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[[caption-width-right:350:It takes a brush away from [[TheGrimReaper death]] for a fearless hero to become a [[LiteralMetaphor scaredy-cat]].]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:It takes a brush away from with [[TheGrimReaper death]] Death]] for a fearless hero to become a [[LiteralMetaphor scaredy-cat]].]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:It takes a brush away from [[StealthPun death]] for a fearless hero to become a [[LiteralMetaphor scaredy-cat]].]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:It takes a brush away from [[StealthPun [[TheGrimReaper death]] for a fearless hero to become a [[LiteralMetaphor scaredy-cat]].]]
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* ''WebVideo/UnwantedHouseguest'': Doctor Litchfield. Unlike the somewhat vague threat of the Shadow Demon, he's very explicit in his plans to [[spoiler: Subject the Houseguest to AFateWorseThanDeath. We're also shown that he's already done it to many others.]]
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* ''WebVideo/UnwantedHouseguest'': Doctor Litchfield. Unlike the somewhat vague threat of the Shadow Demon, he's very explicit in his plans to [[spoiler: Subject the Houseguest to AFateWorseThanDeath.a FateWorseThanDeath. We're also shown that he's already done it to many others.]]
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* ''WebVideo/UnwantedHouseguest'': Doctor Litchfield. Unlike the somewhat vague threat of the Shadow Demon, he's very explicit in his plans to [[spoiler: Subject the Houseguest to AFateWorseThanDeath. We're also shown that he's already done it to many others.]]
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* ''WebVideo/VitaCarnis'' has the [[HumanoidAbomination Mimics]], compared to the previously introduced MeatMoss creatures. The Crawl, the Trimmings, and the Meat Snakes, as gross and creepy as they might be, are characterized by the documentary as harmless toward humans and other living organisms. But the WhamLine that Mimics feed on humans reveals that at least one Living Meat creature really is as dangerous as it looks — and all the creatures revealed after this one are even worse.
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That description actually has few puns in it.
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[[caption-width-right:350:It takes a brush away from death [[StealthPun death]] for a fearless hero to become a scaredy-cat.[[LiteralMetaphor scaredy-cat]].]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:It takes a brush with death for a fearless hero to become a scaredy-cat.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:It takes a brush with away from death for a fearless hero to become a scaredy-cat.]]
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In order to add more drama to a work which has been, up until that moment, lighthearted and comedic in nature, a villain (or antagonist of some sort) is introduced and is portrayed as a genuine threat, in contrast to the [[HarmlessVillain bumbling]] and [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain comedic villains]] the heroes have faced before. The villain's arrival is sudden, and is usually either a totally new character, or a character that has undergone a particularly [[FromNobodyToNightmare dramatic]] FaceHeelTurn.
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In order to add more drama to a work which has been, up until that moment, lighthearted and comedic in nature, a villain (or antagonist of some sort) is introduced and is portrayed as a genuine threat, in contrast to the [[HarmlessVillain bumbling]] and [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain comedic villains]] the heroes have faced before. The villain's arrival is sudden, and is usually either a totally new character, or a character that who has undergone a particularly [[FromNobodyToNightmare dramatic]] FaceHeelTurn.
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* ''WebOriginal/HamstersParadise'' starts out as a rather lighthearted nature-documentary style narrative showing the habitats and the species that live in them. Then comes the planet's first sapient species, the OmnicidalManiac race aptly called the Harmsters, which proceed to engage in war, genocide, slavery, child sacrifices, unethical Nazi-like experimentation, prison rape, bestiality and cannibalism, before concluding in a horrific ZombieApocalypse rife with BodyHorror.
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* ''WebOriginal/HamstersParadise'' ''Blog/HamstersParadise'' starts out as a rather lighthearted nature-documentary style narrative showing the habitats and the species that live in them. Then comes the planet's first sapient species, the OmnicidalManiac race aptly called the Harmsters, which proceed to engage in war, genocide, slavery, child sacrifices, unethical Nazi-like experimentation, prison rape, bestiality and cannibalism, before concluding in a horrific ZombieApocalypse rife with BodyHorror.
