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->These are my frends, we all has cool niknames they are: Scot, Spy, Solder, Medik, Sniper, Demonman, Piro an Ingineer.
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->I am CAVE JONSON who is GABE JONSONS more evil twin!
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->We ran lick I did in Meet the Scot an jumped over other pepole but then somethin stoped us dead in are tracks it was… PRINSIPAL GLADOS!
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->I'm [=MarrissaTheWriter=] and I wroted sum relay good stories they are:
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->WASSUP G'S? It's ya boy, Logic!
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->Why cant I jus be a normal girl going to high school an have a boyfriend that isn’t space lost!
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->Silly CHELLGADOS you cannt hurt me becos… IVE GOT BALLS OF STEEL!
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->No im diffrent! I am Oracle Turrent an I no how to make Marrissa alife!
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->YOU STOPED MY SEWISED MARISSA ROBERTS THAT WAS NOT NISE!
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->'''Marrissa:''' My hose blowed up cold I stay with wonna you?
->'''Caroline:''' OK we can be lick sisters!
->'''Caroline:''' OK we can be lick sisters!
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!Cameos
* [[HalfLife Gordon Freeman and his wife Alex What Ever]] are seen during Marrissa's and Assirram's final fight.
* The zombies from Franchise/DeadSpace appear briefly to eat up the remains of [=GLaDOS=].
* In the final chapter, HulkHogan, [[HomestarRunner Strong Bad]] and [[ProfessionalWrestling the other wrestlers]] randomly appear during the final battle "for backup".
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* [[HalfLife Gordon Freeman and his wife Alex What Ever]] are seen during Marrissa's and Assirram's final fight.
* The zombies from Franchise/DeadSpace appear briefly to eat up the remains of [=GLaDOS=].
* In the final chapter, HulkHogan, [[HomestarRunner Strong Bad]] and [[ProfessionalWrestling the other wrestlers]] randomly appear during the final battle "for backup".
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* The zombies from Franchise/DeadSpace appear briefly to eat up the remains of [=GLaDOS=].
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!!Critics United
A group of "law enforcers" of [=FanFiction.Net=], who removed ITS MY LIFE! from the site. They are getting a cameo in THE MARRISSA GAMES.
A group of "law enforcers" of [=FanFiction.Net=], who removed ITS MY LIFE! from the site. They are getting a cameo in THE MARRISSA GAMES.
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* BetterThanCanon - This is his intention. [[YourMileageMayVary You decide]] if it is really better or not.
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* BetterThanCanon - This is his intention. [[YourMileageMayVary You decide]] if it is really better or not.
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* The zombies from DeadSpace appear briefly to eat up the remains of [=GLaDOS=].
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* The zombies from DeadSpace Franchise/DeadSpace appear briefly to eat up the remains of [=GLaDOS=].
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* SockPuppet - Of SueMary.
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* SockPuppet - Of SueMary.
Creator/SueMary.
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This group, according to Marrissa herself, comprises of [=ASBusinessMagnet=] with a [[SweetBroAndHellaJeff satirical comic series]] ''[[http://www.xn--portal-4-asis-tkstantmetis-zgf.lt/mediawiki/index.php/Sweet_Chell_and_Hella_Marrissa Sweet Chell and Hella Marrissa]]'', "Not" Cat Bountry with the DramaticReading and Selphuerel, who has done nothing other than praising the story with the reviews. (Though, Cat Bouncy recently has quit praising the story, and is not reading TEEN FORTRESS 2.) Among the other notable fans of the story is also Arrow-Awesome with [[RecursiveFanfiction two fan stories]] ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7187436/1/MarissaxChell MarissaxChell]]'' and ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7402781/1/Portla_3 Portla 3]]''.
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This group, according to Marrissa herself, comprises of [=ASBusinessMagnet=] with a [[SweetBroAndHellaJeff satirical comic series]] ''[[http://www.xn--portal-4-asis-tkstantmetis-zgf.lt/mediawiki/index.php/Sweet_Chell_and_Hella_Marrissa Sweet Chell and Hella Marrissa]]'', Marrissa]]'' and, way later, a followup trollfic he refers to as ''[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f2-6gM-bSu2gyHQnFzg6ZybsgPXVCvh0TdhkssXFWzY/edit Portal: The 4th Millennium: The Trollfic Edition]]'', "Not" Cat Bountry with the DramaticReading and Selphuerel, who has done nothing other than praising the story with the reviews. (Though, Cat Bouncy recently has quit praising the story, and is not reading TEEN FORTRESS 2.) Among the other notable fans of the story is also Arrow-Awesome with [[RecursiveFanfiction two fan stories]] ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7187436/1/MarissaxChell MarissaxChell]]'' and ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7402781/1/Portla_3 Portla 3]]''.
