.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: The original story clocks at 115,236 words spread over 22 chapters. The second version was completed at 197,633 198,045 words over 38 chapters.
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: [[spoiler:Kaworu Nagisa]] is ''less'' ambiguously evil than in canon since he's openly manipulative toward Asuka, something of a jackass toward Shinji and tries to end the world. However, it's still unclear as to whether [[BlueAndOrangeMorality he really understands how humans might feel about any of this]].
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: [[spoiler:Kaworu Nagisa]] is ''less'' ambiguously evil than in canon since he's openly manipulative toward Asuka, something of a jackass toward Shinji and tries to end the world. However, it's still unclear as to whether [[BlueAndOrangeMorality he really understands how humans might feel about any of this]].this]] and Asuka at least doesn't blame him.
* BreakUpMakeUpScenario: Although Shinji and Asuka get together early on in the Rebuilt version, they spend a pretty large part of the middle and end of the story either forcibly separated, broken up or tentatively trying to reconnect after those stressful events. [[spoiler:At the end of the epilogue they have succeeded, and references to future events suggest that they are able to stay together for the long haul.]]
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* {{Doorstopper}}: The original story clocks at 115,236 words spread over 22 chapters. As of May 2020, it has been surpassed by the second version: 117,395 words spread over 26 chapters.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: The original story clocks at 115,236 words spread over 22 chapters. As of May 2020, it has been surpassed by the The second version: 117,395 version was completed at 197,633 words spread over 26 38 chapters.
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* TamerAndChaster: The Rebuilt version doesn't contain the lengthy and explicit sex scenes the original version is notorious for. Shinji actually tells Asuka [[LetsWaitAWhile he's not ready yet]] when she suggests going further than making out.
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* TamerAndChaster: The Rebuilt version doesn't contain the lengthy and explicit sex scenes the original version is notorious for. Shinji actually tells Asuka [[LetsWaitAWhile he's not ready yet]] when she suggests going further than making out. The only characters to actually have sex during the main story at all are [[spoiler:Misato and Kaji]], and even they [[SexyDiscretionShot skip right to the pillow talk afterward]].
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: [[spoiler:Kaworu Nagisa]] is ''less'' ambiguously evil than in canon since he's openly manipulative toward Asuka, something of a jackass toward Shinji and tries to end the world. However, it's still unclear as to whether [[BlueAndOrangeMorality he really understands how humans might feel about any of this]].
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* OnTheRebound: Asuka and Shinji have a serious fight after the encounter with Zeruel and break up, which coincides with Kaworu's arrival. Kaworu expresses immediate interest in Asuka, which she reciprocates - she finds him very attractive, she likes kissing him and he always says exactly what she wants to hear. She still can never shake the feeling that there's something [[HumanoidAbomination seriously off about him]], though.
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* OnTheRebound: Asuka and Shinji have a serious fight after the encounter with Zeruel and break up, which coincides with Kaworu's arrival. Kaworu expresses immediate interest in Asuka, which she reciprocates - she finds him very attractive, she likes kissing him and he always says exactly what she wants to hear. She still can never shake the feeling that there's something [[HumanoidAbomination seriously off about him]], though. Between that unease and her ongoing feelings for Shinji, Asuka tells Kaworu she can't return his love.
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* IUhYouToo: Asuka expresses some thoughts about her possible future with Shinji while offering to break open a vending machine for him. Shinji has been around her long enough to understand what she's really getting at.
-->'''Asuka:''' "You're probably going to make my every meal for the rest of forever, I can at least steal you a bag of chips."\\
'''Shinji:''' "That's a very kind offer."
-->'''Asuka:''' "You're probably going to make my every meal for the rest of forever, I can at least steal you a bag of chips."\\
'''Shinji:''' "That's a very kind offer."
