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* OneSteveLimit: This version of Johan decides to call himself "Warlock", stating that the original Marvel-616 Warlock (a techno-organic alien) who first appeared in ''ComicBook/NewMutants'', will just have to come up with another name if he ever shows up.
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** While trying to come up with a codename for himself, Johan brainstorms "Deus Ex", but rejects it because [[Fanfic/AbsolutePowerSucksAbsolutely he thinks it might be taken already]].
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On October 2, 2023, Stranger has written ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-crooked-man-evolution-x-men-reality-warper-si.1119133/ A Crooked Man: Evolution]]'', a similar premise that sets in ''WesternAnimation/XMenEvolution''.
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On October 2, 2023, Stranger has written ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-crooked-man-evolution-x-men-reality-warper-si.1119133/ A Crooked Man: Evolution]]'', a similar premise that that's sets in ''WesternAnimation/XMenEvolution''.
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* FoodFight: Despite Johan changing certain events, a food fight still breaks out during the events of "Mutant Crush", just as it did in the original show, though this time it's started on purpose by Lance Alvers/Avalanche rather than a mistake by Fred Dukes/The Blob.
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** To access the Middleverse pocket dimension Forge is trapped in, Johan summons the magic door from ''VideoGame/SuperMarioBros2''.
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* YoungerAndHipper: Since this fic takes place in the world of ''WesternAnimation/XMenEvolution'', Johan is 16 years old when it starts, rather than his mid-30's like in the original.
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* SanityHasItsAdvantages: [[spoiler:When Johann is panicking about the Fury and brings up how it killed Mad Jim Jaspers, an even more powerful RealityWarper than him, Legion points out that Jim Jaspers was [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin mad]] and lost because he couldn't use his powers to their fullest potential. Johann and Legion on the other hand are perfectly sane and are able to figure out a way to kill The Fury]].
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* ShoutOut: Johann makes a [[{{WesternAnimation/Futurama}} mini fruit tree]].
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** Johann makes a [[{{WesternAnimation/Futurama}} mini fruittree]].tree]].
** Bored while waiting for Wolverine to arrange their first training session, Johan decides to re-enact the ''Weapon Of Choice'' video by ''Music/FatboySlim'', complete with dressing up and dancing like Creator/ChristopherWalken.
** Johann makes a [[{{WesternAnimation/Futurama}} mini fruit
** Bored while waiting for Wolverine to arrange their first training session, Johan decides to re-enact the ''Weapon Of Choice'' video by ''Music/FatboySlim'', complete with dressing up and dancing like Creator/ChristopherWalken.
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* BiggerOnTheInside: Johann claims the broom closet as his room and expanded its inside.
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* BiggerOnTheInside: Johann claims Rather than picking one of the empty rooms at the Xavier Mansion, Johan picks an unused broom closet as his room and expanded its inside. expands the interior into an entire dorm room, including a window.
* NoSelfBuffs: While he could theoretically change himself, and anyone else, any way he wants, Johan is too uncomfortable with the idea to go through with it at this point - most of his physical protection and improvements happen subconsciously, such as his immunity to harm, mind-reading, and rapid improvement from physical training.
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* TrainingFromHell: Johann goes through training drills under Wolverine. Unlike other kinds of damage, his powers do ''not'' protect him from the pain of intense excersize, they just help him recover and improve much faster.
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On October 2, 2023, Stranger has written ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-crooked-man-evolution-x-men-reality-warper-si.1119133/ A Crooked Man: Evolution]]'', a similar premise that sets in ''WesternAnimation/XMenEvolution''.
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* BiggerOnTheInside: Johann claims the broom closet as his room and expanded its inside.
* GoSeduceMyArchnemesis: Raven plans on using Rogue to seduce Johann in order to get him into the Brotherhood, much to Irene Adler's protests.
* ScrewDestiny: Johann's existence have completely thrown off Irene Adler's precognition and making her to see countless, different possible futures.
