RN452
Since: Nov, 2011
01/18/2013 00:00:00
Lustheron: It does give that vibe early on but the various problems Lelouch runs into make this Troper think the story averts becoming a Sue Fic. Such problems include dealing with a rebellion within the Black Knights much earlier than canon and finding out a throw away command from the first few chapters comes back to bite him when an organization called The Circle is started devoted to killing all members of the royal family, at any cost. Including Euphemia being shot several times and gassing the JLF base after they capture Cornelia.
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RN452
Since: Nov, 2011
01/18/2013 00:00:00
UncloudedTJ: I agree with the above comment. It shakes things up decently enough that it has its own flavor without it being a fixer Sue.
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ninjadude853's review
I personally found it to rapidly devolve into a sue fic. Then again, i couldn't even force myself past chapter 8 so maybe it got better.