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* OnTheRebound: Asuka and Shinji have a serious fight after the encounter with Zeruel and break up, which coincides with Kaworu's arrival. Kaworu expresses immediate interest in Asuka, which she reciprocates - she finds him very attractive, she likes kissing him and he always says exactly what she wants to hear. She still can never shake the feeling that there's something [[HumanoidAbomination seriously off about him]], though.
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* TamerAndChaster: The Rebuilt version doesn't contain the lengthy and explicit sex scenes the original version is notorious for. Shinji actually tells Asuka [[LetsWaitAWhile he's not ready yet]] when she suggests going further than making out.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3043801/1/A-Glass-of-Wine The original story]] is unfortunately a dead fic due to the [[AuthorExistenceFailure author's untimely death]] in 2009. Toasterman took it upon himself write [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10393227/1/A-Glass-of-Wine-Rebuilt a rebuilt version]] as both a tribute and a way to give closure to the original fanfiction and its author.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3043801/1/A-Glass-of-Wine The original story]] is unfortunately a dead fic due to the [[AuthorExistenceFailure [[DiedDuringProduction author's untimely death]] in 2009. Toasterman took it upon himself write [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10393227/1/A-Glass-of-Wine-Rebuilt a rebuilt version]] as both a tribute and a way to give closure to the original fanfiction and its author.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3043801/1/A-Glass-of-Wine The original story]] is unfortunately a dead fic due to the author's untimely death in 2009. Toasterman took it upon himself write [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10393227/1/A-Glass-of-Wine-Rebuilt a rebuilt version]] as both a tribute and a way to give closure to the original fanfiction and its author.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3043801/1/A-Glass-of-Wine The original story]] is unfortunately a dead fic due to the [[AuthorExistenceFailure author's untimely death death]] in 2009. Toasterman took it upon himself write [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10393227/1/A-Glass-of-Wine-Rebuilt a rebuilt version]] as both a tribute and a way to give closure to the original fanfiction and its author.
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''A Glass of Wine'' is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' alternate universe fic by [=94Saturn=], later rewritten by Toasterman.
Shinji and Asuka learn about themselves and fall in love, causing massive ramifications.
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3043801/1/A-Glass-of-Wine The original story]] is unfortunately a dead fic due to the author's untimely death in 2009. Toasterman took it upon himself write [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10393227/1/A-Glass-of-Wine-Rebuilt a rebuilt version]] as both a tribute and a way to give closure to the original fanfiction and its author.
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!!Tropes:
* AffectionateGestureToTheHead: Misato reaches over and ruffles Shinji's hair when she finds out he cannot figure out why Asuka sat down with him and hugged him.
* AlternateUniverseFic: The story branches off continuity after the battle in the volcano, when Misato points out to Asuka that Shinji also feels phantom pains after each mission.
* ApologisesALot: Shinji manages to get Asuka annoyed as soon as the second scene when he apologizes for Misato's apartment lacking a couch, even though she was ''not'' blaming ''him'' for it.
-->"We need a couch," she told him. When he didn't respond, she went on. "Sitting on the floor all the time really bites."\\
"I'm sorry."\\
Asuka glared at him. It was the glare that always served as a harbinger for angry German-speak, and a glare he had learned well. "You're really the most frustrating person I know."\\
"I'm sorry?"\\
"Gott im Himmel." Asuka took a breath.
* CommonalityConnection: Shinji and Asuka's relationship starts deepening when they open up to each other about what to go into a volcano felt like.
* {{Doorstopper}}: The original story clocks at 115,236 words spread over 22 chapters. As of May 2020, it has been surpassed by the second version: 117,395 words spread over 26 chapters.
* DoWrongRight: Misato chides Shinji for drinking her wine ''and then'' putting the bottle back where she could find it instead of throwing it away.
