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* Children are referred to as "little ones."
** Drink twice if the author writes an irrelevant note about her own husband and "little ones."
* Someone remarks upon the [[AdorablyPrecociousChild wisdom of said "little ones."]]
* Snape's appearance or Hagrid's chest hair is described [[FanDisservice in disturbing detail.]]
** Drink twice if the author writes an irrelevant note about her own husband and "little ones."
* Someone remarks upon the [[AdorablyPrecociousChild wisdom of said "little ones."]]
* Snape's appearance or Hagrid's chest hair is described [[FanDisservice in disturbing detail.]]
to:
* Children are referred to as "little ones."
ones".
** Drink twice if the author writes an irrelevant note about her own husband and "littleones."
ones".
* Someone remarks upon the [[AdorablyPrecociousChild wisdom of said "littleones."]]
ones]]".
* Snape's appearance or Hagrid's chest hair is described [[FanDisservice in disturbingdetail.]]detail]].
** Drink twice if the author writes an irrelevant note about her own husband and "little
* Someone remarks upon the [[AdorablyPrecociousChild wisdom of said "little
* Snape's appearance or Hagrid's chest hair is described [[FanDisservice in disturbing
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* Someone mentions the [[AcceptableFeminineGoalsAndTraits numerous virtues of being a housewife and/or the evils of being a "career woman."]]
* Someone [[AsTheGoodBookSays quotes the Bible.]]
* Someone [[AsTheGoodBookSays quotes the Bible.]]
to:
* Someone mentions the [[AcceptableFeminineGoalsAndTraits numerous virtues of being a housewife and/or the evils of being a "career woman."]]
woman"]].
* Someone [[AsTheGoodBookSays quotes theBible.]]Bible]].
* Someone [[AsTheGoodBookSays quotes the
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* A pre-teen child [[KiddieKid acts far younger than their age.]]
* The author misuses a semicolon.
* The author misuses a semicolon.
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* A pre-teen child [[KiddieKid acts far younger than their age.]]
age]].
* The author misuses asemicolon.semicolon.
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* The author misuses a
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* [[PositiveDiscrimination Dean Thomas]] is specifically described as being articulate and not mispronouncing words, even though the author doesn't call attention to the grammar of any other characters.
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* [[PositiveDiscrimination Dean Thomas]] Thomas is specifically described as being articulate and not mispronouncing words, even though the author doesn't call attention to the grammar of any other characters.
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* Children are referred to as "little ones"
** Drink twice if the author writes an irrelevant note about her own husband and "little ones"
* Someone remarks upon the [[AdorablyPrecociousChild wisdom of said "little ones"]]
* Snape's appearance or Hagrid's chest hair is described [[FanDisservice in disturbing detail]]
* Someone prays for something and it immediately happens, as if prayers are instantaneous magic
* Someone prays for God to do something they easily could do themselves, like wash the dishes or open a door
* Someone falls victim to EasyEvangelism
* Someone mentions the [[AcceptableFeminineGoalsAndTraits numerous virtues of being a housewife and/or the evils of being a "career woman"]]
* Someone [[AsTheGoodBookSays quotes the Bible]]
** Drink twice if the person doing the quoting is Harry, who was raised in an atheist household and thus should not have Bible verses memorized by heart
* Characters who weren't related in canon are RelatedInTheAdaptation
* Mention is made of a girl looking pretty, yet modest
* PuppyLove between Harry and Hermione is hinted at
* [[PositiveDiscrimination Dean Thomas]] is specifically described as being articulate and not mispronouncing words, even though the author doesn't call attention to the grammar of any other characters
* A British thing, custom, or character is haphazardly replaced with an American Bible Belt thing, custom, or character
* An adult comes across as an unintentionally creepy MemeticMolester
* The author insults atheists
* The author insults non-Christians
* The author insults Catholics
* The author insults Protestants who aren't her specific denomination or sect
** Drink twice if the author writes an irrelevant note about her own husband and "little ones"
* Someone remarks upon the [[AdorablyPrecociousChild wisdom of said "little ones"]]
* Snape's appearance or Hagrid's chest hair is described [[FanDisservice in disturbing detail]]
* Someone prays for something and it immediately happens, as if prayers are instantaneous magic
* Someone prays for God to do something they easily could do themselves, like wash the dishes or open a door
* Someone falls victim to EasyEvangelism
* Someone mentions the [[AcceptableFeminineGoalsAndTraits numerous virtues of being a housewife and/or the evils of being a "career woman"]]
* Someone [[AsTheGoodBookSays quotes the Bible]]
** Drink twice if the person doing the quoting is Harry, who was raised in an atheist household and thus should not have Bible verses memorized by heart
* Characters who weren't related in canon are RelatedInTheAdaptation
* Mention is made of a girl looking pretty, yet modest
* PuppyLove between Harry and Hermione is hinted at
* [[PositiveDiscrimination Dean Thomas]] is specifically described as being articulate and not mispronouncing words, even though the author doesn't call attention to the grammar of any other characters
* A British thing, custom, or character is haphazardly replaced with an American Bible Belt thing, custom, or character
* An adult comes across as an unintentionally creepy MemeticMolester
* The author insults atheists
* The author insults non-Christians
* The author insults Catholics
* The author insults Protestants who aren't her specific denomination or sect
to:
* Children are referred to as "little ones"
ones."
