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* DarkIsNotEvil: They look like demonic shadows, but don't cause any trouble (apart from making Crim sick by their mere presence) and behave just like any other customers when they visit the tavern, including feeling just as awkward after Crim causally shakes the foundations of the surface world's faith during the New Year's prayer.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: They look like demonic shadows, but don't cause any trouble (apart from making Crim sick by their mere presence) and behave just like any other customers when they visit the tavern, including feeling just as awkward after Crim causally casually shakes the foundations of the surface world's faith during the New Year's prayer.
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* MeaningfulName: "Duodectet" comes from the Latin word for "twelve", and chapter 44 reveals she's the twelfth in The Witch of Inheritance line, who possess the ability to pass all their accumlutated knowledge and skills to a single successor once in their lifetime.
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* MeaningfulName: "Duodectet" comes from the Latin word for "twelve", and chapter 44 reveals she's the twelfth in The Witch of Inheritance line, who possess the ability to pass all their accumlutated accumulated knowledge and skills to a single successor once in their lifetime.
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* TheRuleOfFirstAdopters: Like Demia most of her research efforts are for degenerate purposes. Unlike Demia she seems to enjoy it and enthusiastically tests her sex puppets personally unlike Demia who [[OnlyInItForTheMoney only in the sex doll/succu-shops industry for the money]].
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* TheRuleOfFirstAdopters: Like Demia most of her research efforts are for degenerate purposes. Unlike Demia she seems to enjoy it and enthusiastically tests her sex puppets personally unlike Demia who [[OnlyInItForTheMoney is only in the sex doll/succu-shops industry for the money]].
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* OurOrcsAreDifferent: They're a horde of large lustful pigmen.
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* OurOrcsAreDifferent: They're a horde of large lustful pigmen.pigmen, and sate their lust by challenging the lilims to contests of sexual endurance, given their request for a rematch when they show up just in time to save the Reviewers from being snu-snu'd.
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Editing like this has long fallen out of style, someone need to brush up on the standards of the past half-decade. And regardless, Zero Context Examples were never acceptable, and "N" comes after "M" in the English alphabet. Also removing inaccuracy, the "feeling of a long hiatus" still comes from memory manipulation, it does not involve "sense of time".
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Runs the ''House of Oblivion'' and ''House of Reunion'' which both affect customer's memories or sense of time. They allow customers to experience losing their virginity for the first time or having sex after a long hiatus respectively.
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Runs the ''House House of Oblivion'' Oblivion and ''House House of Reunion'' Reunion which both affect customer's memories or sense of time.memories. They allow customers to experience losing their virginity for the first time or having sex after a long hiatus respectively.
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* {{Hot Witch}}
* {{Never Bare Headed}} - In sharp contrast to the rest of her clothes, she's never seen not wearing her Witch hat.
* {{Miss Kitty}} - Runs the ''House of Oblivion'' and ''House of Reunion'' but also doesn't hesitate to service customers herself.
* {{Robe and Wizard Hat}} - With a very generous interpretation of "robe"
* {{The Rule Of First Adopters}} - Although her shop started as a succu-joint she plans to branch out to a wider customer base (such as allowing people to read their favorite book repeatedly for the first time) once Demia wins the mayorship of Magic Town and thus access to a large supply of mana.
* {{Stripperiffic}} - Her outfit is comprised of a Witch hat, a thong and a couple of strips of cloth to cover her nipples. Sometimes she goes without the strips of cloth.
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!!!Adventurers
[[folder:Taiga]]
[[quoteright:307:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/taiga.PNG]]
[[caption-width-right:307:Waiting on his Wedding Miracle with his beloved.]]
A friend of the Reviewers who finds himself falling in love with a salamander girl after saving her from falling into a lake. In chapter 28 he asks Stunk and company to escort him to Flaspa Cathedral for their wedding ceremony. Though their relationship gets off to a rocky start due to his partner's intense body heat, he is eventually made immune to her flames via a special wedding ritual.
[[folder:Taiga]]
[[quoteright:307:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/taiga.PNG]]
[[caption-width-right:307:Waiting on his Wedding Miracle with his beloved.]]
A friend of the Reviewers who finds himself falling in love with a salamander girl after saving her from falling into a lake. In chapter 28 he asks Stunk and company to escort him to Flaspa Cathedral for their wedding ceremony. Though their relationship gets off to a rocky start due to his partner's intense body heat, he is eventually made immune to her flames via a special wedding ritual.
