johnnye
Since: Jan, 2001
01/09/2013 00:00:00
I agree about the Arc Fatigue. Tyrion's arc got a little dull, but could have been tolerable if it was the only one to do so; like you say, it's Dany's that stands out. Even if the inertia and aimlessness was the point — she's lost sight of her her original goal by trying to solve every problem she encounters — it could have been made in less page space, perhaps just by giving her fewer chapters and larger time skips between them. Probably the problem is that she's a Creators Pet.
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Overall, Fantastic.
Other than committing vile crimes against literature later on, it is fantastic and you should read it.