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%%* {{Ditz}}: TheDitz: Jessica.
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%%* CoolLoser: Jenny.
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* StudentCouncilPresident: Obviously.
* EatingLunchAlone: What Becky does every day for most of the story.
* DramaClub: Bobby is a member. Jenny joins towards the end of the story.
* EatingLunchAlone: What Becky does every day for most of the story.
* DramaClub: Bobby is a member. Jenny joins towards the end of the story.
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* BeautifulAllAlong: Jenny.
* {{Bookworm}}: Becky. Jenny somewhat.
* BreakTheHaughty: Becky and Lizzy.
* Cloudcuckoolander: Becky.
* CoolLoser: Jenny.
* FriendlessBackground: Becky.
* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Between Becky and Jessica.
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: Becky and Lizzy.
* IntelligenceEqualsIsolation: Becky.
* KidsAreCruel: Lizzy, Kyle, Jessica and others to Becky, Jenny and others.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness
* PlainJane: Jenny.
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: Becky.
* {{Bookworm}}: Becky. Jenny somewhat.
* BreakTheHaughty: Becky and Lizzy.
* Cloudcuckoolander: Becky.
* CoolLoser: Jenny.
* FriendlessBackground: Becky.
* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Between Becky and Jessica.
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: Becky and Lizzy.
* IntelligenceEqualsIsolation: Becky.
* KidsAreCruel: Lizzy, Kyle, Jessica and others to Becky, Jenny and others.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness
* PlainJane: Jenny.
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: Becky.
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* {{Ditz}}: Jessica.
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* InsufferableGenius: Becky.
* NoSocialSkills: Becky.
* SmittenTeenageGirl: Jessica, Mary and Lizzy.
* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Jessica sees Becky this way.
* UnreliableNarrator
* TheQuietOne: Jenny.
* OnlySaneMan: Every character sees themselves as this. Bobby is the only one who could actually fit.
* SiblingYinYang: Becky and Jessica.
* SoapBoxSadie: Jenny, sometimes Becky.
* TeenGenius: Becky.
* ValleyGirl: Jessica, Mary, Lizzy
* GirlNextDoor: Jenny. Bobby is the male equivalent.
* NoSocialSkills: Becky.
* SmittenTeenageGirl: Jessica, Mary and Lizzy.
* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Jessica sees Becky this way.
* UnreliableNarrator
* TheQuietOne: Jenny.
* OnlySaneMan: Every character sees themselves as this. Bobby is the only one who could actually fit.
* SiblingYinYang: Becky and Jessica.
* SoapBoxSadie: Jenny, sometimes Becky.
* TeenGenius: Becky.
* ValleyGirl: Jessica, Mary, Lizzy
* GirlNextDoor: Jenny. Bobby is the male equivalent.
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* SingleGirlSeeksMostPopularGuy: Jessica and Lizzy.
* AllGuysWantCheerleaders: Kyle.
* AllGuysWantCheerleaders: Kyle.
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* TheCheerleader: Lizzy. Jessica and Mary have tried out but didn't make it.
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{{Imagined Love Triangle}}--Bobby and Jenny like each other, but both think Becky also likes Bobby. She doesn't.
{{Love Triangle}}--One of these between Jessica, Lizzy and Kyle ended Jessica and Lizzy's friendship.
{{Student Council President}}--obviously.
{{Eating Lunch Alone}}--What Becky does every day for most of the story.
{{Drama Club}}--Bobby is a member. Jenny joins towards the end of the story.
{{The Cheerleader}}--Lizzy. Jessica and Mary have tried out but didn't make it.
{{All Elections Are Serious Business}}--Subverted: Becky thinks so, as does Jenny to an extent. They're the only ones, though.
{{Beautiful All Along}}--Jenny.
{{Bookworm}}--Becky. Jenny somewhat.
{{Break the Haughty}}--Becky and Lizzy.
{{Cloudcuckoolander}}--Becky.
{{Cool Loser}}--Jenny.
{{Friendless Background}}--Becky.
{{The Glorious War of Sisterly Rivalry}}--between Becky and Jessica.
{{Inferiority Superiority Complex}}--Becky and Lizzy.
{{Intelligence Equals Isolation}}--Becky.
{{Kids Are Cruel}}--Lizzy, Kyle, Jessica and others to Becky, Jenny and others.
{{OOC Is Serious Business}}
{{Plain Jane}}--Jenny.
{{Sesquipedalian Loquaciousness}}--Becky.
{{Smarter Than You Look}}--Mary. She talks like a valley girl and is somewhat boy crazy, and basically seems like just another popular-girl wannabe like Jessica. However, Mary is in various honors classes and wants to become a lawyer.