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[[folder:Taiga]]
[[quoteright:307:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/taiga.PNG]]
[[caption-width-right:307:Waiting on his Wedding Miracle with his beloved.]]
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* BadassesWearBandanas: He's always seen wearing a bandanna, and he's an adventurer who risks burning his hands off to save a salamander girl from falling into a lake and dying.
* {{Fingore}}: He nearly burns his fingers off saving the salamander girl and is still wearing bandages on his hands after the flashback ends. He notes its been months, meaning the damage was ''really'' bad.
* InterspeciesRomance: Quickly develops one with the salamander girl he saved from falling into a lake. They get married in a special ceremony where their mana is fused.
* NotSoAboveItAll: Despite being with the salamander for more than just plain lust, Stunk teases him about the time he previously questioned Crim about the specifics of the time he had sex with Tiaplate.
* RescueRomance: He quickly develops a relationship with the salamander girl he saved despite the initial problems presented by her extreme body temperature.
* {{Fingore}}: He nearly burns his fingers off saving the salamander girl and is still wearing bandages on his hands after the flashback ends. He notes its been months, meaning the damage was ''really'' bad.
* InterspeciesRomance: Quickly develops one with the salamander girl he saved from falling into a lake. They get married in a special ceremony where their mana is fused.
* NotSoAboveItAll: Despite being with the salamander for more than just plain lust, Stunk teases him about the time he previously questioned Crim about the specifics of the time he had sex with Tiaplate.
* RescueRomance: He quickly develops a relationship with the salamander girl he saved despite the initial problems presented by her extreme body temperature.
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* NotSoAboveItAll: Despite being with
* {{Stripperiffic}} - Her outfit is comprised of a Witch hat, a thong and a couple of strips of cloth to cover her nipples. Sometimes she goes without the
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[[folder:Legendary Heroine Yuti]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:The face Kanchal doesn't want to see in real life.]]
A human who has ascended to demi-goddess, Yuti is a dangerously strong adventurer who has a beef with the Reviewers for their public deviancy. She had a brief appearance in the chapter 27/episode 12, when Kanchal talks about why he likes The Sex Marionette, and shows up at Ye Pubbe in chapter 34, scouting for reviewers such as him. Being strongly religious, she takes Crim's presence as a Divine message and spares them for now. She doesn't like the existence of succu-girl stores in general, but has to accept that it is Divine Will as the magic circles used in them are created with the help of the Church, and has to accept that Crim's presence in the Reviewers means that their existence is approved by Heaven and ends up staying her blade. It is unknown whether she's even aware that she's used as a base for a more famous doll in The Sex Marionette. By Chapters 43 and 44, she returns to the Church for a major meeting, with many other church officials and a number of angels attending.
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[[caption-width-right:350:The face Kanchal doesn't want to see in real life.]]
A human who has ascended to demi-goddess, Yuti is a dangerously strong adventurer who has a beef with the Reviewers for their public deviancy. She had a brief appearance in the chapter 27/episode 12, when Kanchal talks about why he likes The Sex Marionette, and shows up at Ye Pubbe in chapter 34, scouting for reviewers such as him. Being strongly religious, she takes Crim's presence as a Divine message and spares them for now. She doesn't like the existence of succu-girl stores in general, but has to accept that it is Divine Will as the magic circles used in them are created with the help of the Church, and has to accept that Crim's presence in the Reviewers means that their existence is approved by Heaven and ends up staying her blade. It is unknown whether she's even aware that she's used as a base for a more famous doll in The Sex Marionette. By Chapters 43 and 44, she returns to the Church for a major meeting, with many other church officials and a number of angels attending.
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!!!Adventurers
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* BadassesWearBandanas: He's always seen wearing a bandanna, and he's an adventurer who risks burning his hands off to save a salamander girl from falling into a lake and dying.
* {{Fingore}}: He nearly burns his fingers off saving the salamander girl and is still wearing bandages on his hands after the flashback ends. He notes its been months, meaning the damage was ''really'' bad.
* InterspeciesRomance: Quickly develops one with the salamander girl he saved from falling into a lake. They get married in a special ceremony where their mana is fused.
* NotSoAboveItAll: Despite being with the salamander for more than just plain lust, Stunk teases him about the time he previously questioned Crim about the specifics of the time he had sex with Tiaplate.
* RescueRomance: He quickly develops a relationship with the salamander girl he saved despite the initial problems presented by her extreme body temperature.