** Drink twice if the author writes an irrelevant note about her own husband and "littleones"
ones."
* Someone remarks upon the [[AdorablyPrecociousChild wisdom of said "littleones"]]
ones."]]
* Snape's appearance or Hagrid's chest hair is described [[FanDisservice in disturbingdetail]]
detail.]]
* Someone prays for something and it immediately happens, as if prayers are instantaneousmagic
magic.
* Someone prays for God to do something they easily could do themselves, like wash the dishes or open adoor
door.
* Someone falls victim toEasyEvangelism
EasyEvangelism.
* Someone mentions the [[AcceptableFeminineGoalsAndTraits numerous virtues of being a housewife and/or the evils of being a "careerwoman"]]
woman."]]
* Someone [[AsTheGoodBookSays quotes theBible]]
Bible.]]
** Drink twice if the person doing the quoting is Harry, who was raised in an atheist household and thus should not have Bible verses memorized byheart
heart.
* Characters who weren't related in canon areRelatedInTheAdaptation
RelatedInTheAdaptation.
* Mention is made of a girl looking pretty, yetmodest
modest.
* PuppyLove between Harry and Hermione is hintedat
at.
* [[PositiveDiscrimination Dean Thomas]] is specifically described as being articulate and not mispronouncing words, even though the author doesn't call attention to the grammar of any othercharacters
characters.
* A British thing, custom, or character is haphazardly replaced with an American Bible Belt thing, custom, orcharacter
character.
* An adult comes across as an unintentionally creepyMemeticMolester
MemeticMolester.
* The author insultsatheists
atheists.
* The author insultsnon-Christians
non-Christians.
* The author insultsCatholics
Catholics.
* The author insults Protestants who aren't her specific denomination orsect
sect.
** Drink twice if the author writes an irrelevant note about her own husband and "little
* Someone remarks upon the [[AdorablyPrecociousChild wisdom of said "little
* Snape's appearance or Hagrid's chest hair is described [[FanDisservice in disturbing
* Someone prays for something and it immediately happens, as if prayers are instantaneous
* Someone prays for God to do something they easily could do themselves, like wash the dishes or open a
* Someone falls victim to
* Someone mentions the [[AcceptableFeminineGoalsAndTraits numerous virtues of being a housewife and/or the evils of being a "career
* Someone [[AsTheGoodBookSays quotes the
** Drink twice if the person doing the quoting is Harry, who was raised in an atheist household and thus should not have Bible verses memorized by
* Characters who weren't related in canon are
* Mention is made of a girl looking pretty, yet
* PuppyLove between Harry and Hermione is hinted
* [[PositiveDiscrimination Dean Thomas]] is specifically described as being articulate and not mispronouncing words, even though the author doesn't call attention to the grammar of any other
* A British thing, custom, or character is haphazardly replaced with an American Bible Belt thing, custom, or
* An adult comes across as an unintentionally creepy
* The author insults
* The author insults
* The author insults
* The author insults Protestants who aren't her specific denomination or
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* A canon character is massively OOC
* A "good guy" says or thinks something sexist/bigoted
* A pre-teen child [[KiddieKid acts far younger than their age]]
* The author misuses a semicolon
* A "good guy" says or thinks something sexist/bigoted
* A pre-teen child [[KiddieKid acts far younger than their age]]
* The author misuses a semicolon
to:
* A canon character is massively OOC
OOC.