{{Ditz}}--Jessica.
{{Ineffectual Loner}}--Becky's lack of social skills and unpopularity prevent her from ever having a chance in the school election.
{{Insufferable Genius}}--Becky.
{{No Social Skills}}--Becky.
{{Smitten Teenage Girl}}--Jessica, Mary and Lizzy.
{{Annoying Younger Sibling}}--Jessica sees Becky this way.
{{Unreliable Narrator}}
{{The Quiet One}}--Jenny.
{{Only Sane Man}}--Every character sees themselves as this. Bobby is the only one who could actually fit.
{{Sibling Ying Yang}}--Becky and Jessica.
{{Soap Box Sadie}}--Jenny, sometimes Becky.
{{Teen Genius}}--Becky.
{{Valley Girl}}--Jessica, Mary, Lizzy
{{Girl Next Door}}--Jenny. Bobby is the male equivalent.
{{Dork Horse Candidate}}--Becky, though she is very smart. She doesn't win, though--but neither does the person everyone expects to.
{{I Should Write a Book About This}}--Becky is trying to write a book about high school from a genius's perspective. The whole thing starts because she realizes she can't have a book about high school without anything about student government (which she thinks of as having a lot more power than it actually does).
{{Single Girl Seeks Most Popular Guy}}--Jessica and Lizzy.
{{All Guys Want Cheerleaders}}--Kyle.
{{Love Triangle}}--One of these between Jessica, Lizzy and Kyle ended Jessica and Lizzy's friendship.
{{Student Council President}}--obviously.
{{Eating Lunch Alone}}--What Becky does every day for most of the story.
{{Drama Club}}--Bobby is a member. Jenny joins towards the end of the story.
{{The Cheerleader}}--Lizzy. Jessica and Mary have tried out but didn't make it.
{{All Elections Are Serious Business}}--Subverted: Becky thinks so, as does Jenny to an extent. They're the only ones, though.
{{Beautiful All Along}}--Jenny.
{{Bookworm}}--Becky. Jenny somewhat.
{{Break the Haughty}}--Becky and Lizzy.
{{Cloudcuckoolander}}--Becky.
{{Cool Loser}}--Jenny.
{{Friendless Background}}--Becky.
{{The Glorious War of Sisterly Rivalry}}--between Becky and Jessica.
{{Inferiority Superiority Complex}}--Becky and Lizzy.
{{Intelligence Equals Isolation}}--Becky.
{{Kids Are Cruel}}--Lizzy, Kyle, Jessica and others to Becky, Jenny and others.
{{OOC Is Serious Business}}
{{Plain Jane}}--Jenny.
{{Sesquipedalian Loquaciousness}}--Becky.
{{Smarter Than You Look}}--Mary. She talks like a valley girl and is somewhat boy crazy, and basically seems like just another popular-girl wannabe like Jessica. However, Mary is in various honors classes and wants to become a lawyer.
{{Ditz}}--Jessica.
{{Ineffectual Loner}}--Becky's lack of social skills and unpopularity prevent her from ever having a chance in the school election.
{{Insufferable Genius}}--Becky.
{{No Social Skills}}--Becky.
{{Smitten Teenage Girl}}--Jessica, Mary and Lizzy.
{{Annoying Younger Sibling}}--Jessica sees Becky this way.
{{Unreliable Narrator}}
{{The Quiet One}}--Jenny.
{{Only Sane Man}}--Every character sees themselves as this. Bobby is the only one who could actually fit.
{{Sibling Ying Yang}}--Becky and Jessica.
{{Soap Box Sadie}}--Jenny, sometimes Becky.
{{Teen Genius}}--Becky.
{{Valley Girl}}--Jessica, Mary, Lizzy
{{Girl Next Door}}--Jenny. Bobby is the male equivalent.
{{Dork Horse Candidate}}--Becky, though she is very smart. She doesn't win, though--but neither does the person everyone expects to.
{{I Should Write a Book About This}}--Becky is trying to write a book about high school from a genius's perspective. The whole thing starts because she realizes she can't have a book about high school without anything about student government (which she thinks of as having a lot more power than it actually does).
{{Single Girl Seeks Most Popular Guy}}--Jessica and Lizzy.
{{All Guys Want Cheerleaders}}--Kyle.
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{{Love Triangle}}--One
* LoveTriangle: One of these between Jessica, Lizzy and Kyle ended Jessica and Lizzy's
{{Student Council President}}--obviously.
{{Eating Lunch Alone}}--What
* StudentCouncilPresident: Obviously.