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Its not about that kind of impossible.
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A fairly knowledgeable self-aware turrent, Oracle Turrent knows of Marrissa's speshul powers and aids Wheatly in Marrissa's ressurekshun. He then appears once more to get Marrissa and Wheatly merried, but beyond that doesn't play a big role in things.
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* BeyondTheImpossible:
-->I didn’t know it was possible to get the frickin’ ''oracle turret'' out of character, but congrats, author.
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A fairly knowledgeable self-aware turrent, Oracle Turrent knows of Marrissa's speshul powers and aids Wheatly in Marrissa's ressurekshun. He then appears once more to get Marrissa and Wheatly merried, married, but beyond that doesn't play a big role in things.
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* BeyondTheImpossible:
-->I didn’t know it was possible to get the frickin’ ''oracle turret'' out of character, but congrats, author.
things.
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* BeyondTheImpossible:
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* TheMole - Even though he's "working for" Marrissa, he let slip his Skepkitty fandom while beta-reading Chapter 9. He even wrote chatting with Skep (who is really a bully) into the chapter.
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* TheMole - Even though he's "working for" Marrissa, he let slip his Skepkitty fandom while beta-reading Chapter 9. He even wrote chatting with Skep (who is really turned out to be a bully) bully further in the original story) into the chapter.
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Marrissa's beta reader. He has currently beta-read Chapters 7 to 9 of TEEN FORTRESS 2, and was working on an M-rated "better" version of ITS MY LIFE!. However, Marrissa disliked what Logic did to her story, and Logic himself has disappeared off the Internet. He did make a return [[http://theskepkitty.wordpress.com/2012/01/14/a-little-announcement-not-very-blog-related/#comment-3717 here]], but we're not sure it's really him. He was a cool editor, though.
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Marrissa's beta reader. He has currently beta-read Chapters 7 to 9 of TEEN FORTRESS 2, and was working on an M-rated "better" version of ITS MY LIFE!. However, Marrissa disliked what Logic did to her story, and Logic himself has had disappeared off the Internet. He did make a return, and became a Homestuck fan, but it is unlikely he will return [[http://theskepkitty.wordpress.com/2012/01/14/a-little-announcement-not-very-blog-related/#comment-3717 here]], but we're not sure it's really him.to beta-reading. He was a cool editor, though.
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* ADayInTheLimelight - Two chapters of ITS MY LIFE! and one of TEEN FORTRESS 2 are written from Wheelty's POV, but that should not be taken as a sign of good writing: (From TheHalfWorld [=MSTing=])
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* ADayInTheLimelight - ADayInTheLimelight: Two chapters of ITS MY LIFE! and one of TEEN FORTRESS 2 are written from Wheelty's POV, but that should not be taken as a sign of good writing: (From TheHalfWorld [=MSTing=])
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* DrugsAreBad - A living example.
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* MagicalAbortion - How do you have an abortion when you're in Portal Labs anyway?
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* DrugsAreBad - DrugsAreBad: A living example.
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* ThisIsForEmphasisBitch: Atlas Used in his introductory line. "Hi almost all of their lines. ("Hi bitch we are here to test you."")
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This group, according to Marrissa herself, comprises of [=ASBusinessMagnet=] with a satirical comic series ''[[http://portal-the-4th-millennium.wikia.com/wiki/Sweet_Chell_and_Hella_Marrissa Sweet Chell and Hella Marrissa]]'', "Not" Cat Bountry with the DramaticReading and Selphuerel, who has done nothing other than praising the story with the reviews. (Though, Cat Bouncy recently has quit praising the story, and is not reading TEEN FORTRESS 2.) Among the other notable fans of the story is also Arrow-Awesome with [[RecursiveFanfiction two fan stories]] ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7187436/1/MarissaxChell MarissaxChell]]'' and ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7402781/1/Portla_3 Portla 3]]''.
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This group, according to Marrissa herself, comprises of [=ASBusinessMagnet=] with a [[SweetBroAndHellaJeff satirical comic series ''[[http://portal-the-4th-millennium.wikia.com/wiki/Sweet_Chell_and_Hella_Marrissa series]] ''[[http://www.xn--portal-4-asis-tkstantmetis-zgf.lt/mediawiki/index.php/Sweet_Chell_and_Hella_Marrissa Sweet Chell and Hella Marrissa]]'', "Not" Cat Bountry with the DramaticReading and Selphuerel, who has done nothing other than praising the story with the reviews. (Though, Cat Bouncy recently has quit praising the story, and is not reading TEEN FORTRESS 2.) Among the other notable fans of the story is also Arrow-Awesome with [[RecursiveFanfiction two fan stories]] ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7187436/1/MarissaxChell MarissaxChell]]'' and ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7402781/1/Portla_3 Portla 3]]''.
