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"I tried to warn them. I really did." Liu Jin's gaze finally meets his, and Xiao Heng shivers. Liu Jin's sad red eyes are hard to watch. When bathed by the light of the red moon, his Boss seems to gain an almost ethereal quality. It feels as if the child in front of him is impossibly far away.
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"Boss?" Xiao Heng turns to Liu Jin. The young child is looking at the corpses, an unreadable expression on his face. "What just happened?
"I tried to warn them. I really did." Liu Jin's gaze finally meets his, and Xiao Heng shivers. Liu Jin's sad red eyes are hard to watch. When bathed by the light of the red moon, his Boss seems to gain an almost ethereal quality. It feels as if the child in front of him is impossibly far away.
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"I tried to warn them. I really did." Liu Jin's gaze finally meets his, and Xiao Heng shivers. Liu Jin's sad red eyes are hard to watch. When bathed by the light of the red moon, his Boss seems to gain an almost ethereal quality. It feels as if the child in front of him is impossibly far away.
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* to elaborate- the Father's tale part of this arc shows Jaingou arriving at Eastern port city after his crippling and jins birth. And we see how even without any ability to use qi he is able to save the day as we see him do the event that got him close to the xiao sect - saving Xiao zheng's life from a parasite that no one had any idea how to deal with. All the while dealing with the discrimination of being a cripple.
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** over the year that it takes to get Jin to be able to enter poison Fang Canyon jin is constantly being poisoned every second of the day to learn and excel on how to expel any and all poisons and toxins from the body. the final test to clear the minimum requirements to go to Poison Fang Canyon was to take a poison that once ingested kills the taker in seven seconds. Jin at that point was at the level of befoore the first seccond he had already isolated to poison and then immediately repelled the poison out of his body
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** over the year that it takes to get Jin to be able to enter poison Fang Canyon jin is constantly being poisoned every second of the day to learn and excel on how to expel any and all poisons and toxins from the body. the final test to clear the minimum requirements to go to Poison Fang Canyon was to take a poison that once ingested kills the taker in seven seconds. Jin at that point was at the level of befoore the first seccond he had already isolated to poison and then immediately repelled the poison out of his body
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** Another win for Liu Jins medical skills - the second son of the Xiao Sect branch master in New Moon Town has an illness/condition that hampers his cultivation severely(for comparison his older brother by a year is in the inner realm level 3 and he is in the foundational realm level 5) after hearing about this jin uses a technique that acts as a sonar to see what the problem is and after finding out what and where it is in his body simply makes a pill to cure the condition away.(many doctors before jin have tried to find what was the condition and failed). Jin was 10 at the time.
** Jins and Nans "fight" against the bandits that attack them. While they were in no real danger because of Xiao Nans was at the start of the earth realm which is the sixth out of nine cultivation realms he lets jin handle some of them and Jin handles himself very well, pretty much destroying the bandits with ease because even if they were at a higher level than him he had by far the better technique and conditioned body.
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** Another win for Liu Jins medical skills - the second son of the Xiao Sect branch master in New Moon Town has an illness/condition that hampers his cultivation severely(for comparison his older brother by a year is in the inner realm level 3 and he is in the foundational realm level 5) after hearing about this jin uses a technique that acts as a sonar to see what the problem is and after finding out what and where it is in his body simply makes a pill to cure the condition away.(many doctors before jin have tried to find what was the condition and failed). Jin was 10 at the time.
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** Another win for Liu Jins medical skills - the second son of the Xiao Sect branch master in New Moon Town has an illness/condition that hampers his cultivation severely(for comparison his older brother by a year is in the inner realm level 3 and he is in the foundational realm level 5) after hearing about this jin uses a technique that acts as a sonar to see what the problem is and after finding out what and where it is in his body simply makes a pill to cure the condition away. (many doctors before jin have tried to find what was the condition and failed).failed). Jin was 10 at the time.
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** Xaio Nans absolute ''{{Main/CurbStompBattle}}'' to the black bear bandit group, the group that kill xaio dong and almost killed Liu Jin. Nan goes ham on them and they don't have the power needed to even bruise his skin let alone kill him. he slaughters them to the last man in about a minute when he gets to them.
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** Xaio Nans absolute ''{{Main/CurbStompBattle}}'' to the black bear bandit group, the group that kill xaio dong and almost killed Liu Jin. Nan goes ham on them and they don't have the power needed to even bruise his skin let alone kill him. he slaughters them to the last man in about a minute when he gets to them.
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** Another win for Liu Jins medical skills - the second son of the Xiao Sect branch master in New Moon Town has an illness/condition that hampers his cultivation severely(for comparison his older brother by a year is in the inner realm level 3 and he is in the foundational realm level 5) after hearing about this jin uses a technique that acts as a sonar to see what the problem is and after finding out what and where it is in his body simply makes a pill to cure the condition away. (many doctors before jin have tried to find what was the condition and failed).
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** The first time we see what Liu Jin can do with his doctor skill is when he come across a burning old man and from context clues laid around him figure out what the old man was trying to create to save himself and on the first try succeed in creating a medicine to save him. He was at the age of around eight at the time.
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