-->'''Misato:''' "Where did my wine go?"\\
'''Shinji:''' "I'm sorry?"\\
'''Misato:''' "See this empty bottle and how it was stashed away back on the shelf? If you drank the stuff, why did you put the empty bottle back where I could find it?"\\
'''Shinji:''' I didn't--"\\
'''Misato:''' "Kiddo, I'm not angry. You don't have to lie. Throw that away when you get a chance."
* EatingTheEyeCandy: When Asuka stretches her back, Shinji stares at her exposed midriff long enough for Asuka noticing it.
-->Asuka leaned and stretched across the back of the chair, so that the bottom of her sweater nudged up and exposed her bare stomach. Shinji stared at it, a fact that Asuka knew only because she watched him to do it, which was of course the whole point of doing it.
* HeroesWantRedheads: Shinji is in love with his red-haired teammate.
* KissingUnderTheInfluence: In the fourth chapter, Asuka kisses Shinji after they have consumed one whole bottle of wine.
* NotAMorningPerson: Neither Shinji nor Asuka appreciate being woken up early every morning by the noise from the building works.
-->Asuka buried her face in the pillow and waited for the city quake to cease. She had half an intention to go back to sleep when it was over, though she knew that wouldn't be the case. She was awake now and the damage was done. Still, she waited until it was over to get up, just so the city wouldn't be the thing that got her up in the morning. She wouldn't give it the satisfaction.
* ObliviousToHints: Asuka does not get why Shinji will do nothing to her after they shared a hug, and it is driving her mad. Meanwhile, Shinji is absolutely clueless as to why she hugged him then and why she is now angry.
-->'''Misato:''' "Everyone has their problems, Shinji. Sometimes we need someone else to help us solve them."\\
'''Shinji:''' "That's what Asuka said."\\
'''Misato:''' "She said she needed help?"\\
'''Shinji:''' "No, I needed help. She came to me because I needed it. She saw me, uh..."\\
'''Misato:''' "Shaking?"\\
'''Shinji:''' "She saw me and sat down with me. I guess she thought she owed me for the volcano, so she sat there and helped me out."\\
'''Misato:''' "Oh, wow. You're so damn oblivious it hurts."
* RadishCure: Misato orders Asuka to smoke one cigarette she lifted out of Kaji's desk drawer. Asuka starts shuddering and coughing right away, and she stomps the cigarette out.
* ShipperOnDeck: After the mission in the volcano, Misato points to Asuka that Shinji also feels phantom pains after every mission as part of a scheme to put them together.
* ShutUpKiss: Asuka cuts Shinji off by covering his mouth with hers.
-->Shinji opened his mouth to respond, but he never got the chance. Asuka's lips were in the way, pressing into his, so that excuses and explanations died in their throats and nothing was left but the moment.
* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The story begins after the battle against Sandalphon and goes through each Angel in canonical order.
* ThroughHisStomach: Shinji starts cooking German foodstuff to make Asuka more friendly to him.
* WhatDoesSheSeeInHim: When Toji and Kensuke ask Shinji because he is trying to bond with Asuka, Shinji answers she is just like him. They do not get it.
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Shinji and Asuka learn about themselves and fall in love, causing massive ramifications.
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3043801/1/A-Glass-of-Wine The original story]] is unfortunately a dead fic due to the author's untimely death in 2009. Toasterman took it upon himself write [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10393227/1/A-Glass-of-Wine-Rebuilt a rebuilt version]] as both a tribute and a way to give closure to the original fanfiction and its author.
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!!Tropes:
* AffectionateGestureToTheHead: Misato reaches over and ruffles Shinji's hair when she finds out he cannot figure out why Asuka sat down with him and hugged him.
* AlternateUniverseFic: The story branches off continuity after the battle in the volcano, when Misato points out to Asuka that Shinji also feels phantom pains after each mission.
* ApologisesALot: Shinji manages to get Asuka annoyed as soon as the second scene when he apologizes for Misato's apartment lacking a couch, even though she was ''not'' blaming ''him'' for it.