* EatingLunchAlone: What Becky does every day for most of the
{{Drama Club}}--Bobby
* DramaClub: Bobby is a member. Jenny joins towards the end of the story.
* TheCheerleader: Lizzy. Jessica and Mary have tried out but didn't make it.
* AllElectionsAreSeriousBusiness: Subverted: Becky thinks so, as does Jenny to an extent. They're the only ones,
{{Beautiful All Along}}--Jenny.
{{Bookworm}}--Becky.
* BeautifulAllAlong: Jenny.
* {{Bookworm}}: Becky. Jenny
{{Break the Haughty}}--Becky and Lizzy.
{{Cloudcuckoolander}}--Becky.
{{Cool Loser}}--Jenny.
{{Friendless Background}}--Becky.
{{The Glorious War of Sisterly Rivalry}}--between
* BreakTheHaughty: Becky and
{{Inferiority Superiority Complex}}--Becky
* Cloudcuckoolander: Becky.
* CoolLoser: Jenny.
* FriendlessBackground: Becky.
* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry: Between Becky and
{{Intelligence Equals Isolation}}--Becky.
{{Kids Are Cruel}}--Lizzy,
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: Becky and Lizzy.
* IntelligenceEqualsIsolation: Becky.
* KidsAreCruel: Lizzy, Kyle, Jessica and others to Becky, Jenny and
{{OOC Is Serious Business}}
{{Plain Jane}}--Jenny.
{{Sesquipedalian Loquaciousness}}--Becky.
{{Smarter Than You Look}}--Mary.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness
* PlainJane: Jenny.
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: Becky.
* SmarterThanYouLook: Mary. She talks like a valley girl and is somewhat boy crazy, and basically seems like just another popular-girl wannabe like Jessica. However, Mary is in various honors classes and wants to become a
{{Ditz}}--Jessica.
{{Ineffectual Loner}}--Becky's
* {{Ditz}}: Jessica.
* IneffectualLoner: Becky's lack of social skills and unpopularity prevent her from ever having a chance in the school
{{Insufferable Genius}}--Becky.
{{No Social Skills}}--Becky.
{{Smitten Teenage Girl}}--Jessica,
* InsufferableGenius: Becky.
* NoSocialSkills: Becky.
* SmittenTeenageGirl: Jessica, Mary and
{{Annoying Younger Sibling}}--Jessica
* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Jessica sees Becky this
{{Unreliable Narrator}}
{{The Quiet One}}--Jenny.
{{Only Sane Man}}--Every
* UnreliableNarrator
* TheQuietOne: Jenny.
* OnlySaneMan: Every character sees themselves as this. Bobby is the only one who could actually
{{Sibling Ying Yang}}--Becky
* SiblingYinYang: Becky and
{{Soap Box Sadie}}--Jenny,
* SoapBoxSadie: Jenny, sometimes
{{Teen Genius}}--Becky.
{{Valley Girl}}--Jessica,
* TeenGenius: Becky.
* ValleyGirl: Jessica, Mary,
{{Girl Next Door}}--Jenny.
* GirlNextDoor: Jenny. Bobby is the male
{{Dork Horse Candidate}}--Becky,
* DorkHorseCandidate: Becky, though she is very smart. She doesn't win, though--but neither does the person everyone expects
{{I Should Write a Book About This}}--Becky
* IShouldWriteABookAboutThis: Becky is trying to write a book about high school from a genius's perspective. The whole thing starts because she realizes she can't have a book about high school without anything about student government (which she thinks of as having a lot more power than it actually
{{Single Girl Seeks Most Popular Guy}}--Jessica
* SingleGirlSeeksMostPopularGuy: Jessica and
{{All Guys Want Cheerleaders}}--Kyle.
* AllGuysWantCheerleaders: Kyle.
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{{Pitying Perversion}}--Becky to people who aren't as smart as she is. Lizzy to people who aren't popular like she is.
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A {{Teen Genius}} named Becky decides to run for student body president of her high school, thinking it would be common sense to vote for the smartest candidate. She soon learns the world doesn't work that way. Running against her are {{The Libby}} Lizzy (who used to be best friends with Becky's sister), and {{The Quiet One}} Jenny. Who will win? What will they do to get there? Will anyone fall in love with anyone else on the way? What will they learn by the end?
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A {{Teen Genius}} named Becky decides to run for student body president of her high school, thinking it would be common sense to vote for the smartest candidate. She soon learns the world doesn't work that way. Running against her are {{The Libby}} the AlphaBitch Lizzy (who used to be best friends with Becky's sister), and {{The Quiet One}} Jenny. Who will win? What will they do to get there? Will anyone fall in love with anyone else on the way? What will they learn by the end?