* A "good guy" says or thinks somethingsexist/bigoted
sexist/bigoted.
* A pre-teen child [[KiddieKid acts far younger than theirage]]
age.]]
* The author misuses asemicolonsemicolon.
* A "good guy" says or thinks something
* A pre-teen child [[KiddieKid acts far younger than their
* The author misuses a
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!!Drink when:
* Children are referred to as "little ones"
** Drink twice if the author writes an irrelevant note about her own husband and "little ones"
* Someone remarks upon the [[AdorablyPrecociousChild wisdom of said "little ones"]]
* Snape's appearance or Hagrid's chest hair is described [[FanDisservice in disturbing detail]]
* Someone prays for something and it immediately happens, as if prayers are instantaneous magic
* Someone prays for God to do something they easily could do themselves, like wash the dishes or open a door
* Someone falls victim to EasyEvangelism
* Someone mentions the [[AcceptableFeminineGoalsAndTraits numerous virtues of being a housewife and/or the evils of being a "career woman"]]
* Someone [[AsTheGoodBookSays quotes the Bible]]
** Drink twice if the person doing the quoting is Harry, who was raised in an atheist household and thus should not have Bible verses memorized by heart
* Characters who weren't related in canon are RelatedInTheAdaptation
* Mention is made of a girl looking pretty, yet modest
* PuppyLove between Harry and Hermione is hinted at
* [[PositiveDiscrimination Dean Thomas]] is specifically described as being articulate and not mispronouncing words, even though the author doesn't call attention to the grammar of any other characters
* A British thing, custom, or character is haphazardly replaced with an American Bible Belt thing, custom, or character
* An adult comes across as an unintentionally creepy MemeticMolester
* The author insults atheists
* The author insults non-Christians
* The author insults Catholics
* The author insults Protestants who aren't her specific denomination or sect
!!Alcohol Poisoning Version:
Drink for all of the above, plus when:
* A canon character is massively OOC
* A "good guy" says or thinks something sexist/bigoted
* A pre-teen child [[KiddieKid acts far younger than their age]]
* The author misuses a semicolon
* Children are referred to as "little ones"
** Drink twice if the author writes an irrelevant note about her own husband and "little ones"
* Someone remarks upon the [[AdorablyPrecociousChild wisdom of said "little ones"]]
* Snape's appearance or Hagrid's chest hair is described [[FanDisservice in disturbing detail]]
* Someone prays for something and it immediately happens, as if prayers are instantaneous magic
* Someone prays for God to do something they easily could do themselves, like wash the dishes or open a door
* Someone falls victim to EasyEvangelism
* Someone mentions the [[AcceptableFeminineGoalsAndTraits numerous virtues of being a housewife and/or the evils of being a "career woman"]]
* Someone [[AsTheGoodBookSays quotes the Bible]]
** Drink twice if the person doing the quoting is Harry, who was raised in an atheist household and thus should not have Bible verses memorized by heart
* Characters who weren't related in canon are RelatedInTheAdaptation
* Mention is made of a girl looking pretty, yet modest
* PuppyLove between Harry and Hermione is hinted at
* [[PositiveDiscrimination Dean Thomas]] is specifically described as being articulate and not mispronouncing words, even though the author doesn't call attention to the grammar of any other characters
* A British thing, custom, or character is haphazardly replaced with an American Bible Belt thing, custom, or character
* An adult comes across as an unintentionally creepy MemeticMolester
* The author insults atheists
* The author insults non-Christians
* The author insults Catholics
* The author insults Protestants who aren't her specific denomination or sect
!!Alcohol Poisoning Version:
Drink for all of the above, plus when:
* A canon character is massively OOC
* A "good guy" says or thinks something sexist/bigoted
* A pre-teen child [[KiddieKid acts far younger than their age]]
* The author misuses a semicolon