-->"We need a couch," she told him. When he didn't respond, she went on. "Sitting on the floor all the time really bites."\\
"I'm sorry."\\
Asuka glared at him. It was the glare that always served as a harbinger for angry German-speak, and a glare he had learned well. "You're really the most frustrating person I know."\\
"I'm sorry?"\\
"Gott im Himmel." Asuka took a breath.
* CommonalityConnection: Shinji and Asuka's relationship starts deepening when they open up to each other about what to go into a volcano felt like.
* {{Doorstopper}}: The original story clocks at 115,236 words spread over 22 chapters. As of May 2020, it has been surpassed by the second version: 117,395 words spread over 26 chapters.
* DoWrongRight: Misato chides Shinji for drinking her wine ''and then'' putting the bottle back where she could find it instead of throwing it away.
-->'''Misato:''' "Where did my wine go?"\\
'''Shinji:''' "I'm sorry?"\\
'''Misato:''' "See this empty bottle and how it was stashed away back on the shelf? If you drank the stuff, why did you put the empty bottle back where I could find it?"\\
'''Shinji:''' I didn't--"\\
'''Misato:''' "Kiddo, I'm not angry. You don't have to lie. Throw that away when you get a chance."
* EatingTheEyeCandy: When Asuka stretches her back, Shinji stares at her exposed midriff long enough for Asuka noticing it.
-->Asuka leaned and stretched across the back of the chair, so that the bottom of her sweater nudged up and exposed her bare stomach. Shinji stared at it, a fact that Asuka knew only because she watched him to do it, which was of course the whole point of doing it.
* HeroesWantRedheads: Shinji is in love with his red-haired teammate.
* KissingUnderTheInfluence: In the fourth chapter, Asuka kisses Shinji after they have consumed one whole bottle of wine.
* NotAMorningPerson: Neither Shinji nor Asuka appreciate being woken up early every morning by the noise from the building works.
-->Asuka buried her face in the pillow and waited for the city quake to cease. She had half an intention to go back to sleep when it was over, though she knew that wouldn't be the case. She was awake now and the damage was done. Still, she waited until it was over to get up, just so the city wouldn't be the thing that got her up in the morning. She wouldn't give it the satisfaction.
* ObliviousToHints: Asuka does not get why Shinji will do nothing to her after they shared a hug, and it is driving her mad. Meanwhile, Shinji is absolutely clueless as to why she hugged him then and why she is now angry.
-->'''Misato:''' "Everyone has their problems, Shinji. Sometimes we need someone else to help us solve them."\\
'''Shinji:''' "That's what Asuka said."\\
'''Misato:''' "She said she needed help?"\\
'''Shinji:''' "No, I needed help. She came to me because I needed it. She saw me, uh..."\\
'''Misato:''' "Shaking?"\\
'''Shinji:''' "She saw me and sat down with me. I guess she thought she owed me for the volcano, so she sat there and helped me out."\\
'''Misato:''' "Oh, wow. You're so damn oblivious it hurts."
* RadishCure: Misato orders Asuka to smoke one cigarette she lifted out of Kaji's desk drawer. Asuka starts shuddering and coughing right away, and she stomps the cigarette out.
* ShipperOnDeck: After the mission in the volcano, Misato points to Asuka that Shinji also feels phantom pains after every mission as part of a scheme to put them together.
* ShutUpKiss: Asuka cuts Shinji off by covering his mouth with hers.
-->Shinji opened his mouth to respond, but he never got the chance. Asuka's lips were in the way, pressing into his, so that excuses and explanations died in their throats and nothing was left but the moment.
* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The story begins after the battle against Sandalphon and goes through each Angel in canonical order.
* ThroughHisStomach: Shinji starts cooking German foodstuff to make Asuka more friendly to him.
* WhatDoesSheSeeInHim: When Toji and Kensuke ask Shinji because he is trying to bond with Asuka, Shinji answers she is just like him. They do not get it.
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