Overall, a very good, original idea that is executed well, though the text is clumsy in spots. (In particular, the opening of the story is sorta weird. It becomes clear why if you read on, but one shouldn't have to.) I have to say, though I was prepared to hate this on the concept alone (Harry/Molly in a soul bond?), I found the humor to be inspired. When the author is on his game, he/she writes arguably some of the funniest stuff out there (if a bit crude).
While it's a time-travel/Peggy Sue story, it probably is better classified under Crack/Humor.
Review: A Mother In Law's Love by Perspicacity
Overall, a very good, original idea that is executed well, though the text is clumsy in spots. (In particular, the opening of the story is sorta weird. It becomes clear why if you read on, but one shouldn't have to.) I have to say, though I was prepared to hate this on the concept alone (Harry/Molly in a soul bond?), I found the humor to be inspired. When the author is on his game, he/she writes arguably some of the funniest stuff out there (if a bit crude).
While it's a time-travel/Peggy Sue story, it probably is better classified under Crack/Humor.