-->"A kaleidoscope. Johan Magnusson was a kaleidoscope of possible futures, endlessly fracturing into different patterns and configurations. And even with her power, Irene Adler, Destiny, couldn't tell which of them would eventually become set in stone."
* ShoutOut: Johann makes a [[{{WesternAnimation/Futurama}} mini fruit tree]].
* TrainingFromHell: Johann goes through training drills under Wolverine.
* TruthSerums: Johann uses his powers on Principal Darkholme to speak truthfully for five minutes, allowing him to learn from her that she intends on recruiting him and other mutants for the Brotherhood of Mutants.
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* BiggerOnTheInside: Johann claims the broom closet as his room and expanded its inside.
* GoSeduceMyArchnemesis: Raven plans on using Rogue to seduce Johann in order to get him into the Brotherhood, much to Irene Adler's protests.
* ScrewDestiny: Johann's existence have completely thrown off Irene Adler's precognition and making her to see countless, different possible futures.
-->"A kaleidoscope. Johan Magnusson was a kaleidoscope of possible futures, endlessly fracturing into different patterns and configurations. And even with her power, Irene Adler, Destiny, couldn't tell which of them would eventually become set in stone."
* ShoutOut: Johann makes a [[{{WesternAnimation/Futurama}} mini fruit tree]].
* TrainingFromHell: Johann goes through training drills under Wolverine.
* TruthSerums: Johann uses his powers on Principal Darkholme to speak truthfully for five minutes, allowing him to learn from her that she intends on recruiting him and other mutants for the Brotherhood of Mutants.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-crooked-man-marvel-si.759274/ A Crooked Man]]'' is a Creator/MarvelComics SelfInsert and AccusationFic written by Stranger. Inspired by the ''WesternAnimation/YoungJustice2010'' fanfic ''Fanfic/AbsolutePowerSucksAbsolutely'', the story follows Johann who is gifted with omnipotent powers and dropped into the post-[[ComicBook/CivilWar Civil War]] Marvel Universe.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-crooked-man-marvel-si.759274/ A Crooked Man]]'' is a Creator/MarvelComics SelfInsert and AccusationFic written by Stranger. Inspired by the ''WesternAnimation/YoungJustice2010'' fanfic ''Fanfic/AbsolutePowerSucksAbsolutely'', the story follows Johann who is gifted with omnipotent powers and dropped into the post-[[ComicBook/CivilWar Civil War]] post-ComicBook/{{Civil War|2006}} Marvel Universe.
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* BroughtDownToNormal: Johann depowers Kimura in which she [[VillainousBreakdown ''doesn't'' takes this too well]], causing her to remind of her old weak self.
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* BroughtDownToNormal: Johann depowers Kimura in which she [[VillainousBreakdown ''doesn't'' ''[[VillainousBreakdown really doesn't takes this too well]], well]]'', causing her to remind of her old weak self.
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* StrikeMeDownWithAllOfYourHatred: A depowered Red Skull has his neck under Steve Rogers' grip and, rather than begging for mercy, he goads Steve to kill him by reminding how he killed his unborn child and lover. Steve angrily chokes Schmidt for a moment but ultimately decide he is [[NotWorthKilling not worth killing]].
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* StrikeMeDownWithAllOfYourHatred: A depowered Red Skull has his neck under Steve Rogers' grip and, rather than begging for mercy, he goads tries to goad Steve to kill him by reminding how he killed his unborn child and lover. Steve angrily chokes Schmidt for a moment but ultimately decide he is [[NotWorthKilling not worth killing]].
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* StrikeMeDownWithAllOfYourHatred: A depowered Red Skull has his neck under Steve Rogers' grip and, rather than begging for mercy, he goads Steve to kill him by reminding how he killed his unborn child and lover. Steve angrily chokes Schmidt for a moment but ultimately decide he is [[NotWorthKilling not worth killing]].