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[[folder:Legendary Heroine Yuti]]
[[quoteright:350:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/1585423550520.jpg]]
[[caption-width-right:350:The face Kanchal doesn't want to see in real life.]]
A human who has ascended to demi-goddess, Yuti is a dangerously strong adventurer who has a beef with the Reviewers for their public deviancy. She had a brief appearance in the chapter 27/episode 12, when Kanchal talks about why he likes The Sex Marionette, and shows up at Ye Pubbe in chapter 34, scouting for reviewers such as him. Being strongly religious, she takes Crim's presence as a Divine message and spares them for now. She doesn't like the existence of succu-girl stores in general, but has to accept that it is Divine Will as the magic circles used in them are created with the help of the Church, and has to accept that Crim's presence in the Reviewers means that their existence is approved by Heaven and ends up staying her blade. It is unknown whether she's even aware that she's used as a base for a more famous doll in The Sex Marionette. By Chapters 43 and 44, she returns to the Church for a major meeting, with many other church officials and a number of angels attending.
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* {{Fingore}}: He nearly burns his fingers off saving the salamander girl and is still wearing bandages on his hands after the flashback ends. He notes its been months, meaning the damage was ''really'' bad.
* InterspeciesRomance: Quickly develops one with the salamander girl he saved from falling into a lake. They get married in a special ceremony where their mana is fused.
* NotSoAboveItAll: Despite being with the salamander for more than just plain lust, Stunk teases him about the time he previously questioned Crim about the specifics of the time he had sex with Tiaplate.
* RescueRomance: He quickly develops a relationship with the salamander girl he saved despite the initial problems presented by her extreme body temperature.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Legendary Heroine Yuti]]
[[quoteright:350:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/1585423550520.jpg]]
[[caption-width-right:350:The face Kanchal doesn't want to see in real life.]]
A human who has ascended to demi-goddess, Yuti is a dangerously strong adventurer who has a beef with the Reviewers for their public deviancy. She had a brief appearance in the chapter 27/episode 12, when Kanchal talks about why he likes The Sex Marionette, and shows up at Ye Pubbe in chapter 34, scouting for reviewers such as him. Being strongly religious, she takes Crim's presence as a Divine message and spares them for now. She doesn't like the existence of succu-girl stores in general, but has to accept that it is Divine Will as the magic circles used in them are created with the help of the Church, and has to accept that Crim's presence in the Reviewers means that their existence is approved by Heaven and ends up staying her blade. It is unknown whether she's even aware that she's used as a base for a more famous doll in The Sex Marionette. By Chapters 43 and 44, she returns to the Church for a major meeting, with many other church officials and a number of angels attending.
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[[folder:Witch Arcmay]]
A "luminary in the field of Neurohedonic Sorcery" who invented the temporary womb tattoo and pioneered adding sex organs to golems. She first appeared in a succubus movie in Chapter 31 but was not named until Chapter 53. She appears to have history and a rivalry with Demia Duodectet.
A "luminary in the field of Neurohedonic Sorcery" who invented the temporary womb tattoo and pioneered adding sex organs to golems. She first appeared in a succubus movie in Chapter 31 but was not named until Chapter 53. She appears to have history and a rivalry with Demia Duodectet.
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* AsYouKnow: The first thing she talks to Demia about after introducing herself is the history of how Golems became sentient and gained human rights, something which would already be familiar to Demia who has the memories of her 11 predecessors. Although she was using it to allude to some a secret regarding the Pope.Monk Emperor's identity.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Started her golem research at least 80 years ago.
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* TheRuleOfFirstAdopters: Like Demia most of her research efforts are for degenerate purposes. Unlike Demia she seems to enjoy it and enthusiastically tests her sex puppets personally unlike Demia who is OnlyInItForTheMoney.
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* ConMan: Regarded as a potential one by Demia, who regards Arcmay's offers to help improve her dolls as a ruse to scam her.
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* TheRuleofFirstAdopters: Like Demia most of her research efforts are for degernate purposes. Unlike Demia she seems to enjoy it rather than just doing itfor the money.
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[[folder:Witch Arcmay]]
A "luminary in the field of Neurohedonic Sorcery" who invented the temporary womb tattoo and pioneered adding sex organs to golems. She first appeared in a succubus movie in Chapter 31 but was not named until Chapter 53. She appears to have history and a rivalry with Demia Duodectet.
* TheArchmage: One of her titles.
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