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Marrissa's beta reader. He has currently beta-read Chapters 7 to 9 of TEEN FORTRESS 2, and was working on an M-rated "better" version of ITS MY LIFE!. However, Marrissa disliked what Logic did to her story, and Logic himself has disappeared off the Internet. He did make a return, but hasn't updated his editions as of this time.
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Marrissa's beta reader. He has currently beta-read Chapters 7 to 9 of TEEN FORTRESS 2, and was working on an M-rated "better" version of ITS MY LIFE!. However, Marrissa disliked what Logic did to her story, and Logic himself has disappeared off the Internet. He did make a return, return [[http://theskepkitty.wordpress.com/2012/01/14/a-little-announcement-not-very-blog-related/#comment-3717 here]], but hasn't updated his editions as of this time.
we're not sure it's really him. He was a cool editor, though.
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Marrissa's beta reader. He has currently beta-read Chapters 7 to 9 of TEEN FORTRESS 2, and is currently working on an M-rated "better" version of ITS MY LIFE!. However, Marrissa dislikes what Logic did to her story, and Logic himself has disappeared off the Internet.
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Marrissa's beta reader. He has currently beta-read Chapters 7 to 9 of TEEN FORTRESS 2, and is currently was working on an M-rated "better" version of ITS MY LIFE!. However, Marrissa dislikes disliked what Logic did to her story, and Logic himself has disappeared off the Internet.
Internet. He did make a return, but hasn't updated his editions as of this time.
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After the senior graduations, one "Bluman" recruited them and they became known as "Team Fortress 2". His brother Redman cloned them and made his own Team Fortress 2 as well.
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Gabe Jonson's friends at the senior grade of Portal High School, they really are nothing more than a team of nine characters (however, it is never mentioned if they are RED or BLU) from ''Team Fortress 2''. They are able to fight on their own, and are fairly smart.
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Gabe Jonson's friends at the senior grade of Portal High School, they really are nothing more than a team of nine characters (however, it is never mentioned if they are RED or BLU) BLU [[spoiler:until the end, when "Bluman" recruits them and "Redman" makes their clones]]) from ''Team Fortress 2''. They are able to fight on their own, and are fairly smart.
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Pyro is called the second most important class of TF2, and is Scout's girlfriend.
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Pyro is called the second most important class of TF2, [=TF2=], and is Scout's girlfriend.
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Marrissa's beta reader. He has currently beta-read Chapters 7 to 9 of TEEN FORTRESS 2, and is currently working on an M-rated "better" version of ITS MY LIFE!. However, Marrissa dislikes what Logic did to her story, and last time she told him "=(".
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Marrissa's beta reader. He has currently beta-read Chapters 7 to 9 of TEEN FORTRESS 2, and is currently working on an M-rated "better" version of ITS MY LIFE!. However, Marrissa dislikes what Logic did to her story, and last time she told him "=(".
Logic himself has disappeared off the Internet.
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* SockPuppet - Of SueMary.
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Marrissa's beta reader. He has currently beta-read Chapters 7 to 9 of TEEN FORTRESS 2, and is currently working on an M-rated "better" version of ITS MY LIFE!. However, Marrissa dislikes what Logic did to her story, and last time she told him he is on "thin ise".
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Marrissa's beta reader. He has currently beta-read Chapters 7 to 9 of TEEN FORTRESS 2, and is currently working on an M-rated "better" version of ITS MY LIFE!. However, Marrissa dislikes what Logic did to her story, and last time she told him he is on "thin ise".
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These reviewers are the [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Men]] within this whole mess, and, [[CaptainObvious obviously]], are being of a bad opinion about the fic. Notable members are {{Tropers/Skepkitty}} of TheHalfWorld, Alcoremortis and Ringmaster of Telltale Fanfic Theater 3000 and the other [=MSTers=].
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These reviewers are the [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Men]] within this whole mess, and, [[CaptainObvious obviously]], are being of a bad opinion about the fic. Notable members people belonging to this faction are {{Tropers/Skepkitty}} of TheHalfWorld, Alcoremortis and Ringmaster the members of Telltale Fanfic Theater 3000 TelltaleFanficTheater3000 and the other [=MSTers=].
[=MSTers=], as well as bad reviewers.